Date: December 13, 2010 3:43 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Like a River Flowing to the Sea
*applauds.. whistles* Woof.. Woof.. Woof! :P
Da Grrrl Says: MARUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! <3
[Report This]Date: December 13, 2010 2:48 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Like a River Flowing to the Sea
What a surprise to see an update for this story. Been a while. The slow build up of their relationship makes it exciting and realistic... nit to mention hot. An unsure Inuyasha just makes you want to reassure him, all night long. Lol Hope you're up to writing more on it. You know how I love my yaoi!! : P
Da Grrrl Says: COUUUUUUUURT! *glomps*
Isn't it a shock to see an update after 3 years?? That was one helluva dry spell, huh? LOL. Thanks for always being supportive of me and being the beta from Nirvana! I haven't pestered you about chaps for ages, but I'm honestly going to start because when the chaps are long, I always, ALWAYS mess up by skipping words and crap like that. >.< Plus, you just rock. xD I already have an idea on where this will go, so I'll be starting on the next chapter pretty soon. I'm working on a few others, too, so don't be too shocked if you see some beta mail. *hugs*
Hope you and the family are having a great holiday season!
Date: December 13, 2010 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Like a River Flowing to the Sea
Ah! Be still my beating heart! I liked this chapter so much. Is it new because it seems that the two had kissed before. Rin was so cute! And, it's great that Inuyasha teams up with her to torment Jaken. Loved the end, just loved it. I'm glad that Inuyasha is willing to move forward. *huts* Thanks for the update! You know that this is my favorite story of yours. ^_^
Da Grrrl Says: SNOWFALL! <3
I'm so glad you were able to see the update. I was like >.> damn. She probably gave up on this thing. LOL. I took your advice with my pacing and decided that it's more important to have a nice build up rather than worry so much about chapter count. This still won't be too long of a story, but I'm still going to let it flow the way it wants to.
And yus! They've kissed before, but with each one, InuYasha feels a little more secure (that's what I was aiming for, anyway). Rin eases his nerves quite a bit, too. So does Jaken- since he's a "healthy" distraction. :P So there will be more of them.
I revised all of the prior chapters before I posted this one just because >.< it needed it. I didn't do too much -this is an old story and I wanted it to keep its early feel- but it should be easier on the eyes now.
Thanks for the review -it means SO much coming from my favorite yaoi author. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: August 22, 2009 12:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I found your site randomly through PaperDemon and the fanart and I fell in love with the story immediately. I hope there's more to come past chap 9 - it's too good not to finish
[Report This]Date: March 31, 2009 2:43 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Ok.. it's been ages since I read this..and I forgot to leave a review... but I reread it... and I will have to say I love this story.. you have a way of making the brothers seems so real with the feelings...
And the way you draw us in with the drama... I can't wait until the end of this one.. or at least the next chapter... (^_^)b
Author's Response: Thanks, Neo! <3
I really like this story (though it doesn't seem like it.) It's just that I got stuck on the next chapter and totally stayed there, lol. I have half of it written, so I didn't abandon it. I'm just >.< Yeah. Glad you liked it, though! :D
Date: July 09, 2008 11:42 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Sigh. I love this story and have just read it all over again. I look forward to the day when you can post the next chapter. This is such a beautiful romance. You weave this around my heart with a steel grip. Contentment. ^_^ Snow
[Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 12:28 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
I read this first chapter on FF but rest assured I'll be back to read the rest of it soon, internet service provider permitting. *dies* Now I'm going to have a look see at the latest drabble. It's been so much fun so far. :)
Date: November 25, 2007 11:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
You and I talked about this briefly and you know that I am not a YAOI fan, at all. But like I said in my email the other day, it justp kept jumping out with me like Rebound and EOS and I just HAD to give it a shot, uncomfortable or not. And I have to say that once while at first I was uncomfortable reading the more "tender" parts, I just had to keep reading and I am so glad that I did. The more I read, the easier it was to understand why things were as they were. I don't know how to describe it any other way. The way you wrote this story ... it was actually beautiful and I can't wait until you finish it. It was heartbreaking to see our Inu tearing himself up like he did and I cried for him. Your stories always invoke such emotion from their readers. I haven't been disappointed yet and I have a good feeling that I won't ever be. Keep up the great work!
~Liz "^_^"
Author's Response: Thank you, Liz!!! That's exactly what I was trying to do and you picked up on it, which means a lot because I know you don't like yaoi.rnThanks for giving this a chance; I know it wasn't easy. <33
Date: November 25, 2007 6:10 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term!
Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month.
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After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php
The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.
Our official website can be found here -
http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/
And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
~ The Daimyo
Owner of the Feudal Association
Date: October 24, 2007 3:13 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!
The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.
Our official website can be found here -
http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/
The current nominations pages are here:
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Check these out to find out what you were nominated for!
And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -
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Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007.
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
Winners will be notified by me after November 1st.
~ The Daimyo
Owner of the Feudal Association
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[Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 6:57 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Hi!
As I already wrote on fanfiction.net, I absolutely love this story and I hope you will continue it.
You have a very nice website by the way^^
[Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 10:40 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
*sniffle* You're such a sap. Are we going to have any...erm...lemon in this?
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 4:29 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
*Sniff Sniff* This is such a touching story and I am once again up until 2 in the morning reading your stories. You have more than just a knack for writing, and if you ever saw fit to write books to sell i would probably be the first in line for it at the local bookstor. You say that this is yor first Yaoi storie, but as im reading it I would say you're getting a pretty good feel for it I cant wait for the next chapter!
Signed inu Chan
Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review! This is definitely my first ever yaoi, and I'm working on the next chap right now. It's the lemon chappie and I'm so nervous. Wish me luck! ^^
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2006 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
seriously, this fic rocks and i really hope you continue it. i want to see where it goes. you always make me crazy with your fics... they're too good. i am an addict!
Author's Response: Beta-babe :P A new chap is coming -brace yourself. Lemons are ahead!
[Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 2:19 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Never Know, Never Trust
Wow, Sesshoumaru was so forthcoming and Inuyasha's reactions were very in character. You've done a great job. What exactly changed our coldhearted youkai? Snow
Author's Response: Snow!! You reviewed!! I'm SO honored, you have NO idea! This fiction isn't the easiest for me because I'm really trying to make it decent, but I'm soooo honored that you read it. WOW! Torn has been my sole inspriration for it, so if anything, it's me that's intimidated by you! You're totally awesome! Congrats again on the IYFG win, it was completely deserved. ^_^
[Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 2:08 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Feel it Inside Out
Ooooh, steal my breath away, why doncha? Sesshoumaru healing Inuyasha like that and then placing a small kiss where the wounds had once been was just too sweet. I'm off to see what happens at dinner! Snow
[Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 1:59 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: ...And I Will Know
*Sniffle* Chapter two was so sweet. Sesshoumaru allows Rin to kiss him on the cheek and then he rescues a heartbroken Inuyasha who is ready to meet his death. Wonderful. I'm of to read the next chapter. Snow
[Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 1:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Swing the Heartache
Oh wow! That was so wonderfully written. I had no idea. I can only hope to live up to your expectations. The quality of your work is intimidating to someone like me. Thank you for your support and anywhere that I can do the same for you, please let me know.
Snowfall
[Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 6:55 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
I thought I wrote review...hmmm...You have really outdone yourself with this one I think.
The way you displayed both their emotions is incredible. Inu letting his heart not just feel, but also letting it go. And go toward someone he never dreamed he ever wanted to go to, let alone wanting in return. And Sesshomaru showing any hint a feelings for anyone except for Rin, was amazing in itself. Youve really done the pair justice, Onna. You really did. Ive read many of this pairing, but none have never come even close to what youve done.
Author's Response: Onna!!!!
Thanks so much *super blush* This chap was so hard to write, you wouldn't believe. I got a little choked up when he was by the well. (You know how I/K I am.) But it was necessary. I'm SO glad you like it. Yaoi is NOT easy to write, lemme tell ya, especially when I'm trying to be somewhat canon <.< So having you & others like it is such a huge boost. *huggles*
[Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Hai, Hai, Hai!!! I luv this chapter! Thank kami himself that you updated! I wuz crying when he went by the well. I feel it.
I wuz saying that kags cud come baq for a sec or so. Then a asked myself...'what the fuck r you thinking bubbles' If she came baq, he's jus get more confuse. And I WANT him to be with sesshomaru. For once it's not kags. Gomen kags, but Inu n sesshy seem so kawaii 2gether!! *sigh* And when he kissed kaede, i jus kept thinking 'how cute!'
So he cud of gone to kags time, but didnt cuz of his blood. Sad, but am happy! Atleast he's gonna b with that sexy God, name sesshomaru! And that speech he gave at the well had so much feeling! Am jus beyond glad! I cant even describe it! You're so AWESOME!!! Onegai, update soon!!^__^ Dont forget the other fic when it's kags/sesshy^^
[Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Drama, drama, drama! You have such talent for writing hentai, angst and DRAMA!! This is probably one of the most DRAMAtic pairings out there. You keep me guessing all the time Kiki. I really don't know where you are going with this and that make me love it more. I'm definitely going to keep reading to see what happens next. Have fun and happy writing!
[Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 7:23 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
Damn gurrrl!! I cried that was so sad!
another amazing well-written chapter!
I look forward to the next!
*huggles*
[Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 2:18 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Clear the Clouds Away
i'm sitting here crying at work damn it! i still wonder how long they will live. will they make it to meet up with kagome and shippou in the future? i'm dying to know that as much as i'm dying to know if they are able to heal each other. beautiful. this has to be one of your most bittersweet stories yet.
[Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 8:05 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If it Sets Me Free
Good interaction between the brothers. It was well written and seemed mostly in character. (actually it was really in character for this inu and sess) I hope that Sess will explain why he kept that particular outfit.
[Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 1:58 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If it Sets Me Free
I loved that!!! The ending wuz cute. Dont forget the kissing part in the room! I'm glad that you wrote this fic. Like I said bfore, I'm not exactly a sesshy/inu fan, but with this I am. Oh, yea...memba you told me to post my story? Well with alot of hesitating, i finally found the guts to post it. I'd really like it if you read it on fanworks.org. 'Diary Of A Woman'....pwease tell me what you think!^.^