[Report This]Date: November 21, 2014 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I am on the edge of my seat. This is getting really scary, I hope Kouga doesn't hurt Kagome.
[Report This]Date: November 20, 2014 10:03 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
Ahhh!!! What happened? Why did he leave?
[Report This]Date: November 20, 2014 8:12 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Sakura Drops
Oh My God, the plot thickens, poor Kagome but for some reason when someone is talking on the phone and they don't want anyone else to know about it they never take precautions. They always just talk and then get caught, BAMM. That is always messed up.
Great chapter, I am so hooked on this story now I am dreading getting to the end.
[Report This]Date: November 20, 2014 2:39 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
Wow everyone is just digging their own holes right. This is going to get worse before it gets better right.
[Report This]Date: November 20, 2014 1:49 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing
Poor Inuyasha, but that was one very sexy session. Great work (on the chapter) not on the... you know.
[Report This]Date: November 20, 2014 12:54 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Shadowed Felicity
Can't review properly, must read next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: November 19, 2014 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Taking the Plunge
I can't wait to see how they are going to find out the truth. The patriarchs know about each other and there seems to be some history there, and it does not seem to be good. Sessy is not going to be happy at all.
[Report This]Date: November 19, 2014 7:55 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wicked Descent
I can just imagine, Inuyasha a vision in pink, too cute!!
[Report This]Date: November 19, 2014 7:05 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Under the Surface
Very good chapter, Dad's can sometimes be a little difficult with their daughters. I think it is either you are daddy's little girl or you are always trying to be acknowledged as an individual, personally I always fell short with my Dad.
[Report This]Date: November 19, 2014 2:54 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Geneva by the Bedroom
You know I think the song was good and kept with the mood of what was going on in the story but to be honest I don't think you needed it. That scene was delicious on its own.
Author's Response: I never actually 'need' music in my fics. I just have a love of songfics and always end up sharing whatever songs I was listening to when I wrote the scene. As you look through my other stories, you'll see that I songfic a lot (For some, it's really a love or hate thing). So if you're the latter, just skim the lyrics. They are always added AFTER the fact, so you can read through the scene -whilst skipping- and never miss a beat. :)
[Report This]Date: November 19, 2014 2:18 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice
I don't know about anyone else but I would love to come home to that, "modern day Apollo"!!!
Love this story!
Author's Response: Hehe~ Thanks a lot! I'm happy you like the story!
[Report This]Date: November 18, 2014 5:44 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition
So sweet, he is actually considering it!!! I love this story!!
[Report This]Date: November 18, 2014 2:53 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
Only one thing I can say, lucky. OMG, great chapter!!
Date: November 18, 2014 9:50 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Such a sad place to leave it. Great sorry and plot.
Author's Response: Thanks. ^^
[Report This]Date: November 15, 2014 4:48 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Great update.
I'm sad to hear you're on hiatus and that you plan on leaving the fandom soon. It was great having the opportunity to read some of your fiction :)
Take us with you when you move onto other writing!!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^
I'm a t sad t be away from IY, too, but things change and I don't feel that same burning passion to write like I used to, so its hard to continue and bring acceptable work to you guys. That said, nothing is dead yet. I'm not done serving up IY's stories yet, but they may not feel quite the same for you guys because it doesn't feel quite the same for me. But I'll try my best, like always.
Thanks for the years of support! I appreciate it! ^^
[Report This]Date: October 13, 2014 3:26 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
this story, for some strange reason, never gets old. get the same kind of thrill reading up to this point over and over, the love and the angst. keep up your writing, your passion.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I should have finished this years ago, but I procrastinate like crazy and it didn't help that I've had so many fics. But I'm hoping that I can still finish it up sometime in the not too distant future. :)
Date: October 08, 2014 1:37 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Omg omg omg omg you're backkkk!!! I'm so happy! You have no clue! When I saw that the site was down I was so sad! But I didn't want to harass you about it because I figured that you just needed time.
I'm sad to hear your plans to leave, but I wish you all the best. You are my favorite inu fic author by far. Will you be keeping the site up for us to reread your work in the future?
As for this chapter... Brilliant as always. I can't wait to see what happens next! I wish kags could just run away with all her money... Screw it all!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for this crazy late response, tho. >.< It means a lot to be a fave on your list. I've been writing forever as just a hobby, but it's nice to know that the effort has been appreciated and my crazy ish has made someone happy. ^^
I've been on hiatus for a while, but I'm hoping to get a little work done on this -and other fics- since I have some free time. Hopefully, I'll have something for you guys soon. Thanks for all the support! :)
[Report This]Date: September 30, 2014 10:20 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Jumping around the room like a ball such anxiety for the next chapter
Author's Response: Sorry for the long delay, but I'm glad you like it so much! ^^
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2014 12:20 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
you imagine several scene but is surprised with something better .. ahh! losing my mind with this fanfic another world
Shinjirarenai!!!
Date: July 22, 2014 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Aaaaaaaah! I am reading these too fast!
And I totally went and voted for this on the poll even though it's already winning, because it is too good not to. So many unanswered questions!
Kouga is so VILE in this story! I actually never really liked him much in the manga, because I thought he was entirely too cocky for someone who relies on Shikon shards in his legs...and always being so rude to InuYasha. >:O Jerk!
Absolutely loving this story. Can't wait for more, if you plan to write more!
Ooh and I have a question regarding one of your reviewing rules...you mentioned there would be grammatical errors (of course, no one expects perfection) so you do not wish to be corrected on those. However, if I see a word usage error (a common one I notice throughout your works, not just a rare typo), would you like to be notified of it? Since you are a writer at heart and do plan on continuing to write outside of fanfiction, I thought you'd might want to be aware of those. I know I prefer to be told if I've been using the wrong word or spelling for something!
I remember when I spelled the word "separate" as "seperate" for YEARS and had no idea I was wrong...WHY DIDN'T ANYONE TELL MEEEEEEEE? I had to find out by the red squiggly. Thanks, red squiggly!
It's getting hard to review these stories beyond "lol i lyke it pls continue itz so hawt ^________^"
All right, maybe it won't be that bad...but seriously your writing is so good. It's hard to believe that this is fanfiction and not a published book.
Author's Response: First, your reviews are always hilarious.
DISCLAIMER: IG is not responsible for loss of sleep, undereye circles, or crankiness that developed from an overdose of both.
Now that THAT'S out of the way... XD
I'm actually hoping to finish this one because so many people like it. But admittedly, it's hard because my love for writing in general has declined by a lot (VERY doubtful that I'm going to attempt any pro stuff. I've written so long that I just don't think I have it in me to do it even more. lol. Plus, my hands may not be able to take it)
I screw up words in my fanfics all the time, and I always mean to go back and fix it and never do. I also tend to write when I'm extremely tired and I end up posting w/o a beta THEN going back 2 days later, reading and correcting (Basically because I don't want to make anyone wait any longer for the chapter). So I'm probably aware of my mistake >.> and just keep doing it from force of habit and not fixing it for the same reason. Whatevs. lol. Hell, I should make you beta my future works! (SO kidding about that. :P).
TBH, I'm pretty vanilla myself. Much of the stuff I write I've never experienced and <.< have no desire to, but for some reason, I'm just good at putting it into words. Meanwhile... I hate writing smut with a passion. I'm so bored with it all! But I try to give the readers what they want and that means some of my messy screw scenes. Ha.
As always, thanks for the awesome reviews I always appreciate them!
[Report This]Date: July 21, 2014 10:47 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
This review isn't for this particular chapter, but rather, it is the last chapter I read before I fell into a blissful sleep. At 5 fucking AM. THANKS A LOT. I got woken up less than two hours later by a client for an emergency...I was very very grumpy. I would have been less grumpy if I hadn't sleep at 5AM. Again, THANKS A LOT. >:O
I'm very upset that this wasn't in your FAQs:
10. Will I be getting any sleep?
Probably fucking not.
You fucking blow my mind, Kiki, with the amount of stories you've written. Just looking at the word count on some of these makes me want to chop off my hands and give them to you. Ew. That was kind of a gross image.
Wow, I am the worst reviewer ever. I'm not even saying anything about this particular story. Haha, but anyway...I am really loving it so far, but I'm worried because I feel like I've only got 5 chapters left to read yet it doesn't seem like it's nearing the end. It's scary! On the plus side, I noticed this fic is winning in your poll, so that's something. I'm actually very vanilla when it comes to erotica, so this type of story is more up my alley. I think at most, I won't mind a little bit of bondage, but nothing too hardcore. Even anal scenes normally make me a little cringy, but I thought you handled it very well in this chapter.
Aaaaand that's why I'm thankful that your stories are categorized so specifically, so I know what to avoid. But if I run out of stories to read, I might give those a shot and just skip over parts that make my soul cry. I can't help it...I am what I am!
And again, I have to drop my jaw at one of your responses to a review, saying that you got bullied because of your long, drawn out smut scenes. WUUUUUUUUUT? Though I said in my other review that I don't like long winded descriptions, I fucking LOVE drawn out smut scenes. How can passion be anything BUT drawn out?
Lastly, the chapter with Inuyasha dealing with the aftereffects of getting HIS ass played with...well that was just hilarious. Vagisil...HAHA. That was most excellent.
Hmm. It's 8:45AM and I have a job to do at 10AM...should I take a short nap because I only got 2 hours of sleep, or.......read the rest...of....okay yeah totally reading the rest.
[Report This]Date: July 19, 2014 11:26 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
Good to see this story updated! Even if I'm late in reading it. I always save your updates for my down time that I need cheering up, and this was perfect!!! I hope Kagome goes lethal on Kouga's ass! I also wouldn't mind seeing Sesshomaru taken down a few pegs, just once... ;) Hope you are doing well and your hands are not bothering you too much this summer.
[Report This]Date: July 12, 2014 11:48 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
So, I was about to click on the 'Next' button…
Whyyyyyy can't we know what happens next! I saw the last update is from April 2014, which makes me happy because that means you haven't given up on this story, have you? :) It's definitely one of my all-time favorite stories. Every scene, every story line, everything fits just fine and you created an incredible chemistry between Inuyasha and Kagome, just like in The Edge of Seventeen - wait, I need to reread that one as well :D Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens now that Ayame knows Inuyasha is close hehehe…
[Report This]Date: July 11, 2014 2:24 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
I know you commented about not writing more than 4,000 words, but forgive me for the 9 rating! :( I just read this way too quick! NOT blaming you miss! Not at all! I still love your work and I appreciate you still trying so hard to write. (Totes read your little announcement) Anyway... I have read your stories for such a long time and I have grown to love them as if they were my very own novel for me to read on a shelf... I don't mean to sound... Strange, but I shall miss your writings immensely... Everyone will I'm sure. I just want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your brilliance in literature. Thank you, InuGrrrl.
[Report This]Date: June 20, 2014 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Poisonous Friends
I can go away for a while and come back and still be obsessed with your work. I can go on and on about how amazing your writing is but more importantly it's even more amazing the comfort you and your writing bring to me during stressful times. Thank you.
Author's Response: Really, thank YOU. After struggling to write this chapter at the time, and hating it, this is the best thing I could possibly hear and I appreciate it. <333