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Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I could say that was hot, but it's painful... It hurts to know you can't have the one you love. The explosion between two needy souls. It's not just fucking, and it's beyond lovemaking. It's a thirst of souls quenched by anguished mechanics. You're so awesome. :D 



Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Oh but you know there's a happy ending here, cause my Kiki is so mushy. rofl. I love how you can write a lemon so tastefully. and moreover, I love how in love Inuyasha is with Kagome. :D



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I wish I could fly away in a ball of light. It would be inexpensive and efficient. hmmmm lol. Kikyo's about to get her ass waxed, and I don't mean by Sesshomaru. I am about to kick her ass myself. Skanky ol' nasty ass clay pot mofo. ::growls:: Please make her die painfully, Kiki. ;) Poor Kagome, and her not so secret secret. She can sense the jewel shards though. Shouldn't she be able to sense the one in her home? 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

This is the best chapter of this fic thus far. You never disappoint kiki, and to be compared to you in any way is an honor I am unworthy of. Luc 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Holy Shit kiki, you killed Sessh! I knew for sure he would bring everyone back with tokijiin. You're not really leaving them dead, are you? I'd love to see how Kagome gets out of this one. And if you let Kikyo win, I'm writing my own alternate ending in which she gets eat alive by vultures... hey, that might not be so bad after all. ::scowls:: kisses, kiki.......... Luc  



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

An epilogue?! What the hell could happen now? You killed off everybody. Imcluding Shippo. This is one of the saddest stories I've ever read, and it really fucking depressed me. :( The redeeming part is, wherever you pulled this shit out that Kagome transformed and she could wield Tetsusaiga... WOW. That was incredible! :D Wow... I can't believe fucking Kikyo killed everyone. How COULD you allow her such power?! I'm all pissed now... And any fic that could evoke these kinds of emotions is an A+. You rock Honey Bee. :D 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

That epilogue almost gave me ulcers. I knew it was the only way you'd bring them back. But it still hurt, because they weren't THEM. Good Job Kiki. I'm never reading another one of your sad stories. lol. ;)  



Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Well, damn, thats it, just leave us with a CLIFFY FOR KAMI'S SAKE!!!I love your story BTW, hate the-dead-one, but love your story...has the Official-Dead-Bitch-Bashing-Shovel, if anyone wants a wake at a clay pot. Only clay pots I like, have a flower in em, and Kikyo sure as hell ain't no flower. So, now that I have that part off my chest, pleaseeeeeee update soon. 



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Ok, lets see Kagome kick that dead bitch in the ass. And maybe a few othere places perhaps? Damn fine story here.



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Damn, Im ok with some good ole' angst, but dayyyuumm!. This beats the band. Oh, dont mind me, Im just a sucker for happy endings. I hope theres one to this one, somewheres. Keep it up tho.



Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Damn, you're a sneaky wench with the way you thru that ending in there like that! You know, this just screams SEQUAL! I dunno, it just seemed like you kinda left the door open for one. You know, with the kids that came running in and all. Just an interesting thought on my part. But I did love your story. It was great. Thanx for writing it.



Reviewer: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

InuYasha so needs Kagome.Its so obvious!I hope it all ends well.Please update!



Reviewer: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Sorry I have not reviewed.I could't find the story.Anyway is Kagome pregant?I am so glad Kinky-hoe is dying next week in the show.Man I hate her.She is a real pain in the ass.PLease update I need it.*pouts and does puppy daog eyes*Please. 



Reviewer: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Whyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!Its not far*sniff*What is that*wipes water of my face*Tears?I can't belive you made me cry ...again.*sob*And yes I want a Epiloge!*snif* 



Reviewer: naiobi (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

Grr... Inuyasha why do you have to be such a fool?!? Yay, another story from an awesome author! Great story so far... can't wait til you update (and hopefully it's soon) ^_^



Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: naiobi (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

OMG that was so sad, yet a very good chapter!! ;____; Please write an epilogue... I'll be waiting for it ;)



Reviewer: inu_pup (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

awwww poor inu.....miroku is right, he is one whipped dog.... he needs a loveable kagome....but on a happier note this fic isn't really like the others it's really exciting with the romance and what not :D



Reviewer: inu_pup (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

wow ur such an amazing writer.... lol when i waz reading this my eyes were all big and my mouth was open...:D update sooooooon 



Reviewer: inu_pup (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

omg i was like on the verge of tears...ur ending was such a heartbreaker, but a really good one :D BUT YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH WE WANT AN EPILOGUE!!



Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: inu_pup (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye

awww that was a really awesome ending....this fic just oozes awesomeness *so do all ur other fics*



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