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Reviewer: icygirl (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

thanks so much i can't wait for the next chapter! it will be very dramatic! i love it and i know i am a little impatient but please update soon! have a good day and have fun! bye! 



Reviewer: leila-chan * (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

talk about a plot twist. didn't see that one coming at all. i love it! i wonder if sesshy can really let her go. even for the greater good. complete hotness in regards to inu and kagome. sexxy. 



Reviewer: James Lucient (mm.org)     Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Fucking ruthless cut-throat shit. ::sigh:: And I never even saw it coming. How you gonna jack a brother? ROFL. Ok, so I'm not a "brother". I'm a tall pale white guy. This chapter is awesome, honeybee. Baby isn't going to like it, lol... I mean she will, but you're not supposed to enjoy misfortunes. When's the restaurant scene in the other fic? Lemme read it before you post it, so I can make sure it's just so. I know you love perfection as much as you love those pistacio cupcakes. blech. ;) Kisses... Luc... oh, and btw, that chick has YET to respond to me. Like she said, "How's that for being accountable?" I don't think that's very good. And to let you know, your filter is off. What's up with that? 



Reviewer: bridezilla1015 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Dammit! I knew it was all going too well. Should have seen that little plot twist. Damn. Great chapter (as always). Your loyal fans love it when you update. Keep 'em coming! 



Reviewer: Kajunmom76 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

What a HOT chapter!! I loved it!! Great story!! 



Reviewer: SweetyPieRin (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Damn...Just when Sesshomaru and Rin were getting along OH SO WELL, that bitch Kagura gets Sesshy again! Grrr! *growls menacingly at Kagura, ready to attack* ^-^ Anyway! ^-^ I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! AWESOME CHAPPIES! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! ^ _ ^ PLEZ UPDATE SOON! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~ 



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Awwww! Just when Sess and Rin fall in love, but I guess the job has to be done and who better than Sesshy. P.S. Hot ass lime scene with InuYasha and Kagome. Anyways, great chap and good luck. ^_^! 



Reviewer: coldtenshieyes (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

OMG! Your gonna break it off?!!?!? ... that's just cold... evil... I LOVE THIS FANFICTION!!! You have toooooooooooo finish it!! I love it and By the looks of it, others love it toooooo!!! I love it! You hhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaavvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeee! to keep writing!! or... I shall come over there (were ever you may be) and force you too!! Muhahahahahaha! lol. So yea you get it! I'm a crazed fan of yours!! L8ers! (^ o ^)/~ P.S. What happened to your One-shot 'He saw red'? I personally liked it!!



Reviewer: BloodyTears (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 3:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Nooo!! O___O What happens next?! Ahh!!! [goes into her corner and rocks back and forth] Haha anyway! ^^ Take as much time as you want [just not too long haha] for the next chappie. I'll just sit here on the computer until u update. haha. i honestly have never read a better sesshomaruxrin before. about time too! yes! you are da shit!! haha!! gah and honestly [gets close enough so that you could only hear] your stories are the only ones i read on medmiaminer... ^_~ 



Reviewer: QuestionableIntentions (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

*gasps* I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet!! damn me and my lazy ass...>.< aaaanyway...LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the lime!! eeep! hawtness luv! xD you're getting so much better! but i'm so pissed at sess!! grrrrrr!! YOU STUPID BAKA DON'T YOU DARE LET RIN GO!!!!! *growls threateningly* ^_^ Update soon! Luv, michi 



Reviewer: dangerously n luv wit inu (mm.org)     Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

i luv ur fanfic can't wait to the next chap.PLZ UPDATE SOON i've been waiting by the computer day and night just even for a sentence!!!!!!! i'm begging to write soon love your story always inu luver:) p.s luv the part with inu and kags THAT WAS SO KINKY AND HOT and i was also wondering did sesshy and rin do it or just rub each other? :? 



Reviewer: chibirin8 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

poor rin but it was for her own good, but I also feel bad for sesshy he had to give up the one person he loves and to top it off he cried and sesshomau doesn't cry, I just feel so bad anyway keep up the good work 



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Damn!!!!! That is so freaking sad. Just after her granfather died. Rin should've went first. This story is an emotional rollercoaster. First your starting off easy then you go up a high steep hill of then WAM you're falling into a heaping pile of drama. I love Sess and Rin as a couple and to see this is heart breaking to me. I wonder how Kagome and Sango are you going to react to Sesshy now. Anyways, great chap and keep up the work. ^_^! 



Reviewer: ladyrinremix(mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Someone is going to feel ten times worse when he finds out that Rin's gramps died and that she was planning on going to work at the company....which I doubt she will do now. Or maybe she dould should just to mess with him... the ending of this chap almost had me in tears...almost. 



Reviewer: James Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Ouch. Poor Sessh. This story, wow... made me so sad. IT's so angsty. But you said you had wb... looks like I am the only one who does have it. I'm at this part in my fic, the part where Sessh is like "let's train". And I couldn't be more lost. Maybe all this will clear up after the new year? I feel like i'm letting everyone down



Reviewer: Inusbabe just stopped by  (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I have the rest of Sess's tears.... seems like everyone is getting wrapped up in the holidays. Not much updating of new chapters right now. Loving them when I am getting them. 



Reviewer: frostyshake(mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Damn you had me scared for a while. I thought you were going to break up Kagome and Inuyasha. What a relief they're still together. Though I do fell sorry for Rin. 



Reviewer: oopy922 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

oh god sess is such an asshole! but our inu wont give up kagome ! that was an awesome update i love it!!!!!! give us more more more! 



Reviewer: AmonLover (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Amon: Oh why did you go there ??? Oh That just suxs Poor Sess I would never give up my girl not even for the greater good never unless she would ask me to never never my poor Robin . Right now shes crying her lil eyes out sheer sadnesss Ne way I hope everything clears up soon with those two and it great you keep inu&kags together I was even worried for a moment there UpDate soon neway!!!!! I love the sad story!@ 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

oh, how heartbreaking. i was getting a lump in my throat when rin found out her jiji had passed on. that coupled with sesshy breaking it off with her would make anyone an emotional trainwreck. make it better, kiki. i won't be o.k 'till you do. : ( p.s. lucient, you're not letting us down. take your time. we'll wait. w.b is a b*tch!! cheer up. : ) 



Reviewer: Princess-in-Training (mm.org)      Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Duty my ass that was harsh. He loves her, their met to be. Sesshy not going to get a way with that the girls are going to find out. One way or another. But they are not going to let Sesshy break Rin's heart. On another note Inuyasha, Bank and Miroku are so silly. They can't be serious for more than five minutes. They are hilarious. 



Reviewer: bridezilla1015 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Poor Rin! Poor Sesshomaru! He's going to have to work so very hard to get her back when all of this is over. There are going to be some hurtin' guys when Sango and Kagome find out about this (Miroku and Inuyasha aren't getting any after that!) Let's hope Ayame finds out what her uncle is doing and can help her friends. So much drama! Great update. Keep them coming! 



Reviewer: icygirl (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

it's very intense ! i can't find the words to describe it! i love this chapter! plase continue i can't wait for the next! have a good day! and a good time during christmas break! see you soon i hope! 



Reviewer: Whiteraven08 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

*Preps herself up and clears throat* Ehmm..AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH/ *stops and semicomposes self* Inu..why hunh why couldn't you just be like Rin there's a problem , i need u to hide ,i'll come for u presonally whne its over hunh? Why? ANd i was just beginnningto like Sess/Rin pairings too.. great chapter but i am thoroughly but not really pissed. Keep writing i demand compensation lol 



Reviewer: Boop (mm.org)     Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

That was soooo cruel. I know sesshy had to do that, but damn that was cold. I hope later on rin wil understand and not hate him to much. -love ya, Boop 



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