Date: November 03, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
She thinks he's gay! That's too hilarious, teehee!!
Date: October 13, 2011 12:13 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
haha. I could never imagine InuYasha as gay. Hes so freaking manly. haha
Date: September 11, 2011 3:07 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
....I haven't stopped in in FOREVER, and look at what it gets me. It's kinda 3 a.m. so i'll keep this one short and sweet, but I'll be back sometime this week with more: the amount of feeling you put into chapters is amazing. I think I said 'awkward' out loud while reading this about 50 times, complete with the hand motions. I lub it. And also you. : )
Date: August 20, 2011 5:24 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I've been a bad reader and have not been reviewing. But it has been a while since I've been reading again. I LOVE this story! I cannot wait to see how you end it!
[Report This]Date: July 11, 2011 10:09 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I so love this story. I'm at home on a damn sick day fighting both a migraine and a stupid sinus infection. When I move my head, it feels like my eye balls are going to fall out of my sockets. In addition, the medicines that I have do not do anything for the pain. Therefore, the only thing I can really do is keep my head still and ever so slowly move my eyes across the screen of the computer as I try to read this story. But because I love this story so much, I think my eyes can handle a little discomfort.
Man, I really love this story. I have always loved ballet, ever since I could walk. I know that if my mom could have afford lessons, I would probably be working now as a ballet instructor instead of doing what I do now, which I really do not like nor want to write about - too depressing. Anyway, once I saw that you had written a story about InuYasha and Kagome and ballet, I could not help but read it. Then once I started I could not stop. I simply love this story. I can easily picture their beautiful moves in my head from your descriptions. Your descriptions is what captivated me about this story and I want to thank you for sharing.
You have an awesome gift for storytelling and God bless you for sharing your great gift.
I gotta find some more powerful meds. This crap ain't working worth a fart. (I can't write too much more - pain getting worse.)
Luv you GRRRL and you take care,
Biggy
Date: July 09, 2011 6:27 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Wow...i'm gonna look for a rommate that's in the ballet right about now...
Date: July 07, 2011 9:17 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
This was such a cute story and so wonderfully written. I love how it was so detailed and diverse. You are so awesome. I just read the first five chapters today...looking forward to reading the remaining chapter when you post it.. <3
[Report This]Date: July 04, 2011 1:04 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I love how u mixed italian with english - n french as well.
Reading this is like watching a movie - the hypnotic way Inu dance while his hair danced around him like spilled water - it was jus beautiful!!
It's like u're a ballarina to kno so much - its so insightful! And the me who wanted to learn that when i was younger wished i had ambition baq then xD Ah well - i was fickle baq then.
I love the progress of this, and it's been so long since i've read a lemon by u, and it's soooo fantastic!! I was blushing at some parts - made me feel like a young virgin who jus discovered a world of "lemony goods" - I enjoyed it beyond explanation lol.
I also adore Rin - it's always fun to have that one best friend who u can always count on and who can lead u baq on the right track.
Am so happy for Inu of all ppl tho!!! And am now eager to see how she'll handle his confession and if he'll meet up with Kikyou and/or her dad - n they have regrets? ah but am sure not since this is a short story n one more chp so yh -_-
Oooo btw u knowin Italian rocks!!! lol, am jus with the basics - french and spanish (although italian is similar to spanish)
anyways - be waiting for an update!! me loves it!!
Date: July 03, 2011 10:26 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
My God, that was SO much fun to read -- very hot, and so very sweet at the end of the chapter! BIIIIIG smile on my face right now (slightly flushed too!) <33
Can't wait to read the ending -- just love seeing (and reading!) you so inspired! I hope you continue enjoying it for a while ^_^
Take care!
Rana ;)
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2011 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I loved it!! I'm very happy that Inu finally told Kags how he feels and she wants to be with him to. I can't wait for the last chapter, I know it will be good.
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2011 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
LOOOOOOL!!!!!!!
The scene with Bank, Jank and Inu had me rolling with laughter!!!! LOLOLOL WOOOOO - ESPECIALLY the part when Jank asked what he preferred, and Inu jus kept chanting - 'plz don't say it'... i jus KNEW he was gonna say dick!!! ROFL!!! MAAAAN, that gave me an explosive laugh!!!! And to catch ALL THAT ON THE BIG SCREEN?!?! SMDH!!!!
On a side note - CLUELESS INU is so fucking adorably stupid!!! HAHA - I enjoyed this - really i did!!! lol
Date: July 03, 2011 6:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
One more chapter left??? Awwww... but all in all this fic is good. I love it. I like the ending of this chapter as well. I hope Kag's finally knows that Inu's not gay; when he just opened up that he wants everyting with her. Can't wait to read the last chapter. Hope you're doing good grrrl :) Till then take care :D
Date: July 03, 2011 12:55 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
From laughter to tears I ... I don't know what to say. The right amount of angst and happiness just does that to me. I used to dance ballet until I couldn't afford it any longer and the way you described Inuyasha's dancing I could see it in my mind and it was breathtaking especially given the emotion behind the dance. I just loved this one... you always do your stories great but maybe it's the ballet or even the lovliness of the two of them but I just was really caught up in this one. Hope you are feeling well! Thanks Jenn
Date: July 03, 2011 12:34 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Well I'm still giggling over the food fight and just have to add that the game made me yearn for Yankee Stadium and yelling at horrible Boston Fans! I just the "fag fight" I'm probably going to be laughing about that for days so thanks cause I needed the pick me up!
Date: July 02, 2011 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
At first it felt a little odd picturing inuyasha as a ballet dancer, but you’ve made this twist on his characterization different and interesting in a way that is unique to your narratives - which have a consistency in fantastic.
Kagome mistaking Inu’s gender preference has made the whole, will they/won’t they? (while silently pining away for each other - throwing furtive glances from across the room) delightful. And then all of a sudden, ‘hey.. somehow we’re together and its working!?’
Oh wait, but inus just got to keep his little secret a bit longer. Poor confused Kagome. It leaves her open to the unfortunately girly response of ‘oh! You pervert.’ &/or ‘How could you not tell me?...’ and then maybe something along the lines of, ‘liar.’ Still, it feels like everything is going to eventually work out.
Anyway, really enjoying this story; this last chapter in particular. Definitely looking forward to the next one.
Date: June 30, 2011 5:16 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I'm running on little sleep forgive typos but I love your work soo much I had to read it. I need to get back on the ball of reviewing again lol.
[Report This]Date: June 30, 2011 5:14 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
OMG okay sometimes I really want to like hit you! Why? For all the things you put my iNu through LOL. But I was worried resding this chapter I was like "she's going to leave at a point that will have pulling my hair out!" First the sex....I feel like every women should have what he did lol you wrote this SO YOU know WHAT I mean LOL. But the end had me a little teary eyed I was AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Okay well love ya big sis can't wait for the update!!
[Report This]Date: June 30, 2011 3:14 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
AHHHHHHH Okay I know you weren't going to let them kiss. You like to get at me like that sis!! I love how into it they were and HE called and *in Inu voice* F U C K lol
Date: June 30, 2011 1:37 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Once again, you have outdone yourself with this chapter. The lemon, the reunion, the dance scene, the pure raw emotions you use to write...they really make the story pop and come alive.
[Report This]Date: June 29, 2011 11:57 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
I'm loving this. All the drama is really working for me. ; )
Yash as a dancer still has my imagination running wild. *Mmmmm, tights*
Eventually, I realize Kagome will find out the truth and that will hurt her. Throughout the story I've seen how much she's come to care for him. All the 'little' things she does for him and putting her own feelings aside for him makes it obvious. Truly, she loves him deeply. I'm just afraid that after all the emotional sacrifices on her part, (I guess he's made a few sacrifices, too, but she's the one in dark) she'll be resentful when the truth comes out. So to speak. Lol Ah, but like I said... I love the drama. Yay! Looking forward to more!
P.S. Tony and I are off to Kyoto July 11th! So freaking excited. Wish me luck that my mind doesn't draw a blank on all the Japanese I've learned. I have nightmares about that shit!! X_X
Also, that I don't accidentally eat horse meat... cuz they totally serve that. xP
*hugs*
Date: June 29, 2011 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
THIS IS AMAZING!! Love the lemon :). Super hot!!
[Report This]Date: June 29, 2011 1:00 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
What a mammoth of a chapter! It's like twice as long as usual! Wow that smut scene was just so realistic. I really like how you're able to switch pov's back and forth so seamlessly. Omg the Italians are hilarious and his nickname from his adoptive father is perfect and I think it's cute that he shared it with his friends. It shows how proud he is of his son. I also think it works out much better that they each gave into passion before they have the big confession moment; it shows how real their feelings are for one another and that they just couldn't stop themselves any longer. Slaves of passion and all that XD I got a kick out of trying to translate as we went through, I'm also pretty rusty there but it was fun for me. I'm so glad that they're together now, you really caught me off guard there! I thought for sure that there was going to be a 'break up' moment right after they slept together. This is sooo much better than what I had even hoped for! You always do that!
[Report This]Date: June 29, 2011 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Bad girl! You made me cry!!!
I inhaled the whole chapter in no time and at the proposal I was in tears: so beautifully written, so full of emotions and so thrilling! Great, wonderful job!
And as Italian I praise your efforts in my mother tongue: there are some tiny faults around, but on the whole it was really good ;)
Date: June 29, 2011 8:46 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
A great read to go with my morning coffee. :P
The lemon was hot, that's for sure, and I definitely liked how you wrote it.
It's sad that it's almost over, but goo things come in small packages. LOL
Date: June 29, 2011 8:35 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Good one! The lemon was hot (as usual), but also like always, your characterization was spot on. I love how Kagome, though sweet, has a temper that can erupt at any second, like with the desk guy at the hospital and even with Inuyasha near the end when he said he wanted to just forget the past. He has no idea how close he came to being decapitated, lol. And I also love how Inuyasha was oblivious to nearly all of Kagome's cues that something was wrong the whole chapter. It's really endearing how he misses so much when he's really so smart. You wanna whack him and hug him at the same time, lol.
But, in the end, Inuyasha did finally say the main thing that needs to be said..and so sweetly. I loved the ending of this chapter...and I can't wait to see how y