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Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2009 1:50 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

Okay I must say....again...I LOVE THIS!!! Best chapter so far!! It's how they're acting with one another, oh man the water fight was to cute and fun!! Then the pants!! I can't sweat her I would him out of his pants too...hehehe ^_~! Aw and letting him sleep on her lap! *sighs* I really like this so far sis!

Author's Response: Thanks, Kid Sissy! ^^

I knew you'd like that one! They're attentive to each other, at this point, and more comfortable around each other. She pretty much trusts him unconditionally now and he seems to like being her savior. But will that last? Only time will tell! :D



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 6:21 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

SQUEEEE!! Iz fun, that am!

Can he go back and kick the headmans ass? >.>

Was very good. Since cant pinpoint which part I loved best I loved all the different parts to it! :D

OK, more please! :D



Author's Response: Thanks, Maru! :D

I so appreciate your having my back on this story. I'm still kinda stunned that I really went ahead with it after having it on the back burner for so long! It will probably be my last canon multi-chap in any real sense -unless I do another OC one. Hehe...



Reviewer: DA KAU   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

This has one of the most romantic feels ever.   The ending of this chap is just perfect. ._.* It makes me sad cuz I hope they get together but somehow with her background and Kagome still being around I have feeling it won't happen.

 Great job heffie!



Author's Response: Thanks, Kau! (^*?)

Is pwoud that you think so! You know how long I've wanted to write this; I'm glad I finally said "fuck it" and went for it. I'm having fun, and with 2 chapters left, I feel SO productive!

And I feel a little sad, too. *._.* This couple is growing on me, but what can I do? lol.



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

Aww! How cute was the ending? lolz! I fall more in love with this story with every chapter! Thanks for the another chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Kimmy! :D You've been super supportive of my little "endeavor" and you know how much I think you rawk! *glomps* Thanks for keeping my spirits up! <3



Reviewer: Kagatob   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 3:34 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

"Don't give me that look, you had already been gone for like two years, I didn't even know if you'd be back!  Besides... when we... um... I called out your name!"  ::Gets osuari'd 50 times::

 

You're on a roll this week.  Glad to see you in such high spirits.  Loving the developing inner struggle that Inuyasha is starting to go through now.



Author's Response: LOL! You better stop making me laugh >.> or you'll need that dialogue for real! :P But seriously, I'm being good <.< (kinda) and you'll only need the bit from the first review you left....

I swear!!!! lol.

InuYasha is struggling, and in the latest chapter, it's just a liiiiiittle bit worse!

Thanks for making me glomp you. *GLOMP!*



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 12:47 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Let Your Guard Down

Teh Squish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I'm all squishy inside now.  This gets better and better with every chapter I read.  If you decide to, or have already made up your mind to take this in a romantical direction between Isis and Inu, hey, I'm all for it.  Even if it's just one of those "circumstances and loneliness brought them together for a little bit" kind of thing, you wouldn't be hearing me complaining one freakin' bit! ;)

Side Note:  Speaking of squishy, Lil Kiki gives me hugs and calls me "Squishy."  :P



Author's Response: MAH SISTAH!!!

Girl, I didn't think you'd be able to follow this, let alone give me permission to get my "lonely" on! WAHOO!!! I don't want to say which direction this is going on here (da lovelies read the reviews! Plus, there are just 2 chaps to go), but let's just say that I like bittersweet. *rolls in da bittersweet* Thank you, as always, for being there to give me a shove when I need it. *squishes ya Lil Kiki style!* (Just how freakin' cute IS that?!)



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 3:20 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

By the way I really like that you did something outside the box. I mean she's awesome and to have Inuyasha reactting this way with some else who isn't kagome and of another race is wounderful to me.

It's the second time you've done that I wish more people did that. 



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 3:10 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

 

 Sorry forgot the name before lolz

I love it so far. I loved that he hit that asshole lolz. I'm woundering where you're going with this one and how you came up with it. LOVE IT!!!



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 3:10 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

Okay a part of me wants something to happen with him  and  Isis with the way he seems to be reactting to her. But at the same time I know it's a Kagome&Inuyasha ending. I laugh at the pulling of the ear thing hahaha. I hate to see him hurt but that was too funny.



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 3:06 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

I love it so far. I loved that he hit that asshole lolz. I'm woundering where you're going with this one and how you came up with it. LOVE IT!!!



Reviewer: Kagatob   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2009 6:52 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

"Hey Kagome, I just thought you should know, before you came back from your time... there kinda was someone else"

 

I'm both very much looking foreward and scared to see what happens next.



Author's Response: LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Okay, you made me laugh my butt off! *diez*

I feel SO guilty now!!! (You did that on purpose! :P) No hints on future chapters! >.> But there are just a couple left (like 3) and <.<....No comment!

ROFL! You're awesome. Seriosuly. <3



Reviewer: Smurfette   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2009 10:46 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

Hmmm, I was wondering why my 2end review didn't work... *laughs and shakes head* After reading if my review had went through: the second time, I saw that I had to enter the security code; to which my review would go through! ^_^' Oops!  Lol!

Anyways, all in all, Thanks for the update! I can't wait to read more on how Isis, (loves her name by the way!) got to Inuyasha's time. For the time being, it keeps me guessing and pondering how did she ended up there.

Till then, loving it, loving it!

*Huggles and Winks* ;)



Author's Response: Hey girly!

Damn, the security was on? I could have sworn that I left it off. Woops. >.< I get bots on here that spam the site with fake reviews, so I have to leave it on at night when I can't watch the site properly.

Anyhoo! Thanks for the review! ^_^ I always liked the name Isis, and it seemed fitting, so boo yah! Oh, and she didn't get to his time. :D She's already from his time. She's a 15th century gal; the only problem is that she's from Africa and not Japan.

I'm working on the next chapter, and we'll eventually see how she ended up there. Hopefully, it will be fun. *huggles*



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 3:51 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

I'm really interested in this fic, and I don't normally like to read fics with random people brought into a story but Isis just seems to flow.  I also find it really unique that you brought someone entirely different than Kagome or Kikyo to Inuyasha's interest.  From what it seems, Isis is a hottie ;p and Kagome is gone and he doesn't know if she'll return, so the temptation increases I guess.  I never pegged Inuyasha as a real cheater in this fic from what I can make out so far, but I guess you always surprise me so I'll wait and see ^_^  But I have a feeling you always have Kag/Inu in mind when you write these cutesy fics.  I have a feeling it's about both of them learning something from one another.

And thank you so much for the encouragment about school.  I felt so bad that I hadn't visited you in a while and I keep you in my thoughts while I'm slaving over biology ^_-  Keep those fingers relaxed when you get the chance and I'll talk to you soooon!!! (winter break is in about 2 weeks....so excited!)



Author's Response: Paw Print! *hugs*

Thanks for checking out the new story. I was hesitant for a while to pen it because I have so many others and because it's OC-based (in a way; you know everything always comes back to InuYasha), but I had the urge to really just 'do it" the other night. So, I did it! lol. The response has been surprisingly nice, too. I didn't expect anyone to give it a shot because of the OC, but they did (so awesome!).

And yeah, there will always be temptation when someone is lonely and missing the person they love, but we'll just have to see how it plays out. InuYasha isn't the only one torn away from their chosen one. :)

And how are you?? How is school? I hope you're not drowning too much and can get a nice winter vacation soon. My hands have been behaving (Thank you, God) so I have no complaints. I'm just happy to be writing again after having no inspiration for so long. *squeezes ya*



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 3:46 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! They're both so cute! So was the hint of Joaquin/Isis, but InuYasha getting flustered and confused was so adorable. I loved when she pulled his ear and called him a pervert ^^ Lmfaoooo..and Yasha bragging about his forest was hilarious.

I can't wait to read what else goes down between them, a little more on how Isis got to Japan, Joaquin's "promise", where he's at, and of course, Yasha getting even more tangled up in knots over his new friend.

What a sweet chapter! I'm loving their budding friendship. 

~Am :D



Author's Response: AMMMM!

I'm so happy that you liked the second chapter. I'm still nervous about forging on with this one (only because I'm so hardcore I/K), but what's the worst that can happen? It's a story and no kittens will be harmed in the making! lol.

And yeah, Yash will have more than a few knots to unravel along the way, which will be fun to write, but a little uncomfy for I/K fanatics. >.> It's all in good fun, though, and I like the Joaquin/Isis relationship. they're enjoyable to pen, even if it's in flashbacks.

I totally appreciate how open you're being about the plot. It makes me excited to get more written, so you know what? I'm going to dedicate this story to you with my thanks. <3



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 1:37 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

Crap! I forgot to rate! To tell the truth, the rating needs to be a LOT higher than a 10 but I'll settle for it since it's the highest lolz!!

Author's Response: LOL! Girl, you know you don't have to review again just for that! The awesomeness of the first one was more than enough, but thanks for all the luv. *HUGS*



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 1:35 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

I know you don't do much canon but you are just amazing at it!! I love the way things are going too. This InuYasha is the one I crave...and I'm supposed to be a die-hard Sesshomaru fan but here I am, lustin' after InuYasha lolz! Thanks for the excellent chapter!!

 

P.S. Did you catch episode 9 of the Final Act? Wasn't it just the sweetest thing ever?!! But isn't this season the saddest? With everyone dying off, there's just this sense of finality. I mean once the season's over, it's over. Sorry if I seem like a wreck! All good things are coming to an end. Like Monk (this tv series I'm obsessed with) and now InuYasha.*sobs uncontrollably* lolz! Have a great day, grrrl!



Author's Response: *cracks up* I keep forgetting you're Sesshomaru's woman!! How on earth did I rope you to my side of the fence?!

I love this Yasha, I have to admit. He's a "post canon" version that I like to imagine -one that's still gruff, but also very patient, kind, and in some cases, even sweet. His temper is still there, but he thinks more than he reacts and is easily someone a girl can fall for. *gushes* Plus, there is no mention, whatsoever, of Kikyou. >.>

Yes, I saw the 9th episode. I adored Sesshomaru in it, and I loved Jaken and Sess-Mama with her "little youkai". However, the stuff with InuYasha got on my nerves and I was glad that most of the focus wasn't on him. *grumbles*

Thanks for another lovely review, doll. I appreciate all of the support you've given me, and not just on this story, but all of them. You've managed to make me smile on some really crappy days! *HUGS*



Reviewer: o.o* La Moo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 12:52 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

This chapter was so worth the wait. (* o) I see the changes. I like Inuyasha alot in this, like always you got his character down pat. o.o* Isis reminds me of someone >.> I just can't put my hoove on it.  ^_^* I Can't wait to read more >.> hopefully I get my preview privledges back.

Author's Response: (o*?) You a kau, just know that. maybe if you act right you'll get your previews back *>.> But I dunno. We'll see what goes down in this barn. *o.o* and su up about Isis.



Reviewer: Caitriona   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 11:16 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

I'm somewhat intrigued by this piece.  I wonder how Isis actually got to Japan.  I wonder if, how, or when the language barrier will be struck down.  Thanks for sharing.  I look forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Caity. ^^ I'm typing up the 3rd chapter now, so there will eventually be info on how she got to his neck of the woods and what happened to her. It's just a matter of getting it off paper and onto a doc! As for the language barrier, that never really gets broken, but hopefully it will be fun to watch as they improvise!



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 10:31 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

This was great! Am really liking this OC myself and am loving the interaction between Isis and InuYasha, and with language barriers it sets things up for a whole mess of misinterpretations that can be rather fun and most interesting as well, hehe.

And caught it, yea I did, lol.! Thankies!! Hugzz...



Author's Response: Maru!

I knew you'd catch the shout out. You say it so much that it was only fitting that Yasha should repeat ya! :P I haz giddy that you like my little OC. This is a slip of a story, so there won't be time to seriously develop her (and I don't want to, anyway. That's for my original stuff.), but I hope to make her a fun, kind person that the audience can take a liking to. Will that happen?

*eyes my fellow I/K fans*

Only time will tell! :P



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

LOVED it!  The interactions with Isis and Inuyasha are both funny and tender.  It is all so sweet.  I hope that Joaquin is alright....but he doesn't have to be in any hurry.  :D 



Author's Response: "I hope that Joaquin is alright....but he doesn't have to be in any hurry. :D"

LMAO!!!!! Girl, you know I had to ROFL off that one! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! It won't be long, but I'm trying to keep it entertaining, at least. (Take a picture, girl! You may never see this much canon from me again!)

I'm typing up chapter 3 now, so it will post soon and then we'll get to see how Isis deals with the hanyou that is InuYasha. :P



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2009 9:20 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Put Your Trust in Me

Well I don't know how I feel about this fic!  I really like it but I'm so pro Kagome Inuyasha I don't know f I'll be able to handle it ... cause I kind of like your OC as well!  Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Awww, Jenn! :D

I totally understand and I won't be offended AT ALL if you decide to stop reading this one. I'm hardcore I/K myself, and though I can write them with other people I don't really like reading it because it "hurts". And that's not to say hat I'm definitely "going there:, but I do understand the reluctance. So thanks for giving this one a spin -even if you decide that you can't see it through to the end. ^_^



Reviewer: Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

Oooh, I think I'm gonna like this! I think I'm going to like this a lot.  Update update update!  Obviously the girl isn't going to become Inuyasha's lover or anything, but I like friendship/bonding stories too which is what I predict this is going to be.  But what do I know? Only you know, so update away! :D

Happy Writing!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

I love this canon Yasha. The way he told Miroku about Sango's pregnancy..and then started messing with the peasants ("And we all know that little kids taste like chicken.") He's great xD I can't wait to read more of him.

I can't wait to see what you do with the girl, too. I loved the bit of InuYasha/Tanisha in MPR, so it'll be interesting seeing what you do here. She's clearly foreign (which is why she got the same welcome as Kagome but in a...harsher. much harsher way), so the hows and whys of how she got there intrigue me, too. And then our boy still misses Kagome, the lord of that village is an ass that'll probably cause problems later (and he's a greedy one at that -.- Tell 'em Yasha!), and the girls fight or flight kicked in at a bad moment. Very exciting set up!

I hope you had a great Thanksgiving!

~Am :D



Author's Response: AMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!

You made my fucking day. NO LIE. I'm totally grinning here. :DDDDDDDD <-- See?!

I wasn't sure how receptive anyone would be to this story, it being non I/K and all, but I was hoping that those that may have liked the InuYasha/Tanisha might be okay with it. This won't be nearrrrrly what that was *ahem* :P, but I'm hoping you like it anyway!

I don't do much canon (you know that >.>), but this Canon Yasha is a LOT of fun to pen I'm trying to show him in a different light, so to speak. Like, now that he doesn't have his normal support group around him, will he retain all the life lessons that having a pack has taught him long enough to help someone who needs him? We'll see. ^_^

The second chapter is nearly written out (the story is done. I'm just transferring it to my comp) and you'll find out where she's from and a little about how she ended up there. But her info won't come all at once.

And yus, Yasha misses kagome and it hurts him to see how life is evolving around him when he's trapped in a spiral of loneliness. But, he's our boy; he'll make it through. :P

Hope T-Day was wicked and thanks SO much for the sparkling review. Wow. *hugs*



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 8:36 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

Oh, and gobble, gobble Grrrl. Heh I'm a day late. I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving.

:HUGS:

Author's Response: HAPPY TURKEY DAY, SISTAH!!! *HUGS*



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 8:34 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Seeing What You Want to See

You musta been reading my mind 'cause I been in the mood for canon lately and who better to get it from than Mah Sistah. Heh Now while you know I'll try just about anything (shut up :P), I am somewhat picky about my pairings (if in fact there is a "real" pairing going on here) where Inu is concerned; those being Inu/Sess and Inu/Kags. That being said, and the fact that you've never let me down yet, I'm liking this verra much (yeah, I'm still stuck in the Highlands :P) and can't wait to see how it's all gonna go down. I'm pretty sure I know where this chick be from too. ;)

Author's Response: *giggles* Yep, I do rememba that a sistah got pref'rences! xD

So do I, so don't worry! I'm particular about what I consume as a reader. I like my I/K, regardless of all that may ensue in order for them to come together. However, as a writer, I can pen anything (I will NOT pen Inu/Kik, though. Not ever.). I like toying with InuYasha and other women -as a writer- but I can't do it very much as a reader UNLESS kagome doesn't exist. That's the only way. In this, tho, she does exist and so... stop worrying. :P

And you know what??? I bet you do know where she's from already, lol.

Author's Response: *giggles* Yep, I do rememba that a sistah got pref'rences! xD

So do I, so don't worry! I'm particular about what I consume as a reader. I like my I/K, regardless of all that may ensue in order for them to come together. However, as a writer, I can pen anything (I will NOT pen Inu/Kik, though. Not ever.). I lile toying with InuYasha and other women -as a writer- but I can't do it very much as a reader UNLESS kagome doesn't exist. That's the only way. In this, tho, she does exist and so... stop worrying. :P

And you know what??? I bet you do know where she's from already, lol.



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