Date: September 30, 2012 9:41 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate
Uh oh... Kouga trouble ensuing. Great chapter!
I can't believe you used the word balderdash... Lol awesome.
Date: September 30, 2012 9:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times
That was so sweet! It ended too soon, don't keep us waiting too long :). What are you up to nowadays?
Date: September 29, 2012 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.
The way you show how Inuyasha learned his important life lessens as a child through memories of his mother is really amazing. You do it very well and it always comes at a perfect moment in the chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2012 10:49 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...
One of the things I love about this story is how much is told before, and how much progresses between Inu and Kagome before they even meet. I think it gives the characters much for depth andthe reader a much deeper insight to the plot. Love it :)
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2012 10:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times
Ok... I'm honestly not even lying. This was another story that was on my mind. I don't think I ever got far into it though. Look at what you've done now... Gotten me back into the fandom. *sigh* guess that means Jeremy's not gonna get a lot of work done anytime soon :p
As for the story, I love this one.. I've always wanted a wolf. Lol. Great first chapter too. Say a lot but doesn't give away much. Great stuff :)
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2012 12:00 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate
I had to refresh myself before I read the new chapter. Right now, things could go either way, I think. Maybe he'll understand her position, and that she only wants to help, then again, she is very naive, and has no idea about Kouga... At least I don't think she does.
Date: September 27, 2012 7:25 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
I haven't been able to sit down and read any of your updates until now but i'm glad that i had three chapters. I love your writing, and i truly do appreciate all that you've done in the last seven(!?) years. hope you have a good week/day/month, babe!
[Report This]Date: September 27, 2012 4:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
I feel bad for Inuyasha. He tries so hard and his past tortures him. I hope Kagome comforts him.
Date: September 26, 2012 3:50 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
In all honesty took me 2 days to finally finish reading the new chappie for this fic... Let's blame work for that, lol. And another note I'm glad taht I stumbbled upon your fics cause I've been, well my work has really been not that good so this was a better time for me to escape, relax and an unwinding zone for me. Thanks for that :)
Ok enough about that..., this chappie got me off guard at the end. I totally want to know what will happen and how things will turn out between inu and kags. Glad that it's keeping me in suspense!!! And can't wait to read more on the Kouga part, as well.
Thanks again for the reading and happy writting. Till next time!
[Report This]Date: September 26, 2012 10:37 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Buaaaaaaaaaaaa! I'm crying, girl! I'm crying! ahhhhhhhhhhhh! nice very nice! I'm speachless. You are the maestro! :D
[Report This]Date: September 25, 2012 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: September 25, 2012 6:53 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Oh, poor Inuyasha! I feel so bad for him. And for Kagome. She's awfully brave to simply order him to go home. Glad he pulled back in time. I wonder what she'll decide to do about this. So sad that they can't communicate very well. Have to wonder what the mayor will do and what will happen with the forest.
Date: September 24, 2012 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Great chapter, can't wait for the next update :)
Date: September 24, 2012 1:27 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Oh my goodness, what a fantastic chapter. My heart goes out to him, lord knows how frightening that was for both him and Kagome. I love these two and their portrayal of 'beauty and the beast'esque characteristics. But this is even better because they are both learning from each other. I hope she realizes that it was out of his control and comes to accept him (something tells me she will ^_-).
And how are you Kiki? The creative juices have been flowing well I see. As for me, I'm alright. Trying to get a job in this sucky economy and studying to take my MCAT for 2013, wish me luck!
Date: September 22, 2012 7:51 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Great chapter the ending was kinda sad tho but I can tell this is going to be a good one.
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2012 6:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
T___T awww... Poor InuYasha... I just wanted to hold him there... And Kagome... I can and can't understand why she would be afraid... Then back to Kouga's father... There is going to be some hell to pay later on... Update soon!
Date: September 21, 2012 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
I'm really happy you updated!! the last time you did, was a long time ago. can't wait for the next chapter :D
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2012 8:39 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Boy! After The Knife of Romance, I thought, "This is going to be HOOOOTTTT! I need to get comfy..." and then a 180! *LOL* Can't wait for the next update! :)
Da Grrrl Says: LOLOL!
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2012 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Thank you for putting so much love and feeling into this update. It was worth the wait. The added bonus was seeing the 'true' villain and foreshadowing the upcoming angst. Much appreciated! This story has so much heart, depth and emotion.
Da Grrrl Says: Treece!! Hey, Chica, how are ya?? I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Writing has been hard lately, but I'm really trying to get back into the swing if things. This chapter (I feel) is finally making the story move and showing *some* of the obstacles, but I also dropped a hint that will become important later -and I'm happy to see that no one has figured it out yet. Haha! Wish me luck -I'd like to update this again I the very near future. :D
Date: September 21, 2012 3:59 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
oh no! what a twist so suddenly when I almost thought there was a lemon coming XD ah well, this isn't the first time you've surprised me like this. I feel so sorry for Inuyasha, after all this beast side of him must scare him even more than Kagome now. But who said their relationship was going to be easy anyway? I hope Kagome will go after him soon though :(
Great chapter like always~
Da Grrrl Says: Hehe... Naw, no cigar! But I kinda thought you guys would figure out that something was wrong right away. InuYasha isn't aggressive; he's very shy and self-conscious. He would never take Kagome by force, and even though -in his mind- he wasn't being forceful, he still wasn't acting like his normal self. But more will be explained in the next chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: September 21, 2012 9:15 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Awww, poor Inuyasha. Sometimes I want to smack Kagome. *sigh* Well, Yash can always come to my place and go all demonic on me anytime lol Thanks for another great update!
Da Grrrl Says: LOL. Stop beating on that girl! XD She couldn't help being shocked; remember, she knows about his hanyou/human sides, but she's never seen his demon side, which obviously likes to play when he's highly aroused. AND that side looks a lot different from his normally prettyful self, especially his eyes, which are her weakness. She was shocked, and the fact that he couldn't "hear" her asking him to stop made the situation worse. But, more will be explained later... XD
Date: September 21, 2012 8:38 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
All I can say is :( :( :( :(!!!!!!!!
Poor Inuysasha! Poor Kagome!
I'm so glad you're writing again grrrl ;)
Date: September 20, 2012 11:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
God I adore this story. It's just simply amazing. I've read the chapters again and again and it never fail to bring out all the possible emotions a person can feel. It's a wonderful thing :). Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2012 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
Oh damn O.O Yet another twist I don't think I could have ever seen coming. Everything before that was beast cute, though - they always are in this fic, so the touch of angst is perfect. Can't wait to see how they work through this one now that Kagome's seen a completely different and scarier side of InuYasha and left him confused and probably really hurt. Such a MESS, but...
They're precious. Even their angst is precious in this story xD Not so much the ending, but when IY got frustrated about not being able to say what he wanted to say - my heart melted. And Doc Hiro is precious, too! Adorable scene with his wife and HIM being the one meddling and trying to play cupid. I love these characters. They're so simple and sweet. Even *le gasp* KOUGA doesn't seem so bad (though Logan is definitely bad news bears). Interesting! :D
Da Grrrl Says: AMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!
I meant to answer your review on KoR, too, cause it twas awesomesauce! I'll get to it, though. My hands KEEP me slow. >.< I'm so glad you liked this one, tho! I struggled with it a bit, especially near the end. I wanted that scene to be as close to what I envisioned as possible, which can be frustrating when shit won't cooperate... >.>
But I was fairly satisfied with what I was able to churn out. I may update this one sooner rather than later just because it's on my mind right now, but yeah. They're in a mess, but now she's seen EVERY side of him, so she knows what she's fully getting. There's far too much fluff in this fic for me, which makes it hard to pen, but I'm pushing through somehow. >.< LOL @ bad news bears!
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2012 8:18 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars
InuYasha, no, come back! D: I want to cry for him here at the end. But, the angst was a nice touch.
And as always we have received yet another amazing update. I can't wait for the next one.
PS. Get some sleep, you deserve it!