Date: May 06, 2011 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Wow, deep stuff. I like your style of writing, not just the hentai part, but the way it came together. Nice work.
Date: May 06, 2011 6:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
I was just rereading some of your works and my first review didn't say anything. This is just hotter than the sun. More amazing than if you were to win the lottery. It's just incredible.
Date: May 06, 2011 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT!!! gread job!
Date: May 06, 2011 6:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Just found this beautiful one shot. It was heartbreaking but at the end he found her!!! That was... formidable. Of course we are all bitches and we'll love more. Obviously, who wouldn't? I'll love to know the hows, whens, why, where or whatever. But if you don't write a second part or longer fic, you must be sure that the current one shot is just wonderful as it is!! It is marvellous!!! God Job!!! Mage
Date: May 06, 2011 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Damn!*starts to sweat*is it hot in hear or is it just me?I think a nice hot shower will do some good.For me and them.InuYasha and Kagome desirve(SP) eachother.I love all your stories.They really come to life *still sweats*. I think I'll go take a shower now.InuYasha really brings out all of our wild sides , Doesn't he.Well my wild side is going to take a shower.So I guess Bye bye.This is the longest review I've ever done.Im going to open up a window. Maybe it should be a warm shower since its already hot. Well instead of talking about it Im going to do it.Yep Im going to. Yes siry. Im going to do it. Anytime now. Any minute . In just a little bit. This really is my longest review.Okay,You caught me !!!! Im trying to make a really long review . 'Cause I am always to the poinnt and Im tired of it !!!!!! So Im going to keep writing untill I can't do it any more. Even if Im talking about stuff like taking a shower .Even if the stuff has nothing to do with it.Im gong to write a this thingy (!) alot.I am done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! *breaths* I am done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! Hey Iam done.!
Date: May 06, 2011 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
one word...WOW
Date: May 06, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Damn... *fans self* I like
how you played with instinct. and I really liked how he wanted full submission,
yet he was extremely gentle and wanted her to feel as good as him. Nice. Hope
you write more.
Date: May 06, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Damn... *fans self* I like how you played with instinct. and I really liked how he wanted full submission, yet he was extremely gentle and wanted her to feel as good as him. Nice. Hope you write more.
Date: May 06, 2011 5:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
Date: May 06, 2011 5:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
That was absolutely beautiful. I'm making my girl read this, so she will know why I wait for her to be ready for me. That one part where you were saying he needed the full submission... that's what I feel too. ::smiles::
Date: May 06, 2011 5:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
That was a very, very nice little umm...sex scene. Wow. I think my temp rose a whole ten degrees.
Date: May 06, 2011 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Date: May 06, 2011 5:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Hotness~o0 Luck Kags I liked it
Date: May 06, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Amazing. Very good. I liked it a lot. You have great writing style. This is probably one of the best lemons I've ever read between Inu and Kag. Great job.
Date: May 06, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Wow!!! That is one of the best one-shots. I've ever read. Your writing is so beautiful that you made me cry, literally. I'm not kidding or making up stuff. I'm serious!! This fic it's not even a fic it's like a poem. You go girl!! This is....wow! I wish you luck and prosperity. ^_^!
Date: May 06, 2011 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
*blinks* That was just Regular InuYasha?? Wow...now you make me wonder how he'd be as Demon/Youkai!? Nice going...he's very much in his 'instincts' isn't he? 'bout time he stopped waiting. *grins*
Date: May 06, 2011 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
In the words of Paris Hilton and Nicole Richie... "That's hott". Your writing is greatly improving with each story and chapter you write, it's awsome. If you ever need someone to Beta for you, I'll happily do it!
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2010 8:42 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
Yeah If U Don't Know By Now I Love Smut,So I Will Be Reading Every Story You Have Even The Smut Definatly That . As Always Loved The Story.
Date: February 08, 2010 11:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
One of my resolutions this year: start writing more reviews!
I for whatever reason missed this lovely jem when going through your stories before and had to drop my 2 cents:
This had me on the edge of my seat! So fucking hot. He wants her, needs her and makes her submit, though at the same time making sure she wants it to. Hot with a touch of sweet. Great job bb!
♥No-no
Date: August 13, 2009 2:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
my goodness, i have to say when i read this on mediaminer i couldnt believe it i love this piece of art youve written. i still cant bring myslef to take you of my fave author list even though you left so long ago i never knew you had your own site i figured you used a different public site. i enjoy your works tremendously but i have to say this one is my favorite. with your permission id like to save this to my computer i will never ever use it i swear but for the times i dont have internet and need a good read i would love to have this
thank you for this wonderful talent you share with us
again amazing one shot i love it
Kisa Niwatari
[Report This]Date: March 29, 2009 5:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
::sigh:: Bualadh bos that was just amazing bleeding brilliant =]
[Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
I think I've read this before. I loved it then and I loved it now! This story in my opinon held a poetic flare, that I think fed deeper into Inuyasha's emotions.
Well done!
Chanda
Author's Response: Thanks, girl! You probably did read it before; it's 3 years old. :P I think I was going for a "narrative" feel when I did this, rather than my usual style of making the characters actually tell their own story. Glad you liked it, though! :D
Date: December 25, 2007 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
love it!!!
Author's Response: Thankies! ^_^
[Report This]Date: September 12, 2007 12:41 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
ok so I think I have to rethink my whole take on the domination thing. I liked this one.... he was dominant yet loving. It just wasn't to fill some primal need. And as to answer your question about it.. I do agree that the same old shy Inuyasha does get too much attention. After all are we still the same as we were 2 years ago?? Nope, everyone changes everyone grows.
Author's Response: Domination, as you saw, isn't always dark. :) I happen to like dark fiction, but I don't write it that often. I mainly work in angst. This story was very early in my writing, like my 3rd fiction maybe? So I was still exploring. That hard domination one came a little later when I was more comfortable with expressing that side of myself. A lot people gave me crap foor it, but at the end of the day, I have to stay true to my vision and those that can't deal don't have to read it, yah? ^_^ But I'm glad you liked this one. It's one of my favorite early works. :)
[Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 2:42 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Submission
oooooh yeahhhhhhh
Author's Response: :D Glad you liked!