Date: November 07, 2011 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
I read it three times. In a row. For real. If I'm not mistaken, I would have to say by this that you've ALWAYS had a dark side. =p
Keep doin' what you do.
Date: November 07, 2011 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Awesome fiction, loved it! Not too sappy and just enough steam
Date: November 07, 2011 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Oh, wow! I'm still reeling. That was red-hot, white and blue - if that makes any sense to you. :D *fans self* Fantastic stuff! I love how you ended it:
"The master had become the servant."
Heheh... That was so true. :D
I looked for this on your site. I couldn't find it. Guess I'm just dumb. *shrugs* Got to go, sis. *hugs* Talk later.
Date: November 07, 2011 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
SEXY!
Date: November 07, 2011 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Loved the last line. This was...wow...I don't even know how to say it at the moment. lol
~Strawberry-Ringo
Date: November 07, 2011 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
lol. very good. a32;
Date: November 07, 2011 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
This one was very good too-no need to repeat myself. ^^
I really enjoy your writing style! You're talented.
Date: November 07, 2011 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Oh WOW! -fans self- That was... that was... um... Amazing. HOT. um I really enjoy your writting style, its great.
Date: November 07, 2011 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Yum.
Date: November 07, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
...:#*! this was really really really really realy discriptive! this was a really good one shot and i loved the last line. i hope to read more stories from you! :#)
Date: November 07, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
loved!
Date: November 07, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
well damn girl. did the cpu burn up with this one!
[Report This]Date: February 24, 2009 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Nope, it's most definitely not inside the box! *giggles* Sorreee! I giggled my way through this but for all the right reasons. I just love it. Thanks for sending me on the link, sis. *hugs* Now I'd better get to my own smut fic before I go to bed. Squeee! I'm very inspired.
Date: December 18, 2008 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
There is only one who can make Inu & Kags so hott and sexy and that be Da Grrrl. The one and only InuGrrrl.....
Author's Response: Kid Sissy!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs* Thanks for popping in! I've been meaning to drop you some mail for almost a week now, but I'm effin sick and dealing with this xmas thing. But when it's over, I'm definitely gonna hit you up. <3
Date: April 13, 2008 9:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
oh kami...that was one of the sexiest fics i have ever read, from any fandom. DAMN! i need a cigarette now.
Author's Response: Whoa. Thank you VERY much. I consider this one of my tamer sex scenes, but I wanted to try something different. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!!
[Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 1:17 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Damn. You know how to turn a girl on; that's a fact.
This was considerably tamer than your usual, but it was damn hot nonetheless. I loved the last paragraph - you and your implications, there's always at least one in there. *shakes head* haha.
Again, song choice. Perfect. =D Can I just steal you? Or ... at least your music library? hehe.
Another impeccable triumph under your belt. (=
-Claire
Author's Response: Claire! Thanks for the review. ^^ Yesh, much much tamer than my usual smut. I was going for sensual as opposed to dirty and ended up with this. I actually like it, though. I get sick of writing lemons like you wouldn't believe >.> so I'm experiemnting with letting the reader imagine what they want so that I can get a break. And you liked the song! That's awesome. :P It's originally by Marvin Gaye, but Madonna remade it, and since it inspired the fic, I threw it in. I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 3:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
love it!love it!love it!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 05, 2007 10:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
i love your writing! You have an amazing way to use words that everyone can understand to create huge and powerful emotions on a computer screen! from now on i'll be reiviewing as Aztec, just fyi.
Author's Response: Hey, Aztec!! Thanks so much, really, it means a lot. ^_^ This one was such a quickie, and not my usual hentai, but I was trying to give a gift that wasn't just a ball of vulgarity, lol. I'm happy you liked it!!
Date: October 05, 2007 3:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
:O, nine days. and you still havent updated : (
Author's Response: I know >.< I'm sorry. I've had work and been under the weather. This story, however, is a oneshot so there won't be a new chappie for it. I do hope to have other fics updated soon tho.
Date: September 29, 2007 8:03 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
I love it
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 28, 2007 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
heeeey! i bet u miss meh huh huh? XD lolz
well amma pretend like i dont kno who the guy n girl is and put me and inu in it =p, lolz or some1 else *winks*
Kk, it's the weekend and i'm pooped out and then when i realized u got a new fic and jus had to run to it bfore the updation of ever after XD It reminded me of the club fic u wrote with "suga" aka kagome... then the club reminded me of the one with those drug lords...uhh i think it was Money, Power and Respect or sumn ?? Now... any soon updates for those? *puppy eyes* lolz
Oh well... *sigh* I love this so much! you're writing style is jus *wow* I dont see myself eva coming as good as u v.v wellz. *huggle* awesome update, i bet you're friend cant stop thanking u =p
now... of to Ever after...
Author's Response: Bubbles! How have you been, girl? Yesh, teh fic is Money, Power, Respect and I've actually been working on that one, Pretty Brown Eyes, Truce Colors, and Ever After, so there should be some decent updates coming. You know, you humble me, girlfriend. I love to write, but I have no illusions about being great. I just throw it out there and hope people like it. So, *hugs* thanks for liking it! ^_^
[Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Whew... haunting, sensual... erotic.
... and then some.
Now, I wonder who the couple may be.. hmm... :D
Very awexcellent, Onna.
And Happy Birthday again Keiko. Hope it wasa good one Hun. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, Onnamaru! Somehow I knew you'd like this one, you romantic you!
Date: September 27, 2007 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
woaaaa Kiki-neechan!! so hot.... sooo hott!!! XD
and Happy b-lated bday to keiko-chan too -.- (ashamed)
Author's Response: Thanks Maria-nee-chan. It was such a quickie, because as usual, I was late. But I liked the subtlety, yes?rnThere's only so many times you can drag through every detail. Sometimes people should just use their imagination, lol.
Date: September 27, 2007 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
I like it very much! What a wonderful birthday present for Keiko-chan! I think that this is one of your most "mature" lemons. Not just plain raunch, but a sexy, sensual sex scene. :P Very very nice!
TLH
Author's Response: If anything, it was one of the "easiest" to write because of the song. It pretty much gave me the picture I wanted. Now, as for a mature lemon, I wouldn't call it that. It was just more "ff.net" than Absolution. Thanks, Tina! ^^
Date: September 27, 2007 3:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Master and His Game.
Only one word, ‘hot!’ You really know how to put it on, and take it off. That was a really nice one shot! Very hot, steamy, and sultrier. The ending was a real thinker. I had to read the last line a few times before I clued into it. Hehe. The song fit perfectly and everything was beautiful! Keep up the good work. P.s. I don’t want Ever After to end. It’s a really nice short story enough though you said it was going to be a short story. It’s very in-depth and an attention grabber.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nat. ^^ I'm happy you liked it. And yeah, E.A. is going to remain a short story, but it's a fun write. I hope to update it soon.