Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: bettychan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

That's just not right. That was a horrible place to stop. Please update as soon as you can. I need to know what happens next. 



Reviewer: annandrea (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Holy shit taki Mushrooms!!!! I **** love this story! 100 *** thumbs up man! YOU ROCK! (i hope i did that right) please please email me to ge me premission to place this story on my site. ~Anna~ BTW...great ending!!!!!!!!!



Reviewer: annandrea (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

^-^ I re-read the story. I just love it when Kikyo dies!!! This story should be in a contest, and it'd win. Plus i wouldnt call it Hentani, or lemons but sexual content or basically " Fooling". But anyways, Good job >b< thumbs up all the way 



Reviewer: darkmage009 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

the story is abso-fucking-lutely wonderful!!! i like the combinations of the story.. the romance the action and hentai scenes.. at first.. i was a little disappointed that sesshy killed kouga.. but then it was great that he revived him and your story is so wonderful... i really love it.. thank kami i found your wonderful story... i hope to see more of your stories!!



Reviewer: darkmage009 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OH MY GOODNESS I DIDN'T know your also the writer of rebound!! so far i've been dying to wait your updates coz rebound is so damn good what the fuck!! your are so great!!! i'd like to kill you... ^_^ i guess i should pay more attention to the authors name from now on .. and that explains why inugurrl (am i ryt w/ the spelling?) yeah watever... ur name sounds familiar so that's it! shit you are so great



Reviewer: nyan nyaannnn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

holy fuck! this story is abso-fucking GOOOD! LMFAO DID THAT MAKE SENSE? o.O LOL anyways... nice job! ^______^ you're DEFINATELY one of my FAVORITE authors here on MEDIAMINER!!! LOVE YOU SOOOOOSOOOOSOOO MUCH! ^____^ lol .. i sound like a weird stalker person o.O.. cant wait for more stories x3



Reviewer: nyan nyaannnn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

people below said they were close to tears or they were actually crying! i was tearing a bit at the end! sooooooo fucking good =) hehe~ sorry for the double post -.-;;;; 



Reviewer: razorbladesinner (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Ohhh, Naraku and Kikyo are sooooo dead. I can't wait :D. Poor Rin though, Sesshy will make it better though.



Reviewer: razorbladesinner (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You totally distracted me with that "Bow down to your alpha thing"...I temporarily forgot they were in a life threatening situation LOL. Poor fluffy...he will be okay...right????? 



Reviewer: Night_Miko (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Inteasiest at it's best. You should be proud and I cannot wait to read more.



Reviewer: Night_Miko (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

What's going to happen next? I have to know. Update real soon please.



Reviewer: NatilieAngel (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

One chapter left!(Heart breaks)I soo don't want this fanfic to end. It's excellent and orginal also you are good at leaving cliffhangers, lol.



Reviewer: NatilieAngel (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OMG that was soo great, I loved the part when Inuyasha asked Kagome to marry her and all. This Fanfic is the greatest one I've ever read! It's soo sad that it had to end though *cries* Good job with it, I loved it so much. I think alot of people agree with me when I say I hope you will consider in writing more.  



Reviewer: aranay (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I LOVE YOU!!This is the best fanfic I've ever read!I love the pairings,and what you did to Kikyo was absolutely genious.And what you did for the finale...Whao,girl,you the best!!!!!



Reviewer: aranay (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

PLEASE KEEP DOING STORIES LIKE THIS. and don't forget to always add the humiliate,torure,and kill Kikyo factor.  



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Aw..it's over. How sad, and yet, it's happy at the same time. Lol, great story, and I feel special because I think I was the first to review it, lol.



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Aw..it's over. How sad, and yet, it's happy at the same time. Lol, great story, and I feel special because I think I was the first to review it, lol.



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

One question....what about Rin? She's still all deformed and beaten and...well, pretty much a wreck! Lol. Nah, Kagome'll probably heal her. You know, it's like 38 chapters but it went by too fast! Lol. Ok, I'm losin' it, robinstar



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Uh-Oh. Fluffy's gonna blow. Lol. Great updates! (Yeah, I know. You're tired of hearing that, lol) I've said it many times but, yet again, poor Rin. I mean, really, what did she ever do to Naraku? Evil bastar-nevermind. Lol, can't wait til the next chapter, robinstar  

Gr.  



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I'm still moping over here for Rin, but all in all, it's still a great story. Can't wait til the next chapter, robinstar



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I wanna cry. Poor Rin! Naraku that perverted wench! Lol. Kidding. As always, loved it, (except for the Rin beating) and can't wait until the next chapter. Wow, this is almost like Resident Evil with the running around a mansion and all, lol. K i have to go and update some of my stuff before these people start going crazy over at FanFiction, lol. Bye, Hallie



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow..awesome twist. Poor Rin. Oh, who am I kidding? Poor Sesshy!!! Lol...so much drama. Yikes, I know Kouga's a traitor but the whipping was just a tad bit harsh. Well, at least Inu cared enough to stop it. Can't wait til the next updates, robinstar 



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Great update! A spy...hm..makes me wonder if Kouga can be considered a spy. I bet you...an email that it's Kouga. Just kidding, XD Lol, I love how Rin gets all dressed up to see her man, lol. But, I can't say that I like the Sess/Rin coupling. I WANT FLUFFY FOR MYSELF! XD Can't wait til the next chapter, robinstar  



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I loved this chapter but you know, I gotta say, what Naraku did to Kaede was just a tiny bit disturbing. How can someone so goodlooking be so evil?! (Kidding) Ok..well, I'm only kidding a little. For being two-demensional, he does look pretty good. But, Sesshy will always be my number one. Ok, way off topic. Lol, anyway can't wait til the next chapter, robinstar 



Reviewer: robinstar (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Ok, just kidding. One word. Wow. WOW. It was everything it was cracked up to be. Lol, I love how they just do it all out on the beach. I was cracking up when Sesshomaru said to just leave them there. I know they were in a private part of the beach but all I could think about was someone going to the beach and spotting a naked couple alseep in the sand. Lol. Well, GREAT chapter. I loved it. Kikyo needs to just die already. Sheesh, Kagura, kill her already! I know this review is really long but I have to make it longer by risking stupidity. What the heck is Beta?! Lol, every new chapter says "Thanks to Lauren for awesome Beta" and I'm thinkin', 'Way to go Lauren but WTH is Beta?!' Lol, idiot time is over. Can't wait 'til the next update, robinstar



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