[Report This]Date: January 11, 2014 1:21 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Lol, Bankotsu is the source of the two worst sounds in the history of the world. They say that trouble comes in threes. I wonder if they'll be another Bankotsu-unintentionally-ruining-the-moment occasion?
I can't believe Bankotsu connived InuYasha into accepting that teddy bear. That plushie will get a lot more appreciation in Kagome's room. Hopefully she won't trip over it :P
Drat. I was hoping that Kikyo would stay in chapter one where she belonged. She brought enough heartache. And now she might reveal InuYasha's sexuality and cause a big stir...
I am really missing all of these connections. First I missed that Bankotsu was the blind date, and now I missed that the "female" in question was Jakotsu! It was probably really obvious to everyone else >.<
I feel so bad for InuYasha getting caught in the middle of those two. He'll probably never go to a baseball game again. On the plus side, I doubt Bankotsu will be coming back, and Kagome will lay off her matchmaking schemes. One drama down. One to go.
Oh. My. God. I am so stupid. The woman on the phone wasn't Kikyo! I swear, I would flunk if I ever got on that show Are You Smarter than a Fifth Grader. How do I keep making these mistakes? But I am soooo happy I was wrong.
DaGrrrl says: Your reviews are the most awesome thing ever. I can tell you write them as you read and I love it because I do the same thing! XDDD I'll write reactions to every scene and leave a huge comment, but authors love that (Keep it up!). It's AWESOME to see what someone thought of each scene. Thanks for making my day! <333
[Report This]Date: January 11, 2014 12:26 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Ahhh, bedtime snuggles. Aren't those the best?
Okay, this fic is full of awesome gift-givers. Miroku gives him a place to stay, Sango gives him furniture, Kagome gives him a dance studio, and InuYasha is giving ballet lessons! These four really know how to spoil their friends.
That's got to be the sweetest way of asking someone to dance.
Oh Kagome, you could never look like a walrus. But I liked the word choice - it sounds cuter than "i bet i look fat" :P
That was a lovely dance scene. Did anyone else think of Dirty Dancing with that final move?
[Report This]Date: January 10, 2014 11:50 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
Hehe, "a vision in pink overalls". Kagome is so cute!
Wow, first Miroku is the stellar friend, and now Sango is giving him an entire bedroom set? Those two are so generous! What great friends =)
That line about Miroku always being an enthusiast - so true! What a great way to describe him.
Hahahaha, what middle fingers do best. Love it. This is why I love reading your work. They're hilarious - especially the Miroku/InuYasha scenes. You never run out of funny one-liners when those two are bantering.
Awww, making Kagome clumsy is just an adorable trait. "Flirting with flights of stairs" - I love how you put that. All of her klutzy moves just make you love her.
Omg, when I read the words "chocolate bistro" I almost died. That sounds like heaven. I hope to read more about it!
...Now I died. That cake sounds amazing.
Kagome is such a sneaky girl using post-it notes to encourage InuYasha to do more work. But that is such a genius idea. Seriously, can Kagome get any more adorable in this fic?
I should have figured that Bankotsu was the blind date! Oh, it's so obvious now. Why didn't I think of that?
That was such a sweet present. Now that fanart makes sense! Maybe they'll both use the room in the future?
[Report This]Date: January 09, 2014 10:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I'm probably one of the few readers of this fic who knows next to nothing about ballet. But I wanted to give it a shot and "broaden my horizons" as it were by reading something where the characters have a profession I'm unfamiliar with. At the very least, it'll give me an insight into a world I don't know, and give me some new vocabulary.
Mirouku was a saving grace in this chapter - that was so amazing that he flew to Japan to see him in a show, then offered him a room in his apartment! InuYasha sure is lucky to have a friend like that.
Just when things are going a little low - another miracle! I really love Kagome's background story of inheriting a fixer upper. I was pretty clueless and had no idea what the classified ad was hinting at >.< But how exciting! I wonder if the story will go into DIY renovation details hehe.
Lol, InuYasha is a little crass in this story. He's so funny to read.
Kagome loves interior design! I love this fic even more know. Renovation and design...am I reading a dance fic? No complaints though, I love this angle!
...And there's some ballet words that I don't understand lol. I'm gonna have to look them up to get a better sense of this.
Oh no. Oh no. Kagome thinks he's gay! What a twist! This is going to be hilarious.
I'm really warming up to this fic. At first I thought it would be all ballet, but with this new job angle, maybe this story won't be completely over my head. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
DaGrrrl says: Awww, thanks for giving this a shot. Don't worry, ballet is a small part of this story just like interior design. The meat and potatoes is all IK. It's short, just 6 chapters, with each title reflecting the positions in ballet and Coda being the conclusion (in ballet). But again, this isn't a dance fic, per se. It plays a definite roll, but its more about their relationship and how assuming things can lead to big misunderstandings. :)
[Report This]Date: December 12, 2013 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
The ending was so sweet... The date with Bank was hilarious! I love how the story progressed how they become friends,You portrayed their inner turmoils and feelings perfectly.. the humor you put on each lines was really smart and well thought off. Thanks for sharing your stories!
DaGrrrl says: Thanks, Kath! ^^ Glad to see you're enjoying my crazy wares. :D
[Report This]Date: December 02, 2013 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
Lol, boy does Kagome have the wrong idea! She really shouldn't make snap judgments like she did! Too bad Inu's gotten himself into a catch 22! He can't ever be with Kagome if he doesn't ever let her know how he feels and that he's not gay, but he may also end up evicted if he does tell her everything and besides that Kagome may feel that he lied to her even though he hasn't yet openly said anything about his sexual preferences yet. Of course with Bank around things may change real quick, especially after Yash catches on or Bank makes a move on him, whichever comes first. All in all antoher great chapter! Hopefully I can read one more before bed, but I'm practically falling asleep at the computer now so no promises. - Lol, guess that's what I get for pulling all-nighters for so long though!
DaGrrrl says: Glad you're enjoying this one. It has quite a few fans, which makes me proud since it's such a short story. The fat that I wrote it for a deceased friend makes it that much more special. :) I won't give any spoilers, but I think you'll have fun with the remaining chapters.
[Report This]Date: December 02, 2013 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Been meaning to start reading this story for a while now, but I've been so busy that I've haven't been able to get around to it till now, boy I can't wait for this semester to be over! Anyway, you've got a great start here and I can hardly wait to read the rest! Hopefully I can get to it all tonight, I've got 3 papers due this week and finals next week.
Lol, poor Inu! He's a dancer and now Kagome thinks that he's gay because of it! I don't know who will be in for a bigger shock when the truth's revealed, but it should certainly be a fun read!
[Report This]Date: September 08, 2013 1:50 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
wonderful story. i enjoyed reading every word. it is a great example of true love.
DaGrrrl says: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^
[Report This]Date: September 07, 2013 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
omg i cant belive that just happened. another great chapter. so sad it will be ending soon
[Report This]Date: September 07, 2013 2:43 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
AWW if she only knew. but i was right about what she was going to do for him.. haha its so sweet. i love this chapter
DaGrrrl says: Thanks. :)
[Report This]Date: August 16, 2013 1:53 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
love this story by the way could you tell me sings the song unbreakable on your playlist please?
DaGrrrl says: Thanks! And Unbreakable is by Kim Hyun-Joong.
[Report This]Date: July 29, 2013 4:47 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
I am always thinking about this story!! Definitely had to immediately read it again. But this ending never meant more to me. Who knew trust was such a delicate thing~ Either way I loved it :D This was one sexy ass Inuyasha.
Date: June 21, 2013 4:20 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
This is my favorite chapter!!! I died laughing when I read it!
DaGrrrl says: Awww, thank you! Glad you like this one!
Date: June 18, 2013 12:57 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Lol at Kagome and her assumption!
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 2:31 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 12:47 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Wow, what an interesting twist on what Inuyasha does! Never read something like this before and it's bloody awesome!
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2013 8:15 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Lol. Really gonna interesting in future. Wonder what inu-chan will do to make kagome believe. Good work. I'm sure this will be one of my fav. :D
Date: April 26, 2013 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
As much as it pains me to say this, thank you Kikyou. Actions speak louder than words and Inuyasha's actions regarding you were just the proof Kagome needed to know he truly loved her. (But you're still a f**kin' bitch)
Da Grrrl Says: That made me legit, LOL!
Date: April 24, 2013 5:46 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: CODA
Lovely read and beautiful imagery, sorry to hear about your friend.
Date: April 23, 2013 3:09 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Oh, chapter 2! That's so great, the dancing scene was excellent, beautiful imagery. I have to say I love the line "When InuYasha danced it was as if he ceased being a mere mortal and became a deity. "
Simply amazing.
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2013 5:02 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
Awww that was so sweet!! Especially the part when Inuyasha saw the Ballet studio Kagome made for him!!
That part just made my heart melt!!!
Super romantic job! Keep up the excellent work!!
Date: April 07, 2013 12:57 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Rin, thank you for getting Kagome to think logically about this entire situation. You know, before Inuyasha nearly had his face slapped off (granted, it's not his fault that he can't read minds) Lol, great chapter as always
Da Grrrl Says: LOL. Totally pictured InuYasha's face getting slapped off the in the literal sense -hilarious.
Date: March 17, 2013 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
*snort* Oh, Inuyasha. I'm truly sorry for what happened at Yankee stadium but ... *slowly starts shaking* it's just, s-so damn, funny! *Wiping away tears* Every time. That part kills me every time I read it! X'D *sniff* Such a great chapter!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! Yankee Stadium is a lot like that. Really silly, sacrcastic, lots of in-fighting when Boston comes to town... So I thought it would be fun to have Yasha's humiliation captured on the big screens (and they're HUGE). Kinda wish that was real.. lol.
Date: March 09, 2013 1:41 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
So Close. They were SO. DAMN. CLOSE!!! WHY?!?!?!
Date: February 22, 2013 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
Wow, I'm not even a dancer and I would do cartwheels if someone built me a private studio. Another great chapter
Da Grrrl Says: Haha. Rereading this one again? You flatter me! ^^