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Reviewer: sugahypnay   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2012 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Whoa! That was some pretty intense lemony goodness! Thank you for updating :)



Reviewer: Claire   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2012 9:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.

Oh damn ... how have I managed this long without reading one of your smut scenes?! It's freezing cold today and with that one scene, I have no need for my space heater at the mo!

As much as I loved the lemony goodness, I can't wait for the shitstorm that's sure to hit with some of that footage Bank caught. Because as much as I adore your prowess at writing smut, your angst and drama keep me coming back for more!



Reviewer: starfury386   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2012 10:19 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Yes, the long awaited lemon. Judges what are your scores. Hentai Judge 1 10/10, Hentai Judge 2 10/10, Hentai Judge 3 9.5/10...Hold on a sec. Takes judge 3 out back and beats him. Lets try this again. Baka Hentai Judge 3 what is your score?? Quavering judge holds up a hand written sign 10.5/10. That's what I damn well thought. Please continue with the story, I know there's at least one twist left.

Da Grrrl Says: LMAO! That totally cracked me up! You win the award for funniest review! XD So happy that you liked it! <3



Reviewer: arundeep216   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2012 2:22 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Yes I did miss ur writing!.n absolutely adore the header template!...n back to the story......wait for it....aahhhhaa.u updated!!....oh thank god...such a refreshment after back to back exams for 5 days....keep 'em coming..:)

Da Grrrl Says: Aww, the new header wasn't the one of me, lol. Look under "Forbidden Love" on the skin selector on the homepage. That's the real header (Inu/Kags)-hehe. Glad to see you back! :D



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2012 4:18 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

I love that art! Its just them, in their own world, population two. So focused on each other, too. Uhmmm, I'm really anticipating what Bankotsu is going to do to them, now. Shit could really hit the fan. I'm glad the girls made up, at least for now, but how long will that last? Though, it seems Miroku and Sango care for their friends, how long will that keep the truth hidden? So much is up in the air! So glad you updated!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2012 3:51 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Our Resolution

Ah! Well lookie there, nice evasive maneuvers Inuyasha! I did not see that coming at all! I heaved a sigh of relief when they walked away, lol. I'm a bit worried about Miroku and Sango's budding relationship now. They are both too observant and perceptive for their own good. I'm eager to see how they handle this situation, together and separately.



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2012 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Oh my god, what is Bank gonna do with that? Then, it seems like Miroku has Sango pegged, too. To top it off, awkward dinner incoming!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2012 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Delay the Wait

I lol'd at lupine crafts! Haha, I love the little easter eggs you put in these! Let's see, I am sooo so glad to see Miroku being a genuine nice guy, and I think Sango will really need it. I am totally on board with Inuyasha thinking fate is stepping in with interruptions, but that's how I roll anyway. Still its a nice touch. Learning about the twins makes me very apprehensive for these two. Sheesh. Oh, so I think its kind of awesome that Kouga had no casual glances at Kagome and Bankotsu did, I like that rivalry, but sometimes it seems overdone, so this is a refreshing change of pace. When I clicked that link at the end, I literally said, "oh, shit". Suspense is eating me alive!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2012 12:57 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything

Poor Sess! He got his ass handed to him, didn't even try and fight back! Then Rin, protecting them all... I wonder what happened to them? Interesting that Miroku is getting curious about the issue too, now. I still hope he gets a job soon though.

I am soo worried about the parents waking the kids up! I hope they're careful!



Reviewer: Smurfette   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2012 5:47 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Is it hot here or is it just me? *Needs a fan after reading the end of this chap.* Wonder what Bank has in his mind. Making me nervous right now. And for sure, Love the art!!! Tis nice!!!
Thanks for the update! I like :)



Reviewer: Dariana   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2012 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

OMG! I loved this chapter! it made me really anxious with Bankotsu now knowing about the siblings, but made me laugh really hard when he said about the sixty nine reasons to be proud! oh and can't forget about the smut. Mhm, delicious! Inuyasha sure knows how to perform.



Reviewer: eine_hexe   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2012 7:16 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Cut.

this story is why I desperately wanted to come back to Inuyasha fandom, truly. I was addicted to it, to the anguish, the passion, the sinful wrongness and the contradictory rightness of this relationship. This chapter has it all..



Reviewer: eine_hexe   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2012 7:14 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: The Way Your Innocence Tastes...

This is....
this was, has always been one of my favorite chapters to read, and reread, and rereread until finally relocating my mind. Takes breath away from my lungs every single time.
Like a bullet to my brain.
This chapter, the pure, raw passion of it introduced me to the wonders of that song - the new messiah. You did that.
Thank you.



Reviewer: eine_hexe   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2012 7:09 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: I'm Burning Out...

You managed to expose Inuyasha's addiction so perfectly, so completely, that every time their parents' names are mentioned I feel some sense of dread that I would not otherwise get, since I never judge people based on their relationships and I don't label anything that comes out of love as 'wrong', but dayum girl, you make us see it from Inuyasha's point so well that even I get caught up in this world before remembering my own views..



Reviewer: eine_hexe   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2012 7:04 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always Raining in My Head

God, this chapter is so unbearably painful that I shudder every single time I read it...



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2012 11:50 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Postcards From Paradise

Oh myyy! Sango and Miroku, up to it with their clothes on. Good for them! Ithink she needed that to calm down a little anyway. Miroku... well I think he could really pull himself together for her, too. I hope he does. Wow at the kiddos in the men's restroom! So very ballsy. I'm really worried now though, they have got to keep it more subtle! Giving me palpitations!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2012 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Find in Me the Room to Breathe.

I think I love Izayoi too. Man, how awesome is she?! She can cook and fight to keep her man, haha!

The siblings at the breakfast table...whoa! I thought their parents would pick up on something, but I'm glad they didn't. I guess the whole, 'see what you want to see' thing comes into play here. I feel terrible for Sango, she's going to be so hurt, and now she's getting it from all sides! Kagome's brother, Miroku's best friend and Kikyou's boyfriend? She can't really just vent freely to any of them now, not her bestie, boy toy or beloved cuzzie. OH! What's going to happen when Sango lets Kagome know about that kiss? Will she even tell her? Can Kagome keep a level head, if she does? Too many options to know what will happen!

I hope Kagome really takes what Inuyasha told her, about keeping them in a good position. She has to learn to play up the sibling relationship and make anything else between them nonexistent in front of others. I'm so glad I had a chance to read this today!



Reviewer: Inurinsong   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2012 7:22 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Thanks for updating. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Reviewer: Lavizzy   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2012 8:07 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Omg I can't believe they did it xD Wow I hope you update soon xD Im getting into the story o_o



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2012 8:15 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Light a Candle and Blow the World Away.

Way to be there for him Kikyou! I get the feeling Kagome will always feel kind of inferior in her moments of self doubt, sort of an echo of canon, but it works so well here. I'm glad that he talked it through with her though, and that she is being a supportive friend, her certainly needs one. Kagome could also use one, I think, but we'll see on that one. I would have been thinking the same thing as she was though, how does this bode for any kind of relationship, when he says he'll be gone for a movie and shows up way too many hours late, without calling. This last act they shared will definitely change things for them now, and I am so worried for them.



Reviewer: DGirl17   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2012 4:36 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

Totally worth the wait, can't wait for the next chap.



Reviewer: Netta   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2012 3:55 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Cry for Me, Little Sister

I waited so long for this chapter! Thank you ;]



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2012 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide

What a powerful chapter. Again, reading of and on all day, but thus was amazing. I also agree on the boots thing, I can't say no either. I really appreciate that Kagome is trying to spend good time with her patents, fort good memories and so she can really understand what she'll be losing.
Miroku...oh the poor kid. His Mom never should have donewhat she did. But, I hope this reaction to Sango will help him get his life in order.
I'm glad that Inuyasha had that talk at the end, that he finally opened up, but I'm afraid of what that'll do to his sister when she finds out!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2012 2:44 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude

I had to read this in bits and pieces. I can understand Kagomes jealousy, especially with someone that looks so similar. I'm glad Sango talked with her cousin. In a way I want the secret to come out, but then again, I don't! Kagome really did need time to think things through, I just hope she had enough time.



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2012 1:12 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat

Omg almost caught! The poor guy...I feel so bad for him. All that pent up energy, the longing and self deprecation has to have been killing him, and now, the first time he gives in, they are almost caught. Murphys law, lol. I'm really glad he's making her think things through, she has only dealt with this for like five minutes in comparison.



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