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Reviewer: leadranach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2011 7:12 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

SO cute! ^_^ -- Miko is such a doll (kids are so much fun at that age, you never know what they're going to say or do).  Love this storyline, you made me smile!   <3

Take care,

Rana ;)



Reviewer: MalevolentHuntress   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2011 4:57 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

Aww so cute!!!!!!!!!!



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

*Squeals* This has to be one of the cutest chapters you've ever written. SOOOOOO freakin' adorable! Even with how played out Teenage Dream became, I still love that song. It just gets you in the mood to dance around (in your under apparently) and wail at the top of your longs along with the song. Thank you times a thousand for the awesome updates of the day. (: They were one of the main highlights of my day.



Reviewer: kokoronagomu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 4:11 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

i was looking at ricepies for chicken and waffles and thinking, 'how can i make that vegan?' --um-- 1/2" sliced tofu marinated with a little soy, some louisiana hot sauce, and nutritional yeast over night-- dust with flour and deep fry. toast a box of vegan waffles... unfiltered maple syrup<--is genius!!

8D/ lolz

this is adorable-- who can resist a precocious little girl who isn't obnoxious? poor guy, he's defeated even before he's begun. 

wondering about the biological father/sperm donor... will he be trouble?

gin

 



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 2:52 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

That was quite cute at the end. :) I really like where this story is going. I like Tamiko's character, she's just too adorable for words. lol

Awesome job.



Reviewer: Kau   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 2:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

Pwincess would like to know if when her money is going to be deposited in her account for this role.  o.o* As her agent she demands payment ASAP.  Now to the review. ^.^* Pinches the lil girl's cheek. She is too cute!  I like  Kagome and her lil girl and how they kinda crushing on Inuyasha.  It's sweet how they got their lil diner and I can't wait to see more. 



Reviewer: Ikalia   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 12:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

Oh my, have you been busy. Glad you updated and are still enjoying your stories. Its a great study break for me....maybe too good...I get significantly less done when you've updated. :) Anywho, beautiful chapter! Please don't hurt your wrists.



Reviewer: Leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

What a beautiful story so far. It's destined to be a sweet little romance. I feel for Yash and his loss of kikyo, but I'm cheering for him to find new happiness. Love Tamiko and her exuberance. She makes me smile. And Yash putting Miro in his place makes me smile, too! : D
Looking forward to more as always. Love ya, my dear!! Take care of your wonderful self!



Reviewer: evera   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 10:28 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

awesome!! im liking this story already! update soon please!!!!!



Reviewer: Smurfette   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2011 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Thanks for updating this fic!!! I totally find Tamiko cute and adorable! I like the way you described Shikon and Nottingham. Reminds me when I went on camping trips and small villages long ago. 

Can't wait to read more!!! Liking the part that Kag's a mom. And as well it makes me ponder on what happen to Tami's dad too. Guess I'll find that out soon. Love this chapter. Thanks again for the update. You're the best!!!

Till then take care and I'll review soon!!! :) 



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 10:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

You truly have a way with words. My eyes are clouded with tears. I think no matter how one would go - it still hurts alot. I remember in the past - when my grandma was dying of cancer - it was painfully slow and as young as i was back then, i knew she wasn't going to live... and her lingering presence was hard, and then 2yrs ago my uncle died as well, but he kept his sickness from us and went quickly - and it hurt all the same.

No one ever truly get over a loved one's death, nor would they forget them. I just love how realistic your stories are, and how often the grip at my heart strings.

In this chp where it was saying "it'll get better", or "she's in a better place." ah~ that only makes it worst. Lawd am feelin emo-fied now v.v

I'm glad i chose this story to read, I'd like to see how Inu finds the will to move on and find new love - It's not gonna be easy. I still can't call or tlk about my uncle or grandma without getting sad or my voice shaking



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 12:52 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

"After all, how much of a distraction can one kid possibly be?"

Oh God, I have a feeling those are gonna be famous last words...but it looks like Yasha's already in for an interesting  summer! Totally wasn't expecting Kagome to have a kid, so I now I'm wondering what's up with the dad and if he'll cause problems...or maybe if her story is similar to IY's?

And the kid! The Tamiko scenes were adorable. I loved her "tummy ogre" and "sloof" lines and cracked up when she ran away from Kagome.  Reminds me of me...only my mama would chase after me with either the belt or a flip-flop in hand >.> so I had good reasons to be running xD but the lil troublemaker's a cutie and looks like she'll bring a lot of fun (and mischief) to this story. The glasses connection she made with IY was precious, too. Maybe she'll give him and Kagome a push in each others' direction? 

Oh, and I don't think I've mentioned this before, but I LOVE all the pop-culture refs you throw in. I don't think I've seen any other fan-writer do that. Anyway, stuff like the Chris Hanson ref are just so fun to catch. I forgot about how good Dateline was xD Those catch-a-perv moments were awesome...especially when they'd run and get tased. Good stuff.

So far, really loving the set up and can't wait to see where this goes. Things already seem to be looking up for the guy...

 

...I mean, he just discovered chicken & waffles xD

 

~Am :D



Reviewer: Jessie Angel   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 10:11 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Thank you so much! I loved this chapter. It cheered me up very much :)



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 2:51 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

I think this story is adorable!  I can't wait to see more interaction between Inuyasha, Kagome, and Tamiko!  And imagining Inu with glasses is just downright sexy...I'm admitting that outright.  Keep up the amazing work and I hope you are doing well Kiki! 



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

That was cute.  :)



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 5:56 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Words in My Heart...

This is getting to be sooo good, Kitten! I know that you have trouble writing but the stories that you put out are so very much worth the waiting for, for each and every beautifully written chapter!!!!!!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 4:38 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

This chapter is so darn full of feelings, that it hurts. It really hurts to know that this can and does happen to so many people. And the way you wrote it goes right straight through and touches the soul.

Beautiful, Kitten.



Reviewer: kokoronagomu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

just getting away and changing the scenery, getting away from the sad memories of loss can do a lot. it wasn't so bad when my ex comitted suicide but i was still screwed up for about a year and did finally go into counciling for a couple months, but that's the only way i can relate to losing a spouse -- a really beloved one would probably have me acting like inuyasha. i do so love how you weave such realistic emotion into your stories --they really touch the heart.

oh my goodness!! the modern miroku just cracked me up --his attitude is just so (i imagine the 'seventies attitude' with him sporting a few gold chains, shirt unbuttoned showing off his tanned chest... i'm sorry but it was all i can picture LOLz, in the seventies he'd be the DISCO KING!!).

gin



Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much for the review, Gin!

I've never lost a boyfriend/husband, but when my mom and gram died within 8 years of each other (Mom left first) it was pretty bad. I can definitely relate to InuYasha's state. I checked out (I guess it didn't help that I was the one who found her body) and really didn't do anything with myself for a long time. I climbed out of it, humans are resilient that way, but it wasn't easy. I did have friends, though, and that helped quite a bit so that's kind of where I'm steering this. I want to remind InuYasha that his life isn't nearly over.

Miroku does seem like a 70's pimp, doesn't he? (Sporting Robin Hood cosplay clothes on the down low). He's a manslut, but a good guy, which is why InuYasha tolerates him. I've started the next chapter and I'm really going to try to have it posted in the next couple of days along with some other stuff. I've neglected the fics long enough and I'm hoping the spark remains for a while so I can get some things done. Wish me luck!



Reviewer: Cassie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 12:24 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Totally loving this one right now, grrrl. I'm running out the door and will try to leave a longer review later, but I just wanted to let you know that you've still got the magic. hehehe :) hope everything's great and that you're doing well!

love, Cass xx



Da Grrrl Says: Cass! <333

How the heck are you? Hope you're well and things are good at home. Thanks for peeking at the new chapter and leaving such a sweet comment -I appreciate it, especially on a fic that I haven't touched in a while. I'm updating this again very soon. ^_^



Reviewer: La Kau   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 9:13 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

*pinches that lil girls cheeks*  She is so cute. I love Inuyasha scolding Miroku at the end >.> putting that Don Juan in his place!.  I can't wait to see what happes next.  For Inuyasha and  the rest of the gang.

Da Grrrl Says: Kau! (o*?) No telling who Tamiko is! *o.o* You have been warned. And don't pick on Miroku like he's not in your hit list! Rin is a ho! xD



Reviewer: MidCat   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 6:15 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Well girl, you can knock me with a feather and call me impressed!! Great chapter! Loved everything about it and of course, that is no surprise since it was written by you!

I luv u sooooooooooo very much!! You keep the flame alive and that just means the world to me!!

So far I loved everything! Chicken and waffles is something that I didn't even knew existed together until maybe a year or so ago, and then all of a sudden it's everywhere!! They even opened a place like that here in town!  I haven't tried it yet, but I promise I will!

 It was funny when you mentioned Chris Hanson because it's a recurring joke between my hubby and me, everytime we see something that just seems wrong he says "Why don't you have a seat here?" 

So picturing Inu just looking at a camera and saying "No, honestly! I just wanted to find the restaurant!" Was just too much!

This story, as ALL your other ones, has that something special that makes them irresistible!  As I said before, anything you wite I would read! Even if it is your grocery list! So keep them coming please!

Thank you for writing and updating! Love you tons!! Hugzzz: Me.



Da Grrrl Says: ROFL!!

O snap, you cracked me up! Isn't that the best part, when he asks them to have a seat? They always think it's the kid's father at first. LOL! It was so funny I actually DVR'd a few episodes. You gotta love him when he goes, "You're chasing a cat around, you got cool whip<, what's going on?" *diez* Poor Yasha!

And massive hugs and love from NYC. Your reviews always crack me up! I've never had chicken and waffles, either. I heard about it years ago, but they don't seem to have any place like that in NYC. I don't really get the combo myself, but it just seemed funny and added to InuYasha's culture shock. xD

I'm a little miffed at myself for taking so long to show this story some updates. I've had block on it forever, but last night I was just determined to get it written and was kinda shocked that it wasn't as awful as it could have been. >.> So thanks BUNCHES for the kind review, babes, and the amazing encouragement. It means the world. <3333



Reviewer: Neo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 5:38 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Love the update... you did good Grrrl.. can't wait to see what you have in store for our little Yasha now... Chocolate hugs are always the best.. (^_^)

Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, Neo! I had block for ages, but I pounded it out last night and actually liked the result. GASP! (O_O) And I agree -chocolate hugs rock! <3



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 3:48 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Am not Jess, but am glad much for the update -WooHoo! And love your lil OC, Tamiko. Can actually see her runnin round as I read. For some reason that whole scene with the batter kinda took me back... lol.

And I wonder if 'Rob' dresses in full dress when at Nottingham.. one can only wonder, hehe. 

 

Hugzz



Da Grrrl Says: MARUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

Where you been at?! Gettin' swallowed up by FA and that long ass term, eh? Hehe...

I haz happy you enjoyed it. I actually had fun writing it, too. I struggled at first and just forced sentences, but by the time he got into the restaurant and met the girls, it started to finally flow on its own. It's still rough around the edges, tho. I'm starting the next chapter while the idea is fresh in my mind, then I gotta go after a few other half-written chapters. I may even get out a few this weekend. ^_^

P.S. You know he does!



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2010 3:41 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Words in My Heart...

Yup -still rereading! :P

BTW, what happens at the Nottingham? :D

 

Hugzz



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2010 4:19 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Words in My Heart...

Awwww...I just wanna give this InuYasha a big hug! Really sweet and sad how he's hurting and I love the idea of him traveling away to write the novel. Maybe his adventure will add a few twists to the tale? I love how his tastes in writing even showed the big change in him. Even if the muse turned into a drag queen (you have no idea how loudly I cracked up at that XD). Interesting build-up with again, a really light/classic feel to it. Now that he's on his way to healing, I wonder if he'll encounter any struggles or what/who he'll find at Nottingham...and oh God, here's hoping he didn't just shoot himself in the butt with that promise to Random House!

~Am :D



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