Date: July 13, 2012 12:26 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Hey Inugurrl,
I did not know where to put this comment but I figured I will put it here. I just had to tell you I love your playlist omg it brought me back! I mean total trippin gurl that is my jam! I miss this type of music ugh it really needs to come back! On a side note great chapter!
Da Grrrl Says: I know what you mean! I really wanted to put some old joints on for a minute. Trippin' is one of my faves. I've since changed playlists again (I do that often), but I'm glad you liked it! :D
[Report This]Date: July 11, 2012 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I feel rather sorry for Hakudoushi, he seems like a genuinely sweet guy, who's very much in love with Kagome. I hope he finds happiness in the end with whomever.
Date: July 09, 2012 2:49 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
Omg! This story is sooooooooo good! I can't stop reading! I'm so excited to read the next chapter ... But hesitate cuz it's the last so far... Hope you'll be updating soon! - you're awesome!!!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! This story is (one of) the bane(s) of my existence, lol. JK. But it does give me headaches OFTEN, so hearing such enthusiasm for it really helps me feel better about writing the thing. <33
Date: July 07, 2012 2:29 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Points of Authority
Wow, I'm really glad I'm re-reading this because I find I'm getting even more from the story the second time around. I love how your writing is involved and in depth - like we are peeling through the layers to find out what happens next... And I for one can't wait!!! )^o^(
Date: July 06, 2012 8:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
Yay !!!! I'm so excited you updated this! I've decided to re- read the whole story from beginning to end to get the full effect! So far so good! Keep up the amazing work!!! (^k9;^)-a34;
Date: July 05, 2012 2:05 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
yay for updates! lol. sorry about the writer's block though. but even though you're unhappy with this post i liked it. always nice to see a little rin and sesshomaru. also i LOVE the new skin!! anyways can't wait for the next update and hope you had an awesome 4th of july!
Date: July 04, 2012 1:48 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
keep going! inuyasha needs his time to shine!!
Date: July 04, 2012 12:31 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Im so glad you updated!! Sorry about the writers block though, and even if you are unhappy about this post I thought it was really good.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much! I appreciate the nice comments. <3
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2012 2:04 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Oh my goodness! So thrilled to see an update. I quickly had to scroll down before reading so I could comment.
Thank you so much for updating. Sorry to hear that you've been having a hard time / writer's block. I'm sure you're bound to find an inspiration soon enough that'll set you ablaze with some new ideas.
>__>" I mean I sort of start fantasizing the future and what could happen once I finish reading one of your chapters.
I wish you could read your own stories as a reader. I'm not an author but I imagine that maybe when reading the stories that authors have written, they would tend to look at things like mistakes, and other things they could've done.
Anyways! Have you ever read your own stories? Like actually read them without editing them or reviewing them.
I think that if you take some time to enjoy reading your stories as someone who is just reading it you'll be blown away by how amazing they are.
:) Happy to see an update regardless! But seriously, just read your stories and forget that you're the author. Just forget the expectation on having to write a new chapter, or think of ideas on where to take the story.
Da Grrrl Says: This is one of the best reviews EVER. Thank you so much!
I only ever read my own works when I'm about to update. I review them so I can remember where I'm going. But I've never read anything of my own that I didn't mentally take apart as I went, lol. I just can't help myself! >.< I'm always looking for mistakes and noticing how much better I could have worded something argh. So frustrating! I wish I could see what you guys see when you read this stuff... maybe then I wouldn't rake myself over the coals so often and actually enjoy writing more. Sigh.
But a great (and funny) review like this is just what I need to feel a little better, so thanks again. <33
[Report This]Date: July 01, 2012 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Hey my Inugrrrl!!!
I'm so sorry to hear the you are ill but try to keep your spirits up and to remember to take your time when writing, block or not. These are YOUR babies and we are simply here to admire them. I L.O.V.E. Sesshomaru!!!! AHHHHHH (but of course you know this and with more *scenes* like that, i'll never complain!) Life is hectic but I am determine to get better checking here like I used to! Get well soon, Grrrly and I'll keep reading!
-Love ya,
Boop
[Report This]Date: July 01, 2012 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Wonderful chapter! I hope the block clears up and you can update again, soon. :)
[Report This]Date: June 30, 2012 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
SO excited you posted a chapter, even if it wasn't up to your standards! At least then you'll be able to move on from it.
The character development is taking quite interesting turns, but I'm glad to see Naraku obsessing over someone new!
Date: June 30, 2012 5:52 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
well even if you didn't feel satisfied with how this chapter came about it was still good! or at least i enjoyed it and it reminded me of how much i enjoy your darker fics! hope u feel better!
[Report This]Date: June 29, 2012 9:12 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Awe. Sorry you have a writer's block. It happens to me all the time.
Anywho. Good chapter, Hopefully InuYasha finds his Hikari soon. :)
Date: June 29, 2012 9:22 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I was so excited to see this update! Another great chapter, like always. I really wanted to know what happened to Inu, the anticipation is killing me :)
[Report This]Date: June 29, 2012 2:52 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Aww, SessRin time :3 It kind of baffled me that Rin didn't have any qualms about her "imagination" having a name, but it's still cute, nonetheless.
Better an update than none, eh? There's still much going on in this chapter to leave your readers guessing, so it's not all bad. ~Put a smile on your face~ :)
Much love,
MM
Date: June 27, 2012 10:40 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
You're doing great with this story, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: June 27, 2012 2:29 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Jeesssssss... I wrote a few word and this firefox ughhhhhh grrr.. I'm sorry about that. My friend finally I read it. Ahhhhhh marvelous! I bow to you friend! This was excellent! Just I almost get sik with the part of Bankotsu you know .... Don't get me wrong I have nothing against yaoi is just my mind is to graphic and I image the scene right away and as we say in spanish "guaaaaacala" hehehehe.
My friend again excellete chapter! I hope you soon find your way to your "Hikari" A huge hug to you!
Date: June 27, 2012 12:55 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I loved this chapter.It was so awesome.Please update soon again.
[Report This]Date: June 27, 2012 12:45 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
And the plot thickens, damn bank is one jealous guy and I swear he's gonna fall for it! LOL. I heart me some sess/rin, great scene all around with them! The story is awesome girl, keep up the great work! AND I LOVE THE ART!! Inuyasha all the way!!
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2012 3:57 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
This is one of my favorite stories by you. The writing style is wonderful and the angst, pain, and desperation for them to meet is really tangible (maybe it's just me but whatever, it's too good to stop reading!). I'm very proud of what you've done with this work and I look forward to your continuation of it. I want Kagome to see Inuyasha the way the rest of us see him in your writing. Thank you so much for continuing this fiction and I'm always on the watch for your new chapters :) I hope all is well with you, make sure to take some rest in between those intense writing periods!
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2012 11:43 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
The fruits of your efforts are much appreciated. You bunned up my stomach with Kagura and Bankotsu; literally urinated myself from excessive laughter.
Always rooting for your triumph against hard blocks, itachiiyoubastard.
P.S.
Naraku's unhealthy obsession, I am happily guilty of as well.
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2012 2:06 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
For something that gave you a hard time, you certainly created a wonderful chapter! I LOVE LOVE LOVED the Sess/Rin segment! Total hotness. I'm still wondering how they're going to end up together...heck or if they even will! I'll just ride out this roller coaster of a story to find the answers to my questions. Oh gosh and I can definitely see why Naraku has an obsession with you know who. He's the very definition of hot stuff lol. Thank you so much for the update. I know it's not easy to crank out something when you have writer's block and the fact that you did, it just makes me appreciate you all the more. Thanks again, Grrrl and I'll see ya on the next update!
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2012 12:30 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I saw this update on my email and got SUPER excited, I scared my teacher!
When I decided to read it, my phone was giving me trouble(my new phone). I was so mad, I started cursing at it. My poor teacher got startled. LOL!!! He must think I'm a loony! XD
Da Grrrl Says: Man-Man, you big ball of craaaaaazy! <333
Date: June 25, 2012 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
It might have been a difficult chapter to write but the storyline is still flowing and it was enjoyable to read. Thanks for the update.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, it means a lot. <33