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Reviewer: Cinnimonbunbun   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2013 7:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow I guess life can change from Rich to none rich in a flash poor Kagome I hope things get better for them



Reviewer: Meika   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2013 2:44 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Can't tell you how many times iv'e read this one. Abso-fucking-lutely one of the best story endings, and itself as a whole, you've made ;)

DaGrrrl says: Haha! Thanks! Happy you like it! :D



Reviewer: WithLoveVenom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2013 1:40 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Spider's Pit

I loved this chapter so much! I'm so excited to see what's in store for Inuyasha and Kagome :) Awww Rin and Sesshomaru! It's awesome to see the guys' softer sides.



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2013 6:05 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

Good chapter. But I only have three words for Kikyou: DIE! DIE! DIE!!!



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2013 5:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

The kissing scene is nicely done. Its really a shame that Rumiko Takahashi never had Inuyasha and Kagome french kiss in the anime or manga.



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2013 7:20 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Partners in Crime

No really, this story is quite good. I'm loving it so far.



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2013 6:42 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always By Chance

Hahahahaha! The Devil will be chasing her! Oh God, you put Inuyasha in leather! That mental image is going to give me the hots for days now!

DaGrrrl says: Yeah, this is my first, most incoherent dive into serials. It needs tons of work, and I started to fix it up, but then got distracted. XD But I hope to finish editing it one day. Don't expect anything to make sense!



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2013 6:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow! I am reading this story for the first time and I almost can't believe its your first serial fic. The beginning is really good. The stage is set, the heroine is introduced....its just....again, WOW!



Reviewer: WithLoveVenom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2013 2:37 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Anything You Can Do...

Oh, I adore Kagome in this story! Especially with how awesome she was by besting Inuyasha again. I just love how you write both of them. Plus, Inuyasha when he is determined is pretty sexy ;)



Reviewer: Inufan82   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2013 12:39 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Lol, Loved the ending! It was an awesome story through and through and I'm extremely glad that I decided to read it! Thank you very much for yet another wonderful read and I look forward to the next one, now I just have to decide which fic that will be!



Reviewer: Inufan82   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2013 1:37 PM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Secrets, Lies and Brotherly Love

Gotta say, I'm not usually one for classic Inuyasha high school stories, but this one has certainly captured my interest! I especially interested in the Naraku/Mayu twist and getting to see how everything plays out once Kikyo + Koga find out that they're just being manipulated. Thank you for yet another wonderful story! I look forward to seeing how everything will play out in the end!



Reviewer: WithLoveVenom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2013 1:26 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

The more I read, the more I love this story! I really like the Kagome/Inuyasha interactions, and the Rin/Sesshomaru ones ;)

And ugh, Kikyo, I already dislike her, and am rooting for Kagome (when haven't I? lol)

Love this story!



Reviewer: Ever_After_Beginnings12   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2013 9:26 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Awwwwwww, that was beautiful!!!
Man, you just keep reminding me why I love inuyasha and kagome sooooo much!!!
Excellent work!!

DaGrrrl says: Thanks! Very glad you had fun! ^^



Reviewer: WithLoveVenom   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2013 2:48 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Great beginning to this story! I was hit in the feels right off the bat, and just want to comfort Kagome and her family. I really like the way your writing flows in this chapter; very enjoyable. So excited to read the rest!



Reviewer: Lukkie2332   Signed   [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 7:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You're very good at starting stories, you know how to pull us into the stories.



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2013 5:47 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

If I now use the word "abso-fucking-loutely" in common parlance, does that mean I have a problem...? Nah, never mind. I don't too much care if I do.

Da Grrrl Says: LOL. I actually saw a surge in "abso-fucking-lutelys" in fandom back when this was first posted in 2005. Would it be bad if I took credit for it? XDDD



Reviewer: Sammie_Elise   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2013 10:37 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Saturday Night Prep

EKK!! Love it! IDK what you were talking about but if this is riddled with 'mistakes' i must be reading some screwed up stories. So for its wonderful. Inu in a gang and riding a bike? Yummy! Break me off a piece!

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! Thanks so much. ^^ >p>This story IS full of mistakes, but if you can still enjoy it, then I'll count myself lucky. :D



Reviewer: Ever_After_Beginnings12   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2013 10:41 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

Okay, Inuyasha's reaction was hilarious!!;) Your stories just keep getting better and better!! On to the next chapter! Awesome work!!:)



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Signed   [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2012 2:21 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: And So It Begins..

Well this chapter was just full of cheery, pleasant foreshadowing



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Signed   [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2012 12:59 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Its been a while since I got to read. Taking a break from finals studying, and found this little story :) Your first ever chapter story huh? I'm very excited and can't wait to get further into this one!



Reviewer: Cicera   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2012 12:34 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

I love this. I definitely see why you'd be proud of this story. I also see the distinct growth in writing and its amazing how truly talented you are.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much, m'dear! I'm always ridiculously happy when someone notices that I got better, lol. That was years ago, and I've grown since, but I still like this cray thing. It was my first true labor of love! XD



Reviewer: trinity71307   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2012 10:56 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Want You To Know Who I Am

O this story is really cute even if its an early 1 its still good

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! ^^



Reviewer: Akihana   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2012 10:56 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

I remembered liking this story when I read it when it was first put up, and rereading it was really enjoyable. It's been too long since I've read fanfics. I'm looking forward to reading more!



Reviewer: 018Luxio   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2012 3:39 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

great story, love it!!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! ^^



Reviewer: amauck   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2012 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

"The Plastics"....do i smell a Means Girls homage?

Da Grrrl Says: Yes, yes you do.



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