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Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 7:55 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

YAY! Another sweet chapter to read!! *glomps*

ROFLMAO..... Looks like the toilet gets more action than Ayame does! That was bloomin' priceless!! 

Souta having eyes that are bigger than his stomach is beautiful! Might keep his lechery down!

Oh I've had that nasty experience!! I can sympathize with Miroku!

Kouga is asking for a beating! and it isn't gonna come from Inu!  I really and delightfully love the interaction betwee the characters!! It's all so magical!!

Kai is so precious! and Touga his little spurts of non-Sesshoumaru DNA moments!

I love how you introduced the drabbles with it being a Higurashi tradition and having InuYasha so enraptured! I loves it when he can show is more gentler side ... makes both that sweeter and his rude smug cockiness so much better!! 

Oh my goodness!! Touga's comment about seeking entertainment elsewhere!! That was so completely Sesshoumaru!! I cracked up over InuYasha's thoughts on that! 

Oh yah... Inu's in the dog house for that slip... I wonder what heck Kagome will inflect upon him and for having it around their child! I wonder if he has been sentenced to the couch? Will the game survive? Will Kagome's easily bruised self image be hurt that InuYasha is playing video games that star super enhanced super sexy women? It isn't going to go down well... 

Oh I am totally in love with this story!!

For Blue:

WOW!! What a story!! You nailed Shippous character dead on with perfection! So very very Wicked and cool! 

I love every word of it!

The morale was absolutely SWEET! Pun intended! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with us Blue!! Thank you ever so much!! 

I think I may be dreaming of sickly-sweet smelling old women with green stumpy teeth!!

To The Grrrl: What a way to end Blue's drabble! Holy HEck that Rocks!! What a dymanic Collab!! I may be like the twins tonight!! ANd hiding under the covers!!

THANK YOU EVER SO VERY MUCH FOR SHARING THIS WITH US!! It's so very appreicated and very loved!!

I can't wait for the next one!!



Author's Response: Oh my goodness!! Touga's comment about seeking entertainment elsewhere!! That was so completely Sesshoumaru!! I cracked up over InuYasha's thoughts on that!

Nikkie! You got what I meant! :P I wasn't sure if anyone would get the comedy in that part. It's like InuYasha wanted to kill Sess for letting his nephew be so stuffy, lol. Totally yasha, I think.

Thanks for popping in and showing some love. I'm doing much better hammering these out and tomorrow's is already written. I've had a migraine for two days >.< so I'm really glad that I've still been able to get this done.

I'm so glad you're having fun, and yeah, I imagine that Kagome will make Yash pay for that video game mess soon enough. xD He and Miro are bad boys to the end. Kouga, well, I just like to bother him for allllll those times when he messed with yasha in the manga and anime. -.- This is payback -and it's PERSONAL. Kidding! :P

Thanks for the wicked and ever-thoughtful review. You rock! And I shall extend your praise to Blu! <33



Reviewer: Sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 9:20 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

I love the way you write the Christmas stories with the inserts from other authors. It gives it a nice twist with the different styles in it. This story was cute. Shippo and Rin and the gingerbread house....I can totally see it happening! I just can't imagine Souta as an old man though...I had a hard time with that last year too. He's just so...frisky..lol. I can see Yash and Miro buying that game...especially Miro...haha.

Author's Response: I can't see Souta as an old man, either! LOL! He's so cute. I still see him as a little kid, just wiser and more mature. ^_^ And thanks so much for coming down and hanging with us. This is coming off a lot smoother now than when it began and the encouraging reviews really help. I tend to beat myself up a lot when I don't think something is up to par (I really hated my first chap) but I'm settling in more. And didn't Blue do a great job? Shippou and Rin are just too cute!! Thanks for leaving your mark, sweets! <33



Reviewer: ash aka xgrenade   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 8:05 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

i love how you're doing this with a story within a story!  i loved bluezinthos story!  and poor Kouga, i nearly fell out of my chair when Ayame nailed him on being on the toilet. :3

 



Author's Response: On behalf of Blu (and me!) Thankies, Ash!! I couldn't help the toilet thing. Every time I deal with Kouga it's like I HAVE to mess with him. Have to. >.> And you know wives love blowing up the spot in front of family -men get no breaks! :P



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 4:17 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

lol...that was cute...can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, La! ^_^



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

HAHAHA!! I like the story within the story. It was good, I also Love this chapter update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, D-gurl! ^_^ I shall pass on your enjoyment to Lady Blu!



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 1:08 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

OMG, I know the game, too!  My cousin has it and RAVED about it when it first came out!  XD  Too funny!  I told him to get a life and go see some real boobs!! 

This was great - I love that everyone is telling stories now to keep the kids busy; plus it brings back happy memories for Kags and Sota.  Very nice.  :)  And InuYasha shooting that threat to Kai was pretty nice, too; he sure changed his tune in a hurry!   XD  Touga is priceless; Sesshomaru's spitting image for sure.  Which reminds me...where is that lunkhead anyway?  Is he going to get off his high horse and make an appearance or what?!  XD 

Great chapter - I can't wait for tomorrow night's story!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ (and C-note does, too!)

That game is not as awesome as they make it sound. I find it pretty boring. >.> But the guys sure like it, lol.

I'm trying to keep the gang pretty much themselves -but also portray them as parents. I know my mom threw that "bed" threat out there with the quickness if I was starting to get on her nerves, so I figured it was good enough for Yash. And Kai's response? Me all the way. xD Touga is love. I can just picture a little Sessie running around and Yasha wanting to slam his head into a wall because the "curse" carried on to the next generation. Ha! That's why he was mentally shaking his fist.

As for Sess showing up? We shall see... We shall see... :D Thanks again for hanging out with us!



Reviewer: Neo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

HaHaHa  (^_^)  This was a good one Blue-chan... you made a great story... I will have to say you authors make a very good Christmas party...

Makes me wish I could have done more for this Christmas deal... again you did a great job.. love how you write... until the next read..

(^_^)y



Author's Response: On behalf of my C-note, thank ye kindly, ma'am! ^^



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

LOL.  This one was funny!  Inuyasha and Miroku just can't seem to stay out of trouble, can they?  And that naughty Inuyasha...to buy that game AND let his son play it.  He got off EASY!  He owes Souta a HUGE favor, LOL. 

Author's Response: Thanks, Ms. Goddess! ^^ I'm trying to keep things light when it comes to the family, but I throw in my little hints of angst. The video game idea came to me when I looked at my console. The game was sitting on top and it screamed Miroku, lol. One down -11 to go. >.<



Reviewer: swtiris   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:56 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

so i can't figure out how souta is aging in this story?

Author's Response: In the last one, Souta is 67, I upped everyone's age by three years. So he's pretty much aging like an old human. :)



Reviewer: swtiris   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

I love the characterization in this story, especially the kids :) Lecherous daughters, lol - it's karma for Miroku. I love Kai and Touga - although I'm picturing them a little younger in my head since I found from baby sitting lots of cousins that ten-ish is kinda transition age - losing all your cuteness and morphing into your adolescent awkwardness.

Author's Response: Thanks. ^^ I'm trying to make them like their parents, but with enough of their own personalities to give y'all a chuckle. I practically raised my cousins as well, and at 10 and 12 they were a lot more advanced than how I'm writing these kids. But every family is different, ya know? I'm patterning them after mine -just not as "worldly" as they are.



Reviewer: Drake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:32 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

Cute and funny, Grrrl! I remember taking part in this last year, hope this year it's just as good this year, sure it will be. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks, Drake! Glad you're having fun. :D Will it be as good, who knows? I just wanted to give one last send off before I retire my party hosting days. So good or bad, this is it!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:20 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

Oh God...I see the torture of Kouga has already begun, Lol. I'm guessing it'll be on the next chapter even more what with him telling the story and all. Nice take on Hansel and Gretel, Bluezinthos. I wish someone would've told that story to my youngest nephew......he's so SPOILED! Lol, but anyway....

I'm soooooo psyched about the fairy tale aspect of this fic. I have tons of books on the Grimm's brothers, Perrault, and Hans Christian Anderson. I love 'em.

And yeah, "Sexy Souta" is definetely a sweetie...playing Grandpa to the kids. Pretty lively for a seventy year old.

Its nice too that Shippou and Kaede get put into the fic even though both of them couldn't be there. Though I swear...for a second I thought the rotted-teeth woman was Kikyou 0.o

But no...she's rumpelstiltskin, right?

Haha, I'm loving the story so far. You shouldn't be so hard on it! I definetely can't wait to see what comes up next with Kouga and his tale. Wow......only twelve days (almost eleven) until Christmas! That's eleven more exciting tales :D

Excellent collab Inugrrrl and Bluezinthos!

~Amber

 



Author's Response: Me?? Torture Kouga?? Naw.... xD I'm just messing with him. >.>

Some of the tales you'll recognize, some you may not (they chose from known stories to movies, so there will be a mix), but I will try my best to give everyone a smile in between.

And yesh, I'm hard on myself always, especially when I don't think I'm doing well. But you guys seem to like it thus far, so I won't complain. It's all for y'all anyway.

Souta is a sweetie and I really wanted to give him a bigger part this time since it was so small last time. And you thought it was Kikyou?? LOL! I keep her out of these because I know most of the people that pop in here can't stand her. I wouldn't ruin Xmas with her presence -though she would have made a good witch! Thanks for leaving such a nice review, Am. Blu and I appreciate it! <3



Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Oh!! My beloved Goddess!! I am already in tears before I started once  I read a continuation of the last Drabble Party... The memories came flooding in...And I love it!!

 This is a party I would kick myself and drown in misery to miss!! And being the last one... I would really regret it!! Big time!! So I gotta make sures I give everyone their Reviews with much Loves!

I can bet they are all saying Thank you to you as well for this Delightful Treat!!

This Intro is so tragic and Angsty!! I LOVES it!!  Sess and Rin are having problems! I find that such a delicious twist!

The way InuYasha tried to talk to his brother into attending! Wow! That was amazing! I love how you keep the characters all so very real!! How they have matured from the Feudal Era! 

I love how honestly InuYasha sees the bonds of love and Mate!

I am now so darn curious about what happened between them in the fight! and I'm loving it!

I love those two lines: Inuyasha would rather shove Tessaiga up his butt than lose Kagome and Kagome's Christmas is a time of miracles! The two at such opposites!! It's perfect!

I see Souta has been hanging and learning from Miroku toooooo much. What did he do? take the sweet boy under his wing to turn him into a dang lecher like himself? *cringes at image of him groping women and saying bare my child* That is sooo unhealthy!!

I love the turmoil going through Rin and Sesshoumaru in their sections! and yes.. I can totally see Kouga being like that! Being a jerk when asked a favour.. I wanna ask about that 'smell top lip' but it scares me.... *winks*

The interaction with the kids/pups so dang cute! The 'Cold' conversation was so funny... I loved the threat Sango gave! I wonder if she's ever made good on it before?

I can't wait for more!! Please more!! Yes!! I will happily beg of it from you!

And again, Grrrl, This is one Wickedly sweet Intro!! I have a feeling I'm going to be Very happy with the Christmas Drabbles!! 

*GLOMPAGE*

And sweeeeeeeeeeeet touch for having the song to your site be a Christmas one!! Very fitting!!

YOU TOTALLY ROCK MY SOCK OFF!!

 Please keep up this most wonderful and inspirational work!!

I look forward to more!!



Author's Response: NIKKIE!!!

Thank you for another awesome review. I appreciate it -especially since you had a good time. The "smelling your top lip" is this really country expression that my folks on my gram's side used to say. It's kinda like saying you're smelling yourself, or you're smelling your own breath, lol. I know, crazy, lol. I always throw in little things like that from home.

As for Sess and Rin, I'm always making things hard for Yasha and kags, so this time I really wanted to give them a break, so I picked on those two instead. What can I say? I had to get 'em. :) The rest, well, I'm trying. My holiday mood is kinda nil (as you know), but I'm trying to hide it and make y'all laugh a little. It's the only Xmas gift I can give. <3



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 3:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Great start!  So are the guest authors going to continue on from this point?  Sorry - I'm a bit slow!  :x 

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ Not exactly. What we do is I continue to narrate the "outer" story, and my guest writers have their works place within. It's being done differently than it was last year, but it's still pretty much the same thing. :D Thanks for popping in!



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 2:47 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Oh this is going to be wonderful I can tell already! ^^  Can't wait to see what everyone has come up with and how you'll tie it all together, though I've got an idea as I know how I'd do it!  I like the fact that you've got the angst coming from Sessh and Rin instead of Inu And Kag, and Touga is perfect!  I can just picture him looking and sounding just like his dad!  IY's and Kagome's little interlude was so cute too, with their son standing by thinking, "Ew...get a room already!"  Just like his dad too...I love it!  Other favorite moments:  the stocking with "wench" stitched on it; "and I'd rather shove Tessaiga up my own ass than to ever lose you." (I don't know why that strikes me so funny but I'm still smiling...I can so hear him saying that!);  IY calling a 70 year old "runt"; and we're both so mean to Kouga ...hehehe...and I actually really like him! ^^  Lovely work my dear!  I'm so looking forward to what lies ahead!  *HUGE HUGS*



Author's Response: SWEEEEETS!!!! *major glomps* Thank you for coming down and leaving such a nice review. I appreciate it so much. <33 I admit that this chap was a lot of trouble for me. My cohorts keep telling me that I'm being too hard on myself, but I can't help it. I think it's all the holiday stuff (you know what I'm dealing with). But I'm trying to make this thing enjoyable and I can only hope that I do.

I think EVERY kid hates seeing their parents get intimate. It's just so... yucka! I admit, I totally revert back to my kid days when I write the youngsters. My cousins and I were just a hot mess. xD And can you even imagine a stocking with wench on it? lmao. IMO, that's a real IY move.

Now, as for Kouga, I'm not quite through with him yet. *evil chuckle* I really don't care for him, so unlike you, I mess with him maliciously. :D And btw, your contribution is so so cute. I can tell that you really do like Kouga -and most can tell that I really don't. Hehe...



Reviewer: Ash aka xgrenade   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 2:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

yay!  i'm so excited, can't wait to read it all.

 and that was a hell of an opening chapter!! XD



Author's Response: Thanks, Ash! <3 I so look forward to adding your contribution (and thanks so much for it!). It's one of the funniest and cutest ones!



Reviewer: Inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

YAYYY!! PARTY!!! I love parties, and this one's starting off grand! :D

 Poor Sess and Rin. Now what am they gonna do. Sess never did say what left Rins' mouth but I can imagine it was a doozy to send the inu-youkai off sulking. Ah, men! But should be fun to see what Kai has in store. Had to lmao as he 'took it like a man' as he father said, with small hand firmly on cheeky, lol. Sweet! And that slothful ookami, lol. A little couch time will do him some good as well. :D

Now I wonder ifn Kai bring his cousin, Touga, in on his shenanigans as well, hehe. Can't wait to see what comes up next! :P  PARTY... PARTY! PARTY! PARTY! :D



Author's Response: Onna!!!!! *hugs* Thanks a bunch for everything -and I do mean EVERYTHING. I would have bailed on trying to do this if it weren't for you and Danga. The ride just started and it's already so bumpy. >.> But I'll do what I can to present something decent -it's really all I can do. But in the meantime, I'm sure the twins are not done groping people yet. xD And don't ya love how Miroku just encourages it?



Reviewer: jktcus   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 1:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

I love chapter I hope you will up date next chapter tonight

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm getting there!



Reviewer: Lexxii   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 12:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

i'm excited for this ! i like it already :]

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Right now, I think you like it more than I do, lol.



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 10:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Aww! How sad and cute! Sad because of Sessh and Rin, obviously (amazing how you portrayed the break-up though. That's so REAL of them! I've seen people go through that and if it were written down it would be just. like. that. So....wow. Lol. You rock with the realism), but also cute because of the KIDS! Oh my God.......I laughed soooooo hard because of their antics.

First off, you've got Kai whose just devious as hell (probably even more devious than Shippou, if thats possible) and I love how he's making his little plan to help his aunt and uncle. Touga, who is like.....the mini-me to Sesshomaru's Dr. Evil ("This Touga..." laff). Miroku's girls who WIN over all the children for that grope-stunt they pulled. How cute is that?! Now watch the son turn out like Sango....lol. Finally (I think), there's Sesshomaru's daughter, Satomi, whose easy-bake oven present had to have been the best by far. InuYasha is such a good Uncle ;)

But really, the coolest one had to be Souta. A SEVENTY YEAR OLD player?! Holy shiz....thats my grandpa right there. A heartbreaker till the heart stops beating...he also kind of reminds me of this character in a bolly-film my friend showed me. The guy, "Sexy Sam," figured that after his wife died he would do all the things he couldn't when she was alive and live it UP with women, booze, and endless partying. Hmmmm....so it looks like we got a "Sexy Souta" on our hands (in a subtler, I'm-just-cool-and-old kind of way). Nice ;) His take on Sessh and Rin put things in an interesting light, too.

Finally, the usual Inu-Tachi banter gave this a nice little start and blended well between the Sessh/Rin angst. Such a sad way to end the chapter with a lonely Sesshomaru, but I know it'll be an interesting ride in which healing and all that warm, fuzzy holiday-ness are incorporated. And it'll be VERY interesting to read the guest stuff and see how fairy-tales are used with this. I wasn't around for the first Christmas party so I'm glad I was able to catch this one. Until next read grrrl and guest authors!

~Amber :D



Author's Response: What a flooring review. Thank you so so much, Am, really. I'm having an ULTRA tough time with the narration and making the fairytales fit. >.< I changed the background on this 3 times and ended up settling because I was out of time. So, it is what it is and I can only hope you guys have fun with it. I hate to disappoint, I really do, but there may be no getting around it this time. Sigh.

But back to the review! I'm so happy that you caught all of the little things I added to try and make it enjoyable. I love Souta, lol. He's definitely a player, but a sweetie, too. And the banter doesn't end there. I'm patterning them a bit after my own family; we get together and everything is a joke or a playful insult -and since I'm not big on Kouga, more torture is coming his way. xD Miroku's girls are awesome, too. You know girls take after their papas a lot, so they're little lechers! Couldn't have written them any other way. :D

I hope you enjoy the rest of the chaps, and if nothing else, leave with a chuckle. ^_^



Reviewer: Sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 8:56 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

omg! this is so sad! Sess and his pride! grr.

I'm so sad this is your last Christmas party! I love your Christmas parties!!! They are the best. Thank you for a bang to go out with though! I swear, everytime I read one of your stories, it seems they get better and better.



Author's Response: SHEENA!! <33 How are you?? Merry Christmas and thanks for hanging out with us! Yesh, I know Sessie is sad, but it will get better. I'm having a time with the back story, so I'm just throwing it out there and hoping you guys like it anyway. I wanted it to be much better, but holidays actually bring me down (since my mom and gram died), so writing about this stuff isn't as easy as it should be. But, hey, I wanted to do it one more time and make y'all smile at least a little. So thanks for being here with me, doll. *hugs*



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 8:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Merry ALMOST Christmas, girl!  This was a really great kickoff to this story.  Rin and Sesshoumaru breaking up?!  Who would ever have guessed?  Talk about a twist.  And I also like how the implosion was rationalized.  They broke up for such.....ORDINARY reasons.  Essentially, lack of communication.  With Sessh being such an introvert and Rin being so non-combative, it's not far fetched at all.  That whole situation makes it all more REAL.  Even immortal love can be lost if you're not honest with each other.  I really can't wait to see what happnes with all this.  Rin must have finally said something truly horrible to hurt Sessh so much that he left her.  But after 500 years of not saying anything, it would have been brutal.  I'm on the edge of my seat about it!

As for Inuyasha....ADORABLE.  I love all your depictions of him anyway; you "get" him better than a lot of writers.  He is a complex character in a lot of ways....but so simple in others.  His horrible past can make him abrasive and tempermental....but he values family and friendship above everything.  In spite of the fact that the world has kicked him in the teeth, he never gave up hope on it or became too jaded to believe that people were worth fighting for.  A lot of writers get bogged down in his anger...but don't address his sweetness.  You always balance both really well.    

And the funny parts.  I am STILL giggling at poor Kai's molestation by Miroku's girls.  And Inuyasha's non-reaction to it.  "Take it like a man."  LOL.  Kai did kind of deserve it, though.  He is a cheeky little bugger.  And too cute!

And Touga....that child is Sesshoumaru all over again, even in the way he speaks.  I can only imagine how cute it is to hear Sesshoumaru's words come out of someone so short, lol.  And since Kai is plotting an intervention and planning to let Touga in on it, I can't wait to see what they come up with.  Great start, girl!



Author's Response: MERRY CHRISTMAS, MS. GODDESS!!!!!!

Thanks for another wicked review -I swear, you spoil me. I was hating on this, but I have to say that the kind words I've received really made me feel better. When I don't like something, I assume no one else will, either. So to hear that y'all are enjoying it thus far really takes a load off my shoulders.

Sess and Rin -I needed to start that with a hurdle. And yesh, their reasons are very ordinary, lol. I like ordinary. xD But seriously, lack of communication, or when someone is ALWAYS the beta to another's alpha, can really destroy a relationship. There has to be balance, and let's be real, Sess and Rin have none, lol. She does what he wants her to do, and she loves him for it, but after a few centuries, I imagine it can become tiring! So I gave them a flare up.

And you know what? I liked InuYasha, too. He and the kids are my faves, so thanks for being cool with my characterizations. I like him crude and sometimes mean, but I always try to give him a reason for being that way. He isn't just an asshole without a cause as some write him -he's got issues and demons, but he fights them with the help of those that love him. (Gosh, can you tell that he's my eternal favorite??)

With the kids, I just made them little carbon copies of their parents -what kid isn't? - and I tried to give them a little humor and cuteness because, well, they're the gang's offspring. What's not to love? xDrnrnAgain, thanks BUNCHES for such a nice review. I'm struggling to pull this together this time, but I'm hoping it will be decent, at the very least.



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 7:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

well now that was one hell of an intro girl! i love how you started the magic with a fight. most times you see the happily ever after, but happy forever? yeah, but there would  be some hella fights in there too! when i read your stuff i realize how much i enjoy the way your mind works!

Author's Response: C-NOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*hugs* I've been wanting to mail you and this thing had me all laced up. >.< Talk about getting my ass KICKED trying to write this and tie things together. Lawd, lol. And you know me -angst to the end. I figured, who smiles all the time? To make the garden grow there must be rain, so why not start here? lol. I know, bad grrrl. It's a little reflective of how I'm feeling (you know me and holidays), but I'm very aware that this isn't for me, but for y'all, so I won't act up. Promise. :D



Reviewer: Neo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 5:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Well we are off to a good start... boy do you love the drama.. but then again this wouldn't be a IG Christmas without it..

Happy Holidays, IG!!! I hope they are at least a good one for you... until the next read... tootles Grrrl....  (^_^)y



Author's Response: Merry Christmas, Neo! ^_^ Thanks for coming down to hang with us and for making such a cute little image that I could borrow and slap up there. ^_^ I appreciate it. <3 And I promise, it's not hard angst. >.> It really isn't!!!!! Hehe....

Kidding! :P



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 1:47 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Merry Christmas InuGrrl. I love chapter one. It made me sad a little the Sess and Rin were fighting. I can't wait till the next chapter.  Read ya later .....;) smooches

Author's Response: D-Gurl! <33 Merry Christmas, sweets!!

And thanks for reading, enjoying, and leaving your mark. It means everything. *glomps* I know there's a bit of angst, but I promise there will be laughter, snickers, and sweet stuff in between. I won't let ya down. ^_^



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