Date: July 08, 2011 4:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
HEY, LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!! UPDATE ITS SOOOOOO GOOD! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES THEY KICK ASS! hope you can update this soon its, such a great story!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Damn horny dog why? Why could just wait a little longer. WHY ? You love Kagome remember. I hope they can work it out because it be really sad if they didn't.
Date: July 08, 2011 4:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Amon: Dammm it !!!!!!!!!! why!!! its already been to long I was sooooo close !!!!!I could feel the sweet freedom !!! now you can just pickle my dick I am not using it .......I understand Inu all to well but fuck I would have jammed cause I was every in the pose with anyboby but Robin Robin would burn our apartment down and make it soo i can't have kids anymore and then the most painful part ....she would completly leave me .....Poor inu ....that boy is screwed and not in the good way ......Sessy man made your move son !!!! well I must jam laters ,,,,,,UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMG look what inuyasah has gotten him self in to oh well its his own fault because he wasn't thinking with his head. cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: July 08, 2011 4:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I can't believe you just did that to me... to US! Do you have any idea how KILLER this is? It's so evil, I don't even know where to begin... HOW COULD YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT IN CHAPTER 15?!?!?! AH! That's so not cool; maybe I should stop reviewing *scowls*. LOL, no, don't worry, I'll always review; I just might not like you for a while. *Begins to laugh* that's a lie, too; I'll always love your stories. Hm... what did I really like about this chapter... I liked that you made Sesshoumaru and Rin get a little closer, and have him wait for whenever Rin is ready; I thought that was a very wise decision. However, Inuyasha and Kanna was something I'd predicted before the chapter even came out; but it's still shocking, after reading it and all... Damn Kanna, damn Kagura, and damn any other people that plan on ruining things between the sexy couples. Bah; everything will turn out sooner or later... I really love the drama in the mean time, though ^_^ Oh, and I forgot to mention the Miroku and Sango part; that was well written, too. I'm so happy that he ALSO realizes that Sango isn't ready for sex yet... which is respectable, and quite honourable, too. It's funny that the pervert is the one that is the most accepting of waiting for sex; how ironic! Anwyay, I've rambled on for FAR too long, and according to the counter, I only have 130 characters left, so I'd better wrap up. Wonderful chapter, although it was a cliffhanger; please update when convenient! Sincerely, ~DC ^_^;;
Date: July 08, 2011 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Oh jesus. STUPID STUPID STUPID Inuyasha! COUYON! BAKA! ESTUPIDO! ARGH! God, it just hurts to think about it. I've been there before. The first time I cheated on baby. She walked in and... her eyes. I felt like I died. I felt like someone stabbed me through the heart. Poor Kagome. She doesn't deserve that. But I think you should make Kagome beat the living shit out of Kanna instead of run away and cry. THAT would be funnny!!!! :D Sango and Miro... rawr... I like "tasting" too. :D No RIN! Sesshiles doesn't feel the same! Beware! They never listen to me. lol.
Date: July 08, 2011 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
i like your story continue maybe a little more rin/sesshoumaru interaction? WELL, have a good sunday and see you soon i hope! very great story! bye!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
i like your story continue maybe a little more rin/sesshoumaru interaction? WELL, have a good sunday and see you soon i hope! very great story! bye!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Cannot believe it took me this long to read this. And now, when I finally get around to it, I'm trying to sew a gigantic rip in my skirt. -stabs self with needle- Ouch...Why do you have to be such a good writer??? Now I'm bleeding all over the only skirt I actually wear!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
GOODNESS!!!!!! UPDATE NOW OR YOU WILL SUFFER!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO KAGOME AND INUYASHA!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Inuyasha is such a ASS!!!!!!! plz update soon and PLZ let things get better b/t inuyasha and kagome....like in the next chappy: ) hey everybody else is happy they should be to : ) love the story and update soon!!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Now THAT was the perfect cliffhanger. I can totally see an author stopping a chapter there or an episode of a good show ending there. So good job, I'm really pissed off at you for it, but you're the one writing so there's nothing I can do about it. What fun...I hope you update REALLY SOON. Right now would be a good time, but whenever you feel ready(now!).
Date: July 08, 2011 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Why are you so cruel to your faithful readers?? All we want is a story with some Inu and Kagome action in it!! And you always add the dreadful"ANGST"!! Just kidding, Great chapter and since I know that your stories ALWAYS have the BEST,MOST, GREATEST,HAPPY Endings, I will continue to read and review!!Until Next time!!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
wow, ok just to say, I am in love with this fiction. A lot of the other guilty pleasure fics are either too much sex and not enough story or too much story and well...ookay so the sex doesnt always have to be present. But ur story has a beautiful balance of both. Now, dont't go by my ratings here. I really do think in my mind that this is 10, its just I'm trying to be a really hard grader here (sooo sry dont be offended at all). I can't stop reading this thing I swear! In anycase, I hate Kanna like a mother, which probably everyone does too, but I hope Inuyasha really has some self control, cause I mean If he loves Kag that much, he really should be able to control his horney self lol :) So other than imagining myself stabbing Kanna, its an absolutely brilliant story, and its great when eye catching. I'm a total inu/kag fan so sue me. Other than that I absolutely think that this fic has been the best I've read so far. And Like many others i'm telling you now... UPDATE RIGHT NOW OR I WILL FREAKING STALK U!!!!!!!!! lol, but u noe, no need to be afraid or anything, righhhhttttt? kukukukukukkuu 'watch yourself when u sleep at night' lol jkjk
Date: July 08, 2011 4:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
YAY rin and sesshomaru are finally getting along im so happy I like the new chapter but I wouldn't of thought of making sesshomaru fav. color peach but I think that's cool I cant wait for the next chapter. how many do you think this story will be???
Date: July 08, 2011 4:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
very very great! continue! i can't wait! and the fact you explore each character's feelings and situation is vry good! i love stories which don't focus only on two characters. i CAN4T WAIT TO SEE WHEN RIN IS GOING TO DISCOVER ABOUT THEBET! well have fun and have a good day! see you soon i hope!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
No he did not just say that. When he was the one who almost fucked Kanna. Ok that was mean very mean I love Inuyasha I really do him and Kagome are my favorite couple. I love how they argue it reminds me of my relationships. But sometimes they can be so hard headed it impossible to reason with them. And who doesn't know Naraku it seems he after a lot when he comes to Tokyo. I kinda feel bad for Kanna and Kagaru they not that bad they just trying to find a way out. I don't know why nobody doesn't ask anymore.
Date: July 08, 2011 4:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Inu is such a butt hole....first of all there is a difference between seeing your ex with a male friend at a diner and seeing your bf with a nearly naked girl about to do it in his room. So there is nooooooooo reason for him to be upset with her. You know I'm a big fan of Sess/rin, but I honestly love they way you write Kag/inu you are the only person who does it for me...oops and Lucient of course. Without you two I would never read any inu/kag stuff :).
Date: July 08, 2011 4:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Heya there: I love reading about the spark of romance between Rin and Sess, and the pace of their storyline feels right. I can also feel the heartache and pain between Kagome and Inuyasha when I read your words. The characters used in the story are very descriptive and well-rounded. Another wonderful update as always and thank you. Your fan, Christal
Date: July 08, 2011 4:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
that chapter had lots of developments and damn were they good! Inu is acting like an ass and I hope Kagome decides to "bitch-slap" him to knock some sense into him! the story is fantastic and I can't wait for the next chapter(but I will!!)!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I love that last line. Harsh, but I never would have thought of such an awesome line/comeback. I kind of like the drama between Inu/Kag and I kind of don't, but it looks like the Sess/Rin romance is coming along nicely, at least! Good job and I hope you update soon!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMFG!!! Latest chapter twas so goood!!! (yes i am trying to use twas) lol in anycase it was beautiful and written so well, I felt so bad for Inuyasha, but a part of me is like 'it's ur own goddamn fault u horney son of a-" SOOO Therefore I thought it was very well played out, once again portrayed the characters well and is still my favorite story of all time, but things are just looking so terrible for Inu and Kag ne? In anycase really hope that they get together cause I'm dying over here, but I do like the Rin and Sess relationship, it's coming along very nicely. But what about Kagura, I havent seen her making any moves to win Sess HMMMMM lol but it is looking absolutely fantastic, I'm really impressed, each chapter is just getting more and more suspense. Please I am begging u to update, you are like one of the few who update on time and not like 50 years later and I really am excited about this. I must thank u for all the times that u did update recent because god knows we need at least one author who will. Thank u again Sincerely, stolenvoice
Date: July 08, 2011 4:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
What a great story! I love the interaction between all the characters. Inuyasha is being a complete dick (which is par for the course)about Kagome. The budding romance between Sessh and Rin is very sweet but I predict a rocky road ahead. I can't wait for the update (I'll be anxiously waiting for this one as well as Lucient's story).
Date: July 08, 2011 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
all of these problematic "romances" are so great to watch, er, read. such wonderful entertainment. inu and kag are in for it. so are sessh and rin. tho, i'm not quite sure what "it" is. wondering what will happen next is half the fun! lovely chap!
Date: July 08, 2011 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMG THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT CHAPTER!! YOUR STORY ROCKS! heres a question how the heck do you find time to update your stories, you have soo many, i check a good amount cause you usually do it quickly but i'm a fan fic writer too and it takes me like a month to actually write and edit my chapters. GEEz lol anyway though great story continue writing its AWSOME! oh and if you like reading miroku sango fic, mines the one to check out, its under the name i have listed but yea anyway YOUR A REALLY GREAT WRITER HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY!