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Reviewer: Folltosa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2013 6:12 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope is Found With Time.

I loved it.Please update soon again.

Da Grrrl Says: Aww, my first review of the new chapter. Thanks a bunch. <3



Reviewer: halotrance2456   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2012 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

Another great chapter as always ^^ I really love this story, please continue writing!



Reviewer: halotrance2456   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2012 1:33 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

Aw...that was such a sweet ending in this chapter, please continue this story, it has a great beginning to it! ^^



Reviewer: OnnaMom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2012 5:50 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Yup, yup, yup!Missed another * makes face*
So dislike when I do that. *pouts*
But Yash was sooo close. Awesome as always, musume!
Hugzzz



Reviewer: Shurokami   Signed   [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2012 11:55 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Awww! So close Inuyasha! Excellent chapter as always!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, m'dear! Working on the update now. ^^



Reviewer: SnitchQuill   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2012 11:58 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

good start! love it :)



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Signed   [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2012 2:53 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Have I told you how much I love this story lately? No? Well, I love this story. I like the more animalistic side of InuYasha because I feel like people are like that most days; their actions say more than words can.



Reviewer: Boop   Signed   [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2012 1:18 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I was SEROIOUSLY holding back tears on this one, inugrrrl! Update, update! Poor inu! To be stuck between worlds and trying to communicate and love with both. Can't wait for the next chappy! :D

love ya,
Boop

Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, Boop. ^^ I'm working on it.



Reviewer: arundeep216   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2012 1:17 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

I loved it!! I keep on being amazed by the fact that u give equal importance, focus and sincerity to all your fics (which are many ) and cobtinue to give an all star performance. Well done and keep it up.



Reviewer: BleedingClaw   Signed   [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2012 11:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

I don't know why I never read this earlier, still it seems like a great one already. I can't wait to read more! ^^

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. :D



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2012 4:17 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

I thought Kouga was bad, but compared to his father, he's an angel! I can't believe there's someone worse than him. I hope the mayor isn't going to support Logan's proposal of destroying the forest. All those poor animals and trees, not to mention IY and Kags! =(
And I wish Kagome didn't get scared. Inuyasha was just trying to love her. Gah! I have to keep telling myself that it'll all work out. But that last sentence was so sad...

Da Grrrl Says: LMAO! @ I can't believe there's someone worse than him.

OMG, that caught me by surprise and guffawed! Funny stuff.

Well, people fail to understand -when they read this fic- that Kagome still doesn't know what InuYasha is. She's accepting, but she's also human and humans tend to fear what they don't understand, especially in a situation like that.

I don't think y'all realize that she was asking him to stop before he started to change -he just couldn't hear anything beyond his youkai. At this point, she's terrified because he's going too far (i.e. close to rape) AND he's turning into what essentially looks like a monster.

Who wouldn't be scared of that?



Reviewer: dbzmastergal   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2012 6:39 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

o no so sad, it was going so well for them :( another well done chappie inugrrl. Can't wait for more.



Reviewer: shexshe   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2012 10:36 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Loved this! Can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: shexshe   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2012 10:15 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

Nice job!



Reviewer: MrGrounder   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2012 11:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

Sweet first chapter. Is this set in the same time as the Feudal Era, or a different time?

Also, the title reminds me of a Peter Gabriel song. Look up "In Your Eyes" on YouTube; you might like it.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! This is actually alternate universe, so nope -no Feudal Era stuff. :D And I'm very familiar with that song -it's awesome, as is Peter Gabriel. ^^



Reviewer: Kathy02   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2012 2:24 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

this story is simply magical especially the parts when inu and kagome where together.. it makes me feel giddy inside. it was so cute.. and then there was the angst! hehehehhe.. you really know how to let you readers stay tuned!
thanks again for allowing me to read you work!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank YOU for all of the nice reviews; I appreciate them and I'm happy you still enjoy my stories so much. <3



Reviewer: Eris of Chaos   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2012 10:54 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Wow the ending to of this chapter made me cry. Really well done chapter.

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, sorry about that. >.< But thank you!



Reviewer: nothingreally   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2012 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Great chapter, definitely wasn't expecting the angst, actually. But I like the sense of worlds starting to collide, regarding the impact of Inuyasha's demon side on their relationship and that there are people in favor of obliterating the forest altogether for profitable opportunities. On a side note, Kouga is a much better guy in this fic than in the series, don't find myself rooting for him very often, haha. Thank you for taking the time to update this story, it's one of my favorites :)



Reviewer: ZachtheHurricane   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2012 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Though I sorta understand Kagome's reaction, I sorta wish this chapter wasn't so angsty. I wish she just rolled up a newspaper, bopped him on the nose, went bad dog, you don't get that treat yet, and went on with trying to help him find himself. That said, I still loved the update. Sorry for the late review, life's been hectic.

Da Grrrl Says: Zach! ^^ I actually owe you some e-mail, but I'm behind on stuff these days. Don't worry about the late review -it's fine. Read when you can read; it'll still be here. :)

LOL @ bad dog. That made me laugh! But you should be warned (Though, you should already know) that I write angst, not fluff. I think those who follow this one have been spoiled because I've written almost zero angst, but that isn't my forte -by a long shot. I'm actually shocked that I've held up this long without writing my beloved angst. So, consider it a good thing that I didn't take it much, muuuuch farther (because I really could have and would have LOVED to do so!). XD



Reviewer: yma   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2012 1:21 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

This story has such a magical feel to it! I keep picturing sunlight streaming through the trees, making dewy blossoms sparkle and Inuyasha and Kagome a bit hazy, like a dream. Its like a real fairytale. So far its very different from your other work, I love how dynamic you are - Do you write professionally? If not you should! You have some amazing skills! Love it so far!!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! Nope, I'm no professional. I write only because I love InuYasha and like entertaining my readers. I'm happy you're enjoying this story so much! It means a lot. I don't update as much anymore, so I really appreciate it when my readers take a minute to let me know that they still appreciate my offerings. :D



Reviewer: Jenn   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2012 8:50 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

oh poor Inuyasha his frustration and inability to communicate rips at my heart! Poor thing language barriers are tough but to not be able to communicate with the one person who you want to well it's heartbreaking. I shed more than a few tears reading this chapter. That's one of the most remarkable things about your writing is how you can draw out the emotions of your reader! Thanks for all your hard work!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2012 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Omg. I haven't had the time to read anything you've updated in sooo long that I was dyingg! I have an exam bright and early tomorrow morning but seeing that this was updated was pretty much the highlight of my day. I'm soo curious how the whole Doc Hiro meddling/Kouga story will play out and end up affecting Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship. I love how much attention you actually give to the "side" characters in your stories in general. Honestly, I kind of like Kouga (minus the whole hunter thing) in this story because he's really well-written and while I'm definitely not rooting for Kagome-Kouga, he becomes a better character in my eyes each time I read about it. And I feel really bad for Inuyasha T.T! It seems like nothing went his way this chapter, and I was so torn when Kagome told him to get out at the end :(. I really want them to be happy together forever (yay for naive, happy optimism!), but I totally understood why she was scared when Inuyasha transformed so quickly. I guess I'll just have to imagine a happy ending to this chapter haha or else my heart shall be terribly sore through my exam tomorrow. Anyway, lovely chapter as always and please update again soon!



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2012 12:12 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Ohhhh noooo!!! So much went wrong in this chapter! Crazy, but I like this Kouga. Though his dad is an ass. I am so freaked out by how her lost control though. Oh Kagome must be terrified. And confused. So many new developments on this chapter. Great update and as always I'm excited for more!



Reviewer: soliea0death   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2012 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

No no no, don't run away Inu... God that's such a way to end it! I felt like crying on some parts. It was hard enough for him with the language barriers and all, now he's got the 'monster face' that scared Kagome, and just breaking his heart more. :'( Well, I can understand Kagome being scared, he just got a little too excited. The question is would he dare to come back, or would Kagome even try to look for him? Then there's the issue with Lupine, senior. I just know the next update will be worth the wait.



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2012 10:04 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Nooo! Not good. Just when everything was falling into place. Ack!! First the plan to wipe out the forest, and then Inu turns full demon on Kagome???

I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the great reviews! They're always a joy to read! ^^ And yesh, Yashie went full demon on her and she used her 'animal instincts' on him (Kinda like her reaction to the bear cub in that earlier chapter). But hopefully soon, you'll get to see the aftermath. :D



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