Date: June 24, 2008 10:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Aw it's just right the mood and feel. Even tho last chapter is out I can't see it as the end....know I know it's just the beinning of forever love. And it's a lovely one too.
I think I'll do a fanfic to this one sis for you and Inuyasha ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks, Kid Sissy! Write away. We need more good fiction out here to digest. :D
Date: June 24, 2008 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
It's amazing heffie. You were able to capture Kagome wonderfully. -.- And you made me cry in between >.> for her of all people. Truly perfection.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, that's a shock. You, upset for anyone but Rin? Gasp! 0.~
Date: June 24, 2008 9:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
I like! Honestly, I didn't like the way the manga ended...it just seemed like it was missing something. Your version has filled that void!
Glad to see you writing again. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Mare! I think we all felt a little let down by the end because she deprived us of a lot of things we should have seen. But I tried to make it up in my tiny way. Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: June 24, 2008 1:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Here I am! Told ya I'd be by. :) Oh, sis. It's lovely, that stunning mix of angst, sweetness and tenderness that only you can put together. Oh, and you gave us a kiss! And you got rid of damned rosary. Wahey! She should have done that long ago. I'd ask for more but... Reading your new chapters/fics whenever you come up with them won't be settling. Love ya, Kiks. *hugs* Now I'd better go see how the dinner's doing.
Author's Response: Thanks, neechan! ^_^ Hey, what can I say? I tried. It was a little giftfic and I was just hoping folks would enjoy it since we got so little in the manga. *grumble* But if you liked it, then I'm happy. :)
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 10:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
aww.. i luved it! now this is the ending i wanted -- even tho the manga was awesome! I was re-reading the last ep n practically crying cuz after all this time, inuyasha have finally ended!!
and the part when kags called sesshomaru nii-chan xD that was so funny! xD lol.. n n miro n sang been busy! i mean twin girls n a boy?? how kawaii?! lol
kk, am getting off corse XD i luved this... somn to sate my thirst... its a gud thing i have fanfiction on my side.
and.. *clasp hands together* please read my vampire story!! *__* i feel so gud cuz i got exactly 103 reviews for jus 4 chapters... and that has NEVER happened to me *hyper** xD lol
Ja!
bubbles ^_~ ((inuyasha is mines in reality... yours in fiction and kags in manga n anime xD lmao))
Author's Response: Bubbles!! <33 I'm so sorry I haven't gotten a chance to read the vamp fic. I've been swamped for months, and even getting a little bit of stuff out is a real ordeal. BUT, it's on my list, promise. And thanks for reading this. I never planned to do this kind of fic, but with a lil' nudge from my friends, I gave it a roll. I'll be updating my own gunk soon enough, though. :P
*Steal Yasha when you're not looking* 0.~
Date: June 23, 2008 8:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Wonderful fic as usual and I have to say great choice with using Rose of Sharyn. Killswitch rocks m/
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! OMG, Is Rose of Sharyn NOT the shit?? KsE is one of my favorite bands. I'm dying to see them live! I listened to that song the whole time I wrote this one, so it was fitting to add it. :D Thanks for reading!! ^_^
Date: June 23, 2008 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Aww! So good, although I can't beleive that it's finally over :( Love the ending, it's so cute and filled with everything that should've happened in the manga ^^
Author's Response: Thanks you, Sara! ^_^ Canon isn't easy for me, lol. (Can ya tell??) But I really wanted to do this a little justice if I could. We were cheated out of fluff, darn it! I was determined to fix that in some way. Glad you liked it! <3
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 4:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
i just read the original ending of the manga, and you did a great job re-telling. of course, your version had everything we wanted to see in the first place. oh well, that is why we have you. ^_~ i was worried that the actual story would end even more vague than it did. but it wan't too bad. thank you for writing this. i enjoyed it!! it actually made me feel more at ease about the original. (weird) i hope u don't stop writing inuyasha fics, too. lol u better not. ttys. *hugs*
Author's Response: COURT!! I finished and posted this at 4am. But I'm almost done with some chaps and I'm sending them to you first (you know, my regular stuff), so I hope your summer is free. I really want to catch up on some chaps that I've left behind. >.<
And you liked it. *dances* Thanks, girl. You know canon and I are lovers that meet every once in a while for a quickie -tee hee. So this was our annual quickie. Odd how this was the first thing I updated after my 3 year anni, eh? damned canon! *squeeze*
Date: June 23, 2008 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
WONDERFUL! I liked Chapter 588.....but RT did leave some loose ends untied. Like the kotodama. I really enjoyed how you did that. The anime does over- exaggerate Kagome's use of it ( a LOT), but nevertheless, it is still used in the manga and therefore RT should have had Kagome free him from it in the end. You shouldn't have such a control over the person you want to MARRY; Kagome will always have an unfair advantage over Yasha because of that.
I also liked how you did Kagome's point of view , then Inuyasha's. As always, you did a terrific job with Inuyasha. You always give him just the right mix of cocky, sweet, and sexy. And he was no exception here. His prayers right before he reached for Kagome's hand were beautiful.
But your depiction of Kagome here was wonderful, too...and flattering. I know that you're not a big Kagome fan, but you definitely did her justice here (not that I've seen you depict her unfairly anyway). Annoying though she can be, she clearly loves Yasha to pieces. I loved her soul-searching, her goodbyes to her family, all of it. This was just good.
Way to shake off that depression, chica. I was feeling a bit bummed too when the manga ended....especially since she rushed and left so many loose ends. Like the kiss her fans waited twelve years for, dammit! And a confession of love from Inuyasha wasn't too much to ask at this late date either! But I digress, lol. My point is , even though we got the right ending, she cheated us out of some of our long awaited fluff. Thanks for providing some of it, girl. :)
Author's Response: MS. GODDESSSSSS!
Girl, it's been a minute, eh?? How are ya? I'll have to shoot you some mail and catch up. 0.~
As usual, you left me an AWESOME review, and I totally agree. RT deprived us of the fluff we so richly deserve! I was really looking for that kiss and confession (I had no hope on the rosary >.<), but we didn't get anything. *cries* I wasn't happy about that part, but I was very happy to hear that they were married.
And thanks for noticing what I did with kagome, lol. She and I have had our issues >.> but she's my girl, and the only one I really trust with InuYasha. So I put myself in her shoes -how would I feel to be separated from him for three years? So I poured all of that in and hoped for the best. (So glad it worked!)
Writing Yasha is always a joy, AU or canon. He's my baby, so I always try to make him *love* even when he's being a jerk. :P
But you're right -my depression is gone and I feel better. Horribly, I posted this in the middle of the night and wrote the wrong volume number all over it. (I always fuck up something major when I do it without sleep) It should be 558. Ungh. *pops self in the head* But you enjoyed it, so three little numbers don't mean that much -ha! :D
Thanks for reading and giving me such a fab review!
Date: June 23, 2008 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
much more satisfying than the end of the manga. you not only remembered the kiss, but the rosary, too. great story! thank you for posting it.
Author's Response: Thanks, Casey! That was the goal, just a little extra meat to make the end complete. :P
<.< Omg... that rhymed.
Thanks for reading!! ^_^
Date: June 23, 2008 1:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Kiki! I loved how RT ended InuYasha, but I like yours a little more. That kiss is what everyone was waiting for, it’s too bad RT didn’t put it into the final chapter. There wasn’t too many fluffies at the end of the manga, which was too bad. I love how you used pieces of the manga and expanded on the ideas. I would have loved if you continued it a little more, but that would be asking too much, hehe. The last line, ‘[a]fter all, he couldn't let forever start without him,” was way too cute! To me, he sounded like he was a puppy who, following his owner.
And I’m great. I’m totally done College and my Graduation ceremony is this Thursday. I kind of miss school, but I’m so glad it’s finally over! Yay, lol. How are you doing?
And of course you added Sango and Miroku. The story wouldn’t be complete without them! For some reason, I knew they’d have twins… which is a weird thought. And I love how the twins play with InuYasha’s ears! That part was so adorable!
You’ve done it again Kiki. Great job as usual. Keep up the good work! *Waves* Chao bella.
Author's Response: NAT!! How are you, hun?? Congratulations on finishing college. Gah! I'm so proud of you. *glomps* I know the adjustment period sucks a bit, but you'll get used to it. Besides, soon you'll be working and falling into a new routine. <3 Things on my end are okay. I'm working a lot, and doing a lot of stuff in the fandom, so it's been busy. I still have carpal (which is bugging me right now), but at least I can still write, albeit it slower.
Thanks for reading this. You know canon and I rarely kiss, but I wanted to keep my promise to my friends and post something I thought they'd enjoy. And, of course, whenever I write Miroku and Sango I think of you, lol. I know there wasn't much of them in this, but I was really trying to focus on I/K. If I ever get inspired, I'll try and get a San/Mir oneshot going for ya. :D And aren't the twins the best? Gah -sooo cute! *huggles*
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 11:06 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
So..... I cried. but it was a good cry. Awesome. Abso-fucking-lutely awesome.
<3
Author's Response: Awwww. *snugs her sista* Thanks for reading, Kei. <3
Date: June 23, 2008 9:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's a great ending I would have loved to see the Sesshomaru part though it was one my favorites in the final chapter but at least I you put in a kiss and you have the kawi part with the twins!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mela! ^_^ I liked Sessie, too, but I stopped at the well because it seemed appropriate. To go farther would mean weddings and a lot more writing and I wanted to keep this a oneshot. But I did love that part -I giggled much.
I'm happy you enjoyed it -makes me feel really good since I don't usually mess with canon. I just wanted to gift my friends and give us a little fluff to soften RT's blow. Thank so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 9:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
You already know how I feel about this girl. As usual, you nailed that shit, sistah ).~ You recanted the story and filled in the missing pieces perfectly. Bravo!
Author's Response: My Sistah!! I'm so glad you liked it. You know how nervous I was about going there with canon. >.> But I just took my time over the weekend, worked it a little each day, and then posted when I was (halfway) satisfied, lol. I don't think I'll ever truly be happy with anything I write. >.< Thanks for reading this! *hugs*
Date: June 23, 2008 4:08 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
that was really sweet. I could've cried, too sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks, Raven! ^_^ Happy you enjoyed it.
Date: June 23, 2008 2:58 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
And thats how it should've been =p
I love the last line. Great work. Better than a tribute.
Author's Response: Thanks, Axy. *hugs* You made me feel better about my >.> first attempt at canon in ages.
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 2:39 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
OMG!!! I absoultely loved it! Thank you for writing this, I am a mess right now and I hope you're okay as well. I know this was out of your box to write a cannon and you did it--and captured everything so well. The emotion, the angst, hell, even the anguish that they felt being seperated.
And you were afraid that I would hate it. Ha!
Inuyasha and Kagome Forever! ^5
Chanda
Author's Response: Now that makes my day. :) You know me and canon >.> I haven't messed with that in a couple of years. But if I could conjure up something enjoyable, then I'm happy. I write so little now. >.< But hey, you got me to buckle down and produce. Thanks for the challenge! <3
Date: June 23, 2008 2:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Everlasting: An Ode to 558
A wonderful retelling of the last chapter, giving us what RT wouldn't. ><. I have to say, "go slay the kitsune" still makes me laugh. I have to say, now that we know Kagome stays in the past, wouldn't it be screwy if she was her own ancestor? Sorry, you know how I get when I start thinking...ah...again, a lovely story and retelling.
- Drake
Author's Response: Thanks for being my first review. :) And you liked it -even better! And omg, isn't "go slay the kitsune" the cutest line ever? Really cute stuff, so I had to get it in there. Her own ancestor? hehe... Only you.