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Reviewer: Dare9179   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2013 1:10 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

This getting good. I like it!



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2013 10:40 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

Ah, this is wonderful! I cant stop about how much i love it. (I for sure hadn't read this chapter so yay me!)

Firstly, I love that you dont have Kagome resembling Kikyou. She is her own person.

Secondly, I love love LOVE that Inuyasha isnt running from his feelings - even if they confuse him at the moment.

Thirdly, I just love Inuyasha. And Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship.

Inu is so damn endearing. Tamiko is cute and sweet and just a blast of awesomeness (and I love that Inu already gave her a nickname since she is known as miko really.

I'm really interested in knowing Kagome's past. Why is she keeping her mouth shut about Tami's father? Who is he and will he make an appearence? Did he know she was pregnant? (though I'm guessing probably since it was the talk...) And when Sango was teasing her.. dont remember what exactly but it was in relation to liking boys or w/ and she was gonna say professor...

So... my thinking cap is on and the impatientness is always there lol

Cant wait to read more :D



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2013 10:15 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

"The woman lost her train of thought. InuYasha was standing before them in a pair of glasses, gray sweatpants, and nothing else. 'Merciful Heavens...'"

^MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY

I don't know why... But I know I've read all this before - but it dont seem like i've reviewed which is just utterly wrong by right.

I love the innocence.. This story is filled with it and i just love it. The heart ache - the loss causing it is hurting me as well.

I just love how you can put together a bunch of words and create something so beautiful.

I'm grinning like an idiot because you have Kagome and Inu's interraction so innocnet and so so awkwardly beautiful. As if they're teenagers *__* It's so dang cute!

And I love Tamiko... she is such a deary.. and Kagome's motherly side in this is a joy. I love it love it...LOVES IT!!



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2013 6:35 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

This is a very sweet and endearing story! I cant wait for more!



Reviewer: QueSeraMara   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

I'm really enjoying how they're progressing. Really can't wait for more! Will Inu ever ask about Tamiko's daddy? Can't wait to find out!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the lovely reviews! <33 I'm sure at sooooome point Yash will get his questions answered... but that's all I can say! ^____^



Reviewer: QueSeraMara   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 1:26 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

Haha. Teenage Dream was a fitting song. Tamiko's really adorable, and she and Yash get along well. Can't wait for more!



Reviewer: QueSeraMara   Signed   [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 1:12 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

Seriously adoring Tamiko! Love the Robin Hood loving Miroku too haha! Sango would be a cute Maid Marion! Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: QueSeraMara   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2013 1:06 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Words in My Heart...

This is so amazingly sad, but brilliant! I love it. Can't wait for more! ^^



Reviewer: 123Meme Go   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2013 12:17 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

This story is really slow and sweet, its allowing me to really connect with Inuyasha's character. So great.



Reviewer: ktsan   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2013 6:09 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

Augh! Reading this chapter on an empty stomach = not the greatest idea in the world. It all sounds so good, even the "homemade ramen" haha.

I really like this chapter for two reasons: the way you portray Tamiko, and the way you wrote about their different concepts of relationships. Will we be hearing about Kagome's past sometime soon? Sad to hear, but it's a part of the story I'm really curious about. Great chapter!

Da Grrrl Says: IKR? I was hungry when I wrote it. lol. We'll definitely know more about Kagome's past soon. It's a taboo subject, but as they become friends, I think the two of them will learn more about one another and why they're in the situations they're in. I hope to update this soon, so stay tuned! :D



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2013 12:48 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

re read it :) Just love it



Reviewer: Kathy02   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2013 2:37 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

I love that this fic is so light! there is just the right amount of drama,

the scene where they were eating ramen is just so precious!



Reviewer: flysch   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2013 8:26 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

So sweeeeeettttt! ;)
You updated and really made my day! :)



Reviewer: soliea0death   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2013 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

I really like the way this story is starting up, and little Tamiko seems like the most adorable girl imaginable. I look forward to the future chapters. ;)



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2013 8:24 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

I want some ramen now.... This was such a chute chapter! I really loved the 'baby conartist' comment because that is something I could see myself thinking. Its nice to see that they are both reluctant and afraid, but still willing to spend time together instead of running. I guess we'll see if that sticks huh? I am pretty intrigued to see what you'll do with Kagomes past, too. Great update!



Reviewer: Brushogen   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

The seeds of romance have been planted. (God that was cheesy) Now I REALLY want to know what happens



Reviewer: Brushogen   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 9:23 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Sweet Diversions

Once again, a brilliantly written chapter. And for the record, I think car karoke is AWESOME!!!



Reviewer: Brushogen   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 9:01 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Ladies of Nottingham

It's official; Tamiko has stolen my heart. I cannot wait to read more about this complete SWEETHEART!!! X//3



Reviewer: Brushogen   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2013 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

Congradulations. After reading this first chapter I'm already tearing up. I have a feeling this is going to be another favorite story :)



Reviewer: Monica   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2013 9:33 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

phewww, after a long week i FINALLY had time to sit down and read your updates! and i was so happy when i saw there were 2 updates! LOL! anyways back to the stories, squeee! i always love how you portray kids in your stories. they're just so darn cute! haha. and ohh barbies and flounder and sebastian, bringing back some good ol' childhood memories haha.



Reviewer: 018Luxio   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2013 4:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

So Sad. You can actually feel his pain. excellent work :)



Reviewer: leadranach   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2013 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

Hello there :) It's been a little while for me I know, and I'm sorry for that - sometimes life deals you things that you have absolutely no control over; believe me when I say I've missed reading your stories and this is such a sweet one to read! I love how you're portraying the characters, little Miko is just a doll, and I really like the story itself. I hope things have been OK for you lately - all you can do is take a day at a time (my motto as of late!). Take care Grrrl! Rana ;)



Reviewer: ms identified   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2013 8:51 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

Dear god...I love this so much! The kids in your stories are so damn cute. LOVE LOVE LOVE!



Reviewer: Inurinsong   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2013 4:43 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Holding Onto Gravity

I love it. Keep up the good work.



Reviewer: Inceeba   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2013 5:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: All The Wounds That Are Ever Gonna Scar Me.

Oh and I forgot, the art is just gorgeous. got to love him, our yashi with glasses :D P.S.: I'm crossing my fingers for your friend and of course hope you feel well enough too. P.S.1 keep your hands safe



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