Date: July 31, 2011 3:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
*Sobs* That was...so...so...beautiful! *Cries* Really! I am seriously crying! Perhaps I am just really emotional today but wow...there is so much passion in your writing! Not the lovey-dovey passion (yet!) just the kind of passion that shows that the writer really likes the story. Kagome is adorable and Inuyasha is such a sweety! Shh! Don't tell him I said that, he'll just deny it! I want an angel like Inuyasha! Where can I find one? Omigosh, I am soooooo hooked. I won't be surprised if I end up liking this one more than Edge! *Gasp* I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story *Feeling teary eyed but getting warm fuzzy feelings too* Please update this story soon, my dear Kiki. That's probably it for tonight, I have to go and do some work. But I'll read Fatality and Crucify tomorrow :D Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 31, 2011 3:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
SQUEEE! inu's a sweety kins! gods above (not that's not a pun) i'm going to be hooked on this. the art, the prologue, the emotions, sigh. i'm gonna read it again! i totally agree with jen on where i got hooked. just the description would have drawn me in!
Date: July 31, 2011 3:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
"We are warned of what could happen if we defy the rules. In the blink of her blue eyes, I broke every single one of them."
Just that summary had me hooked! Holy crap! What can I say! I'm an so psyched about this story and this prologue has me
so excited. It's awesome and I want more already!!! (I kept picturing Ilsa's art when I was reading). This story is going to rawk!
Off to the next update!! Keep 'em coming girl!
Date: July 10, 2011 7:17 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
There are not words to describe the talent you have for writing inuyasha stories. I am not trying to brown nose or anything, I'm just stating a fact. Your fanfics are amazing.
Date: June 26, 2011 1:52 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
oh god oh god oh god oh god nonononono inuyasha inuyasha inuyasha don't break the bond don't break the bond ack! my heart is breaking for inuyasha and kagome right now. hopefully something will bring them back together? *fingers crossed*
This story is amazing! It's actually my favorite out of all Inuyasha stories I've read.
Date: June 26, 2011 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
This brought tears to my eyes. I actually really love Kikyo in this, but my heart just screams for Inuyasha to be with Kagome. I just want to say that you are truly a talented writer. I mean, the best Inuyasha writer out there. Seriously. You have so many amazing ideas and you make them stories and they just blow my mind. No one writes like you. Your characters are all witty and every chapter is just so perfect. I honestly enjoy reading your stories so much. If they aren't perfection, I dont' know what is! :) You are such a gifted writer and I have so much more to say, but I really just don't know how to put them into words, to say how much I appreciate your gift of writing. Your stories are all original and just oh my god. I've never appreciated reading stories so much before in my life! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 24, 2011 5:02 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Another one read through and ready to review.. insomnia is good for something.. LOL!
Ok... can we say augst is the most major way -- don't mind misspellings (insomnia) (>_<)! woman you have such a way to make us feel sorrow and pain.. I feel so sorry for Yash and Gome. But the update has me wondering where you are going to take this and how they end up together..
thanks for sharing it with us. tootles!
Date: June 21, 2011 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Consume the Fight in Me
i wish miroku was real...good gracious....
Date: June 21, 2011 8:10 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Kiss in the Shape of a Bullet
damn...Inuyasha dont take "love" as a game...he meant that ish...
Date: June 21, 2011 8:10 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Kiss in the Shape of a Bullet
damn...Inuyasha dont take "love" as a game...he meant that ish...
Date: June 21, 2011 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Bleeding Heart...
quickly becoming a new favorite
Date: June 21, 2011 12:59 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Points of Authority
this is really drawing me in...excellent work!
Date: June 21, 2011 12:05 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Castles in the Sky
the imagery of these angels and Heaven is beautiful.
Date: June 21, 2011 11:42 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
this would make an awesome movie!
Date: June 19, 2011 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Hey Grrrl,
Omg I can't believe that Inu didn't take the opportunity to be with Kags for 2 whole weeks!!! I was surprised. I'm still hoping though. *Keeps fingers crossed*.
Hope you're doing good. I was happy to see Abi open and then had to get my pc fixed on that day too. So I'm using my fiances iPhone to read and I'm not used to write a review on this thing lol.
Alrighty, I'm off to read and review the next updated chapters.
[Report This]Date: June 19, 2011 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
I love this story. It is deffinately a one of a kind and I can't wait for the next update.
I'm so jealous of your skills. I wish I had the ability to create something like this.
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2011 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Poor guy. That exchange between him and Sesshomaru was so sweet and sad - how he felt he disgraced him, and how Sessh would do anything for him. This story is so beautifully bittersweet. I love it. Don't love that InuYasha passed up time with Kagome and went to stand by Kikyou >.> but the deal Sessh offered him sounded shady. I think our boy could do some damage in 14 days, but the consequences of not being able to make his case OR not being able to return to Earth afterwards would definitely hurt 10x worse if he got a taste of being near her. Would be interesting to see what his next move is then. Maybe he changes his mind? Or gets offered something better? I'm so excited to see if/how InuYasha will do the impossible to get near Hikari.
But while he's confined to heaven, its nice to see that the Elite forever and always have his back (okay, and that's why I grudgingly respect that he feels like shit for what happened to Kikyou and is making all these sacrifices, like "freeing" Kagome, to make up for how he feels he disgraced everyone). Miroku especially. I loved that his reaction as soon IY told him to take over was to refuse the position, and how he's the one who'll hopefully take care of Kagome.
Shouldn't be too hard, considering he visits Earth regularly to molest Sango xD
About Rin, that girls night with her and Yura was SO fun to read. Yura's hilarious and I love how she dragged all the juicy details about Rin's dream guy out of her - even though I suspect the Sessh promising instructions on how she can meet him isn't really Sesshomaru. Sinister, but really exciting/interesting stuff! I love how this one always leaved me on the edge of my seat and how every chapter has a shocking twist that I never see coming.
Oh, and the Battalion! Am-heh is fucking creepy, but I like that he's a wildcard and wonder what it'll all mean for Kagura and her plans, and how Naraku being clued in to them will affect her.
~ Am :D
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2011 10:09 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Okay so imagine my flippin' shock when I went to the Abi homepage and saw the shitload of updates! lol I'm so damn excited!!!
Wow, I had no clue that there were so many ways to say 'Wet dreams' lol. Of course my perv mind understood 'Faucet Fantasies....has enough of 'em...heehee I tell you, my mind is my worst enemy when I'm sleep >.>
Oooooh I love the brotherly bonding!! And it's so amazing how you can pull that off, especially with Sess' personality- not everyone can do that! I'm so glad that InuYasha is okay and out of Mathey!
Man, I know Kagura needs Am-heh's protection, but damn he fucked Abi up! Besides, I think she is underestimating this guy. I don't believe for one minute that a little sex will procure aid for herself...without dire consequences. I hope she has a back-up plan!
Oh yeah, and I understand InuYasha's hesitation, but now that Kagome's feeling something for an 'unknown being,' now's not the time to be unselfish!! LOL Though, I didn't think he was being selfish in the first place, just a bit misguided (considering his actions).
I'm so utterly curious as to how Rin and Sess will end up together! If Sess says there's a way, I suppose it'll be revealed in due time, huh?
OMG! I fucking love the new skin! Inu looks scrumdiddlyumptious!! Kudos to the artist! Ooh and totally lovin' the new playist (especially 'High For This Remix')!
Date: June 16, 2011 11:55 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
....sniff....This story is my all time favourite.....scuse me a sec (goddam EMPTY kleenex box).................Ok, I'm good -- and this chapter was amazing! <3
Thank you! (and take care!)
Rana ;)
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 11:52 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Oh my gawd. I can't believe he didn't want to go and be with her, but I guess after everything that happened, I can't blame him. I wonder what would make him go to her now? He'll die without her, I think. I can't wait to see what Kagura is up to, what her big plan is. I'm so sure it involves Kagome somehow. I think there has to be something really special about her, so that she was able to call Inuyasha to save her, and why she was still able to see him at four. I admire how you've written him releasing Kagome, it's very honorable. You've also made her so in tune with him for her whole life, that she's now feeling this horrid emptiness for the first time, it made her hyperventilate. Wow. Can she love him without really knowing him? You've revisited the notion a few times that they were made for each other, literally, and I don't think that could be any more true. Part of her soul was lost or severed because he decided to let her go? Oh, geeze I'm to the point of tears here! I am so invested in this story it's ridiculous I tell you! Oh oh ohoh and Rin! So he's posing as Sesshomaru in her dreams to make her do something irl? Wait until he finds out about that! I wonder what Miroku will do when he keeps visiting Sango...or I'm assuming he will, even after what happened with Inuyasha. He'll have to be checking on Kagome...hopefully that girl gets her head out of the clouds and ends her engagement with that possible demon! Anyway, as always, I love love love this story so much and you've delivered yet another amazing installment and I am so grateful for it! I hope your hands recuperate alright and you're able to (block withstanding!) update it again soon!
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
Oh my sweet baby jesus! Is Kikyou going to die? Is InuYasha finally going to be allowed to be on earth so his Hikari can see him? Who and what is Am-heh? He kinda scares the crap outta me! Did Sess really go up and get that order or did he forge it? Are they all going to go to earth? Will they be human if they do or just in disguise? GAH! This was so good I can't stop myself from reading the next chapter even though I should really really go to bed!!!
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 10:43 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
OMG, Ki, I just want to cry. Seriously. Did Yasha really HAVE to break their bond?! :( When Sess offered him the 2 weeks, I was like YES!! And then Yasha turned it down! I was like 'What the !!!' Poor, poor Yasha, he's so torn up with guilt right now that he's willing to sacrifice his love to make up for it. He's trying to play the hero and I want to shake him and tell him to stop it! (just 'cuz I want him to go see Kagome. NOW! LOL) I think at this point, the only one who can convince him to go is Kikyou. She's the one he's most guilt-ridden over and he'll stay be her side no matter what to make up for all the pain he's caused her. So she has to get better, so that she can relieve him of his guilt and let him go. She has to come to her own senses as well and let go of this unrequited love, for both their sakes. If she's that desperate to hold on to him, will she play on his remorse to keep him by her side? I really hope that she won't stoop to that level. Or will she be the ultimate friend and make him see reason and push him to go see his true love? Hmmm, I'm curious to see how it all plays out.
And ironically, Yash is feeling so guilty for loving a human and yet both Sess and Miroku are doing the same thing (and even worse 'cuz Yasha doesn't even touch Kagome!) I wonder what Yasha would think if he ever found out that his 'perfect' brother breaks the rules, too. :D
And as always, I love the scenes between the brothers. So, so sweet! And it's refreshing to see in a story, because most fics have them tearing into each other.
And LOL at the dialogue between Yura and Rin! Those 2 crack me up. Hide the liverwurst?! I've never heard it said that way before! LOL. Will Rin ever meet Sess? And if she does, will she ever be in for a big surprise, her perfect man come to life! But then, how will they have their happy ever after?
So many questions!! My inquiring mind wants to know! XD
LOVE, LOVE this story! Awesome chappie as always, sweets! <333333333
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Consume the Fight in Me
Well this is just a clusterdoodle chapter! Everything came down at once and I don't think it's gonna get better soon. Poor Inuyasha, so alone and full of shame, but he still doesn't regret Kagome. There is true love for you. It was absolutely wonderful that Kagome start to acknowledge the bond she feels with him, even if she hasn't really met him. Props to Sango for calling her out and telling her to follow her instincts, it's about time she does! Omg I am getting so freakin excited to read the updated chapter I can hardly stand it!
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 10:02 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: The Hand of Sorrow
Okay so I was doing good with Kagome until now. This is just stupid. She's so wound up in being a girlfriend and now fiancee that she nearly lost her best friend? That's balance of a young adult for ya! At least she's realizing that the people whose opinions she values will be less than thrilled with the engagement. I do think it's pretty fitting that she doesn't remember the proposal though. The brotherly bond definitely shines in this chapter, and how much shame InuYasha feels. It's nice that Miroku and Sess both can understand how he feels about Kagome to an extent.
Date: June 16, 2011 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
Amazing chapter, like always. The surprises keep coming Inugrrrl. It's never cliche'. I was so happy to see you update this story. It's my second favorite. I love it how devoted inuyasha is to Kagome. But now he rejected the offer to be with her! SAD. But that is something he felt he had to do. Very selfless of him. I feel storms also brewing and I can't wait to see what happens next. Happy aniverserity btw.
Continue to write but don't forget to rest your wrist!
~Lakodasmoon.~