Date: March 15, 2012 4:52 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
And this chapter DID have me in tears...
Great one.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 15, 2012 4:52 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
This story is so...I can't even begin to describe it. I love it, and can't wait to read more. Once again, I was in tears. Please update soon!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:50 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
OMG that was probably the most emotional scene I've ever read in fanfiction. *bowes in awe* This fic is great!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
Call me suspicious but I don't really think that Jayden is Inuyasha's child. I mean if he did get it on with Kikyo, he would have remembered at least some little thing. For some reason the scene where he met Kikyo while she was crying is off somehow...of course it could just be my imagination.
Date: March 15, 2012 4:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
aw that was so sweet what inuyasha did at the mall and jaden is so innocent but still looking at him would hurt me,remind me of his betrayal but still i think she should give him one more chance and cant wait for chapter 5
Date: March 15, 2012 4:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
*sobs brokenly* Poor Inuyasha, poor Jaden, Poor Kagome! I hope that child is a miracle worker, because Inuyasha needs a miracle. I hope to god, that Kagome doesn't turn away that child. I might not ever forgive her, if she does.
Date: March 15, 2012 4:47 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
OMG! *cries* !yes! I'm crying! Screw you if you think I'm wierd! I luv this story! update soon
Date: March 15, 2012 4:47 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
There is so much drama in this story! It's awesome! Inuyasha saying "Baby" is one thing... but "muffin" is a little harder to picture... Lol. And begging in front of Kagome in a Taco Bell is really sweet and unexpected! Very nice! I shall continue reading!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:46 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
Such a great story..adding this my story alert and favorites.
Date: March 15, 2012 4:46 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
OH man! This had me in tears! Poor Inuyasha! I loved Jaden...and I totally love Miroku in this! Can't wait to read more!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: There's no "I" in "We".
That was really good! I laughed so hard at the end...keep up the great work!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:36 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: There's no "I" in "We".
omg i feel SO INCREDIBLY bad for jaden i mean seriously he had to have seen kagome cause he said bye to her
Date: March 15, 2012 4:36 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: There's no "I" in "We".
lol...damn...that was good...I knew he was gonna walk in there! :) Can't wait to read more!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:35 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: There's no "I" in "We".
Aw, Kagome finally got her head out of her A$$. sheesh. LoL good chapter, I can't wait for more. I want to see them as a family so badly.
Date: March 15, 2012 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: There's no "I" in "We".
Great chapter! Wow...the walking in on the sex thing...omg. Haha. Makes me shutter at memories I have of my one time of children walking in...
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 15, 2012 4:31 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
So...beginning of the chapter...
I was in tears basically. I couldn't believe it. I mean, I understood that Kagome needed to get that out of her system, because she hadn't.
Then InuYasha and Jaden had to hear that? It was like, "Shit."
AND then..InuYasha and Jaden went to the hotel...and I was in even more tears.
When the end came it was like, "Thank the gods. I'm so glad that they're going to try again..." Well, more like Kagome was going to try again since InuYasha had been trying for so long.
I'm glad. The ending had me smiling.
GREAT CHAPTER!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 15, 2012 4:29 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
sniff sniff this story is so GOOD! drama, romance, everything! gorgeous story! update soon!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:28 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
YAY!SHES GIVING JADEN A CHANCE!^^for a second there i really thought inuyasha was going to leave her!it made me want to cry!:(
Date: March 15, 2012 4:28 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
lots of drama... very intense emotions... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
Date: March 15, 2012 4:27 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
I love your story! It really is heartbreaking for Kagome but I'm glad that she's trying to accept Jaden bit by bit. I really hope things will work out in the end!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:27 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
This story is so sad and i love her so much for it. I hope you're going to continue.
Date: March 15, 2012 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
damn these tears rolling down my face. What a perfectly good angsty chapter. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha work out their differences. How can she be blind to what she has, right in front of her face? And why is it so friggin obvious to the readers? LOL Great Chapter, keep it up!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
aw, happy ending. but wait, it's not complete...what more twists and turns are ya gonna add now to your plot? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! .
Kimiko =D
Date: March 15, 2012 4:25 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
really good ending!
Date: March 15, 2012 4:25 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
OH MY GOD! Finally! This brought tears to my eyes...it's just so painful..reading both sides...and reading about Miroku and Sango too! Man..I love this story...I'm normally not a fan of angst, but this one is definitely one of my favorites...can't wait to read more!