Date: May 13, 2013 8:33 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
wow! Great showcasing of the interactions between all different characters! I love how you show each characater on his or her own or with different charcaters, not just with their group of buddies (like the MBC) . Thanks for sharing!
Date: May 13, 2013 7:48 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Nice touch in using Yagami Light as Inuyasha's opponent. It's refreshing :}
Date: May 13, 2013 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Wow, already I'm hooked with yer footnote, immediately grabbed my attention. I love how you didn't just plop who the charcaters were in yer story, you were able to entwine them smoothly with yer plot and for that, I am so grateful! Nothing irks me more than misplaced descriptions that seems to be just thrown there xD
Date: May 10, 2013 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Love it!!! excellent chapter to show the personalities of the MBC.
Date: May 09, 2013 11:31 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Happy (wow, late) birthday! Another brilliant chapter, and it's great to see your characterization of Light!
(if you do stop writing, I can only beg, BEG that you publish your work. If 50 Shades can be a sensation, you deserve so much more!)
Date: May 08, 2013 12:04 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Can't wait to see Kag stop being so passive with Light. Loving the drama! Excited for more!
Date: May 07, 2013 9:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
This reminds me of when I first started reading Inuyasha HS fiction. Great start.
Date: April 20, 2013 10:55 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Omg I really enjoyed the whole sparring match between Light and Inuyasha. It cracked me up so much yet I feel like I'm totally dumb compared to them and I'm already in college! Haha XD i'm excited to find out Kag's backstory I have a feeling it is going to be pretty tragic
Da Grrrl Says: Ah, thanks a bunch! appreciate the awesome review! It's too soon for me to comment on the backgrounds yet, but everything will unfold with time. :D Thanks for reading! ^^
Date: April 12, 2013 10:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I freaking LOVE this fic!!! It's sooo original and different... The characterization is awesome and the plot is super compelling. So far, Sango is my fav in this fic. I love the pics of the MBC too :-) can't wait for the next update.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! ^^ It's one of my favorites, too, which is why It has -and will get- so much fanart. I'll show off a new one with the next update. :D
Date: April 07, 2013 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
(rubbing hands together) Oh ho ho ho!!! I my interest is definitely spiked. I got a great feeling about this one :-), Let the games begin! Cheers!
Date: April 07, 2013 7:01 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Loved the update as usual! I don't know why, but Light gives me the creeps....
Also, I'm VERY curious about Kagome. I feel there's more to her than you're showing right now.
Date: April 05, 2013 3:13 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I really like this chapter! it's hilarious whenever Bankotsu says something and it's adorable with the interaction between Inuyasha and Izayoi! I'm still confused with the whole thing surrounding Light and Kagome. So mysterious.
Date: April 04, 2013 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Excellent. Love the way all the characters are expressed as well as their personalities. Keep it up!
Date: April 04, 2013 7:40 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Oops i forgot to rate. Oh sissy you should see Yuya he's make a cute InuYasha he played a badass in a j-drama. He's a singer (I love his voice) https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=7Mqrs6mLuGw
I love this story..I wish i was in your head then i'd know whats next lol
Date: April 04, 2013 7:34 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
ahhhhh Big Sis!! Okay try to wait till there's at least 2 updates cause your work always leave me going " I WANT MORE!!!" but after that sexy look Inu was rockin (yes lord) And the cuteness with his mom awwwwww. I can't wait to see how everyone is going to fall into place. Kagome know she wants the D LOL. Love you big sissy!
Date: April 01, 2013 11:59 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Awesome awesome awesome! I love it! Just cant wait to see that Light charecter knocked on his arse. And for Kagome to realize she dont have to be a perfect puppet to him anymore.
Date: April 01, 2013 10:35 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Superb story thus far, as usual!
Date: April 01, 2013 12:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Jakotsu's acting like a pansy. Lol. And is Yagami having an affair with Eri?? Loving the plot so far...
Da Grrrl Says: Yeah, but >.> Jakotsu is gay. Isn't that the norm? And while I normally don't answer those kinds of questions cause it borderlines 'theories in reviews' -which I hate- this one time, I will. No, he's not. Thanks for reading.
Date: April 01, 2013 2:49 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Good update
Date: March 23, 2013 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Awesome!!!! Keep up the good work...you don't disappoint. (:
Date: March 22, 2013 2:17 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Yay, so happy to see an update! :) Hope you enjoyed your birthday!
It's exciting to see the ball rolling on this one. My favourite part always comes at the smutty stuff ;) But I will be patiently waiting until then.
Like with every fiction you've written, you don't disappoint. Every time I read one of your stories, I'm like.. "Okay.. This is too perfect! Inuyasha is a badass, with an aura of mystery that just oozes out of him. This is definitely my favourite." And that is before I end up reading the next fiction you've written, and then.. the cycle just continues!
You've got an amazing talent for writing, NEVER STOP! You're good at what you do, and I don't doubt that if you ever choose to take writing further, it'll get you far.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! What an awesome compliment. I appreciate it! <3
Yeppers, the ball is finally rolling on this one, but I must be honest and say that while there will obviously be smut, there won't be a metric ton. I know it will be disappointing but... I'm so tired of writing lemons! *cries*
It's a very tiring process. It probably doesn't seem that way to my readers (Cause they're just sitting back and enjoying the ride), but I work extremely hard when I do lemons; they don't come easy and I'm not some guru. I've written so many that I don't even see a way to make stuff you guys haven't already read from me before (There's only but so many ways to write a sex scene), so my hope is to write less of that and more drama/angst/etc, which is what I enjoy the most. So, we'll see what happens, but again, thanks for the awesome comments. ^^
Date: March 20, 2013 10:30 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I liked the dialouge in this chapter and also the mannerisms. As usual, your extensive vocabulary gives great imagery to the story!
Date: March 20, 2013 10:19 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I always love the fact that I can get really wide eyed and smile whenever I read something you write
Date: March 20, 2013 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Awesome!!! Sounds just like Inu, cant wait for more.
Date: March 18, 2013 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Excellent Chapter. Looking forward to much more.