You must login () to review.
Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2013 8:22 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Yearnings of a Lonely Heart

awwwwwwwwww looks like they are getting close thats so sweet



Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2013 8:31 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Yearnings of a Lonely Heart

It looks like somebody is hiding secrets wow i guess i have to wait a little longer to find out where he is from



Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2013 8:17 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Disclosing the Gift

wow that was a wonderful chapter an it seems like Sango is upset about Inuyasha talent lol



Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2013 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Tempestuously Drawn

I'm so glade he can talk again maybe he can tell more about his past



Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2013 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: An Enigma Awakens

wow I guess they told him lol



Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2013 7:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Pearls on the Beach

awww what a beautiful chapter an wow Kagome is so old an i feel for sango she can't have kids that so sad



Reviewer: 3lue 3utterfly   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2013 2:42 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

I loved this chapter and love how Inuyasha feels about his older woman. Its sweet to see that type of love in that particular kind of relationship.



Reviewer: Miss Miroku   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2013 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

askdjf Perfect chapter, as always ^-^ I always adore this universe (enough to read it again to refresh my memory! |D)But the personalities of every single character makes this one of my favorites (so far >w> I have yet to catch up on all your work- I haven't even been around for a while >.< Busy, busy. But I'm dedicating my weekend to your other series I haven't read T^T) I don't know French, so I was keeping my eye on their actions xD Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is just too adorable, yet it sounds a bit fragile. I hope, in one way or another, they get the happiness they want.

I hope everything's fine on your end, IG :3



Reviewer: Kazanova   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2013 3:21 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

So thrilled to see an update, thank you, Grrrl!

It looks like the storm is going to unfold soon with that Kikyou getting in the way.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you for the review. <333 I honestly appreciate it!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2013 11:43 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

SQUEEEEEE! you have no idea how it excites me so to see the updated date ending with 2013! It's already been an immense blessing that you've allowed me to peruse your work so freely. This update is heaven sent! Thank you so so so much!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much. <33 It's been great being able to update for you guys again. I just wish I could have done it sooner!



Reviewer: Meika   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2013 10:58 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Disclosing the Gift

I'm inlove with this story now. It's strange because usually I'm into dark, sexy, edgy fanfiction, with a dark, sexy Inuyasha (The neighbor), and a very innocent Kagome. Not that she isn't in this story. But I'm being totally honest I don't usually give stories like this a chance BECAUSE of my usual interest of being into those sort of fanfics. But I was like you know what? I'm going to try it because you are an amazing writer, and a true reader wouldn't come here for certain stories right? It's touching my heart seeing Inuyasha so sweet & innocent. And for once it's not kagome who's the one "touching every heart of those path's she crosses, and Inuyasha being the arrogant jealous type who falls for her, but wrather the other way around. So yea... Just wanted to let you know how much I love the switcharoo, and can tell I'm going to love this story. Ill keep reviewing as much as I can as promised :)



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2013 10:15 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Oh drat, no 'next' button...
I gotta say this is a very fun story. Having no idea about the movie makes it even better!

As usual, excellent story. You pull me into your stories with the best of them. Imagery and detail, perfect :)

I know people expect Naraku to be evil, but I like the stories where he's a good guy, or at least neutral. So hopefully he'll turn out good in this one. And better yet, maybe he'll even punish that dang Myouga for his meddling.

Must you always leave us with cliff hangars? Inu just dropped the bomb that his employer is Kikyo, and you end the chapter!!!

Can't wait for more!!

Moo ;)

Da Grrrl Says: My friend!

Thanks for another kind review. I always appreciate it, and I agree, it's refreshing to see Naraku as a good guy from time to time. That's the great thing about an alternate universe -no rules, no set characterization. I used to have people complain about my fiction all the time because I don't do things the canon way (Like I are what they think), but I will never stop thinking out of the canon box -I enjoy not being part of the herd. 0.~

And that cliffy was totally mild! lol.



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2013 6:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Pearls on the Beach

Hmmm... Interesting story indeed. Definitely going to enjoy getting further along in this one!!

Moo

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! This one is more of a slow-moving, "sweet" story. I don't really do fics based on movies (This is my second), but I loved this one so much that I simply had to put my own spin on it. So it's kinda like, 'love it' or 'hate it' due to the dynamics of the plot. But hey, I'm enjoying it. :D



Reviewer: Smurfette   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2013 7:14 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Thanks for the chappie. You know, I haven't seen the movie yet, but will do...soon :)
Can't wait to see what will happen next with Inu's new job and what the sisters will think of it.

Hoping you and your friend are doing well. My thoughts are with you both. Big hugs to both of ya!!! :) Take care.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Ms. Smurfy! ^^

The movie is brilliant, but an acquired taste. You may like it, you may not, but my version has quite a few differences, so you may like mine better in the end. :P And many thanks. We're hanging in there and still waiting/hoping/praying for a full recovery. >__<



Reviewer: Dare9179   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2013 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

oh shit!

Da Grrrl Says: lol. What a review!



Reviewer: animegirl163   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2013 12:55 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Pearls on the Beach

Ahhh I started reading this story and I have to say bravo!!!! its becoming one of my faves, I never actuly seen the movie but if its anything like this I think im up to watching it. Thank you for creating such amazing art.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! ^___^ The movie is an acquired taste because it's rather slow-moving and heartbreaking, but I adore it so much that I watched it about 10 times or more before finally deciding to made my own rendition of it. It's not every long, and I took mad liberties, but I like writing it, so this review is much appreciated. <33



Reviewer: OnnaMom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2013 2:29 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

This has always been a favorite of mine as I too saw the film. but you never cease to surprise. Now to scrap Sango's ass off the ceiling... or not, hehe.

Hugzz

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Onnamom! This story is actually for you, so it's awesome that you actually like it. <333



Reviewer: Dare9179   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2013 12:43 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Of Dreams and Wishes

That was so cute.



Reviewer: MidCat   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2013 8:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Pearls on the Beach

Baby Girl, NEVER, ever doubt that you have an amazing talent, a gift that many wish they could have. YOU ARE A GREAT AN AMAZING WRITER, this is why we, your fans, continue to adore you, follow you everywhere and love you the way we do!! You work magic with words and take us away to the worlds that you create, makes us feel emotions that are so strong and real, it makes us leave reality and join your characters in each and every adventure that you create. You will forever have my love, admiration, and undying appreciation for every word you have shared with us!! I love you tons!

Da Grrrl Says: You're the sweetest EVER. Thank you, Midi, for being so kind to me over the years. I've had my share of idiots crossing my path, making me resent and despise most of this fandom, but every so often I'll run into a gem that makes the bullshit worth it and you're one of them. *HUGS* Stay awesome. <333



Reviewer: MidCat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2013 4:36 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Daaaaaaaammmmmnnn!!  That was awesome!!  I can't tell you how much good this did to me!! We are starting to see dark tentacles inching their nasty way towards the happiness of our beloved characters! And still there is so much to discover and learn from Inuyasha! I don't think there has ever been a story where both, Inuyasha & Kagome were so far apart in age, and I would have never though it would work, but you make magic come alive and work it in a way that makes it amazingly romantic and sexy! You my dear, are a Goddess!!

Thank you so much for continuing to write and share with us! I look forward with anticipation to your next update!!

Hugggzzz and tons of love!



Da Grrrl Says: You honor me, Midi! *HUGS*

Thank you for your continued kindness toward me and my stories. I've never considered myself a great writer; I just like to tell tales and I've been lucky in the fact that people have enjoyed them. But you always leave great reviews and they make me smile when I'm not all that happy with what I've put out. I appreciate that greatly. You're an awesome, awesome person. Never doubt it. <333



Reviewer: Monica   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2013 1:19 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

thank goodness you put the french translations at the bottom (i took spanish in high school lol!). but i love it when authors work another language in their stories. and ohh kikyo, always an interesting character. can't wait for the next update!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks very much! I appreciate the kind comment and I'm glad you liked the update. I'm just sorry it took so long! I'll try not to let that happen again. ^^



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2013 12:21 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Wow is my French rusty O.o I liked that you had so much in there though, it really illustrates how...manipulative Kikyou is. I think, anyway. So much happened! Lol at Myouga getting outed as an old perv. Loved that conversation! I am so worried for Sango and Kagome, and their relationship. I how Inuyasha isn't oblivious forever either. Goodness he's getting worked on. It really makes me dislike Kikyou. Great work on this chapter, you're doing so well!

Da Grrrl Says: LOL. Mine was, too, which is why I asked Boudou to help me out! And yes, Kikyou is good at playing the role that will suit her best. She's a snotty woman, too, but she serves her purpose.

This story is ending soon, so I'm trying to start tying up loose ends. However, there's still a surprise or two left. :D LOL @ he's getting worked on. He is, isn't he? He's such an innocent in some ways...

As always, thanks a lot for reading and always leaving a nice comment. It's one of the things I'll miss when I close up shop. :)



Reviewer: Kau   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2013 12:07 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Oh my Frenchie! I love Inuyasha in this. I guess it's because I've fallen in love with the heart. Kagome and Sango are so sweet. As for kikyo she can go as well as you write her I still can't stand her pale French ass!

Da Grrrl Says: You know how the movie goes! Kikyou isn't my fault! *WAILS*



Reviewer: leadranach   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 11:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Plans Well Laid

Wow - alot of work went into that chapter! I really like how you included the french in their conversation (I tried to interp as I read along without cheating and reading your endnotes first! ^^ ) but I really loved how easy it was to pick up the flow of the story - I hadn't read this in a while and it all came back very easily; thank you so much for the update, this is another of my favourites! Take care, Rana ;)

Da Grrrl Says: Rana! <33 I honestly can't take credit for the French in this particular chapter. I was totally lazy and bummed the trans from my friend, Boudou. I have a lot of updates I want to do in a certain amount of time, so I took the easy road.! XD But I agree, she did an amazing job.

I like having the French in this story because I think it suits InuYasha's characterization in this one -he'd be such a little cutie, speaking the "language of love". ^///^

Thanks for another lovely review -I greatly appreciate the story lurve!



Reviewer: kokoronagomu   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: All Around Us

i wonder if she intends to drug him, tie him up and kidnap him... i'm thinking that's the only way he's going to be going any time soon.

i keep forgetting that there's no internet and naraku can't just google the pertinent information. lol his investigation could take weeks, or longer.

i would be afraid to tell sango and i know she's not real, sango is scary in this and very protective of her 'son'.
gin



You must login () to review.