Date: February 20, 2012 6:55 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Oh my! Yummy!
Date: February 08, 2012 2:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
damn that was hawt! usually I hate inucest stories, they seem so OOC. But this was pretty sexy! Good job, grrl :P Always you take an urban beat and infuse it gorgeously. Well done!
your penny
[Report This]Date: October 30, 2011 1:15 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Fuck.
For one, there wasn't a single vegetable.
Two, you really did your research... I'm proud.
There were so many wonderful lines, but the corrupt side of nirvana? Brilliant. Why the fuck are you writing with someone else's characters when you could be rich as hell by now... you're amazing.
[Report This]Date: August 15, 2011 9:56 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
OMG that was freakin hot like omg the inu/kag/sess threesome was so hot! Awsome i love your stories great work!<3
Date: August 10, 2011 1:52 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
This was simply awesome! I loved it! I'd beg you to keep writing, but since this is my first time reading your work, it likely wouldn't mean much, lol.
You are incredibly talented, you works believable pieces that bring imagery alive and bring an awed smile to my face. I hope you continue writing- because this is amazing!
[Report This]Date: August 07, 2011 2:48 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
*pant*
*drool*
so good, Kiki. Those two boys just made my Sunday. ^_^
Always a pleasure!
[Report This]Date: July 23, 2011 10:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Tell me why while I was reading this one, I thought, 'Damn, a threesome between Inu, Sess, and Kags would be damn hot!' And then, you go and put in that hot piece of ménage à trois! Geez, even I was getting all hot and bothered! That's how good this lemon is!
And I don't know if it was the fact that InuYasha was bisexual in this piece or what, but I found his character extremely sexy LOL. Oh and you already KNOW that I believe you pen Sesshomaru the best out of everybody in the Inu-Fandom! No matter how you write him, I flippin' love him....gosh, I really need to get off his nut sack, right?! lol
I really need to get to NYC soon! That place sounds like 'The Spot'!
Anywho, Thanks so much for creating this oh and a very Happy Belated Birthday to Neo!!
[Report This]Date: July 21, 2011 11:22 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Absolutely HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!! Loved this it is an awesome and arousing read. Too bad the scale of rating dont go past 10. :-(
Date: July 10, 2011 7:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
*Fans Herself* whao man that was hot!!! When Kagome appeared first thing that came in my mind was "threesome". Love it!!! Was good. Glad that I read this one. Man it's hot...
I don't even know what to write cause I'm in aw at what transpired at the end. Hope you're doing alright grrrl. Love your work as always. Till then, take care and I'lkl review soon! Huggles!!!
[Report This]Date: July 10, 2011 2:16 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
WOW!!!! I'm like....WOW!!!! This was awesome!!!! At first when an old fashion, fuddy-duddy, stick-n-the-mud like me began reading this fic and InuYasha kept flirting with his brother, Sess, I was like, "This is crazy. And I'm not going to read anymore, because I don't think this is appropriate for young men to behave, especially brothers. " But I could not stop reading this story. The more I read it, the more I wanted to know what happened next. And then I did not stop until I read the whole story. And I have to say, hours after I read the story, I still could not get the images out my head of your motel room scenario. (Simply HOT! HOT! HOT!)
Anyway, I simply loved it. And to make me fall more in love with this story was the ending with the love scene with InuYasha and Kagome, since I am a big fan of these two.
Just had to let you know that I am still reading fan fictions, especially yours, and I am always trying to wait desperately for any stories that you post. Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift of storytelling.
Biggy
[Report This]Date: July 10, 2011 1:32 AM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
This was fucking awesome! I loved it! I miss talking to you on FB. Thank you! Love you beautiful writer.
Date: July 09, 2011 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
wow...it just got hotter in here!
[Report This]Date: July 08, 2011 9:23 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
u-u-umm... w-wow ~smirks~ i dont even think Liquid Nitrogen could cool me down after reading THAT... O.O ~drool~
Da Grrrl Says: Hehe! Thank you kindly! I'm happy you enjoyed the smut! ^___^
Date: July 08, 2011 6:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Oh my god, again an unbelievable great story, I just can’t understand haw you do it. From now on I’m going to write you a praise on each story: D Love you, your Alex
Da Grrrl Says: Alex! *glomps*
Finally got you to say hi, huh? ^____^ Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the story -and thanks for the friend invite on FB! <33
[Report This]Date: July 07, 2011 4:39 PM
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I hate not rating xO
INFINITY STARS!!!!
I LOVE YAOI *runs around happily*
Da Grrrl Says: Bubbles, you so craaaaazaaaay! xD
Date: July 07, 2011 4:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
You have GOT to be fucking kidding me!!!!
Did i EVER tell you how much I love you?!?!?! DID I?!?! LMAO DAAAYUUUUM!!!!
First off - Inu flirting and tlking bout seme and uke had me cracking up; especially when he mentioned a WHIP!!! And i jus love the line "I'm an equal opportunity slut -every shade, every grade, and every gender" LOVE IT!!!
THEN THE CLUB!!! KAGOME IS ONE LUCKY BITCH - LIKE FOR REAL!!! WHO WOULDNT WISH TO BE HER AT THAT MOMENT (IN THE ENTIRE FIC ACTUALLY).
Then Inu and Naraku? GET OUT OF HERE!!! Even though it was short - it was HAWT, Then the DEMAND of Sesshy HAD ME BOILING!!! Fucking unreal! SERIOUSLY!!!
OMG OMG OMG THEN THE ENDING!!! I SWEAR U'RE MAKING IT HARD FOR GUYS IN MY LIFE TO COMPARE TO FICTIONAL ONES!!! LMAO
The 3sum was amazing - it was hot, steamy and so so soooo fucking good! *takes a breather* It's rainy/cold here right now and am hot - like for really, i need a shower ASAP.
Ah~ but u wouldnt be DA - FUCKING - GRRRL if u didn't end it with a surprising twist!!! I JUS LOVE IT... And it's so cool that Kags, the girl in love with Inu is so down for her man liking guys too - cause for a very adventurous relationship. And living with him n shit... gosh it's so steamy yet the cuteness is there!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Sesshy calling Rin too - MORE CUTENESS.
THIS BDAY PRESENT FOR NEO IS EPIC (tell her i say happy birthday - even if she probably doesnt kno me lol) but yh... shit, dam... I LOVE THIS!!!
i have to read it again - AM GONNA READ IT AGAIN!!!!
O.O
P.S - Why is it i curse so much lately - only in relation to fics tho lol xD
You're amazing Grrrl - STAY YOU!!! xD
Da Grrrl Says: Whoa!! What a review! ^_____________________^
Thanks, chickie! I'm glad you liked this one. I know my readership usually avoids yaoi, but I like doing it on occasion. At this point, I mainly write it for Neo, but I do get a kick out of it.
With this one, I wanted to try something different: fun-loving, silly, sexy, smutty -and, of course, a twist at the end. It was fun -and made better because you liked it and left such a fab review.
And I owe you some mega glomps.
GGGGGGGLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMP!!!!!
Kau and I have been posting the reviews to my fics from mm.org and fanworks. I didn't realize how many you posted. WOW. I was like, "OMG! It's Bubbles!" Again and again and again... LOL. It was eyeopening to see just how long some people have been with me. Made me all nostalgic. So, thanks for that. It really means a lot. <333
And no, you stay YOU, awesome thing that you are!
Date: July 07, 2011 3:04 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Holy flying sausages! this story was so good. I expected InuSess and when you introduced Kagome I was like "Heeelllllooo threesome"
But what I like most about this story is how you write Sesshomaru with Inuyasha. They aren't going for each other's throats and Inuyasha loves his brother dearly enough to offer his girlfriend and himself. I haven't read any kind of story like this before. It's actually cute (and HAWT!) Love it!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Miss M! ^___^
I admit, I love writing the boys together as brothers who love each other, even if they have spats. I never liked how Sess and Yasha despised one another -especially Sess. Brothers just shouldn't be that way, and since I write AU, I have the freedom to do what I want with their relationship. :D
As for kagome, Neo was leaning toward het when I asked her what she wanted, but she also likes I/S, so I tried to give her the best of both worlds. That 3some wasn't easy, especially when I had to keep Sesshomaru from really touching Kagome too much, but at least I finished it! xD
Thanks for the great review!
Date: July 07, 2011 12:55 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Loved it, so hot.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: July 06, 2011 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
OMG! (O_O) // *fan waving* is it hot in here or what..you had me blushing to no end.. when you said you had a goodie -- you meant you had a goodie.. never seen this one coming.. leave it to you to give me a taste of both.. LOL!
Loved.. loved how you made Inuyasha so daring... so flirty, and GOD so sexy to boot.. how the heck can you make these characters do what you do.. Although you did have me at the end with Kagome being is girlfiriend never seen that coming..
You are a rare talent indeed.. thank you *HUGS* thank you *HUGS some more* thank for the B-day gift it made for a good end to the brithday day..
*runs back for another HUG* thank you!
Da Grrrl Says: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!
*Does a lil backflip*
WOOOOOT!!!!
I'm SO glad you liked it. You know, this is my first 3some (notice that I said FIRST >.> Stay tuned <.<), so I was really nervous bout how it would come out to you. But I'm totally relieved now!
SQUEES AND GLOMPS!
InuYasha was THE best part to write. Honestly. He was so out of hand that you just had to love him. xD And I'm glad you didn't see the twist coming -that would have sucked. <.<
HUUUUUUGS!!!!!
[Report This]Date: July 06, 2011 12:53 AM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
That was such a sweet ending, all for his onii! I've never seen a story like this; where they are able to connect as they did and it had such a tender meaning. They would really do anything for each other. Great work, thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: July 05, 2011 11:58 PM
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Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
Awwww, yay! You finished it in time O/
Hot stuff, Grrrl...and that ending! I did not see that coming at all, but it was such a nice/interesting shock, and sweet of Kagome helping him live out his fantasy (kinky...but sweet all the same, lol). Even better was Sessh knowing all along and deciding to let him have it.
I loved this. It's like you never run out of fun ways to explore a relationship with these brothers (even in non-yaoi settings), and I loved how different this was from your norm. InuYasha was wild. He was so flirty and funny and out of hand...compared to Sesshomaru who had to come into his own.
And when he did, WOW.
I still really, really love that club scene where Sessh told him to come over and he just...left Naraku hot and bothered against a wall xD
Awesome fic. I'm sure the b'day girl'll love it!
~Am :D
[Report This]Date: July 05, 2011 10:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
O. M. G.! Now that was a real Hoot! Must admit had me goin with the 'three's company', but what an awesome surprise just to learn Kags am Yash's gf? How friggin' awesome am that - w00t!
Ooh, but her played her part well, hehe.
Smexxy and total hotness!
And a Big HAPPY BIRTHDAY to the B-Day Girl, Neo! Hope it am a good one, Hun!
Hugzz
Date: July 05, 2011 10:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
One word...WOW. That was one long, SMOKING lemon. And even though it was mostly sex, you still managed to bring in the primary perstonalities of the characters. This was a walk on the VERY wild side, but I enjoyed my trip. :-)
Date: July 05, 2011 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
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That was so intense. I don't know where to start. I wasn't expecting any of that to happen. Half the time reading, I was blushing. I thought I was red enough reading the lemons I normally read from you between Kagome and Inuyasha, but this threesome with the brothers and Kagome?
Oh. my. god.
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I usually stray away from yaoi, but I just have to read anything if you were behind it because I feel like I'm missing out if I don't. I actually enjoyed it - laughing from how hot my face was getting and how hard I was blushing! I was afraid of someone walking in the room and reading my very, very shameful thoughts.
Thanks for sharing it on the website!
Da Grrrl Says: *Watches Abby turn tomato* Hehehe....
I don't write a lot of yaoi, but I do love my I/S. I think they're totally sexy together, and though it took me a few days to nail this down, I'm happy with it. I wanted this to be different and something Neo would enjoy, so I'm glad she did. Thanks for expanding your horizons and talking a walk on the wild side. :DDD
[Report This]Date: July 05, 2011 8:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Can You Keep A Secret?
It was hot, decadent, perverted and awesome! Thanks for providing the ailing with a great recovery read! Happy B-day, Neo!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, K-gurl!! Since you're very much I/S, I take this as a big compliment. And feel better!!