[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 11:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
SQUEEEEE!!!!!!!!
This is absolutely BRILLIANT!!! *giggles* Love it. Yeppers!! LOVE IT!! Bravo!!
It definitely is most perfect!! And yep, you went there and made it all your own! *giggles* Now if I can get the music from the Nutcracker to stop playing in my head! It's all preferct!
I love the direction this is going so far! The twists are beautiful! Exquisite! Kudos!!
I really enjoyed how InuYasha was like the every day honest and innocent in the world. How those types get preyed upon by callous and selfish others. I liked how you protrayed Kikyou here too!
And then having Miroku coming for his friend was sooo very sweet and wonderful! Just accepting what was happening without any words to chastize InuYasha more but instead helping him up to keep his head above the waters. It gave me the WAFFies big time!
The Meet and Greet scene was top of the world pure pleasure! I love how you protrayed the people there so incredibly realistic! *sighs very very happily* I think no one can make the story feel so incredibly realistic-ly real to every day life like you do!
I also liked how InuYasha in not so much detail and in his so InuYasha way told Kagome why he was looking for a job/place to live! You are channeling the Inu!
I am smirking like a dang fool here with that ending comment about him letting Kagome believe the bit about male dancers andof it coming back to *giggles madly while trying to keep a straight face* bite him in the ass! *falls over laughing*
Now... I have this need to know - what is the colour of Inu's tutu and is it a stiff one or a softly falling one?
Da Grrrl Says: Nik! ^_^
Awww, thanks so much for such a lovely review! I appreciate it. :)
I actually had a lot of fun penning this. I think I like him as a dancer. (pinches his butt beneath his tutu) One of the things I really like about this is the Inu/Mir relationship. I like them in every story because they're so tight they can finish each other's sentences and Yasha always has someone in his corner.
As for Kikyou, I haven't really played her as a bitch in a while, so she was due. xD I'm trying to go for something with mild angst (you know how I can get), so it will be interesting keeping myself reined in. And yush, he's not telling her that she's mistaken about him. He knows it can lead to things he doesn't want, so we have no choice but to wait and see how he gets himself outta this jam!
Thanks again for the review, Nikkie-Bear! *glomps*
Date: December 17, 2010 11:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
oh that's too funny! never underestemate the notion that pops into a woman's mind to want to turn her gay roommate straight after she falls in love with him (a long long time ago i've lived it... sadly).
nice setup! i know nothing of dance and even less of ballet, the only ballet i'd seen was in the mid-seventies by Les Ballets Trockadero and it was absolutely marvelous!!
it's lovely to see you writing more =)
*delightedly skips about*
ginny
Da Grrrl Says: Ah, thar she be! :D
I think we've all had a gay friend that we've wanted to change at some point. SUCH a lost cause, lol. But at least in this, he's not really gay, so... :P
I've seen the Nutcracker, but that's really it as far as anything in person, but I love watching them dance -especially when the music in sensational.
Thanks for the review luv -and I'm glad to be back at it! ^_^
[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I'm so glad I got on. This is such a cute story kau. I love Inuyasha >.> which is a RARITY o.o* you make me love your mate <.< You only have yourself to blame. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love it how it took him o.o* three *holds up three big fat fingers* days for him to figure it out. The chapter came out beautiful (* o) now gives you ballerina Inuyasha plushie!
Da Grrrl Says: KAU! (^*?)
Thanks for being my guinea pig for this thing -someone's gotta be tortured by all my early drafts. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. Now I'm in chap. 2 (as you know), and still having a blast. Yay!
*-.-* Stay away from my mate. I'm warning you! (-*?) I won't tolerate all this sniffing around his butt, got that?! *shakes hoove*
[Report This]Date: December 17, 2010 9:39 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
omg. I love this! Inu as a danseu, that's just awesome. Sorry I haven't been around much lately, schools been kicking my butt! I hope that you've been doing well, looks like you haven't lost your skills! =p hehe.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Shina! Dang, it has been a while, eh?? Hope you and the family are good, and heck, I'm glad I haven't lost my skills, too! lol. Have a good weekend!!
Date: December 17, 2010 7:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
This was eniterly too enjoyable. The quick humor and the images of Inu in a tutu at the end. hahaha. Hopefully there might be a follow up?
Da Grrrl Says: Wow, you saw humor? lol. I suck at all things humorous, so I'll just say thanks and smile. ^_^ More is definitely on the way, and to give you a hint of how long this will be, just remember how many basic positions are in ballet.... xD
Thanks for being the first to leave your mark. <3