This storey makes me hate all of them, but in a way that makes me want to tear off all their clothes and have my way with them.

Haha this is the fic I that made me originally want an account! Saw the fan art and knew I needed to read this! Chapter 1 amazing already! I'll rate overall once I finish the fic :)

Da Grrrl Says: Rating is not a necessity. :) I'm satisfied with a positive reaction when a story is enjoyed. ^^

Aw man.... I hope you manage to find the time to pick this fic back up soon! I loved the pacing and the characterizations thus far, and am looking forward to a lot more~!!

The way you are able to change scenes so seamlessly is quite remarkable; it flows so well, and it's great to be able to see all of the characters throughout these chapters.

Also, even though the MBC members are not the nicest people, I can't help but like all of them, which is completely due to your ability to develop characters really well right from the start. And maybe another reason I like Inuyasha here is his tongue piercing *faints*

Love this story :)

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much! Not many people comment on the scene changes, so I'm really happy to hear that they're not clunky. I always try to be smooth about it, ending the scene on a slight cliffy, or something that I can easily pick up again. Plus, showing what everyone is doing at the same time is a must! And it's so weird that you reviewed this one -it's been bugging me for the longest time. I guess it wants a new chapter. *Works on it*

Thanks again, and YES, the tongue >.> THAT TONGUE. Oh, the things he can do with it.... XD

Love this story! You're on a roll :-)

This story is great! I can't wait to read other chapters! Your writing style is amazing. you really know how to make everything flow.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks very much! I appreciate that. ^^

Sounds like a great start to a story, can't wait to read more!

Wow I am totally hating on the Kouga, Bankotsu and Miroku right now. Total jerks. I look forward to what you may have planned for them (my guesses, but I refrain from typing them out due to your request lol) I hope the "bite in the ass" leaves a bruise for all of them though x]

i love it babe!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, doll! ^__^

Good god!that's a good plot!

OMG... I actually can't belive i didn't review... I just read through practically all your reviews that i was mortified when i didn't review this story... I mean come on! I love all of your originality because most of the fanfics i've read on Fanfiction.net involve Inuyasha being a Half-demon and it lacks orignality... But somehow they create there own wacky world which i love... But your writing is a whole over dimension... Seriously... I'm actually glad i crossed you on Deviantart... Where have you been all my life? O.O

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! You're so funny! <33

I've always been around, even on FFN, but I wasn't very active there because I was frequently plagiarized. I've since emptied my entire account there, so that's that. I've put 98% of my stuff in storage at Deviant Art, too. Here is the only place my works can be found, so I'm glad you did see me at dA before it was too late.

More importantly, it's a joy to know that you like my stories! I'm always happy when I hear stuff like that because it makes writing feel a bit more worth the problems that doing it causes me, so thanks very much!

Oh, wow! I love how you included Bankotsu in this fic! They guy rarely gets to be a part of the "good side" (not that InuYasha and the MBC are really "good guys" in this fic) I really like this story so far!!! Definitely going in my favorites!