Oh my goodness, when I found out that Bankotsu filmed Inuyasha and Kagome I was seething! I was up on my toes on when Koga and Bankotsu met Inuyasha's parents. And when he found out they where siblings! I wanted to kill him for wanting blackmail them! I'm so angry! I hope he gets what's coming to him! I will wait with anticipation for that chapter.
And finally they are one! I was dying for Inuyasha and Kagome to finally seal their forbidden love with the final act that would forever claim them as sinful creatures. I loved how he said he's hers forever and it was at the beach, what a great place to lose your virginity to your one and only. Even though I don't know how this is gonna turn out I can't wait for the next chapter. Love it.
I'm also glad Sango and Kagome made up, I would hate it if they stop speaking to each other. I just don't know how long Miroku and Sango can keep being oblivious to what they see of their best friends. I think if I was in Sango's shoes (which I'm so glad I'm not) I would want to get them help but I'd probably wouldn't know how to go about it. Accepting them is all I can think of and I find it so sad that Kikio so easily did and Miroku can't even stomach the thought. It's not that I think incest is right but when it's a love like this one, how could you hate them?
I'm so glad that you plan to finish this awesome story. This is one of my favorites.

When I found out you where inspired by ‘Angel Sanctuary’ for this story I knew I had to read it. I read the manga and it’s one of my favs and what made this story so appealing to me was that the inspiration was a story about forbidden love. Let me clarify I have younger brothers and never seen them in that light. I’m a huge romantic nut and love stories that make me believe in soulmates and impossible love that surpasses logic and this story has it. Now on with my praise.
I’ve read all the way to ‘Delay the Wait’ but I had to comment on this chapter first. I love the poem Inuyasha wrote. It was so beautiful! I love the way you put that there and I’ve never heard it before but it was so hot and heavy and charged with steamy sexual tension. I loved it! I did not expect that. And the fact that they kissed after that! How could Kagome not see that that poem was about her? I can’t believe she couldn’t see it in his eyes when he was reading it to her. This story has so much tension, so much drama it kills me but I love it! The only reason I stopped reading is because I have no internet at home or else that’s all I’d be doing.

DaGrrrl says: What a kind review, thank you! Angel Sanctuary is the only other manga series I've invested in besides InuYasha. I own the entire series along with the OVA and both art books. It's such a great story and so visually stunning! It was so good, in fact, that it inspired two of my fanfics. This one, and Hikari. Really, really great read and it's awesome that you've even heard of it!

That said, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying this one. I know incest is a squick for many, and it should be, but I give kudos to those who have been brave enough to follow KoR. There's a guilt and discomfort that comes with reading this fic and that's exactly what I love about it. I enjoy breaking comfort zones. ^^

And yes, it was pretty obvious that the poem was for her, but remember, prior to this, Kagome never (or so she thought) looked at her brother in that light, so naturally, she wasn't thinking that he'd write anything about her. After all, a short while before that, they had become mortal enemies. That's why, even though she was drawn in enough to allow a kiss, the reality of what happened came back to bite really quickly. I really like these characters; they're wonderfully complicated. :D

I will always love the fluffy moments. They always make me feel like the world is an amazing place that I should be proud to live in!... Then I blink. None-the-less, You did awesome in this chapter! I really did enjoy the interactions between Kikyou and Sango. But I can't help but feel that Kikyou's lie is going to hurt someone.

You have to love the fluff in these chapters, you know. The stuff that happens before everything goes to hell! ^.^ Woohoo!

Depressing. Saddening. Horrifying. Brutal. Painful. Emotional. I love it! I can easily say that this was a fantastic heartbreak chapter! And I can't wait to read more.

I've read lots of prologues before, I've seen bad ones and I've seen fantastic ones. I can honestly say that this is the greatest prologue I've ever seen in my life! (Of course, I'm extremely biased because I love sibling incest). Can't wait to read the rest of this story!

"Yeah, you've got about sixty-nine reasons to be really proud."

LOL, that line got me! OMFG - Bank KILLED it. He got the award for best line in this fic so far. Oh, Bank... WOW... I just burst out laughing and I don't even care about the funny looks am getting!! I'm dreading the climax, but I just want to know. Like rush in, eyes peeking between finger to get over the dirty, disgusted looks you know?

On top of that. The obliviousness of the parents. The absolute trust and love they hold for their children pains me because knowing the truth, knowing that what they're doing is wrong but so fucking right in their hearts and emotions just kills it.

You're manipulating my heart again and right now it's hurting =/

The real deal breaker was Sango and Miroku. Miro confessing his silent thought and Inu with the water running and sobbing? Can I just hug Inu for... forever?

I love Inuyasha's dirty mouth. Like... *wipes brows n clears throat* It felt like... *breathes slowly*... I need a minute... or a shower. Cuz seriously? Fucktastic isn't superlative enough to describe Inuyasha. NOTHING is superlative enough when it comes to Inuyasha, his body, his cock (yes it needs it's own recogniztion) and his talented dirty mouth :D

I love her first time... I love the innocents, the beauty they made under the moon's gaze. It painted such an ethereal image that almost brought tears to my eyes. I mean I was weeping... but let's not get into THAT.

Le Chuckles.

"The only thing they had left was the only thing that held any meaning."
-I love that line... and it holds so much meaning and will be truly tested when everything comes to light. I have no doubt in my mind Inuyasha won't falter, if anything he would beat himself over it - I see now it's a constant battle and I hurt even more for him. But Kagome is young, slightly innocent (ha... ha... jealous cuz it's so not true now lol) and I'm interested in seeing how she'll face it all because even though she has accepted her feelings and expressed them there's stil an air of ignorance in comparison to Inuyasha.

Can't wait to read more of this!

When the storm hits, I know it's gonna be hard to survive but I have hope... and I have LOVE (Yes, Inuyasha loves ME!! :D)

Wow, this story has completely drawn me in and I've been reading non-stop since I started! I love the angst between Inuyasha and Kagome, and I think Miroku, Sango and Kikyo (though she's only been in like one chapter!) are super well-written. I felt really bad for Inuyasha when he posed the hypothetical question to Miroku and Miroku basically said Inuyasha should be killed by firing squad :(. I have no idea if I'm in the majority or minority, but I actually don't feel any disgust or anything towards the idea, at least, of incest/Kagome and Inuyasha beings siblings. You capture their emotions and the thoughts between Inuyasha and Kagome really well, and embarrassing as it is to admit, I even get teary eyed during some of Inuyasha's inner monologues because I felt so bad for him and the fact that he has no one to talk to about this! Anyway, I really love this story and I can't wait to see how it plays out!

DaGrrrl says: Aww, thanks so much. :) This is one of 'babies' that I've neglected FAR too long. I haven't updated it in nearly a year, but it is definitely one of the ones I plan to finish. The emotional conflict in this one has just been addictive for me, but draining as well. I love this story and all of it's yummy angst! Glad to hear that you're enjoying it, and while I think most who are okay with incest are in the minority, I find that I'm not too bothered by the bro/sis relationship. I obviously wouldn't want that for any kids of mine, but I tried to give a realistic portrayal of what it 'could' be like for two teens in that impossible situation and how their choices affect everyone around them.

wow just wow if she is fertile by any chance or if anybody seen them especially there parents wow just wow

wow I hope there will be more on them in future chapters to think what he would do if he found out what his kids were doing

wow to think Kagome would chew Sango out but i guess she really made her mad

wow they don't waist time do they lol thats all i have to say :)