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Reviewer: aleta_ruff5   Anonymous  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2012 1:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen

This is a really good story. I really like all of the character's relationships. It is a really good story. I can't wait for the final chapter.



Reviewer: Kathy02   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2012 10:02 AM
Chapter number: 52
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 2

WOW! this story is freaking awesome! but is it over?? will there be a wedding scene!? I'am usually not comfortable with age gaps even in real life but this fic really did change my point of view.. it wonderfully written as always!

Da Grrrl Says: Yeah, there's one more chapter to go. I should be shot for taking so long to complete it... >.<



Reviewer: Inova   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2012 1:21 AM
Chapter number: 48
Title: The Price to Play

I don't know how you come up with all your stories and somehow they seem so... real to me, like that's what happens in the real world. I like how this story grabs a hold of my heart an just wrings the life out of it just to fill it with the kind of love I've dreamed about. Thank you...

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, thank you. I'm really happy that you like my work; it means a lot. <3



Reviewer: Swolf   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2012 12:32 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Raise Da Roof pt II

Thats what you say Kagome....



Reviewer: Swolf   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2012 2:43 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Everybody Wants Somebody

Darn it!!
They were sooo close!



Reviewer: Swolf   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2012 9:43 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Funny Meeting You Here

Aww,poor Miroku!



Reviewer: Swolf   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2012 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen

woo go Sango!!



Reviewer: Alice54   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2012 9:08 PM
Chapter number: 52
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 2

Ahhh, I was getting so mad when Sango and Miroku were talking about how they blamed Kagome. What about Kagome's suffering! She left her home and family with a baby on the way! And then raised Irini without even telling Inuyasha! If she was a bitch, she would've demanded child support! hmph! But whatevs! This was great! I wish we got to see the wedding, thought haha



Reviewer: Alice54   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2012 2:52 PM
Chapter number: 51
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 1

Ahhh! I know it's been a while since I became a member, and I'm sorry for the delay, but this was amazing! Though I don't like it when my fiancee tries to get me to dirty talk, I love it with these two! So amazing!

Da Grrrl Says: Aww, thanks so much! EoS is my all time favorite "classic", so I'm definitely going to make sure I get the last chapter done soon. It deserves a proper ending for all the craziness I put you all through. :D



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 12:22 PM
Chapter number: 52
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 2

Awww...
I'm done...
But I look forward to the ending and if I gotta wait long I know it'll be well worth it!

Lets see whats next!



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 11:52 AM
Chapter number: 51
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 1

LOL!
He just couldn't keep the animal inside.
Horny kid.
Adult...



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 2:16 AM
Chapter number: 50
Title: Epilogue: ...And Nothing Else Mattered

Awww!!!
Irini sounds so cute!
This is so wonderful that it makes me sad that I'm near the end, think I'm going to finish it tomorrow!



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 1:44 AM
Chapter number: 49
Title: Requiem for a Dream

NOOOOO!!!!!!!
WHY!?



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 1:33 AM
Chapter number: 48
Title: The Price to Play

Whoa...
Rin blew me away!

And the last part had me crying because I had a feeling, so sad.



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 1:18 AM
Chapter number: 47
Title: Seventeen Pt.3

Geez, the tension in this chapter is CRAZY!!!
Amazing...
Never saw everything tragic wrapped up in a single chapter with a pretty bloody bow on top! XD

So sad for Yasha!!! Worst Birthday ever! :C

Da Grrrl Says: Man-Man!! *glomps*

Indeed, it was a pretty crappy birthday, huh? I actually miss this story. Even thought it was during this fic that fandom hell broke loose for me, it's still one of my all-time favorites in terms of writing. It was a time when creating chaos in fanfic was still fun. That's why this will always be my longest-ever, labor of love. <3

Now, if I can just finish the final chapter and say a proper goodbye...



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2012 12:47 AM
Chapter number: 46
Title: Seventeen Pt.2

My Beloved InuGrrrl!!!!!



Reviewer: Rickosokay   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2012 12:27 AM
Chapter number: 52
Title: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 2

My, My, That....... really was an interesting fanfic I've read in a long, long time. I have to say that it was probably the most heartbreaking true love story I've ever read in all my days in reading happy ending heartbreaking fanfics.......... ever.
But you know what?, even though stories like this ( with so much pain, anger and sadness) are not my favorite stories to read I really did enjoy this fanfic a whole lot, and I can't wait for the last chapter .

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you. :) EoS is my labor of love, and yes, it's filled with angst, sadness, anger, misunderstandings, and fights. But there's also a lot of love, and it was written with love. I have never, nor will I ever, write a story this long again. Of my "esteemed" (haha) fanfic career, I will always call this one my "jewel" because I put so much into completing it. There never should have been a second epilogue because I ended it the way I wanted to, but... here we are. lol. The final chapter is not complete yet, but I have been working on it when inspiration strikes, and there's some gorgeous fanart to go with it that I had created ages ago. So, The Edge of Seventeen will get its proper send off. ^^



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 10:34 AM
Chapter number: 45
Title: Seventeen Pt.1

Can't help but smile at this reunion!!!!
XD



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 10:15 AM
Chapter number: 44
Title: The Careless Days of My Youth

Kikyou is BUSTED!!!!



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 10:06 AM
Chapter number: 43
Title: Pacified

Oh InuYasha, you'll be getting one hell of a surprise!

BTW, Florence And The Machine has a new song called 'Breath Of Life' form the Snow White and the Huntsman soundtrack! I think you would like it.



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 9:44 AM
Chapter number: 42
Title: Walk the Line

I hope those people that made you upset get the memo! :(



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2012 1:24 AM
Chapter number: 41
Title: The Noose Gets Tighter

Geez...
Sess is so creepy at the end.
LOLZ!!!



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2012 12:54 AM
Chapter number: 40
Title: Now, Release

I feel weird reading erotic love scenes when my cat just stares at the screen along with me! XD



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2012 12:18 AM
Chapter number: 39
Title: Inhale

YESS!!!!
EXTRA TIME OFF SCHOOL AND WORK!!!!
Totally missed you, InuGrrrl! :D

You know, I was thinking that you could EASILY be the next E. L. James. She wrote the famous "Fifty Shades of Grey" Trilogy.
It was actually a Twilight fanfiction but then she took it off the net and slapped on original characters and now is New York Times #1 bestselling erotic fiction!

I Love this website and your awesome ability to demand your readers attention.

It's sad that you've fallen out of love from the InuYasha Fandom World but I would love to see you succeed as an author and at least make some money off of it!


I really like your oc Dominic!
He's kinda like a friend of mine!

Da Grrrl Says: Man-Man! <333

You know, you're the 3rd person to tell me about that Twilight author, lol. (With the same, 'give it a try' message)! Who knows what the future will bring. I've always planned to do a full original, and probably still will (Have several plots in my stable), but there's a lot to being a professional writer -like deadlines- and we know I don't do well with those... XD

But thanks for the vote of confidence. I just make give it a shot one day soon. :D



Reviewer: Mandy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2012 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 38
Title: Enjoy the Silence

LOL!!!
InuYasha and Kagome just can't get off eachother! XD

Da Grrrl Says: Man-Man! XD There's a LOT of that going on, huh? Those skanks! LOL.



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