[Report This]Date: April 01, 2012 9:48 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Well I'm glad Kagome didnt waste that lollipop!! =D Inuyasha is an ASS but I love him all the more. It'll be good to see how things progress when his feelings start to conflict with his goal. Also I like how Kikyou is younger and off the 'fk list' - lessons the obvious drama of one guy to girl >< Wonder why those two idiots (inu n kags) felt that the other ignored them. I can tell Inu feels a lil bitter by that thought, so maybe deep deep deep DEEP down he probably likes her, a lil flicker of light from his childhood xD
Oi, and I love how you had all the guys helped out Sango - omg Miroku is so fucking hot! If there was no Inuyasha that dudue would be my daily addiction in the worst way possible!!! I also liked how he ignored Sango - she gots some redeeming to do and I hope she swallow some of her pride and realize that she dont have to be alone in the world - especially now that those jocks arent gonna stop there :O
Kagome needs to stand up for herself for real. Eri had me laughing at "But you really should use your spine for more than his mattress!" LOL... you have the BEST lines out there!!! I really love reading ur stuff - always gets me all excited *___*
Can't wait to read more =D
[Report This]Date: March 30, 2012 7:45 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
i really liked this chapter- its cool seeing more from Kagome's perspective, and starting to see all the other side stories coming together.
[Report This]Date: March 28, 2012 1:33 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Looking forward to another chapter. Awesome stuff!
[Report This]Date: March 27, 2012 1:56 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
This was awesome! Can't wait for more! Your the best! :)
[Report This]Date: March 22, 2012 10:19 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
InuYasha's so bad xD ...and I LOVE it. Kagome calling him "Lucifer" was too fitting (using Photoshop for evil...for shame! Lol), and it had me cracking up. Poor girl has no idea what's coming, though I'm hella excited to see how it all plays out. And then damn. Eri REALLY let her have it, too o.o (not that I blame her). Can't wait to see what she and the "king" are like together, though I already get a pretty bad feeling about him. What's funny is that Light is actually pretty in-character (and you haven't even read DN, right?). I think he had teacher's on lock in DN-universe, too because he was such a star student, and he could be REALLY good at manipulating people when he wanted to be.
As for the rest of MBC, Bank is awesome xD Though it was pretty valiant of Miroku to bust his hand on that jerk's face, I loved Bank's insane threat (which he was probably serious about).
Can't wait to read what happens next!
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: AM-SKIIIII! <33333333
I'm way behind on answering reviews, but you know I had to answer this one! I've never read DN. Wanted to, but never did, so I'm WILDLY happy to hear that Light isn't too far away from who he's supposed to be. XD
InuYasha is a lot of fun, but I think everyone is. I have my most fun when I can wreak havoc without needless FLUFF >.> so I'm hoping this one will just flow for me. LOL @ o.o for Eri. That made me laugh. I could totally see you doing that! I feel a little sorry for Kagome, but she can handle harshness. She's <.< had practice. I knew you'd like Bank, too. He's a good guy at heart, but he can be totally nutso -which makes him fun and hilarious. I think I wanna start the next chapter of this. Look what you did! XD
Date: March 22, 2012 12:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Just started reading this one... Hahah the introduction is crazy good by the way..
Date: March 19, 2012 12:48 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I love everything about this story so far. High school fics are some of the best stories to read. I see it becoming one of my favorites(PBE will always win for me though xD). The only thing that irks me is kagome. She seems so weak! He inability to say no to her bf and her semi-haughty attitude is getting to me. Hopefully she makes a turn for the better after inuyasha fuckes her senseless ;)
Keep up the good work,girl!
[Report This]Date: March 11, 2012 12:37 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I just started reading this, and I just had to comment how adorable Inuyasha & Sesshomaru are with their brotherly love. I think it's refreshing. :) Most authors usually have them hate or tolerate each other, not that it's bad, but I like them getting along. *giggles*
I finally, finally gave in to my curiousity and googled you after reading countless fics dedicated to you (sounds creepy, I'm sorry T___). I have to say, I'm thoroughly impressed with your stories. They're not your average Inu fanfiction, and thank you for that.
Da Grrrl Says: Hi^^
I agree with you. It's definitely refreshing to see the brothers get along and I love to play with that in my stories. I still do the hate thing, too, but since it's already a staple, I like to explore other avenues.
And no worries. I don't think you stalked me -haha. Though, google may not be the best place to look up things about me since I have several invisible enemies (invisible because I don't know, never met, and did nothing to these people) who've made a little career of making things up about me. But the fact that you didn't let it deter you from enjoying my fics and leave supportive comments shows me who you are as a person. :) I'll be adding you to my member list. Complete your registration when you get the time. ^^
[Report This]Date: March 09, 2012 4:21 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Great story...I particularly like that u have have borrowed an OOC from a well known...u so get an sense of recognition and also its better in a way that its not any1 from IY anime itself...makes it much more interesting....
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! It was originally someone from Vampire Knight, but Light works just as well. He'll probably be pretty OOC, but I never stay in character anyway! :D
Date: March 08, 2012 11:25 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I think this is one of my favourites! You left us in suspense, I'm DYING to know what is going to happen.
Date: March 08, 2012 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Uh oh.. Trouble!
Date: March 08, 2012 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Ingenious, really. You know, everytime I read one of your stories, I always have to wonder HOW you come up with everything -- your plot, your inspiration, and your dialogues.
I remember I tried writing a fanfic once, it took me AN HOUR to type out 2 sentences. And then, I just gave up.
So, I really got to hand to you. :) Keep up the good work! You'll get really far if you choose to pursue writing/being an author as a career.
Date: March 08, 2012 10:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
:) Re-reading this one again from chapter 1. But it feels like I'm reading it for the first time!
Date: March 08, 2012 7:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Once again im hooked to another one of you fics.... admittedly I wasnt sure if i was going to like it, like it at first because of the hole bet scenario, BUT your style and the sub plots dragged me back, and im already re-reading it! Good work!
Da Grrrl Says: Hehe. Thanks. I get that a lot, actually. At first, people are pretty reluctant to wander in too far, but then they see something they like and decide to stick around. Well, I'll share a tip with you about my works. It's almost NEVER as cut and dry as it may seem on the surface, especially in the beginning. :)
Date: March 05, 2012 1:43 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Woot! That was awesome! I'm excited to see where this will go, this is the first Inuyasha/Vampire Knight crossover I've ever read and I'm lovin' it. Thanks for updating :)
Da Grrrl Says: It actually became an InuYasha/Death Note crossover. I got rid of Kaname Kuran a while back. But I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: February 23, 2012 1:59 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Awww! Bankotsu is so sweet...although, I doubt that's supposed to be one of his character traits lol. I'm kind of nervous about what Kouga's going to do to Katan, but I have a feeling that it's gonna be brutal! So I'm guessing that Miroku's pissed at Sango, but it was still nice for him to help her out, although I have to wonder about what Sango's going to do when she runs into Godo alone. Have I told you how much I LOVE InuYasha's attitude in this fiction? Whew! No wonder he has a fan club! Even if the members are totally stuck on his jock lol. Kikyo and Tsubaki are a few skittles short of a rainbow, but I enjoyed their part in this chapter ;) Kagome so needs to drop that Yamagi guy...I'd much rather see her with InuYasha (of course) lol. So, I've recently discovered that I really like Inu/Kag stories (especially yours). Admittedly, I get sick of seeing the typical Sess/Kag fiction where InuYasha becomes an insufferable prick and Kagome (always the wronged party) runs to Sesshomaru, so I've become more of a Inu/Kag and Sess/Rin reader. About time, huh? Anywhoways, I suppose that's all for now. I'll get around to reading the other updates after I do some studying; I have to read in moderation now, or I'll get behind in my homework :( P.S. It's nice to know that you're a collector, too! I've been looking for Daryl Dixon for my cousin. I'm debating against just buying DD by himself or buying the set that comes with Rick Grimes, Daryl Dixon, Zombie Walker, and Zombie Biter, but I don't know if he has the Deputy or not; he's a major action figure collector. I, on the other hand, collect snow globes and Archie Comics. I want to collect a snow globe from every state and then start collecting from different countries. Currently, I have 2 snow globes, but I used to have 23 of them from the states I've visited and from my Aunt and Uncle's cruise to Canada, but when I went out of town, my niece and nephew thought it would be fun to play catch with them and they just demolished my (small) collection :( But I guess it was my fault, I left my Armoire unlocked...I'm still kicking myself for that. Okay, I'll stop rambling! Oh! I just read the Beta post on Redemption and wow, I had a good laugh at that lol.Thanks for the lovely update, and I look forward to reading the next one you crank out...no pressure, though!
Date: February 23, 2012 12:37 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Damn, Inuyasha is sexy on this fic... I'm currently trying to decide if he is sexier here or on "The Neighbor"... and by the looks of it, I will be trying for a long time...lol
Kagome is really an interrogation point on this fic... I wonder a lot of things about her, but one that is constantly bugging me is how real (cannot find a better word for it) is her relationship with Yagami is... so far at this fic, I got the impression that is a very... "unfree" per say... for Kagome...
Can't wait to see how the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome will evolve!
Date: February 21, 2012 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I am enjoying the story so far and can't wait to read more. Thank you
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! ^^
Date: February 18, 2012 10:55 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I love Inuyasha in this story! Even though he's an ass his attitude is just oh so sexy ; D I'm confused on Kagome right now, but hopefully things with her will clear up soon. She's so mysterious in this story. Anyways can't wait for the next update : )
Da Grrrl Says: Hehe. InuYasha is a real "gem", isn't he? And this is just the start of the story! Hopefully, you'll still like him and be patient with him when he's being a complete TOOL. xD
[Report This]Date: February 17, 2012 5:44 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I am so hooked on this story, the characterisations and the scenarios you put them in is amazing. Inuyasha's character is just wow, delightfully devilish. Already we are beginning to see the way Yagami takes advantage of her, I can't wait to read what you have planned and how the bet will play out.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks a bunch -it means a lot. If I Want To is probably my fave of my recent fictions, so I really want to dig into it and get it going. I took a long hiatus due to personal stuff and lack of inspiration, but I don't plan to let it lapse that long again. I'm not sure how long it will be, but we're looking at 20 chapters at least, so I hope I make them fun. :D
Date: February 14, 2012 7:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
You advised me to start signing a regular name to my reviews because I usually write reviews with random names (or just Anon), so I decided to do that. :D
Anyways, I've been putting off this story for as long as possible just because I read the first chapter and you said it was your last HS story, which made me sad. I am such a sucker for HS fanfiction; it's my guilty pleasure (but in your case, it's very well-written, so not so guilty after all). So I wanted to save this for a /very/ rainy day (like how I put off reading the last HP book for three month)s, but I am just so intrigued every time you update that I just have to read a little. A teensy bit. It's amazing already!
Wishing you and your hands very well. <3
Da Grrrl Says: Yay! Now I can add you to the registration list. :P (I'm gonna assume you're "homework anon?" Hope I'm right. I got that wrong with someone else already. lol.)
You're not alone. I love HS fics -definitely a guilty pleasure. But I didn't want to keep churning those out (not that I have many -3, maybe, excluding this one?). But the good news is that this won't be a novella (10 chapters or less). It's full on PULP-FICTION (20 chapters or more), so at least you won't have to say goodbye to it so soon. ^___^
And shankies! I'm happy the sneak peek you sacrificed was worth the read. I'm going a lil over the top with this one, so hopefully, you'll enjoy the ride!
Date: February 13, 2012 10:01 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
I am very happy about this update!!! I cant wait to read more!
Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, Jay!
[Report This]Date: February 11, 2012 2:50 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
These guys are too cool for school. Love Miroku and Sango scene. Bank and Jak was good too. But let's get to the star Inuyasha he is such a bad ass! Kagome better do as he say or else!
Da Grrrl Says: I'm watching you, Kau. Don't start sniffing around mate's butt! *-.-* I've been hearing things at the barn! u*-.-*u
Date: February 10, 2012 10:22 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
It is a very good story so far
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks!
Date: February 07, 2012 11:26 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Love it, loveitloveitloveitloveit! I especially love the Jakotsu scenes. That little fruit is one of my favorite gay peeps from anime and I ahve a keychain of him on my luggage case :P I like how you got the fear of being a gay teenager in there, very well done. Much luv and thanks for the lovely chappie! your penny