Date: July 07, 2011 10:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
O.....M.....G.....*tear* im like so... i dont know... im listening to the song and reading this chap, and im crying. once again, u have proved every1 rite that u ARE indeed the BEST WRITER OF INUYASHA FANFICS KNOWN TO MAN!!!! the way you're able to protray every1's feelings is jus amazing.... i dont even know wat to say, im crying so much..... thank you SOO MUCH for making Inuyasha even better than it already is. ur the onli person i know that's capable of doing that. cant wait till the next BAD ASS chap:D im sure it'll b even better than the first. Kagomestar aka Inu-Addict
Date: July 07, 2011 10:32 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
i like how sess takes the initiative at the end and just grabs him. he's likem you're coming with me. ^_^ but, i can understand why inu would resist. sess is throwing him shit left and right. first, years of abandonment, then now he calls him brother? what is poor inu supposed to think. well, sess has got to start somewhere, eh. just let him, inu. ; )
Date: July 07, 2011 10:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Love it! Need I say more! Hugs! Christal
Date: July 07, 2011 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I like so far I is good I hope you up date soon
Date: July 07, 2011 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
i found a computer in the sticks! i just had to post a formal review since i had the chance. i'm loving this. you are really capturing the emotions of both inuyasha and sesshomaru and how it is really going to be up to the elder brother to make the first major steps in a reconsiliation. i think it will be so much harder for inuyasha to come to terms with the past since the wounds that sesshomaru started were deepened and reinforced by almost everyone who met him. beautiful work!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Hey hey hey!!!! This story is of the hizzle!!lol...um, I love this story with all the passion i have! You are one fantastic writer KiKi ( can i call u that?? ) anyway, job well done! hurry update this story, and the REST OF YOUR STORIES ASWEL!!!! I'm really loosing my sanity! : ( it's been so LONG since SMC wuz updated. I know that having the 2 post ova your stories wuz alot of work, n for that, i'll try and keep my sanity in check. I LOVE THEM ALL!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:28 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
So, Sess has had feeling for quite a while, eh? Interesting. Wonder how long it takes him to make a move. Great chapter. Update when you're able.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
You rock InuGrrrl!!!! I see the famous Tai-youkai has feeling for his brother, although I think it's awful, I still love it non-the-less. Which it cud be different. I still can't help but wonder why inu couldn't let kags stay in his time or he in hers...or let all of them, including sesshomaru to be in her time. But then that would jus be like every other fic,ne? I still love it, you are one awesome writer kiki! keep it up!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I like this chapter I think it was good I hope you up date on soon.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
wait...that was two fics with sweet parts to them. kiki? angst queen? i know, i know, this one gets me. it's just, and i can't think of a better word, but profound, on so many levels. you're going into how much has to be dealt with, how much healing has to be done and the fact that inuyasha was only ever accepted truly by kagome.sesshomaru has just as many obsticals to overcome as inuyahsa and he's beginning to realize in this chapter how badly the hanyou was hurt. plus i'm not sure if inu was ever taught that being with another male youkai is not considered wrong amongst youkai. and sesshomaru will have to deal with the fact that inuyasha does indeed love kagome as well and probably still will when they are together. beautiful...and now the song is in my head.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:24 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I really like how you're taking this. Slow, but not too slow. But not moving too fast to like rush things. And theres the question of will Inu stay...Guess Sess will have to prove himself to him then.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
But of course he shall stay! Inuyasha will stay with Sesshy and develop feelings for him and they'll all live happily ever after! ...Yeah right, I wish :P:P There will be angst, obstacles, blood, sweat and tears or this wouldn't be a Kiki fic! But that's why we all love you :):) I never expected to like a Sess/Inu fic..yet, I can honestly say that I am enjoying this story. I think it is really sweet and the way you are pacing the relationship is well done. I am interested to see what happens next. Update soon! Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 07, 2011 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
This chapter wuz nothing short of amazing. I'm actually feel it for sesshomaru. but inuyasha seriously must give him a chance. I guess he'd voice his decision next chapter, ne? I enjoyed this chapter alot...great job.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
beautiful, emotional, heartwarming, true to both boys (can you tell i'm loving this fic?). i especially liked sesshomaru's little bout of 'i am lord and i will not be denied, i'm going to drag the whelp back here by his ears and make him be happy' only to realize that actions like that were what drove inuyasha away in the first place. they are both dominant, they are both alphas, no one can be in charge of the other and it will have to be mutual trust and love that will bring them together. and wise old kaede knows it. kagome would want inuyasha happy, she's said it enough when she thought kikyou was his choice, why would a life with his brother be any different? i can't wait to see what decisions will be made by both our boys!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:21 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Ah Kiki, thank you for updating this story. I am stressed like you wouldn't believe and an update from you was exactly what I needed. Especially since this chapter is so...what's the word? Lovely, Relaxing, peaceful, heartwarming...even though their was a bit of anger in it, it was really soothing. I'm making no sense but I don't care! Lol. Kaede is so wise, don't you get the feeling that she knows everything? Interesting...anyways,terrific work as always and you never disapoint me. Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 07, 2011 10:20 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Sometimes I have a hard time reading yoai. Most are so..I dunno. But they really don't compare to this. You've really kept them true to themselves, where as others Ive read made Inu into a wuss of sorts. And as you said, that this was a love story, and I truly feel that it is. You can see them slowly coming outta their shells, sorta speak, but not really wavering on who they really are. This is oh-so excellent.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:19 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
please finish this story....I love it!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:18 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
i agree with bluezinthos. having two alphas get along )in that way) together may take nothing short of a miracle. but, our kiki can do it! ^_^ i love how inu blushes when he remembers certain things, and i bet kaede really does know more than she lets on. hahaha, one of the benefits of being a baba... i guess. T_T looking forward to the chaps to come. they just don't come fast enough, tho. addicted, i is. don't mean to rush you. masterpieces take time, i know. sorry. i just love this story so much. gyaaaaaah. -k- all done.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:17 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
yeah, the boys had a moment! it's so touching how sesshomaru is willing to only take what inuyasha is willing to give and that inuyasha realizes there is room in his heart for both his love for kagome and the companionship and love he needs from his brother. i just hope sesshy doesn't mess anything up by with holding information from inuyasha. he's too vulnerable right now. and i'm dying to know if they'll survive long enough to see kagome in the modern era!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:16 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
This is, without a doubt, one of your most passionate stories. I can feel everything that they feel. It is so sweet how Inuyasha just wants Sesshoumaru's love. One thing that I love about this story is that it is unpredictable. Usually I have a clue of what you are planning on writing next but this time...I have no idea where you are going. Kudos for that! :bows: I await your next update, Kiki-sama. May the writing gods smile upon you. Are you pleased with how this chapter turned out? Cause you should be! Update soon and happy writing!
Date: July 07, 2011 10:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I really love this. As I said before, most Inu/Sess stories Ive read make Inu into a wuss of sorts and you havent done that, which I think is great. Inu still has Kagome in his heart and still loves her which is something that also came across my mind about. But I was wondering when Inu would come around and you did it beautifully.
Date: July 07, 2011 10:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
What a wonderful story so far. I really like the thought of Sesshomaru and Inuyasha together. They are a part of my favorite pairings. So far so good ~ thank you for sharing your story!!
[Report This]Date: December 14, 2010 12:12 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Like a River Flowing to the Sea
Gods!! I finally ran my way over here to read the update.. and you did it again, you always have the nicest touch to take further into the story of boys and leave us with a flutter of how it will end. Don't know if it will have many more updates but you did good with this chapter -- thank you for all work you put into it.. it's a joy to read.. (^_^) *hugs*
Date: December 13, 2010 8:52 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Like a River Flowing to the Sea
Great chapter, Grrrl. I know I've been crappy about reviewing lately, but I just had to leave one for this. Not a big yaoi fan, but I really love this. Too many InuSess stories just ignore all the extremely valid ISSUES between them to get straight to the sex...True, that is the FUN part, but it's the principle of it all :-). But, no worries of that with THIS. No plot holes, no potential angst left unexplored. Great again, girl.
[Report This]Date: December 13, 2010 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Oops.. forgot me stars! :D