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Reviewer: JoJo5692   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2012 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

So I have to ask..What exactly gave you the idea for this sordid yet delectable plot?
I've never read anything like it, and surprisingly I find myself falling in love with this. I've grown to feel such a hatred for InuYasha's character one moment, and during the next, my heart if softened. It's as if I'm Kagome!

I do enjoy fics more on the erotic side and I can freely say that you've mastered that area more so than anyone else I've stumbled upon.

Please, kill my anxiety with a lovely update as soon as you can. I may just go mad.

Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, dear. ^^ I think this plot was borne from my love of dark and disturbing things. Haha. InuYasha is a character stuck between extremes. He's either extremely bad or extremely good and likes to interchange them often. You love him, then you hate his guts -he's a lot of fun when this story cooperates with me. I'm not sure when it will be updated, but given the fact that it's got new art and a new layout ready, I suspect it won't be too long before I start typing something up.

I'm happy you're enjoying it! :D



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2012 10:34 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Gah... This is the story that gets me everytime. It's like a trainwreck; I don't really want to watch, but I just can't look away...



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2012 2:23 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Fuckery indeed -_-

I cant seem to whole heartedly love or hate Inuyasha.

It's such a shame that Kags is in such a predicament where she love someone who treats her worse than a dog. Then there's the phone call. I feel so jealous for Kags. His whole demeanour instantly changes for that call; and if the lil girl is his daughter, then him telling her mom he love her.... *breaths easy*

Is it wrong for my heart to hurt??? O_O

On a side note, I kept wondering if she forgot about the stove cuz I knew she turned down the fire - not off xD So sad that it got got cut short just when he "granted" her access to do as she please.

Argh! Inuyasha is a dick!! __>

*sigh*

My heart needs mending atm. I can't wait to read you're next enstallment!

Like Inu has Kags captured - ur writing has captured me for some time now, n am sinking more and more with each new read >:O lol



Reviewer: KaeKit36   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2012 6:31 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

I feel like I'm getting just as mind-fucked as Kagome. O.o Bravo, dear lady. Keep the mindgames coming.

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! What a great review -loved the eyes! :P



Reviewer: smitten kitten   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2012 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

omg! seriously, this version of inu is soo hot & wicked & addictive!girlie ur fuckery is so good this story straight turned me out lol! thanks for sharing the deliciously dark recesses of ur imagination

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much, chickie. I appreciate it! I'm gonna get off my lazy butt and start getting more updates out. ^^



Reviewer: Cakemeister12   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2012 7:12 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Grrr Inuyasha... Yet you can't help it! This story was nothing less than awesome! :)

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks!



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 1:26 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Got her all screwed up in the head...so sad



Reviewer: ShouraiChan   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 12:37 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

All I have to say is, "DAMN. He's buffaloed her but GOOD and she is totally (and not totally) aware of it. That's INSANE. OH MY GOD GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!

AWESOME read!!!!! I'm not even concerned about Inu's little phonecall. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Reviewer: Folltosa   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

This was a great chapter.Please update soon again.



Reviewer: HotBoxx   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2012 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Let's start with this one... haha to say the least, this chapter killed me. Literally I was like.. "fucckk... Noooooo! •__•" haha great turn of events :P



Reviewer: OnnaMom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2012 8:39 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Aww that ...jerk! he's in need of a good Comeuppance!



Reviewer: beckyya   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2012 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

The chemistry of this story has me totally obsessing over its mysteries! Great writing!



Reviewer: Speechless   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2012 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

I spent a few hours reading this story, and reading it all in one sitting has blown my mind. This story is absolutely brilliant, and the characters are unique and appealing. Plus the sex scenes.... Is it hot in here or what? *fans self*

Anyways, wow. I don't really know what to think of Inuyasha right now, and I'm trying not to pass judgment as of yet, but his character is definitely the most mysterious. ^^



Reviewer: kazanova   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2012 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Hallelulujah! I'm not sure even sure if I spelt that right! This chapter was so intense and it opened up a WHOLE set of questions for me! So Inuyasha is married/already has another girl? Noway!

 

Thank you so much for your chapter. I was afraid because I thought you were going to be gone forever. But you are such a tease ;]

 I really appreciate you writing for all of us, I'm not sure you know how much it means to have a chance to escape from the burdens of life into another world through your stories. Thanks so much <3. Looking forward to more.



Reviewer: arundeep216   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2012 6:38 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

OMG!...What a cliffhanger!..Inuyasha's character in this fic has been shown in an entirely different light that it was hard for me to grasp it first but it's been written so beautifully that its easy to endorse him this way too. Once again..what a fic!..plzz update soon



Reviewer: cwillia   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2012 2:54 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Awesome writing, couldn't stop reading....Inuyasha is so DARK and Alluring at the same time.  I just get the inclination that this isn't going to end well for Kagome. Can't wait to read more...just FAB

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, babe! <33 This version of InuYasha is SO much fun when he's cooperating. He gave me trouble at first, but this chapter flowed properly and I'm hoping it continues! And don't forget to claim your account. The site will be private within the next 2 weeks and I want to make sure you're on the list. You've been reading my stuff a long time and I don't want you shut out. <33



Reviewer: Boudou   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2012 3:57 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

This chapter is my favorite of the story for the moment :)



Reviewer: DGirl17   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2012 6:00 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Ooops So Srry Bout that didnt know :x

Da Grrrl Says: It's okay. It's actually written on the homepage rules, but I don't think many people actually pay attention to that stuff when they visit this site.



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2012 2:39 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

I had to read it again...it's that good...

Da Grrrl Says: Hehe. You crazy, girl! <3



Reviewer: DGirl17   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2012 10:25 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

I didnt see that coming at all LOL! I think your trying to make us think that he has a daughter BUT not once did you refer the little girl on the phone as his daughter (which im guessing is the point). Im anxious to see who those people are tho this was a really good chapter im glad you had time to work on it. ;)



Da Grrrl Says: <.< Don't guess plot points in reviews. I totally have rules against that in my TOS. lol. Srsly. It's a pet peeve.

But no hints or answers, either! You guys will hafta wait. I never said he was her daughter, but I never said she wasn't, either. I don't know anyone, adult or child, who calls their father "daddy" all the time in a short conversation. Sometimes they never say his name/title at all. That's why you can't assume. She may be, she may not be. :)



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2012 7:38 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

......uh whoa..... no words just whoa.... i'm barely coherent i feel like i am sharing kagome's mind fuck right now.  I'm feel like a emotional rollercoaster and yet i love this story!

You really do have a gift.



Da Grrrl Says: Jenn! ^^

Thanks a bunch and I'm glad you liked the chapter! Kagome is definitely being mindfucked, lol. It's kinda fun to watch... :P



Reviewer: Amber Tucker   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2012 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

i love this story so far! its so different than any of the other one ive read... its got such a nice spin. and i cant wait until it's finished!!!

Am



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2012 6:36 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Damn, I wonder what's the next mind game in store for Kagome...or maybe it's a continuous game for InuYasha to play hmmm lol. I certainly don't favor Kagome's position; I'd just say fuck it! She's tip toeing AROUND eggshells, trying to make sure she doesn't even step on one. That's just stressful, but I loves me some Yashie all the same. I just got out of intensive therapy a little while ago and found this updated (and squealed like you'd never believe, especially with how sad I've been; it made me happy to see it updated).

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, GRRRL!!! I hope your b-day turned out okay! When I saw the date today, I was like 'Hey, it's InuGrrrl's birthday! Let me check on her!' lol so again, Happy Birthday.

I read Redemption and just had to say welcome to the U-Kiss fangirl club! I download some of their stuff a little while ago, but I so need some songs from the new CD. The song playing on Redemption is awesome!! Speaking Redemp, what's up with Exoneration? It shows up, then the screen turns blue, but I can hear Adele's Rolling in the Deep playing.

Anywhoways, I thought the update was awesome so thanks for working so hard on it. I know carpal tunnel's gotta be kicking the shit out of your hands so I'm really grateful that you can still crank out wonderful updates. Thanks again!



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2012 8:08 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

InuYasha is really playing with my head right now...I love how you dug deep into Kagome's thoughts!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, girl! This story has been whooping my butt, but I'm determined to win! :P



Reviewer: KityyMay   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2012 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Mercy in You

Now that is a real twist. Inuyasha having a family, my oh my... :D



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