Reviews For Pas De Deux
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Reviewer: OscarMeyer94   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position

This is so cute! I feel terrible for not reviewing in a while, but truthfully, it's because I haven't even /thought/ about touching a computer in over a month! However, when I came back I saw that you completed Pas De Deux and just HAD to read it! I LOVE IT SO FAR! The whole taboo, hidden feelings...it makes my heart ache for poor Yashie and Kags...and the introduction of Bankotsu makes me laugh! I can only assume that hilarity will ensue in later chapters, and he will be the root cause of said humor! Great job so far, InuGrrrl! Can't wait to read more!!!!



Reviewer: Flapjacks   Signed   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Goddamn, have I mentioned that I really freaking LOVE THIS STORY?! There's just the bare minimum of angst and miscommunication necessary to really twist my heart, but it's so short and sweet and beautiful and it is going on my all-time favorite stories list. The ending seemed a little rushed to me, because I really would have loved to see their trip to Europe/meeting Papa Domeni, and for some reason, I really wanted to see Kagome baking again, haha. (I have this weird fascination with amazing bakers/bakeries. I want to see Kagome open a bakery.)

Top notch writing as usual, though! I devoured this story through and through, and I missed the update for Chapter 5, so when I noticed a little next button on the bottom of reading the last chapter, I was like WHAT NO WAY AWESOME. One of my favorite plots/AU character designs of Inuyasha and Kagome. Everything is cute and lovely and I'm still smiling after reading this update! Ehehehehe.

Also, I noticed a lot of skins on your website that I haven't seen before. Not sure if I just haven't checked lately or they're new, but damn girl, I love the Suicide Rain layouts!



Reviewer: KeiChanz   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 7:22 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

This was - is - so beautiful, Grrrl. The ending was phenomenal, and I'm so glad you finished it, even though it must have been so hard. I absolutely LOVED how you named his niece Jessie Angel - it was a great idea, because it's like giving life to her, if only in a fictional means. You are a truly great friend to have, Goober, and I'm glad to call you one of mine. Jessie was Lucky to have you as a friend as well. Wonderful job, love. Keep up the good work and as always, no pressure, yeah? :)



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Signed   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 7:02 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Wonderful story. It's one of my favorites. And I know that your friend is smiling down on you for it. I've never lost a friend like that,but I do know how precious good friends are and that the loss must really hurt. This story was a wonderful tribute to her.



Reviewer: Kau   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 7:02 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Is lost for words such a beautiful ending for a great story. You did a wonderful job baby kau and Jessie Angel would be so proud of her story!



Reviewer: Folltosa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 6:36 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

This was a beautiful ending to the story.I'm happy that Inuyasha and Kagome got they're happy ever after in this chapter.



Reviewer: Brittany   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 6:35 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

I loved this story. It was written very well and I liked that you included all the technical aspects of ballet.



Reviewer: Treece   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 6:08 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Wow. Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your heart with us in this beautiful story. I'm sooo glad I got to read the wonderful ending. Jessie Angel is smiling from the stars. Righteous.



Reviewer: Abby   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 5:50 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

Updates from you always make my day. Always, always.. and lord knows I needed a pick-me-up. I've been so down in the dumps lately. Hm.. I feel like I say something similar to that every time you update. Oddly enough, you seem to update right when I need something to cheer me up. Amazing! XD

Thank you for treating us again with another update. It was so sweet and now I think I'm going to reread this story again. Your amazing at angst, but I still love all your fluff and all your lighter work. For a moment, I was afraid things wouldn't end too well when (THAT #*#&) Kikyo made an appearance. I wish everyone got happy endings in life. That would be pretty freakin' kickass, wouldn't it?
I wish I could just step into this story eveytime I feel sulky and experience it. Sounds a little crazy. LOL.

Happy 7th Birthday!! XD We're all very grateful that you're still so determined to finish your work before retiring from the fandom. (when that day comes, I'll bawl my eyes out.) Thank you, thank you, thank you!



Reviewer: Frosta   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 5:45 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA

What a great ending to a wonderful story! I'm sure Jessie would have loved it. Those type of friends are what really makes us see things in a different light.



Reviewer: bunny_illusionist   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 3:03 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

AHHHH OHMYGOD!!!! I love this fanfic and I really hope you update soon so I can see what happens next. XDD



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2012 12:22 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position

Haha!! Jakotsu and Bankotsu fighting was too hilarious!!! I kept worrying about how Inuyasha would end up figuring out Bankotsu's non-platonic intentions and how he would handle it, and I thought this was perfect! I've never been to a baseball game before, and even I could imagine that soap opera unraveling haha. And I'm really excited for Inuyasha, but now he'll have to leave for Italy?! Nooooooo!! Inuyasha just needs to tell Kagome that he isn't gay, so Kagome can tell him that she loves him and then kabaam! Magical adult love times!



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

your italian was perfect babe,at least i've understood all!i love this fic!you've just made it wonderful!like allways!!!i hope you update it soon!



Reviewer: Amane321   Signed   [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 1:31 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

An awesome story that I can read again and again...

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks you so much! I appreciate that. ^^



Reviewer: Amane321   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 12:37 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position

This chapter still gives me chills every time I read it to know that Inuyasha was so close, yet got interrupted... It is so far, my favorite chapter of this story.



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 12:01 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position

LOL that was awesome!Inu in a middle of a food fight!lol



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed   [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2012 6:25 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position

awww...por INU...damm cell..throw it away!!!



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2012 2:48 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position

oho!!! so that was the problem .In first chap.i did not understood the plot but now i do.That is interesting!i love it!



Reviewer: Dare9179   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2012 1:10 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

I hope you can update soon! This is a good story!



Reviewer: SubtleSarcasm   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2012 2:40 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

You aren't the only one, Del Kaiden went there too, and I LOVE both stories.

Da Grrrl Says: I remember that. It's really old, but it wasn't ballet. It was showtune type dancing (Broadway Baby, right?). The two are reallllly different in content, but I do remember it from about 7 years ago. Glad you like PDD, though!



Reviewer: InuEared Miko of Darkness   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 4:26 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

So sweet! One of the best Inuyasha confessions i've ever read. Nearly brought me to tears :) Can't wait for the final

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks. :) PDD is one of my favorite versions of InuYasha. He's just a really great guy in it.



Reviewer: InuEared Miko of Darkness   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 3:51 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

So Inuyasha's a bellat dancer. That's new. I just can't imagine him with tights on or wearing point shoes.

Da Grrrl Says: Men don't wear pointe shoes. They really don't even do pointe (on any grand scale). :) But they do wear tights!

IY as a ballet dancer is different -and that's why I did it. AU should be a complete change of mindset for the characters, not the same old guy and personality repackaged in story after story as some would have us believe. I like to take complete departures from canon -and it's fun!



Reviewer: Frosta   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 1:08 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position

I just love the idea behind this story. It was great to think of Inuyasha doing Ballet. It's not easy since I did a little as I was growing up. It was great how Kagome thought he was gay and what happened at the ballpark. Glad that he did finally set Kagome straight...lol. :)



Reviewer: KeiChanz   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2012 7:13 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

Your security code thing for a review is fucking retarded and it pisses me off.

Had to get that out there...

Anyway, this was cuuuuuuuute!! :D I love how affectionate it he is toward Kagome, and the ending was spectacular! ^_^ And I wanna say that I'm honored that I'm considered one of your special friends, because you're one of mine, too! Keep up the smashing work, darling, and remember that I'm always here if you ever feel the need to smile. =)

Da Grrrl Says: MY NUTELLA!!! <3333

I'm cracking up over the captcha! It's faulty, but >.> it's not my fault! Bots like to troll my site and leave spam reviews, that's why I keep it on when I'm not updating. But I removed it for a bit just for you -LOL. And your reviews do go through, but I think the site likes to take its time posting them >.< (it's happened with me before, too). So just review like normal because it will probably show up after a bit of time.

And supa glomps! I'm so happy you like the story! I should be finishing the last chapter soon. It's a different one for me and I'm happy with the way it turned out. (I know people think, Yasha as a ballet dancer? o.O But I think anything is possible in AU, right? xD)

You're one of my gems, never forget that! *glomps*



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2011 10:13 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position

beautiful story :)



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