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Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2007 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Ah! I just came back to read it again since I hadn't really taken my time the first time.. and.. KIKIIIIIII!!!!!!
I hope your carpal tunnel thing gets better asap!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tinii! My arms are feeling better everyday so I'm doing okay. I'm even writing!



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2007 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Ohhhh, I see it coming. Ohhhhh, Kikyo. I see it coming. Damnn, she is going to fuck this up, I'm suuureeee.
I LOVED this chapter, as it advanced the story so much.
Can't wait for the next!!
Love, IK

Author's Response: LOLOL! Kikyou gets noooo love!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2007 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Good chapter. And you have my deepest and most sincere sympathy on your carpal tunnel problem. I've had issues like that with my hands before, and it is no joke at all.

As for this chapter, I really enjoyed it. Inuyasha and Kagome are just ADORABLE. They are sinking fast....but it's totally mutual and neither of them are even trying to hide it from the other. That makes it even sweeter. But.....trouble is looming. Kikyo's phrasing at the end was pretty telling. "Can I call you mine?" Oh, yeah. The battle lines are drawn. Kikyo doesn't seem like she's quite as mean as she's capable of being....but it's still much too early in the game to tell that. I definitely look forward to finding out (whenever you can post).



Author's Response: Thanks, Ms.Goddess! At first, it hurt so bad I was seeing stars. But with bengay, rest, and motrin 800, I'm doing a LOT better. I like Inu & Kags in this. I like how they flow, soooo innocent. Now, let's just wait for the blindside, ne? lol



Reviewer: sweetkijo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2007 8:06 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Hmm..somehow the sweet Kikyou leaves an awful bitter taste on my tongue. At least he hasnt shown even the slightest interest in her sexually. But then again, Kikyou hasnt exactly let on so far any alterior motives. So if she is "really" just sweet...ahhh well...I will just have to get over it. But you know how it is, ya cant trust a snake cus its a fuckin snake. Thanks for the update. Cant wait for the next chapter. I miss ya girl. Hope your hands get better. Hugz!!

Author's Response: Sissy! I know, Kikyou is on everyone's nerves, lol. But I ain't sayin' nuthin :P <3333



Reviewer: kagome019   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2007 5:07 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Wow! I love this chapter! Inu think he is 'in sweet, sweet love'.... his relationship with Kagome is so sweet, but the end of the chapter... I don't trust Kikyou, I mean the frase "can I call you mine?" is really suspicious, and Inu said yes! 0.0 it doesn't seem like a good deal!!!

I wish you a happy anniversary!!! ¡¡¡felices dos años en el fan-fiction, siento el retraso!!!
y cuidate mucho, espero que te mejores pronto!

besos y abrazos!!!!


Author's Response: Hermana! I missed you, girl! I know it all seems very suspicious, but we'll have to wait and see! And thanks for the anniversary wishes! It's been a great 2 years ^^ *hugs* <33



Reviewer: Kuroikeito   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2007 1:49 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Awesome chapter--it made me feel all warm and squiggy inside. I'm glad Inuyasha's getting some happiness now, because, knowing your stories, he's in for some serious angst in the future XD
I hope that you feel better soon, and don't worry about pushing chapters out, just let your arms heal. We'll still be here when you're better:)

Author's Response: Thanks Kuroikeito! I appreciate it. I don't update this one as often as I should, but I hope to remedy that. This story isn't as angsty as my usual stuff (probably because it's a gift, lol). But >.> it will have its moments. Thanks for the well wishes!



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2007 1:14 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Why does it seem like Yash just made a deal with the devil?
Most like, cuz he did.

Heh, its like watchin a movie, when ya see the good guy gettin himself into something bad and your yellin at the screen, No, don't! or get away from him you bitch! Lol. Well, I do, anyways, lmao.
Great chap, My Onna... hugzzz

Author's Response: Tee hee! I can just see ya yelling, Onna! But >.> you can't save him! *evil laugh*



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Oh no! What's Kikyou up to? And that part when he said he'd be counting the minutes was so cute!!!! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Kikyou >.> so many wonder about her... but I'm not telling! ^^



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Oh yea, this is like my 3rd comment, srry!!

But am using a new comp and i forgot to put '313' on kagome for some reason in my first review...It's still your crazy loyal reader n reviewer! lolz ^_~

Author's Response: Bubbles, ur nutz! LOL. I love it and I didn't forget your oneshot. I snagged ya on my space, I'll leave ya a comment later today! Thanks for the reviews :P



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 4:11 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

Hey, jus to let u kno, i sent u a friend invite on myspace! I'm new there and all, thing had my head hurting me while customizing it >.> Comment me when u accepted! =)



Reviewer: leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 2:21 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

wow, it's like a dream come true for yash, but are her motives really innocent and purely for yash's sake? i dunno, but i do think it's cute how kagome and yash are all into each other like crazy. btw, i hope your hands get better soon. i hate that for you. it's so painful. if i can help in anyway, let me know. take care, kiki!!! *hugs*

Author's Response: Court! Thanks for the review! I like yash and Kags together >.> tho fluff isn't easy to write. I always feel out of my element! Kikyou? No comment!



Reviewer: kagome   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 12:07 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

First off, i hope your wrist gets better soon! ^_^ I kno how much of a pain it can be.

Now this chapter, even with your pain and all, was awesome as usual... and you can take your time in everything cuz seeing that your wrist is more important.. The fic can wait, it would kill anyone if you dont update...(not physically anyway...lolz)

I like kikyo O.o... The ending part prove that she really does like him, i mean duh! lol, I dont kno if she's helping him for his benefit only or for hers... Either way, i hope she knows kagome is for inu soon!

It seems i dont like sango that much, i mean i hate when ppl judge others without knowing them...

I cannot stop thinking about the prada everytime i read this! >< It's so similiar, and i hope kikyo lets inu get his time with kags--but something tells me thats not gonna go down, eh ...? Will u even ansa our questions, or r u gonna keep on that crown of the one to give their readers suspense?? I aint blaming, my exams for school are over and i have time!! I only have 1 more exam for a program thing, and their all multiple choices so i'm not worry much bout that... I might have 2 look a job tho, and i'm oddly happy! =p

Get well soon, girl!! and happy writing as always =)

Author's Response: I swear I've never seen Prada, but I wanted to! Now you're making me want to rent it to see how it goes. I had a movie in mind when I thought of this, but definitely not that one. It's a reeeeally old one from like the 80's that my friend's mom had in her collection, but even still it's too different to be an adaptation. Sango is a pain, but she means well. Hope you did well on the finals!



Reviewer: InuSoul   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 9:44 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

If you didn't make that sound like he just sold his soul to the devil at the end of this i don't know what would have.. Now, can i call you mine?... Hell yeah! That is telling you horrible things are to come.. He just gave his soul to the devil. A.k.a Kikyo, why does he always do this..jezz

Author's Response: LOLOL! I've got like 4 people saying he sold his soul, lol. But I never said Kikyou was bad <.< Though I never called her good either. You guys will just have o wait it out. ^^



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 9:31 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

I never trusted Kikyou and I knew there was a reason. Now I see the reason.
So this chapter made a helluva lot more sense after I read the previous one (I'm still confused as to how I managed to miss that one...) This is such a sweet sappy story I kinda like it (don't tell anyone- it'll ruin my reputation).
Keep up the good work (when you can)

Author's Response: Now, Jen, she's not so bad. And yeah, I get a suga rush everytime I pen a chap, lol.



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 9:02 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

How the hell did I miss this chapter?
*sigh* Good chap nonetheless, now maybe I can make sense out of the latest chapter. (Started to read it and went..."huh? I missed something" duh!)

Author's Response: Because you're Jenny! :P



Reviewer: axel720   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 12:03 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

She's so evil.

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not <33



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

OMG "can i call you mine?" holy crap!!! theres just TOO much implied in that for him to say yes! i cant believe it...
and he and kagome are SO sweet, their relationship is awesome! i love how innocent they both are.

Author's Response: Sheena! LOL, I love the way you picked up on that last line. Awesome! And I love their relationship too, so sugary, ne? lol



Reviewer: Yenny   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 6:40 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

this was great, n funny chapter. it made me remeber of dates where things didnt happend cuz of someones bad timing.
inu is soo cute when he acts all love-striken. it feels like towards the end inu made 'a deal with da devil' type of deal.
update sooooon plez!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Yenny! He just may have, but we won't know yet! 0.~



Reviewer: 'Tina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 4:59 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Skin Trade

I KNEW that Kikyo was into Yasha! She hesitated when Yasha said he had a girlfriend. She hesitated dammit! LOL! Thanks for the update Kiki. I was having a really, really, really, REALLY crappy day but this update made me smile and I actually feel a little bit better now. :) Keep up your beautiful work but please don't spend too much time writing until you get better! You need to take care of yourself Kiki! We are not going anywhere and there is no time limit on your fics. ^_^

Happy Resting!

Author's Response: Tina! Thanks for being my first review and all the kindness. *big hugs* I'm still chugging >.< slowly, lol. Glad you liked the update and >.> no comment on Kikyou. Maybe she does <.< maybe she doesn't... *evil laugh* Hope your day gets better!



Reviewer: Ilsa   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 8:06 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

That stupid dog ruined the kiss!!!! >.< Anywho, I LOVE the new chap Kiki-nee-chan!!! I want to read more!!! But of course take you time, no pressure!
You know my grandma is also Miss Rodríguez and she acts just like the Miss Rodríguez from this story! XD She always used to call my grandpa a Pendejo as well!!! XD *sigh* ah those were good times. ^^
Thanks so much for this story Kiki-nee-chan! I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Ilsa!! So glad you like it. I know my updates are way slow, but they're getting there -promise! *hugs*



Reviewer: shorty   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 6:14 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

i really like your work. please update soon with this one.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate that. ^_^



Reviewer: Rosie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 12:41 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

yay! you updated! great chapter! urgh... that was mean. i thought InuYasha and Kagome would actually kiss this time... but... third time's the charm... well, i hope they actually kiss the third time... anyways, it was still a great chapter and i hope you update soon! ^_^

Author's Response: Rosie! Long time no see :P I know, I was mean. I didn't give them a kiss, but I swear they'll get one and it will be nysh!!! Thanks for the review!! A new chap will be up this week. ^^



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 3:31 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

And so the drama begins, ne? Kikyo making herself know, yet again. hmm.. Not seein anything good comin from it. Like that last bit, that was cute, lol... Great chap, Onna. Hugzz...

Author's Response: Tee hee! Onna, you're always suspicious of somebody :P Hugzz!



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2007 7:43 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

Already? :( That felt kind of short... Ah, well... it was great nonetheless! So adorable - always your best Kiki! ^_^


Author's Response: Short?! Tinii!! *shakes fist* LOL. Well, that's because it was about 5000 words when I usually do 7000 or more. But >.> a Grrrl be getting whooped doing so many of those so I cut down a lil. Plus, the scenes change so much that it feels even shorter. But look at the bright side. If I can do shorter, I can update more often. *nods* Hope all is good with you, girl!



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2007 6:04 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

lol, well inu did get a kiss tho ^^ I so thought he was gonna finally kiss kaggie.

The minute kags decided to keep her real life with all the money and stuff from inuyasha was the first wrong thing she did!

For some wierd reason this reminds me of The Devil Wears Prada...cuz in that movie, the girl thought her job was everything to the point she and her boyfriend along with friends fall out...so i jus see inu wanting the painting fame beyond badly, like he'd get to cancelling stuffs jus to spend time with kikyo and learn more. Tho i kno it would b unconciously but it might happen tho. A number of things started out wrong. tsk tsk.

And for the life of inu, i cant help but respect him! He doesnt let his struggle bring him down and for that, i love him more!! =p

Laterz, and happy writing, kiki! ^__^

Author's Response: I've never seen that movie, but I always wanted to! I love Prada :P Thanks for the review, girly! I kinda like them as a couple and I'm getting the hang of the fluff, but I promise that a kiss is coming 0.~



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