Date: August 02, 2012 5:41 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Re-read the last chapter before this one so I knew what was going on. Love the ending to this fic. Glad to have read it, too. Very sweet and lovely. Thanks for writing a wonderful fic. Enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: July 26, 2012 1:39 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
I am so happy that InuYasha can now get back into what he loves so much once more and have one up on that contract! He'll be so prepared for when he can audition again!
You captured that trait of Kagome so perfectly with her running away instead of facing the situation. And with the brief reunion scene from her being gone for nearly two days. Heartbreaking!
I did get quite the kick out of the Red Sox and Yankees rivalry scene! So awesome!
It's been decades (feels like) since I've been to a ballgame and the descriptions brought the memories back to life. I could smell the popcorn, the excited talking of fans, the sight of fans wearing their teams colours... Brilliant!
And I am soooo going to enjoy the scene when InuYasha realizes what kind of outing he's really on. lol
And OMG!!! I am sooooooo Worshipping you right now for the broken-up ex-lovers fight with poor InuYasha slapped right in between for the ring-side seating! That was even better that my wishing for the almost kiss! *GLOMPAGE* You rocked my socks off again! Priceless!!!
And to end the chapter on that stroke with the Mistress Adelina!! Things are starting to look heavenwards for InuYasha!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: July 26, 2012 1:06 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
So beautiful.
I love the morning cuddling scene and the dancing scene in this chapter. And the way you season it so deliciously with Angst. It's perfection.
And how you write... it's so AWESOME!
I can't wait for the next chapter... especially when the 'date' with Bankoutsu will occur. I think I'll giggle madly if there is an attempt at a kiss.
[Report This]Date: July 23, 2012 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
That was a really awesome story I loved it!!
[Report This]Date: July 17, 2012 2:46 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
This was a very touching story and I extend my condolences for your loss. The emotion was captivating and extremely well written.
[Report This]Date: July 17, 2012 11:54 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
This is heart warming! A really good story so far! Love it!
[Report This]Date: July 11, 2012 7:45 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Sigh...
Grrl, you truly have a talent; not only are you able to execute flawless steamy bedroom romances, your words tug at my heartstrings and make me laugh and stifle sobs at the same time. Thank you for the amazing read!!! :')
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much for the kind reviews! <3 I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the story. It took me ages to complete it >.< but I'm really glad I did. Every little bit counts! lol.
Date: July 11, 2012 7:19 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Excuse me while I stitch my sides back together cos they pretty much tore apart while I was laughing uncontrollably at the exchange between Bank and Jak HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
the icing on the cake was definitely the part when you pulled out the P!at the disco song.... I swear, I was laughing for at least a good two minutes.
Ah, and I know what you mean about the Yankees and the Red Sox! Most of my friends are die-hard Yankee fans... meh.
Da Grrrl Says: I actually never write comedy. I'm totally NOT good with it at all. >.> But for some reason, this one flowed decently, mainly because it's a page from real life. I'm a diehard Yankee fan -haha- so I just mixed a little fantasy with how we really behave at games and voila! I'm just glad it was actually funny. XD
[Report This]Date: July 11, 2012 6:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
You must've done a lot of research or have a lot of experience in the field yourself, since you seem to be quite knowledgeable about all this! It's quite refreshing to read writing from a writer who took an idea and bothered to do the research since I find that a lot of authors tend to write about things that are good as concepts but they are unfortunately very - sometimes all-too blatantly - unknowledgeable about. Looking forward to the next chapter~! I won't leave reviews on every chapter since I don't want to spam you too much but I'll definitely leave one at the end! :)
[Report This]Date: July 10, 2012 4:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
hahah that was a good first chapter. Love how you made it seem he was gay when he definatly is not because of him being a dancer. Being a dancer myself, I dislike when people see males in the dancing world being ballet or tap or whatever and instantly think they are gay! can't wait to keep reading
Date: July 08, 2012 1:55 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Thank you love for finishing the story...it was wonderful and sorry for your loss.
[Report This]Date: July 05, 2012 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I have to admit, I was browsing through your work, and found this.
It made me giggle at the end, and as per-usual.. I am excited to continue reading.
The thought of InuYasha being gay.. Oh my. Haha. ^_^ I love it.
[Report This]Date: July 04, 2012 12:35 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
I got all teary-eyed and mushy, ah, only your fanfics can do that. Gotta go watch some stupid videos on youtube now. Amazing chapter and I really loved the ending.
Date: July 03, 2012 12:28 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
God...This is wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing it.
I am sorry for your loss.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks a bunch. I'm really happy that you liked it! ^_^
[Report This]Date: July 02, 2012 11:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
This is really fantastic. I really missed you on Fanfiction, but I can see that you are doing so much better for yourself. Darn those stupid people that plagerized you before..
Your writing is going to be the death of my social calendar.
Anyways... I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTER.
I can't believe Inuyasha is a dancer :)
P.S. 10 is the highest rating right?
Da Grrrl Says: I had to reply because your review made me smile when I really don't feel like smiling, lol. Thanks so much <33
Date: June 30, 2012 8:03 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
a lovely tribute for your friend, my sympathies for your loss.
i can see her being understanding and though she was hurting i can believe that she would listen to his explanation and reasons for not telling her that he wasn't gay. a very good reason that she wouldn't' have even considered his moving in if she knew otherwise and they would never have clicked and been so good together. a great one as always!
gin
Date: June 27, 2012 6:22 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
It sucks that Kagome had to find out that way, but it was a fitting end to an otherwise awesome story. Thanks so much for writing.
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2012 11:20 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Brilliant; simply brilliant.
Date: June 25, 2012 11:25 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Wonderful way to bring it all to an end. Great story.
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 4:35 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
No words can explain how beautiful this story is. Every word pulled at my heart strings. The ending was amazing. I'm glad Kagome found it in her heart to forgive Inuyasha. The love between Inuyasha and Kagome was perfectly written and it was so incredibly heart warming and beautiful. Amazing is not a good word to describe this story it is so much more. Thank you for sharing this with us. May your friend Jessie Angel find everlasting peace. I know she is greatful to have had you as a dear friend in her life.
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 2:38 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
What a perfect way to complete this story. I'm so glad she heard everything he said to Kikyou, and honestly, I was touched with the final few words he said to her. He really has changed into a better person. I'm so glad that you were able to complete this story.
[Report This]Date: June 24, 2012 2:47 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Such a beautiful story!
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2012 4:44 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Absolutely beautiful!
Date: June 23, 2012 8:53 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Thank you for another one of your wonderful story, I absolutely loved it and I got all teary for this chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2012 1:07 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I didn't even know about this story until I saw your update, but I am glad I found it. I always enjoy Inuyasha fics where Inuyasha is put into roles that we wouldn't normally associate with you him! He's a ballet dancer! :)
I can't wait to read the rest of the story!!!!