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Reviewer: Keiz   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2012 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath

...I cried. Again. Goddamn, you, Goober! >.< *shake fist*

P.s. LOVE! e_e



Reviewer: KeiChanz   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2012 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

Oh God. I cried. I CRIED. And I think I cried the first time I read this, too. Damn, Grrrl, but you are talented! Thank you for writing such a moving and emotional piece of literature. ^_^ Now, off to read the rest! *zoom*

Loverz,
Nutella!



Reviewer: DGIRL17   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2011 4:34 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

NOOOO!!! HOW COULD YOU!? BUT GREAT CHAPTER. I STOPPED READING YOUR STORIES AND FORGOT WHAT AN AWESOME WRITER YOU ARE.



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2011 12:46 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

Woohoo.. Just sat an re-read all, yea I did! / So love it when can read what you write and see it. The visualizations are like crystal... so clear... yeaaa.. ;) Dunno why but as soon a net came back up this am where I came...you never disappoint.
Hugzz



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2011 6:48 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

Holy hell! I love that you've got both Miroku and Inuyasha snapping at each other and in the same day they are both facing women that are changing their lives, whether they want them to or not. Then you've got Sesshomaru who, in all his bad assery, is going to drug Kagura! Classic awesome. I never saw Tsubaki coming into play either, but that so makes sense.

I'm sorry to say this...sorta. But LOL@Rin. She kinda deserved to be taken down a peg or thirty. I was kind of thinking the same thing about how she treats him like dirt and apparently thinks she's better than him. I cannot believe he stooped to paying her for services and cannot believe she stooped at all! But, the addiction becomes the person I guess, and you've really nailed that here.

I've read this all fairly recently, and it is so freaking seamless! I couldn't tell that there was a big break in between chapters at all. That rocks. Good work and I hope you're doing well!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2011 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback

Okay okay, so I've been harsh on Rin and this chapter made me feel totally guilty! That girl was actually trying...really honestly trying to get clean and Kohaku is so afraid of losing her, he's playing with her life?! Wow. I don't know who to be mad at here. She's been a royal bitch to him... but he's been supplying her with poison so idk who wins here.

Love love love how Kagome is forcing Inuyasha to realize that there is still life after the loss he suffered. It's a testament to how much he loved Tanisha that he gets so pissed off with himself for wanting Kagome. Of course, we didn't get to see too much of them together, but from his reaction to how Kagome stood up to him I don't think he got that from Tanisha. I could be totally off base here though. Poor Kagome, she doesn't stand a chance against some serious pda!

The imagery of Miroku balancing thirty happy meals, shakes included, is hilarious! Also, I can't believe Sango didn't see him checking her out! I was literally holding my breath waiting for her *slap* or at least a verbal beat down haha! The line where "Sango stuck around awhile" also got me pretty good.



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2011 7:31 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Transparent Bonds

Am I evil for kinda thinking Kikyou deserved to be humiliated? I have the hatred for her. I'm glad she sees that she's nothing now, all thanks to scary crazy Renkotsu.

Lol at Inuyasha and Kagome. They make me smile. I can totally picture him slinging her over his shoulder and her pounding away on his back! I'm so glad he apologized and pulled his head out of his ass. Sweet pea is my nickname for my little girl. LOL



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2011 1:04 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters

I'm really kind of hating Rin right now, and normally I love her. I know she got screwed times twenty here, but still, she didn't need to be that heartless.

I know for Inuyasha this is horrible, like he's cheating on all he has left of his mate. I think he's going to find a way to live again though, and it's going to be an exercise in anger management lol!

Poor Kagome...going 0-2 on her performances. I hope she starts doing better soon...otherwise her career may be over before it starts! Also, she has my respect for trying to stay away from Inuyasha!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys

Dun dun dun!!!! And the plot thickens!

We've got a lot of manipulation and lying going on! It's going to be great when Inuyasha and Kagome come face to face again. Will they lose control again? This is great!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One

Awww Miroku and Sango are hitting it off so well...sorta? Even though he's supposed to be lying right now...I think his concern for her is real at least on some level.

I freaking love that Sesh just gave Kagome Inuyasha's number! That's hilarious and such a brotherly thing to do. Also the comment about the 'children' was priceless lol!

I'm glad she called him, and that he berated her. She needed to hear what that kiss made her look like, no matter how untrue it is. Of course, she wouldn't be Kagome without blowing up at him in return! Gotta love how she pulled him right out of his depression again!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 7:07 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Poor Inuyasha...losing his mate and child meant his whole life. I guess that's the problem he has, he's still alive but doesn't really want to live his life anymore. I have a feeling Miroku is going to get in over his head, and that will be wonderful! I feel so bad for Kagome. I like how you explained that her attraction to him was supernatural though; that's the sense I got of it too. Neither one of them could help it, once it was in motion. Now she's gonna try and apologize! Oh dear lord...that's not gonna go over well >



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 6:52 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Instantaneous insatiable attraction at it's best! That scene was great! It fit so well that Kagome would be able to play up an alter ego like Suga perfectly. I bet Inuyasha will be pretty shocked to find out that was her first kiss lol! OMG This is great! I'm also loving that you have some realistic characters that have real flaws, like Rin. So we have good old gal on gal competition; even better it's a boss and employee! I really appreciate how you've shown that Inuyasha can't really help himself when it comes to Kagome, even though he wants to be true to Tanisha. At least so far, he may have his guard up now huh?



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 3:00 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...

Oh damn...sucked the words right out of his mouth huh? Well that's promising!

Now I'm totally confused too! I thought for sure Sesh was going to go for Kagura not Rin. I really want to know what Kagome is going to sing too!

Freaking Miroku...he deserves to be slapped and possibly castrated....



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 2:05 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine

Wow this is turning into one giant clusterdoodle. Sango is on a war against drugs and Miroku is heavy into dealing. Seshomaru and Kagura are going to have their differences; Kohaku works for them along with little shippo! Kagome wants to dance? My my my. Inuyasha is so lost in his own grief, I'm not sure if he'll even be able to see Kagome as anything but a threat to Tanisha's memory.

Bankotsu, Suikotsu and Renkotsu all together...oh my god. The Taisho's are in for some trouble! And damn! I actually did think for a second that maybe Kikyou wasn't going to be in this! I'm laughing at myself now though. At least she and Inuyasha don't have a past...that I know of anyway!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 1:05 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It

Poor Kagome! At least her Mother did her one last favor and told her to run. It's so sad though! So she's been with Kagura for...13 years now? I'm glad she found her. I've got a guess as to who was in the picture, but I'll wait and see. Plus, there is a mysterious new guy intruding on the Taisho turf and a big bad that has Kagura right where he wants her. How juicy!

Inuyasha has definitely become a hard and ruthless man. Love that everyone calls Yura for what she is and that she gets pissy about it. Can't wait for a confrontation with Kagura though; that ought to be loads of fun!

Kagome is going to sing? I'm excited for that~!



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 1:44 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath

Omg this would be one scaaary group of dealers man.

I kind of like the downward spiral he's taken, and that Miroku and Seshomaru went with him. I like seeing him from their respective perspectives (lol). You can see just how bad he got and the reformation he's gone through. The fact that he'll never be the same is so sad, but very true to form.

It's amazing that their business has come this far in a year! Not that I admire drug empires...just their business sense.



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 7:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

I thought I'd read MPR as I was hearing things about it's awesomeness and I caught up on Treasure. So. Holy Shit.

Okay, so I'm die hard for Kagome and Inuyasha but this first chapter was like...wow. I feel a little like I cheated on them as a couple. And I liked it. It was just a one time thing, I swear! LOL!

I thought something would happen...I didn't see THAT coming though. Poor Inuyasha...poor Tanisha! Where in the seven hells did they come from? Man is he gonna feel terrible and worthless for the rest of his life. This was a really powerful chapter.



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 12:52 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

I don't know if you plan to finish this story--but it's awesome and it was worth reading.  I really enjoyed these 15 chapters. Thanks!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath

I used to read and review ur stories on MM!  I JUST found this site. 

Anyway, this story is grabbing me and I'm holding on.



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2011 7:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

NICE!!!



Reviewer: Marisa   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

 I"m so happy you updated the story! I've been follwing it for a while and I absolutly love it!! your such an amazing qriter can't wait to see what happens next!



Reviewer: Abigail Leigh   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2011 4:57 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

I love this story so much! Can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: demonchild0228   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2011 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

I absolutely adore this story. The plot is so interesting and different than anything I've read in a while. Please please update this story whenever you can, it would be much appreciated

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! I actually do have plans to update this soon (I'm picking up all my old works and trying to complete them) and it will be accompanied with new kick-ass art that I'm sure you'll enjoy. The "three kings", as I call them, are an exact reflection of how they are in the story and I can't wait to show them off! Thanks for the nice review. I appreciate it!



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 9:38 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

YES!!! Wonderful update on one f my favorite fics!



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 8:56 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

a very well -written chapter. I love how you describe Inu's state of despair..



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