Date: December 21, 2010 11:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
love it..giggles
Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, babe! <3
Date: December 21, 2010 2:44 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
haha! Somehow I cant quite imagine our Inu in some fancy ballet shoes and tights^^ But the story is looking mighty interesting~
Da Grrrl Says: I can see him in just about anything sexy (Yes, I think some ballet guys are sexy and they're hella talented!). Thanks for reading! ^^
Date: December 20, 2010 4:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
The title caught my attention... so of course I had to take a sneak peek... and it's good!!! Liking it so far. Can't wait to read more. ;D
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for checking it out, Ms. Smurfy! ^^
Date: December 20, 2010 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Hee! This is going to be so awesome! And you SO went there. Loves it!
Da Grrrl Says: CA!!
Yeah, I had to do it. I've dabbled in so many other Yashas, why not pink tutu Yasha? I might even get some art done for him! Thanks for the review luv! <3
Date: December 20, 2010 3:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Hahahah! Soooo funny! I loved your ending phrase! Ohhhh Inuyasha.....
I loved reading this little snippet and I can't wait to see how he proves her wrong. I will say that I was a bit confused about Kagome's first appearance with the little kid, farm-girl look but I'm a fan of where all of this is going! Hope your holidays are wonderful!
Da Grrrl Says: Jenn!
How've you been, chickadee? :D
Thanks for poking at the new fic. I know I shouldn't be kneed deep in another, but I can handle 5 or 6 chapters if something mild like this -keeps the juices flowing! Kagome wasn't exactly being a little kid, but she's playful and prefers to wear comfy stuff around the house. believe me, she can "clean up" when she wants to. ~.0 MERRY CHRISTMAS!!
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2010 8:09 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
XD OMG
this is turning out to be a good one... she thinks he's gay XD
i cant wait to see how this one works out
Da Grrrl Says: Hey lady! ^_^
Thanks for poppin in and giving this story some luv. Yeppers, she thinks he's gay and he's in a bad, bad place. LOL. Their story will be a cute one, though, so stay tuned! :D
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2010 12:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
InuYasha as a manly ballerina?!?! Why do I love the idea of that so much, lmao. This one feels like it'll be SO much fun. Sure, the setup was a little sad with how Kikyou betrayed him, and it'll be painful for him to be barred from something he loves for so long but that scene where he told of "Ms.Chanel" for Kagome was adorable, and her already assuming IY was dumped by a guy is HILARIOUS (even more so because he told her about the break-up in a way that really didn't say otherwise).
Wonder what kind of awkward situations he'll be put in then and how he'll try to keep up the act (somehow, I don't see him even pretending to be the campy type xD). Probably won't be easy either once he starts developing feelings for Kagome...or worse: when/if someone else does.
As always, really great start! I loved the background leading into it and can't wait to see where this goes!
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: AMMMMM!
Now, now.. he's a premier danseur and won't take kindly to being called a ballerina. LOL. This InuYasha is a joy to pen, and yeah, his set up is sad, but he's on the right track now. There's only 3 chapters left (now that I posted the second), so it won't be a very long story, but there will be humor, fluff, and my signature angst to keep things lively.
And hell naw, Yasha won't be "flame on" at all. He won't go out of his way to be "macho", but he's nobody's cupcake. I like how certain things zip past him like a Ferrari doing a hundred, too, because then we get to watch him realize it too late -haha. (You'll see what I mean). Thanks for the review luv, as always! <3
[Report This]Date: December 19, 2010 2:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Okay I had to point this out before I go back to reading this chap. PHILLY!!!!!!! I've never seen you do a story were my city was the place!! Oh and I saw Usher live!! It was awesome okay now I have to go back to the fic! lov ya big sis.
Da Grrrl Says: Kid Sissy!!<3
They're actually in NYC, but he studied dance in Philly. :D Happy you enjoyed this one. The next chap should be posting very soon!
Date: December 19, 2010 9:48 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I like it so far! Hopefully you can update farily quickly (Oh! I went there LOL!)
Da Grrrl Says: JENNNNY!
Dang, I owe you some mail. But you know how I get around the holidays -quiet- plus, I was trying to get this up. And NO YOU DIDN'T!!! xD But really, I'm more than halfway finished with the next chapter so it should post tomorrow sometime, I think. *blows raspberry*
Date: December 18, 2010 6:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
AWESOME!! love it she thinks he's gay!!!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! :D
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2010 8:56 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I really like this. Its going to be interesting once she figures out that he isn't gay and that he may just like her, plus if he lets her continue to believe that he is gay then all hell is going to break loose when he becomes attracted to her. i hope there will be an update for this
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Brit! ^^
I'm sure she won't appreciate being led on, but we'll just have to see if she can forgive. :D There should be an update in another day or so. I'm finishing up the second chapter.
Date: December 18, 2010 4:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Oooohhh... I like where's this story is leading! For once, among all your Macho Inuyashas, you have a gay macho undercover!
Interesting ;)
Da Grrrl Says: LOL! A gay macho undercover? Love it. lol. New chapter shortly!
Date: December 18, 2010 12:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
LOL! Oh man, this story started out rather depressing. I mean, poor Inuyasha. Kikyo's character is terrible, just terrrrible. As the story went on though, especially when Inuyasha and Kagome met, it was clear how much fun that this would be to read. LOL. I couldn't help but laugh so hard when she assumed that he was gay. LOL. Initially, I thought it was just a typo, but obviously it wasn't. Hilarious. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing with us!
Da Grrrl Says: It did start out sad, didn't it?? It will still have it's angsty moments, but it will bring a chuckle or two as well. In the next chap we get to see the moment he figured out she thought he was fruity -made me giggle when I pictured his facial expression. New chap shortly and thanks for the review! <3
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2010 12:05 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
ROTFLMAO --- you so went there, Yasha in a tutu... LOL!! you make my side hurt.. JessieAngel is a very lucky girl.. because this story totally kicks ass and I can tell you have fun with it..
Can't wait to see were you take this next -- he has to at least teach Kagome how to dance.. you did good Grrrl!!!
Da Grrrl Says: NEOOOOOOO!
*woof! woof!*
(Had to let the dawgs out. lol.)
Glad you liked the chappy. I think I needed this. I was in the dumps for a bit, but I'm actually having fun with this version of Yasha and looking into some art to go with it. WOOT.
And there maaaaaay be a little teaching involved (I've been thinking it over since I started this thing). (^_^)b
[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I CANNOT believe you ended it there. YARG!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I'm SO glad to know I haven't been the only one to put InuYasha in tights XDDDD
Da Grrrl Says: Yeah, had to do a lil cliffie, but don't worry, more is coming. xD You had a dancer IY, too? lol. I didn't know that! This backdrop popped into head and nagged at me until I went with it, so I'm glad it's working out. New chap soon -and I totally owe you some mail. <3
Date: December 17, 2010 10:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
*giggle* I'm loving this so far. xD I can't wait to see how it progresses! Your mind is a wonderful thing, Goober! Lol
Da Grrrl Says: Nutella!! <333 You're next, lady... xD
[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
OMG.. *rofl* she friggin thinks he gay! how rich be that! lol..
and I bet it be pink under that tutu! :P
Da Grrrl Says: MARU! <33333
The gay part is actually Jessie's idea. I just wanted to see Yasha in tights. xD
Date: December 17, 2010 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
FUN!!!! I loved the set up and can't wait to read more. Kags thinks he's batting for the other team?! Too perfect :-). Boy, is she in for a shock. I really enjoyed it.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, girl! <3
Expect mail from me in the next week or two. I have NOT forgotten your story and just want to go over some stuff about it with you before I dig in. But I'm glad you're liking this one! ^_^
Date: December 17, 2010 7:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
loooove it. now i just want to see where this goes. probably somewhere crazy. HOPEFULLY somewhere crazy. is there influence of black swan in here?
Da Grrrl Says: It's a very short story, so it doesn't get too crazy, but it should still be a little fun (I hope). And nope, no Black Swan influence at all (haven't even seen that movie). The ballet part just felt like a good way to misunderstand a guy. :D
Thanks for the review!
Date: December 17, 2010 7:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Oh!!!!!!!! I'm really excited about this fic!!!!!! It looks really good!!! Can't wait for an update!! Good job grrrl!!!! ::hugs!!!!::
Oh! Btw. How is your carpel tunnel doing? I hope you're feeling better.
Da Grrrl Says: Linds!
Hey chickie!! Happy to hear that you're liking this one. I'm actually having a good time writing it, and the fact that it will only be 5 chapters really helps.
And my hands are a bit better (thanks for asking!). As long as I type very slow and wear my braces, I'm okay -still sucks though. Thanks for the review lurve! ::HUGS::
Date: December 17, 2010 5:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I love this story!!!! OMG so so so in love already!
And on top of that I understand the movements you are describing because I took "ballet I" the class just recently. I love the characters and I cannot wait to see how this plays out, but Inu and Kag are beautifully done characters already. Oh and Happy Holidays hun! I'll be looking out for the next update
I hope everything is going well with you too! Give those fingers a rest from all the typing and make some baked goods (like cookies ^_^) or just rest them completely. Love you lots and talk to you soon.
Da Grrrl Says: PAW PRINT!!!
I so wanted to answer your other review, but I've been trying to take it very easy on my hands so I can use them to write. lol. I'm glad you like the story! I don't know tons about ballet, but you know me. I always try to get my realism in, so all the references and such will be authentic. I envy you, girl. Ballet looks hard! >.<
Happy Holidays! I hope school has been giving you a much-needed break and you're in good spirits and health. <3 My hands are better, but still not 100%, so I'm trying to be easy on them. >.> I did get me some cookies, tho! xD
Love ya lots! :HUGS:
Date: December 17, 2010 2:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
LOL!!! LOVE IT!!!
Da Grrrl Says: Happy to hear that! ^_^
Date: December 17, 2010 2:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Thank you! I absolutely loved this first chapter. I was wondering how you were gonna get InuYasha in this situation. Hehehe! I can't wait to read more.
You made my day :)
Da Grrrl Says: The guest of honor!! :D
I'm so glad you liked how I present your request. I was iffy on it at first, but you like humorous situations (his gaydar was all you to begin with!), so I was hoping you could get into it. I'm already knee deep into the next chapter and will have it up in a day or two. ^^
[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 12:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Awesome... Love Inu baby in a tuto... ha ... can't wait to see what happens.. especially when she finds out he's NOT gay..
Da Grrrl Says: Yeah, ya gotta wonder what she'll think about being lied to for almost a year. >.>
happy to hear that you like the story and thanks for the review!
Date: December 17, 2010 11:41 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
Bwahahahahahaha, you went there indeed......this looks like it will be an amusing story with lotsa room for spark and angst as well as humor. I luvs the Grrl!
Da Grrrl Says: Hey lady, it's been a while! Glad to see that you're still with me. <3
This story is short, but it will be lighthearted, considering the stuff I normally write, but there will be some angst, romance, and tortured soul tossed in! <333