[Report This]Date: December 14, 2014 4:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
You are right this is hard to stomach reading I can imagine what it must have been to write it. On the other hand, being able to push your self though something that is most definitely not your comfort zone and make something that works and is a good piece is an excellent exercise. I hope I made my point and not just rambled on and on.
[Report This]Date: April 17, 2014 2:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
Warnings indeed. Such a dark and chilling story, your writing is excellent as always. Keep it up
DaGrrrl says: lol, thanks! I did warn y'all that I was going "places". XD
[Report This]Date: February 27, 2014 10:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
Holy smokes! You weren't joking about the warnings. Its a good thing I can handle and like me some side platter of darkness on my InuYasha lol! Geez, when you experiment you take it to a whole new level, and its so so so well done! For me personally it was really refreshing (in a way) to read Lady I in a different perspective than the normal protective and squishiness part her character plays in "real life".
DaGrrrl says: Thanks so much! ^^ I like dark stories like this one, or 'Pandora', but I know not everyone can handle that so I don't post them much. Therefore, it's really awesome to hear that someone can enjoy -and handle- this kind of stuff. :D
[Report This]Date: November 30, 2013 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
So dark and chilling... You really know how to chill someone down to the bone. XD
Even though the story itself is dark and twisted, I still love it!
[Report This]Date: March 05, 2013 8:35 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
wow just wow a little hard to understand but over all a great one shot :)
Da Grrrl Says: Nah, it's not hard. InuYasha's mother molested him as a child. Her "flower" is just a metaphor for her vagina. The overall oneshot is about how even though he's a grown man and moved on with his life, he's still mentally wrecked. Thanks for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: February 22, 2013 9:48 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Dark and unfortunately happens more often then we think...
Da Grrrl Says: I can imagine. I wrote this one for a challenge comm on LiveJournal (In that place, I'd just dig out my darkest shit), bit normally, this is a depressing subject that I don't mess with often. =/
[Report This]Date: October 21, 2012 9:18 PM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Hmm, at first I think I didn't get it so I had to read it like 3 times LOL :P though it was creepy, it was really good, you're wonderful ^^
[Report This]Date: September 04, 2012 1:55 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Whoops! i Forgot to rate! 100/10! :)
Date: September 04, 2012 1:54 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
0.0.. You don't sayy.. Inu mom must have really loved inu's dad only to have lost him. The "i'm not my father" hit me dead centre in the chest. It was a well written, full of emotion piece! Hopefully he is able to open up to kag! Thank you for allowing me access to your stories! :)
[Report This]Date: August 15, 2012 11:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
Holy shiit! That's a whole new level of dark for me.. You probably get this a lot, but Grrrl your writing is unique and lovely- even if it totally creeps me out Cx (oh and I may have submitted a review accidentally without text? Sorry if that happened.)
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you, I'm honored! This IS a dark one, so I totally don't blame you for being creeped. >.> I was a little creeped just writing the thing! And nope, no blank reviews showed up. :D
Date: August 05, 2012 3:20 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
disgustingly terrifying, yet terribly intriguing. You wrote it well and reading it makes me want to do more in this world to make it better.
[Report This]Date: July 18, 2012 1:24 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
I love a good dark and psychological fic. Well done!
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2012 2:49 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Wow, that was beautifully dark :}. You wrote his suffering and his torment in a short piece, but wonderfully written to capture all his pain that kept me reading through and through, no matter how disturbingly dark it was. I enjoyed reading it :}, you did wonderful as always in writing something out of the ordinary.
Date: June 25, 2012 7:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
That was different. And really dark. I understand the warnings better now. I feel bad for Inuyasha, you captured his torment so perfectly. Once can only hope that someday he'll be able to confide in Kagome and she'll be able to help him face his demons. You did a great job with something I would normally never read.
Da Grrrl Says: This piece was written for IY Hedonism. I freely admit that I write out of the box stuff and don't limit myself, so when I came up with this one, I wanted to take it to the darkest possible place -while refraining from detail. It worked 'cause I won first place, lol. But it also showed me that I really can write anything.
Date: May 07, 2012 2:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
Interesting. It seems like Inuyasha's mother is always shown in one of two ways. Either she is very loving or abuse. It this also seems like a mixture of the two. I really don't think I have seen this type before.
[Report This]Date: March 31, 2012 10:38 PM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
WOOOOOOOOOW. I mean just WOW. I really loved this fic. I mean it was dark, angsty, and just...wow. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: March 31, 2012 12:33 PM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
This piece was VERY different and oddly, I think this sort of darkness is good, I feel like it's an awareness piece.
Hauntingly beautiful due to it's realistic scenario and the length was perfect. It was treated with caution and was mindful of the child's confusion. When baby InuYasha laughed at the pretty flowers, your heart breaks because you know (due to warnings) that his mother can not be trusted and for a child that is devastating.
P.S. I think I got someone addicted to Flow! LOL!!!
Date: March 27, 2012 12:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
creeping Oo incest pedophilia is really horrible, but well done
Date: March 26, 2012 2:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
I should have never read this before going to bed. Now I'm going to have nightmares. Nevertheless, your writng is amazing. It makes me feel sorry that this is jut a one-shot story.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! It originally wasn't meant to be. But then I decided to make it a short and enter it into an anonymous fiction contest. I was surprised that it won first place. It's such a twisted story, I didn't think anyone would be able to appreciate it. Was a nice surprise when they did!
Hope you got some sleep, tho! >.<
[Report This]Date: March 26, 2012 10:57 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Very nerving, very dark... VERY AWESOME!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! ^^
Date: March 22, 2012 6:33 PM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
woah that was really dark, really well written though
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! ^^
Date: September 12, 2011 10:45 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
oh my god. that was horrible and twisted. I mean your writing was good but... oh my god O__O poor, poor Inuyasha
Da Grrrl Says: Hehe. Thanks. I did warn that this story was dark. I don't think everyone takes my warnings seriously -tho, they should!
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2010 7:50 PM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
WOW!! Loved The Story.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: March 29, 2009 7:54 AM
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Title: A Mother's Kiss
Oh, wow! You did warn me that it would be dark, but still... Oh, wow! It's so beautifully written - I love the petals. His terror is almost palpable. My eyes got wider and wider as I kept reading. Bravo, sis! *hugs* Like you say, sometimes it's good to deal with the things that horrify you and be pushed out of your comfort zone every now and then... :)
Date: March 21, 2009 5:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Mother's Kiss
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