Date: September 02, 2008 6:04 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
Not sesshomaru too!!!!! i feel so bad for kohaku.
Someone should totally throw you a "Welcome to the dark side" party
Author's Response: Hehe. I like parties!
Kohaku is in trouble now, eh? I should have the next chap up soon, and like this one, it will be short -no more than 1000 words. I'm hoping it will explain things a little more. :D
Date: September 02, 2008 5:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Brothers-in-Law
whoa.I never would have guessd this in a majillion years!!! inu's a child molester!what has the world come to? :/
i totally wanna know what's going on with him.
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Bobbie Joe! ^_^ I know, InuYasha is just awful, but I love his evil side -I really do.
Is that bad? xD
Date: September 02, 2008 11:00 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
Holy Momma! I'm drooling. Dayum. Gimme more, more, more. :P
Author's Response: 2 more chaps, I think, and then I'll be done.
It's like I'm savoring this fic >.< for shame!!
[Report This]Date: September 02, 2008 10:10 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Brothers-in-Law
Dayum, that was different but completely awesome! I skeet a you! LMAO I couldn't get all serious on you twice, you know dat O.~
Author's Response: LMAO! She skeets me!!! Oh snap! xD
rnAin't InuYasha dirty? >.>
Date: August 28, 2008 8:07 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
I bet Kohaku really wishes he had his pcsythe thingy 0.o
Poor kid.
But did we just get a glimpse into Yash's madness? IOW did Yash get put through similar abuse...by Sesshomaru?
Wow...this is so dark, so angsty...but so good that I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more, lol ;) Update when you can!
~Amber
Author's Response: Thanks! And you're preceptive. :D The next chapter will tell us a lot more about InuYasha and why he is the way he is. *ominous music plays*
[Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
*looks up sadly*
am sorry dear lord... but i jus had to read it again.. *sigh*
an addiction so strong... *shakes head* its like my medicane to keep my short peice of sanity in tack - even tho i live for being insane xD haha
oh btw - am sorry for the wrong thingy i had on ED *pouts* really my bad - i'll hope it doesnt happen again x_x
but yea....
I LOVE YAOI!!
and sesshy? so fucking hot!
inuyasha? hot fucking.. fuck!!!
all i can say for both of them is "i wish i was a guy and in this fic around them" =3 lmao
i really love it girl.. honestly... i kno u think am completely crazy... weird.. sick... i dont care!! lol.. i jus cant stop!!! hahaha
[Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 4:33 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
Contradiction will result in screams. Many.
Yes, yes, he was waiting for it... nothing! Lol. At some point here you'd figure Kohaku get sick of being used as such and fight back, but then again he haint got much of a choice ifin he wants Sango to be left alone.
Damn, you can really paint a sexy as all hell Inu, but an equally evil one as well!
Damn, you're good! :P Hugzzzzz...
Author's Response: Well, Yash isn't giving him a choice. He keeps Kohaku on a short leash by dangling Sango's safety in front of her. He's deliciously E V I L. Few can appreciate his evil in this because the surrounding situation is really uncomfortable. But it's to be expected Dark stories aren't for everyone, and they're dark for a reason. :) Thanks for reading, Onna. You always support me no matter what and it means everything. <33
[Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 9:26 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
The quote "fear and resitance will be but a distant memory"....just sent chills down my spine. Now I am not one to to interested in this kind of parring but Inugrrl u done it again...wonderful job..especially on making Inu so smexy and just an all around sexual deviant.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I don't usually go this dark in fiction, but it started as an experiment and a contest entry and just morphed into... this. LOL. But I'm glad you gave it a chance and actually enjoyed reading it. ^_^
[Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 10:20 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
you kno what i jus realize? o.O
2day is SUNDAY - again xDDDD lmao
Author's Response: It sure is! xD Oh, and congrats on the boyfriend. He better be treating you right!
[Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 10:19 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Brothers-in-Law: I Chose You.
hot fucking damn!!!
i cant stop giggling xD lol... really *fidgets* i'm on the edge of my seat! Sesshomaru is so fucking hot!!! *drools* damn... i mean *fans myself* FUCK!!! *squee* shit shit shit!!! gah- girl... GRRRL!! did i eva tell u that you r by FARRR my fav author?!?!
*shakes my head* When i say i love something i mean it.. and i LOVE yaoi.. fuck!! i cant stop cursing, giggling, imagining those guys fucking *faints* its like a touch of heaven while burning in hell... *jumps up n down with delight* gah!!! i must read MORE!!! this is... this is like... *goes insane* see how i go ova YAOI?!?! lol
my bf(yes i love saying that lol.. i got me a bf xD lol) he thinks am a sicko x_x but he still loves me!! lol.... damn kiki... i love you for writing stories, for being u and for writing yaoi yaoi YAOI!!! Dammit it damn!! its so short but the image... the feeling.. it all pulled me in n am still feeling it.. loving it!!! xDDD lmao
*exhale long and hard* ok.. i think am good now *gulps* yea... *drools*
kk, see how you're trying yuri n stuff like that... i wrote a new story - one-shot called 'I'll Love You Even In Death'... i'd really REALLY love a read n review from u *grins* its my first try at that type of plot, so i wanna kno what the grrrl thinks *grins* pwease?? *__* when eva u get the chance... =D its not that long xD
GO YAOI!!
you're the one that's love!! =D am glad u're continuing this *giggles like a crazy fucked up fangirl* LMAO
Author's Response: Hey Bubbles! Thanks for another wild-ass review! I'm glad you like it. I don't know why I want to continue this thing -I don't really write yaoi, shota, or rape, but it's just stuck in my head so I'm running with it. xD I actually did start your new story when I was by ED. I giggled when I saw the plot. I didn't get to finish, though, because as usual I had to work. -.- But I plan to finish it up this week and leave a proper review. :) Glad to see you updating!!
[Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 9:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Brothers-in-Law
Yesh! You went there, yea ya did! Lol. :P
And I did get it, yes I did! (am so proud of me, hehe) Kohaku being the only reason as to why he married Sango. The Dog! :P
And its only Kohaku that sees Inu as a demon? Kewl. Cuz I loved how he could switch his hair color on a whim. He should do that more often, hehe.
For a quickie, this was totally fuckin wicked! w00t!
Author's Response: Thanks, Onna! I was trying to go dark without being sadistic. Though... sadistic might be fun. Chibi gave me a bunch of prompts to do for a series of different genre/yaoi fiction so I may be adding to my porr 'flashes of pulp' section on a regular basis. But I'm still a chapter girl, and I plan to do me some updating! :D
[Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 6:54 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Brothers-in-Law
Hey, sis. *hugs* Thought I'd drop by here, too and see what had changed. Loving the new look by the way. :) And the drabble - great stuff. Love the pairings, too. Don't think I said that before. Sorreee! Anyway, got to go. *hugs* My head is pounding.
Author's Response: Cara! <3 I'm totally going to your site tonight to leave my review there as well. Plus, I must drop you some mail. Thanks for always encouraging my work, no matter what it is. I appreciate that so much. *squeeze* You totally rock.
[Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 5:43 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Brothers-in-Law
o.O - i didnt... um... feel out of my comfort zone *shifty eyes*
its YAOI!! i'll love it like i love my chocolate goodies xD lol
the part with him marrying Sango - that made me uncomfortable? *grins* lol
you're amazing girl, *nods head*
yea - took a few mins to read this even tho i have to now go to church... hehe... amma pray for my sinful addictions ((it wont stop tho)) o.O lol
Author's Response: Bubbles, you are love, girl. *hugs* Thank you for always reviewing and supporting my stuff. You're amazin.' And how funny, ne? This whole mess with Sango is just a snap, but what can I say? He needed to marry her to get to Kohaku the way he wanted to. What a bastard, huh? LOL! >p>>.> Be good at Church!