[Report This]Date: June 22, 2011 5:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
WHOA! Look out for Jakotsu omg..."I saved it in a jar" I was laughing so hard I woke up my baby on the other side of the house! So hilarious! At first, with that call, I thought it was Kikyo trying to stir up trouble again. I'm sure we'll see them again, at some point. He has an audition, that's so exciting and sad for Kagome :( Maybe it will force them to confront their feelings though! I love how quickly they got over their 'run in'. It just shows how easily their true feelings come to the surface! I really enjoyed this update, thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 22, 2011 4:06 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
(* ^) applauds o.o* Thats was so touching at the end and after >.> inuyasha bad day he dewserved some good news. The babeball scene was soooo funny I could picture it. <.< I WANT A DICK! (*^) Please continue you are on a roll .-.*
Date: June 22, 2011 3:51 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
This chapter is amazing. Love, love, and love this chappie. :D I had a feeling when he took out a pink Danskin out that Inu wanted Kags to come and dance with him. And, man how did I know at the end of their dance scene that the kiss would be thwarted? lol.
This is one of my fave chapt. in this fic. But I think there's more to come along the way. Till then take care and I'm off to read and review chapt. 4. :)
Date: June 22, 2011 3:31 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
OH! And you just popped my, "damn he looks fiiiine in those tights" cherry 'cause that picture you posted in your review response of that man.. *whistles* well, well, well! It was kind of weird for me 'cause he STILL looked so manly in those tights. I seriously stared at that picture for a good 5 minutes hoping that those white tights would magically come off. LOL.
Date: June 22, 2011 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
The color drained from his face, but before his lips could form the words his brain was screaming (something along the lines of, "I NEED AN ADULT! I NEED AN ADULT!)
L.O.L
-dead-
Oh my god. This chapter killed me. That date was some trip to hell. I can't even imagine how embarrassing it would be to be placed in that situation... I mean, come on! IT WAS FILMED. That's awful. AWFUL! God, it's funny though. I cracked up during that entire scene. I thought maybe Jakotsu's character was the woman Bankotsu left because he realized he was gay or somethin' but no - it was just good 'ol Jakotsu. So, lemme get this straight... Jakotsu got a sex change and saved his pikachu in a jar?! 0_____0
Is it cruel of me to find that fuckin' hilarious? "SURPRISE I SAVED IT IN A JAR!" I swear I'm sounding like a choked monkey right now with how I'm cackling.
You know, I was just thinking last night about how juiced I would be if I found an alert in my inbox that you've updated something. This is definitely a good way to start my day off, reading an update from you. (:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 22, 2011 1:57 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
You evil, evil woman... why would you want to do that to poor Inu! He's so dense. I don't know why it took him so long to realize that he was going on a date and the arm around the shoulders should have told him that things were getting a little to friendly.
I had expected for Bank to find out that Inu wasn't gay, but wow! NOT that way Inu would have liked to get rid of him. Poor, poor Inu...
There's a sentence I keep re-reading from when Kagome got Inu naked...I think you might know what it is...
Date: June 22, 2011 11:28 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
I honestly laughed out loud when the gay men started fighting. You made that scene quite comical, I loved it. And YAY! Yash has an audition.
I wasn't expecting an update for this one this fast, but when the muse calls, you need to answer. :P I'm sure that the reviews help a bit too *has been trying to be a good little reader and leave reviews* :)
Till next time. :P
Da Grrrl Says: Kyaaa~!
I'm so happy you liked it!! I worked >.> so hard on that baseball scene. But it's paying off, so I'm super happy. :DDDD
And thanks for being a good lil CA and lovin' on the fics. I so appreciate it. <3
Date: June 22, 2011 11:27 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
OH DEAR GOD!!!! Well...That was about a Hundred times worse than how I thought it was going to end!! I suspected he was gonna try and kiss him after the game or something. You just couldn't live without bring Jak into the picture could you. Well, I thougt it was pretty hilarious, though horrifyingly embarressing for Inu. But now Inu and Kag are in the same situation as before, but at least he has a shot for his career. Keep it up! ILY! ;)
Da Grrrl Says: YESH!! I had to bring in Jak, cause what's Bank without Jak?? xD
And poor Yasha. I tried my best to make his first trip to Yankee Stadium "memorable". I knew people were expecting a kiss and I just couldn't go out like that. No smoochin, just something much, MUCH worse. ^_^ There's 2 chapters to go -how will it all wrap up?! O.O
Thanks for the review, doll. ILY!
Date: June 22, 2011 11:01 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
LMAO!!!! You just had to bring in Jakotsu! I am in the middle of an office reading this, and I had to battle HARD not to burst out laughing! The whole Yankee Stadium scene was absolutely hilarious! Poor Inuyasha! He really did have a crappy day...but so did Kagome. It must be beyond painful to be so in love with someone that you truly think is beyond your reach by something you have NO control over. And now, even though it's great for his career, he may be moving to Italy, which would keep them from seeing each other even as friends. Ouch! Like I said, a truly crappy day...with a slight silver lining. Good one, chica.
Da Grrrl Says: Ms. G!!!
Yup, I had to take it there. I had a feeling people would be expecting a kiss and I knew I couldn't let it be that easy. LOL. I'm so happy you liked it, though! I tried to stuff as much of the stadium's insanity in it as I could -and with me not being a comedy writer- I had to pull a LOT of rabbits out the hat! >.>
But yesh, there may be a silver lining there, but we'll have to see -there's two more chaps! As always, thanks for the luv! <3
[Report This]Date: June 21, 2011 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Gah! I hate/love when you decide to interrupt their sweet moments. Inu's reaction is always priceless.
I'm glad you're still updating stories. You are my first and favorite Inuyasha AU writer and knowing that you're only writing for us makes my heart stop everytime I see this site closed.
I will start reviewing from now on just so you know you have my support with the fans but I'm not really a person of many words.
PS: You made me laugh so hard when Kagome oogled Inuyasha's tights that I recieved many weird looks from my family. It also made me drool a bit :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 20, 2011 6:01 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Wow this chapter was chalk full of passion! Of course the romantic rival (sort of?) had to interrupt them, but I was soooo engrossed I didn't see it coming. Freaking good job on that! It's so telling that he is trying to show and share his world with her; he wants her to be a part of it with him. Awww. Too sweet! It's gonna be really funny and awkward when Inuyasha realizes Bankotsu has a thing for him! Can't wait for that!
[Report This]Date: June 20, 2011 12:38 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Second Position
Oh they're in love with each other already?! Wow they are so hopeless for the other. This is so sweet, I can hardly stand it! I love that they snuggle together, and that they are always thinking of the other person. It's also nice that Kagome has another friend out there that she can confide in and will supply her with copious amounts of chocolate confections. I love this set up so far, I'm just afraid the lies will catch up.
Date: June 20, 2011 7:46 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Very nice dance scene!
Date: June 20, 2011 4:37 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
You updated: yes, Yes, YES!!!
I LOVE this story and though the simple plot I'm completely hooked. You really have a way with words, turning a linear plot into an enthralling story.
I can't wait for the moments during which Inuyasha discovers Bankotsu's true interest and Kagome inuyasha's :)
Both thumbs up: keep going!
[Report This]Date: June 20, 2011 1:29 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Can we say we hate cell phones at this moment in time.. you love to tempt us do you not.. LOL!! ohh well just makes the kiss so much sweeter later..
you did another great chapter to this story -- although the next chapter should be interesting to say the least.. "The Date" can't wait to see what you weave next.. thanks for the update they are always great no matter the wait..
Tootles Grrrl and take care of those hand.. *HUG*
[Report This]Date: June 20, 2011 12:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Oh dear lord... I know it's all very sad and reeks of betrayal how he ended up in this situation but...I'm laughing my butt off! I totally would have assumed the same thing she did too! Also, thank you for using the terms, it's been so long since I even heard them, they bring back some nice memories. I'm loving this set up so much! Is he going to have to pretend to be gay...okay well yeah he is, but I see such potential for awkward and hilarious situations here! Omg I can't wait!
Date: June 19, 2011 11:42 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
This is an amazingly powerful, beautiful and moving story!! I love it!
Date: June 19, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Soooooooo close! Geez, that was intense -- even though I knew the kiss probably wouldn't happen! I really enjoyed that (poor Yash, you can't help but feel for the guy!)
Love this story -- now go rest those hands of yours (and thank you for the update! <33 )
Take care,
Rana ;)
[Report This]Date: June 19, 2011 9:13 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
What a beautiful mess you've gotten them into. It'll be interesting to see how this unravels. Excellent job. :)
Date: June 19, 2011 8:16 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
That was beautiful. Your descriptions as they were dancing was awesome, I could basically see it. That was hella romatic too. Too bad she still thinks he's gay. :P
Another good one. :)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, CA!!
Yeah, that damn gay thing is ruining the smut, dammit! xD So happy that you liked the dancing, though. It was a LOT of fun to write (I listened to the song and it helped the flow tremendously). This is near complete, so I may work on it again fairly quickly since I want to close it fast.
Date: June 19, 2011 3:36 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
yay...so glad you updated this one! It's bitter sweet watching these two grow closer knowing it's not going to be pretty when the truth comes out. Still i await the inevitable crap meet fan moment with grim anticipation. Thanks for sharing.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks!^^
There are 3 chapters to go, so you definitely won't be waiting long. I'm actually a little annoyed with myself for not updating them faster, but I've been so blocked. Ungh. I'm glad this chapter came to me, though. If it continues, I'm going to wrap this up quick!
Date: June 19, 2011 2:44 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
I really like how you described the dance scene for us within the paragraphs instead of author noting them. It makes us illiterates able to follow along. :)
Da Grrrl Says: LOL! No... don't say that! I just wanted to give you guys a visual rather than just a quick summary. That would have sucked, considering the heart of the story is about dancing . So I listened to the song as I wrote it and tried to write what I imagined. I didn't expect it to come out as well as it did, so I'm glad you were happy with it!
Date: June 18, 2011 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
OH MY GAAAAAWD!
Your updates always make me wanna get up and dance. In fact, I do dance most of the time. I don't mean some small happy dance either, I mean like full out dancing. It's what a girl likes to do when she's excited maaan.
This was such a cute chapter. I was getting so flustered reading about those two and their dancing. *whistles* This story is way too adorable. I don't know whether to pull my hair or cackle when Inuyasha's and Kagome's feelings are being described. It's just too perfect. He's guilty about being "gay" and she's guilty for loving him "gay". Hilarious and... kinda sad. Hahaha!
Do you already know about all the ballet information you use in this story or do you have to research it? It's interesting to learn. After the description of Inuyasha's body in that suit, I had to google some danseurs because I have to admit - I've never went, "my god, he looks fiiiine in those tights."
I can't wait to read about the date! That should be pretty freakin' funny.
Thanks for ANOTHER amazing update!
Da Grrrl Says:
"my god, he looks fiiiine in those tights." L.M.A.O!!!!!!!!!!
O snap! I'm rollin' ova here! I admit, I've never been amazed by men in tights until I saw this guy: OMG!!! That's when I was like, okay, those bodies can be awesome. LOL. And c'mooooon! You know you'd totally like Yash even in tights! He's too damn fine! xD
Pas De Deux is so much fun when it works with me and not AGAINST me! This dance chapter flowed so nicely that I actually have no complaints and that never happens. There's only 3 chapters left, and I'm really going to try to sew them up quickly while it's cooperating.
The ballet was a bit of both. I remembered stuff from childhood and then I'd look up anything I was unclear on, particularly to get the french spellings correct. Really interesting form of dance, but very complicated, too!
More chaps are coming, too. I'm taking advantage while my brain is cooperating! Thanks for the review luv, as always!
Date: June 18, 2011 10:42 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
that was lovely! i can only dance when i'm following a strong lead and picturing what you wrote i can see how a girl who believes herself to be a klutz can dance with all grace. very nicely described, very moving.
gin
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Ginny!!
I honestly just wrote what I pictured in my head. I had the song going, and I was thinking, he'd do this to make her feel comfy <.< and that to make her confident... lol. I'm just happy it came across the way I wanted it to!
Thanks, as always, for the review luv!
Date: June 18, 2011 10:24 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
Awesome update. Man, I thought we were gonna get our kiss, but, alas our torturous anticipation continues. I love Inu and Kag in this story, and I really like Bankotsu. But Yash was right; his timing was for shit in this chapter! Nevertheless, though, I'm curious about how Yash's "date" is gonna go, particularly since Yash is not gonna be in the best of moods more than likely. I can't wait to find out.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Ms. Goddess!! When I was doing that part, I was like >.> I wonder if anyone is gonna beat me for that. LOL. This chapter was SO much fun to write once I got it going. The words flow and I actually LIKED it, which was such a miracle for me. >.< There are 3 chapters left, so *prays* that I can bang them out quickly! Thanks for the luv, as ALWAYS.