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Reviewer: Melissa-J   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 8:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I Got To Tell You That Was Mind Blowing. Loved It. KUDOS!!



Reviewer: Brittany Jordan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2009 11:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

i liked this story i dont see why people didnt like it, i just think they didnt understand it.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I think, more than anything, people are just too sensitive and can't stand to see their favorite characters in any situation that isn't what they find acceptable/enjoyable. I write what I want to write, and if that sticks in anyone's craws, i guess that's just their tough luck, isn't it? lol. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Clueless_Major   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2009 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

OMFG... totally hot. xD you have a gift for writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2009 1:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I just love how intense this fic is.  Awesome.  :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you can see it for the fun that it is. :D



Reviewer: Toasty   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 8:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

OMG!! this had me...made ooo fuck that was good! shit! WOW that was just soo hot! I knew you were going to put the I loves you's at the end lol I mean what writer doesn't? Anyways keep making stuff like this! Love ya!

Author's Response: I had to put the 'I love yous' or else I would have been fried even worse! Besides, he does love her and always will -she just needed a bit of *ahem* correcting. 0.~



Reviewer: Simmer_Dee   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2009 3:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

::blinks eyes:: umm wow ::goes back into a stupor with silly smile in her face::

Author's Response: LOL! You're a trip, Dee Dee!



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2008 10:07 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I can see how some people would react negatively to this, but I loved it.  Yes, it was uncomfortable in a few places, but that's what makes it so great!  Any piece that can elicit that kind of reaction is worth keeping around; I'll admit, I'm curious about the drama that erupted because of it...some people get so bent out of shape.  It's fanfiction people...it's not that serious!!!

Personally, I love dominance, and I love when InuYasha dishes it out, especially to a mouthy canon Kagome.  XD  Come on, she really does deserve it sometimes.  And this is DEFINITELY not rape, so everyone can just untwist their panties and get a grip.  Great work, as always!  ;-)



Author's Response: LOL, you're awesome. ^^ Thanks for the kind words and the great review! He Saw Red, I think, is still my most controversial story even though it was written almost 3 years ago. The "controversy" was... EPIC. LOL. I was hounded, dogged, chased, flamed, torn apart -you name it and it happened. It is the sole reason as to why I stopped posting to AFF 2.5 years ago. And that wasn't the only place. It suddenly became "popular" to harass me over it, and it never stopped. They just decided to go after me as a whole, so like I said, the "Get IG" sentiment was epic, lasting, and still going.

However, there are a lot of people that enjoyed the story, still do, and I will never, ever hide it away. I'm not ashamed of it. It wasn't rape, and since I don't take crap, I made sure I kept it posted and available for folks like you that realize there is no reality in demon fanfic. xD

Again, thanks for a terrific review -you rock! :D



Reviewer: Ruka-chan   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 1:04 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I freaking love your writing~

why don't you write a rapefic? ;3 i've been looking for some and i can't seem to find any decent ones...:/ 



Author's Response: Thanks much! ^_^ Rapefics aren't usually my thing. I can see adding it to a story if it makes a point, or adds the right kind of horror element, but other than that... lol.



Reviewer: Blackenedlove   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2008 7:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

This was good, finally an appropriate reaction from what I see as an Inuyasha that was made to llok macho, but turned reather submissive. I do however wish there had been a little more follow up - but who am I to judge, you're the author.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) This is very old, back when I first started, and I was a little less in-depth than I am when I write now. It's still, in my own opinion, left at a decent place. I've toyed with a sequel, but then again, I've done that with a lot of fics. But if this one ever comes to me I'll definitely revisit it. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: midnightwhispers   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 6:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I can see why some might object to it but gods I love it. It's just what I needed something quick, hot, fast but ultimately satisfying. *hugs* Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Object to it? This fiction is was just what a bunch of idiots needed to begin a fire that has never been put out, lol. I couldn't care less, of course; I'm going to do what I want. But it says something about the power of the pen, doesn't it? I like this story and that's why it's still around. :P



Reviewer: Blood Lust   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2007 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

the best fic I ever read

I think I`m boiling xD my boyfriend is staring at my like:  o.O are u okey¿?

jajaj bye bye



Author's Response: LOL! Thanks. Funny, this fic has a real hate it or love it vibe and it got me on a lot of hate lists. So it's always a treat when someone says they like it! 0.~



Reviewer: Kagatob   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 10:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

The last line had me rolling on the floor laughing.

At first I though the characters were going completely overboard but for some reason I can actually see Inuyasha cracking and Kagome still going for it in the end. 

I only wonder what Shippo would say after they got back. 



Author's Response: LOLOL! Thanks for finding the humor in that. This story is the most *infamous* one I've ever written and it had half of IY fandom chasing me down for revenge -even though when last I checked I could write whatever I want. *eyeroll* Thanks for having fun with it, as I did! ^^



Reviewer: Erin Johnston   Anonymous  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 12:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

That was a bit scary. I for one don't like the whole dominant thing, but I try to keep my reviews toward the writing and not the plot so here goes. I think you have shown us what could be a whole new side of Inuyasha. I mean after all he IS part dog demon and could very well have adopted the ways of a dog pack. You also showed a side of Kagome that could also be there. well written.

Author's Response: lol, thanks, Erin. I write InuYasha from all sides really, and this was just one. This fic, when it was first written in 2005 and posted on MM.org was met with very mixed reviews. A huge number of people supported it and my choice for making him that way, and several people had an issue with it. It turned into a supa-ugly thing on aff.net, and to this day it floors me to see how immature people can be. But I guess it was an okay fic in the end since someone stole it and posted it on ff.net in 2006 -haha.

I appreciate your review because even though you were put off by InuYasha's ways, you support my choice on doing it. That, to me, is what writing is all about. On a side note, I love a dominant InuYasha because I get really sick of the super shy, "blushing every second" portrayal that just about everyone else seems to adopt. I'd like to think Yasha has more dimensions than that, ne? ^_^



Reviewer: Emma   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2006 7:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Wow, I loved it! The end was funny. "Now we can go back to camp" hahaha. You're a really great writer. This is just the first time I've reviewed. Keep up the awsome work!

Author's Response: Thanks^^ I'm glad you had fun with it!



Reviewer: bewildered   Anonymous  starstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2006 11:17 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

whoa. IY was scary. he was very OOC here.. but the fic was good.



Reviewer: Mikita   Anonymous  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 11:32 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Gosh... O_O Inuyasha scares me.... XD

Author's Response: <.< I did warn that it was a dark fic, lol.



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 10:59 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I read this before and liked it, then read it just now, and liked it even more. And after all that, she still asks if they can go back to camp, lol. Great piece Onna. :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Onna! This is the fic that got the ball rolling with crap that shall remain nameless. It's pretty infamous, especially after it was ripped off on ff.net. *shrugs* ah well...



Reviewer: Kage Kancho   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Whoa...Scary InuYasha...whoa...but good!



Reviewer: mary   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 1:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

That was really good. I really like it.



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