Date: February 18, 2012 1:05 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Growing Up Is Getting Old
Uh-oh. Kagome is pregnant isn't she??
Date: February 10, 2012 10:02 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
I can't believe I'm just reading this!!!! AHHH So much fun to read!! I love drabbles. :P I laughed out loud at quite a few spots hahaha. You've always had fabulous dialogue. GREAT JOB Nee-chan!!! I love the premise and the characterizations. Great job in such few words. YAY! <33
Da Grrrl Says: WEEBS!!! I dug up the old pregnancy challenge you gave me years ago and finally did it. I'm so happy you liked it! I used to hate drabbles, but now, they're really not too bad. :P <3333
Date: February 06, 2012 11:06 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
that's really weird. but it was a good lesson for their parents. it's funny how parents choose to act like a children when it should be the time when their kids need them to be adults.
this was really good, simple but nice twist in the end :)
Date: February 06, 2012 11:01 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: A Program To Derail Us All
what what whaat?! why are these chapters so short, I'm gonna have attack! :O
Da Grrrl Says: LOL. They're drabbles. :P My summer community only does challenges with short word counts. Usually 500 or less per chapter. :D
Thanks for reading it!
Date: February 06, 2012 10:59 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: We Are Ready For The Siege
more problems I see. Well that's just normal in that situation ^^' but story gets better and better
Date: February 06, 2012 10:56 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: My Veneers Sink Into You
ooh, I just hope their gonna get through this!
Date: February 06, 2012 10:54 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Want To Live in a Fantasy?
oh no he didn't! :D Interesting...
Date: July 21, 2011 12:29 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
Great story! Panic Switch is my fav song from SP. I really liked the plot twist, K&I characterization and the flood of emotions. Now, I've gotta find some more stuff to read! (like your latest update!)
Date: July 21, 2011 12:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Growing Up Is Getting Old
The intensity of this scene is conveyed from the first sentence to the last. There is so much tension and build up, yet enough suspense, I wasn't quite certain if what I thought was going on was. Solid, thick with emotion and NO word waste--
[Report This]Date: July 09, 2011 5:19 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
How could it be? It was so much shorter than your other stories yet my heart wrenched all the same. There was so much emotion in each 310 words that it had me holding my breath 'til the end. Now I have to get the tissues, good job!
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:59 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
It's... over?! x'(... Oh man, drabbles sucks lol jk jk
I really enjoy this and i cracked a smile when Inu told his dad to leave him alone.
But aside from that, the simplicity of these drabbles still holds justice to it's impact. The only regret i have is it ending so quickly.
Miroku's voice of reason to the way Inu acted was sweet, and again - it's jus like reality. Men thinking bout themselves as if the women don't have probs too as if they're the ones who'd go around with a belly and endure the scrutiny
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:40 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Want To Live in a Fantasy?
that was unexpected! o.O
shot gun!! lol
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:35 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Maybe We're Sealed In Silence
This suddenly reminds me of a book baq in early HS when we were forced to read/study a book for the whole form yr
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:25 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Things We Lay Don't Amount To Much
ok i wasnt gonna review here, cuz i dont wanna feel like am spamming ur inbox DX ... but i love the line she threw at him ... "Yeah, but I guess the things you lay don't amount to much in the end."
And Inu's response/attitude reminds me of ma ex lol smh
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:22 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Panic Switch
ah~ the whole teenage pregnancy shit. The realistically concept of these drabble is what's makin me enjoy it more.
Inu is bein a dick, but i can't blame him - it's almost the "teen" thing to do wen it comes to some guys =/
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:18 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Growing Up Is Getting Old
Aint Inu a dick?
I forgot bout the summer contest Dx haha... I love the use of the prompt, and i think i read this bfore - but deffo didnt continued
Date: June 22, 2011 1:48 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
omg i had no clue that you re-opened this site! i was dying to know what happened to them! im glad everything worked out for everyone in the end. though i found it amazing how you mentioned in your little author's note at the bottom that even the hospital screwed up a PG test. p.s. i feel guilty about never leaving reviews for any of your stories. i think i thought you needed to be a member or something like that. sorry about that. also i had no idea that you had carpal tunnel syndrome. well looks like i'll have a lot of stories to catch up on. at least that'll keep me busy for a while. and ohh actually the story i was thinking of was 'the edge of seventeen' though i was also thinking about the 'pretty brown eyes' one haha
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the review. ^^ And it's true, a hospital actually screwed up the results and we were like O.O about it. But all's well that ends well. They weren't ready for such things anyway. xD
And yep, I reopened on my anniversary when I had 5 updates ready. It was nice coming back to my house with something to fill it. Carpal makes it harder, but I'm still chugging along, trying to get my stuff finished. I've been batting around the idea of finishing PBE because it's right at the end, and it sucks that leave it that way, so let me see what I can do. :)
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 11:10 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: We Can Laugh About It Now
So... since I was already in here, I started reading these drabbles. LOVE 'em! It always amazes me how much emotion you can convey in so few words - that's true talent, m'dear!
I totally believe how a hospital can screw up. My story is the opposite of that one, but it's one I'll share with ya in private. :D
Da Grrrl Says: MY LILY!!! *glomps*
I'm so happy that you liked them! I don't usually write drabbles (as you know), nor do I participate at my own comm, but I figured, why not? It was the preliminary to trying to do this chapter "blitz". I hadn't been writing "regularly" and finished all of these in 2 days. It felt GREAT, too, and reminded me that I used to do stuff like that all the time. I guess i miss penning chapters; I just wish the block would fade more often. >.<
Thanks for all the love! <3333333333333
Date: June 03, 2011 1:33 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: A Program To Derail Us All
well i hope you'll be productive this summer too! i know for some of your stories you left a couple of cliffhangers and if i can recall i believe some of them were almost finished! haha. but im glad to see that you havent lost your touch! anyways..clearly things with inuyashas family DID NOT goes well. but im glad that it seems as though kagomes mom is sticking by her. but poor kagome, i hope she's gonna be okay.
Da Grrrl Says: It's actually rare when I purposely leave a cliffie. I think they usually feel like one because they're incomplete. And if you mean Pretty Brown Eyes, yeah. That's almost finished and it was definitely a cliffie AND I really don't know if I'm going to complete it. It was never a favorite, and the more I chipped away at it, the more interest I lost. The end requires a battle, and TBH, I hate writing them. So, yeah, that's on the "we'll see" pile. lol.
As for this one, I just completed it, so you can see how Kags fared. ^^
Date: June 03, 2011 9:46 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Want To Live in a Fantasy?
So he came around? thats good to see but his parents still have to be told as well as Kagome's. I feel like a little more drams might happen.
Date: June 03, 2011 1:31 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: I Couldn't End It There
ive been reading your stories for a while now (about a year, maybe a little more than that) and i have to say you never cease to amaze me! your stories really push the limits and for that i commend you! you really take it to where no author has never gone before! haha. anyways, awww! i loved the ending of this little chapter! hopefully things will work out for them in the end. and i love how in the 'sit back and breathe' chapter you wrote/said/described miroku's eyes as dilating to anime proportions haha. anyways cant wait for the next one!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the review, Monica! ^^
I'm honored that you've been enjoying my work so long. I wish updating came as easy to me as it used to in the old days, but at least I can still piece a few words together. I actually started doing this challenge to get me into updating regularly again. I'd REALLY like to be productive this summer. >.<
But anyway! I didn't expect to nail down 7 of these in one day. I'm gonna try for the other 5 today. \o/ Hope you enjoy them! :D
Date: June 02, 2011 11:46 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Sit Back and Breathe
You're probably one of the only few that could actually interest me in a story told in small bits and pieces. Seriously. I'm looking forward to reading more from this drabble story. Anything you write is addictive, so I should have suspected I'd get pretty into this. (X
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Abby^^
I totally appreciate the review luv. I wasn't supposed to participate (I never do), but I was listening to SilverSun Pickups and got inspired. I'm not really a drabble author -I'm too "wordy". But this is nice discipline when you only ave a 310 word window. I've got 5 more drabs to go -hopefully I'll get them all done by tomorrow night!
Date: June 02, 2011 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Maybe We're Sealed In Silence
Funny thing is I had something similar like this happen to me only difference I was 21 at the time. Ih ope that there is more to come.
Da Grrrl Says: I can imagine how much it sucked, too. :( There will definitely be more, though. I plan to finish all 12 by tomorrow night (I hope).
Date: June 02, 2011 9:18 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Rusted Wheel
Even though this is a serious issue that happens everyday i still had to chuckle at that last line. Simple, blunt, and too the point ...so like inuyasha......
I love your drabbles Inugrrl....thanks for sharing ^.^
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Chickie!
InuYasha is terrible in this one, I admit. But that did sound like him, ne? lol. Thanks for taking a minute to review. Nearly 100 people read it and only 2 bothered. *eyeroll* Can you tell that there's a reason why I don't work too hard to update? *laugh*
Date: June 02, 2011 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Rusted Wheel
Great job! This is excellent. I didn't think you could make an Inuyasha I would wanna slap, but around chapter two, I wanted to drop kick him! Man, he was a jerk about this situation. It is difficult, and I do see where he's coming from somewhat. I'm even pro choice. But his reaction was callous to say the least. Even if you do choose to abort, don't pretend that's it's just a thing. I wonder how (or if) you're gonna redeem him because...UH! Good job, girl.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the review, girl! <3
InuYasha IS punch-worthy, huh? I'm painting him as those guys we always hear about -they wanna play, but never pay. There are 12 prompts in all and I just posted #5. I'm hoping to have them all done by tomorrow night, so stay tuned. ^^
And I'm not announcing the updates to the mailinglist, so pop in every once in a while to see the new ones. :D