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Reviewer: 123Meme Go   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2012 2:42 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Transparent Bonds

So good, I'm super interested in the direction this story is going.



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2012 7:57 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

I love Kagura's character in this stories. She is classy, stylish and very confident. Not to mention the mother-like traits she shows when dealing with Kagome.

And poor,poor Miroku, how naive of him to believe that his logic has anything to do with love.



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2012 3:12 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Enter The Dragon

Kohaku's going about everything wrong. He's only aiding in breaking the woman he claims to love, by being forceful for her and giving her the drugs. If he wanna help her, and be a hardass to her, then stop giving the bitch the goods!! Learn some motherfuckin sense KID!!!! ARGH!!!

I love the banter between him and Shippou - damn Ship - what the fuck are you into!!

Inuyasha now... sigh That poor broken hearted sex-beast. I'm glad Kagome is his beacon of hope. And he's sinking deeper, and unravelling the demons he try locked away. He's in for a rude awakening, finding out that this isnt jus about his pride or job he'll be looking at. He got shit to take from under the rug and its not gonna be a good sight.

The car scene was awesome. By know you know I'm a whore for domination LOL *nods head* Now that that's out there - anything where a man is in control and is FUCKING SEXY with it, turns my legs to mush n gets me excited x3 haha

Oooo then we have the dragon theory now. Omg with everything LINKING together the flow is so good - the turbulance is fucking exhilirating and the ride is AMAZING!!

You mind fuck me so good LOL

SIIIIIGH

I'm glad things are sort of cleared up with Sesshy and Kagura. That hot sexy player know how to put it down!!! Every time i think of Sesshy seductiveness am reminded of 'Nobody' by Keith Sweat *drools My jam right there haha... Feels like the death of the Inu brothers has some relation with the dragon.... Ah~

Patiently waitin on updates!! *___*



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2012 8:45 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Le wild kiss appears ! And everything goes out of control in less than one minute.

PS: You got me addicted to U-KISS. 



Da Grrrl Says: Doesn't it always happen that way? :P And squeeee! I've converted another person into a U-KISS fan. I adore them, so I'm grinning right now! :D



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2012 7:59 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...

This chapter was hillarious. I could simply imagine Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and Miroku bickering like three idiots. The real Sesshomaru, though, would have killed Inuyasha and Miroku on the spot.

Da Grrrl Says: I get that a lot -lucky thing my Sesshomarus aren't total pricks, huh? :D Glad you liked the comedy!



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2012 4:35 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine

NOOOO ! Inuyasha, please don't cry, you are making me cry too !



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2012 8:01 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It

Fluffenstein !!! OMG, you killed me, that was fuckin hillarious ! And poor Kagome, her story made me cry. It's more scary that things like that happen in real life quite often. I also felt sorry for Kagome's mother, deep down she still cared for her daughter.

 



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2012 8:49 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath

And this is how Darth InuYasha was born ! Great danger I sense in training this one ! ( sorry, I'm a Star Wars freak).

BTW, is the "moonlight desire" layout inspired by the Money.Power.Respect story ? That girl looks like Tanisha.

Da Grrrl Says: lol. I like Star Wars, too. :P

Moonlight Desire is actually for a short canon story I wrote called "All The Things You Never Say". I don't write canon often, but that one just bugged me until I did. :P I've never actually commissioned art of InuYasha and Tanisha, but a friend of mine commissioned some for me of their bedroom scene. You can see it HERE.



Reviewer: ZOZO   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2012 6:08 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

I just started reading this story. While it's not the first time I read about an Inuyasha x OC pairing, this is the first time I actually see an author that manages to portray the OC so good. Usually, authors tend to forget about the OC quickly. especially if it's not a main charachter and they don't bother to do more than describe their phisichal features.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I appreciate that. I don't do OC often. I'm into the canon pairings (InuKag/ Mir/San), but when I dabble, I do try to give a little background and avoid making a "Sue" of them by claiming them to be the prettiest, best, smartest everything in the world. >.< As you read, Tanisha doesn't survive beyond the first chapter, but her impact does carry through the rest of the story.



Reviewer: Raven   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 5:44 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Enter The Dragon

i'm so glad you updated this! I was so addicted to this story



Reviewer: Jin   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 2:18 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Enter The Dragon

Man I just wanted the chapter to keep on going lol but another great chapter I so cant wait to see how everything goes!!



Reviewer: Jin   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

Omg!!Great chappy!!Especially Inu's speech to Kagome..now thats passion!Kohaku really surprised me but great chap and I cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Da Grrrl Says: It's important to remember that InuYasha isn't a nice man. :P Glad that you liked the chapter! ^^



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 12:35 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Enter The Dragon

Great chapt.Everyone's falling and they don't even know it.



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 11:55 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback

Plots and more plots who's going to come out the winner. Great chapter.



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters

Cat and mouse games begin huh.



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 7:15 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Good chapt. Look out Inuyasha she is seeking under his armor.



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 2:59 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath

It's my first taste of your new world and I do believe I'll stay.

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! Glad to hear it!



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 6:29 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Enter The Dragon

I love this story! I'll be waiting for the next chapter

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^^



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready

poor Kikyou



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2012 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Transparent Bonds

what a nice way to start a relationship O.o
great chapter

Da Grrrl Says: Well... it's not really a relationship for him, as you can see. he just plans to use her for whatever she's worth and dump her. :)



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2012 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys

and the plot thickens when the mysterious stranger shows up...



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2012 7:23 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Shippo and Kohaku sure do argue alot



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2012 6:59 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...

I loved the James bond referance



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2012 6:28 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It

Poor Kagome, I'm glad she got away



Reviewer: Bookworm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2012 5:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

awww that was really sad, poor inu



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