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Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2012 9:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

Yepp I'm back again! Inu and Kagome magic plus Ballet? ADDICTIVE!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 4:11 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Simple yet enchanting! Though I detest Kikyou sometimes, I'm glad you gave her a smidgen of humanity. Another wonderfully crafted journey you've taken me on.. Just like soaring on a flying carpet :)



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 3:50 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

wooohoo!!! Inu finally manned up and confessed! But sheesh, he went the extra extra mile to propose too! Another great chappie! Man i need to hit the thesaurus to find more words to tell you what an amazing writer you are! Kisses!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 3:34 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position

LOLOLOLOL! Ya know, in any other spun on its heel universe, Inu and Bank are kinda smokin' together! However, I am a die hard inukag fan and i'd support them til the day i die!!! I am digging this fic with all the comical misunderstandings!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 3:19 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position

Bank is such a mood ruiner! haha But he's so adorably clueless!!!!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 3:10 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position

Oh man!!! Clueless Inu who can't see Bank is hitting on him! Hahahaha! I love this subtle comical side of the story!



Reviewer: ali3ice   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2012 2:52 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

I did ballet for 6 years before moving on to... something else unrelated :D Always imagined Kags to be the elegant dancer! BUT I'm loving this twist and hahaha! Inu in a tutu!!! (ohh that rhymes) Can't wait to continue down this road!!



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2012 7:42 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

I even get emotional when reading this, so I can just about imagine what it means to you. That bit about a spare baba being liquid courage was great, by the way.



Reviewer: OnnaMom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2012 4:39 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Since you first posted the update I've never been really able to sit down and have a good read of it. Now that I have tho(finally) it was very awesome and also brought on the water works. Hugzz



Reviewer: Izzuhbella   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2012 3:04 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

I still come back to this story and re-read it.

I love it.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, doll! <3



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2012 3:03 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Loved the ending it was perfect

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much for all of the kind reviews. This story is special, so I'm glad you liked it! <3



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2012 2:41 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

awww such a sweet Chapter absolutely amazingly awesome!



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2012 1:55 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position

oh man i feel so bad for Inu getting mixed up in that fight with Bank and J but things are starting to look up :) awesome chapter



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2012 1:21 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position

wow great chapter rly felt things heat up there till the phone rang XP



Reviewer: Krezek   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2012 12:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

loved the first Chapter poor Inu hope things get better for him



Reviewer: InuHanyouNikkie   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2012 11:21 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

I love how you use all these wonderful Italian phrases/lines. Gets me missing my Nona bunches (even though she cussed like the devil a lot. XD)

I love all the realisms you add to your stories and how you can draw your readers into the worlds you create magically!!

OMG! That kiss scene! You just blasted romantic kisses out of the water!! It was Phenomenal and that love scene - OMGOMGOMG!! That was so intense, so primal and like how in the manga Kagome fell asleep while InuYasha was confessing to her, InuYasha fell asleep. Priceless! It was so bittersweet!

And the afterwards scene! I just LOVE your angst! You've mastered it and now own it so perfectly!

And the build up to InuYasha asking Kagome to marry!! Exquisite!

I really enjoyed this chapter!! Very much!! And eager dive for the next one!

Da Grrrl Says: NIKKKKKKKIE!! <33333

Thanks so much; you know it always means a lot when you enjoy my work. <3 I wished I had finished this before Jessie left, but I'm proud that I got a chance to give it a proper ending anyway. You've got one more chapter then you can put it to bed! :D



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 3:53 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

I'm so happy that inuyasha and kagome didn't prolong there feelings to where both sides wouldn't seem to understand.



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 7:45 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

loved it



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 8:26 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position

WOW!!



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 8:01 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position

BRAVO!! ENCORE!!



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 6:51 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position

I CRIED FATE ALWAYS DID HAVE INUYASHA AND KAGOME MEET IN THE STRANGEST OF SETTINGS. LOVED IT!



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

OMG LOVED IT!! AND I WANT MORE:-)



Reviewer: MiaFitz   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 8:44 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

I really liked the scene with Kikyou and Inuyasha, her admittance of starting to see him as a rival and it just made her very human. And aw, Inuyasha, everything he said was just beautiful. And I loved this line "What they had was stronger than a fabrication borne of misunderstanding." It was very poignant. It was such a lovely ending to a wonderful fic. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it!



Reviewer: MiaFitz   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 7:13 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

I had to read everything again before I read the new chapter not because I forgot the story but because that's how awesome it is! I love Inuyasha so much in this. He's romantic, strong, sweet and just everything. And that scene, goosebumps every time. Like every single detail and word just elevates the scene and I just...aahhh (you seriously write the best love scenes, like better than ones in published books). I'm off to read the last chapter!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the story. I just wish I could have gotten it written much sooner, but at least it's complete now! :)



Reviewer: Becca   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2012 4:20 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

This story must be my favourite so far, I stayed up late to finally get to the end :'D
I'd love to see Inu dance like that for real if I could, it's such a beautiful art.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks a lot! :D



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