[Report This]Date: July 14, 2012 1:36 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
Ahh, my heart is breaking for Inuyasha, Kagome, and Jaden-who, by the way, is really adorable and innocent and sweet :)
This is some seriously good angst so far, so I'll take my teary-eyed self to the next chapter now!
Date: June 16, 2012 6:39 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
Wow, man I'm glad they patched things up!
Date: June 12, 2012 12:32 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
Wow! This is intense!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
I love this chapter, honestly.
I love that Kagome decides she actually wants to try to make their marriage work and accept Jaden as her own.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2012 11:33 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: The Roads That Lead Us Home
hell yeah!this is you babe and that's why i love your mind!
Date: May 09, 2012 3:16 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
uh oh ...hmmmm
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2012 8:18 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
HE HAS A KID!!!!!! Poor Kagome!!!
:(
[Report This]Date: April 03, 2012 10:36 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: The Roads That Lead Us Home
That was a really good story. It made me laugh, cry, and go all stary eye at the love they have for each other. Thumbs up!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
AT the end of my other review there was a mistake I meant for it to be:PLEASE LET ONE OF THE MOTHER'S CATCH HIM. I REPEAT. PLEASE LET ONE OF THE MOTHERS CATCH HIM.
Date: March 15, 2012 5:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
I have to say with all the Inuyasha stories I read, this is one that I actually clapped at the end.
The way you made a complete circle with Kagome not wanting to adopt yet adopting Jaden at the end made me cry.
You handeled the situation perfectly. You didn't make it an Inuyasha bashing fic nor did you make Kagome easliy accept it and go on with her life. You showed their ups and downs their slow and sometime backwards steps of healing.
In this story you made their love real.A person who never read Inuyasha could understand. You didn't depend on the reader's knowledge of the series to understand their connection.And it made me love this story more.
I have to admit I kinda hated kagome for the first few chapters. But now I can empathize that she didn't want to adopt and wanted a baby of her own. And seeing her husband cheat during her worst time...I have to admit that was strength on her part.
The way you did Jaden was wonderful.His actions were that of an actual two year old and I loved that you didn't depend on him as much to fix inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship as their own feelings.He was a cute little character that you just wanted to hug.
If anything I have to say against is inuyasha's actions. Some actions can seem OOC at times, but due to him being human and a new father I can seen the reason behind the changes.
All and all I loved this story I can see it was delt with the most care.Again I clapped at the end.Thank you for the story. :)
Date: March 15, 2012 5:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
good chappie. very sad.
Date: March 15, 2012 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Wow that was really sad. (I was tearing up when the doctor said that she couldn't have kids) I can't wait to find out what happens
Date: March 15, 2012 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
I'm really curious to see how this one pans out. Good so far though.
Date: March 15, 2012 5:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
wow, I love your stories. and always so much drama *grins* looking forward to your next chapter :) bbye
Date: March 15, 2012 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Really good chapter...almost in tears right now. Great start...going to thenxt one now.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 15, 2012 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
So InuYasha and Kikyou had a kid? Kagome's not going to be happy...can't wait to find out what happens!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
*sniff sniff* oh my goodness.. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I swear you have to be my most favorite Author of all. Everything you've written brings either a smile to my face or tears down my face. Have you ever thought of writing an original story and submitting it to different writing contests? There is money to be had in that, and I think you could win. You have the talent. If you're interested, I could give you a link to many different contests. Keep up the great work!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
=O
That's how my face looks right now.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 15, 2012 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
I love it! But it was so sad, I was in tears... My favorite line has to be "'I'll let you leave,' InuYasha said sadly. 'But I'll never let you go.'" By that time I was crying my eyes out. It's the perfect line, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
dude this is too good. where did you steal this from. joke. i really like it so please update soon. cuz even though i haven't finished reading whats already here I can read fast an i soon finish so please have another ready for me. thanks for the experience. and good luck with writing
Date: March 15, 2012 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
oh! Kagome better get her head out of her arse and see the blessing that is a child soon! Or else I'ma gonna step into this story and have some strong words with her! lol it's angsty and poor Jaden. Kikyou just wanted to give him a better home. I can't believe Inuyasha got so drunk as to sleep with her, I was hoping it was all a misunderstanding. But damn. *sigh* Can't you go back and make Inuyasha a sperm donor or something? I hope hope hope Kagome forgives him, and see's Jaden as a blessing in disguise. Isn't it better to have a child in your life, even if it isn't yours, then to not have a child at all? *sigh* Keep up the good work!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
*sniff sniff* this is so cool! *sniff* i wish they get back together and have a kid! poor inuyasha! *sniff* cool story!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
This broke my heart...I loved Miroku in this! Poor Inuyasha...that last part killed me...can't wait to read more!
Date: March 15, 2012 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
this is seriously one of the best stories ive ever read. i can already see this as a movie. you should publish your stories, i would definately pay to read your writing. i put down harry potter to read this!
only once before have i read such a gripping fanfic that really pulled me in. that story had nearlt 70 chapters and yours has only 3 so far!
im so, so glad i found this story. update please! ill be monitoring my email by the hour! haha. take your time! no rush.
+ favorite stories list, + favorite.. everything.
Date: March 15, 2012 5:11 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
This chapter almost had me in tears...
I feel so bad for Kagome! I mean...that sucks. I hope everything works out for them...
Good chapter.
**ShortieJ**