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Reviewer: aznangelstarQT (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

LUV UR STORY SO UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=) 



Reviewer: aznangelstarQT (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

LUB UR STORY VERY MUCH SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)



Reviewer: aznangelstarQT (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

that was HOT so please update asap please!!!=p 



Reviewer: aznangelstarQT (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OOO CAT FIGHT MEOW!!!LOL SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)



Reviewer: aznangelstarQT (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

O MAN I TOATALLY LUV YOUR STORY SO UPDATE ASAP!!=)



Reviewer: ladyrin_remix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OMG OMG OMG OMG You updated soon. But NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO another evil cliffy. You know if Rin thought she was unworthy of Sess before if she lives through this she DEFINITELY going to have some issues. When I first read breaking the girl I thought you were talking about Kagome now I'm starting to think of pooor Rin. Please end her torture soon I know personally I can't take it anymore.



Reviewer: ladyrin_remix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Please put me out of my misery and update and I mean a nice bis juicy chapter that finishes the battle between uncle/Inu and that finishes the torturing of Rin. I mean this story has taken so many twist and turns its not even funny. In some chapter you have me laughing my ass off, in others you have romantic angst, but now you are literally twisting my heart out of my chest trying to figure out what is going to happen next. My god I don't think I can handle another chapter that does give me some resolution. I know I already posted a review but I just feel so passionate about your story I couldn't resist. Please keep up the good work. PS I'm curious on how many chapters you think your master piece is going to come in at? Trust me when I say I can see you going forever. Also I rethought what Inu said at the end of this chapter. The thing that I thought of is he reforged the sword with his fang like in the series when the tetsgia broke. Oh well Ive rambled enough. Read you later, hopefully sooner rather then later.



Reviewer: ladyrin_remix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I love your story. So much I nominated it for Category: Best Romance (Inu/Kagome Pairing) for the 3rd quarter Inu fan guild awards. Good Luck! Ps This story definitely needs a sequel.



Reviewer: ladyrin_remix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Oops I also forgot to tell you I nominated it for a inuyasha_fanfic_fanart guild Best Lemon award too.  



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

His sword is "Tessaiga"... No, you had it right the first time, his sword is Tetsusaiga. This is the first time I'm leaving a note here, been reading for a couple of hours. I love the humor in the fic, and I especially love the Sess/Rin, cause you know that's what I'm about. This fic is so engrossing! I kept saying "oh, I want to comment on that... oh that's noteworthy", but I couldn't... I was compelled to soak in this fic. I'm going cross-eyed... I love it. When YY is over, I am thinking of doing a HS fic, but I'm not making everyone popular and rich. ^^



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Heart breaking, beautiful, incredible, fun... I want more, it was incredible! :) I was so upset when Sesshomaru almost lost Rin. I was reading it saying "hey, I'll use that on my woman later", lol. I hope those lines work on her, lol. 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You can count me and baby in always. We love your work :)



Reviewer: sad soul (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OMFG this story gets better with every chapter. All of a sudden it becomes a torture fic. You better not torture your loyal fans by making us wait forever. OMG this is soooooo good. Kouga deserved to die but maybe after its done Sessy will revive him. Get to typing!! Here is some pocky and have a nice day.



Reviewer: sad soul (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You are cruel leaving it there. That's it I'm not going to read it it until its completed. That way my heart wont ache everytime a chapter ends. This story is sooooooo good but if you kill off sesshy I will never forgive you!



Reviewer: Inuyashas4ever (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You updated! Woo Hoo! This chapter was great! I can't believe Kouga was put in this position...but it works! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Since I've already told you how much I love this story....I don't have anything else to say! Well, Update soon is all I can think of!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Akari



Reviewer: Inuyashas4ever (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You....update fast man! I just barely reviewed your last chapter!!! I love this! I loved the scene where Kikyou and Inuyasha Broke up....I don't know why...but that was the highlight of this chappie for me!lol. Update again and I'll be amazed!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Akari 



Reviewer: Inuyashas4ever (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

O_O That was fast! I just got done reading your last chapter, adding you to my favorite authors list, and then looking for more stories when I got an email saying you updated!! This story is amazing! I was reading it at the library today and I didn't get to finish so when I got home, I looked for it and I couldn't find it! I was so upset! I'm hooked on your story^_^ But then I found it and all is good! Keep updating...in fact, I wouldn't mind it if you updated again in the next five minutes! *wink*



Reviewer: black girl 06 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This is getting good! Kikyo should learn to fight her own battles. I like her sister better. She's seems a little more independent than Kikyo. I wonder if Mayu will stab her own sister in the back or if Naraku will betray them both. That would be interesting. I'm a little behind but I will catch up.



Reviewer: black girl 06 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I really enjoyed what I've read so far. I'm really sorry for not reviewing as I should. It's a great fic. Please continue. Later Days! 



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

even though its ver im so like happy i think imma cry.........this was such a good fic i think imaa read it again it was jsut that damn good hope u write something new soon lol thanx for the amazing fic



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

once again u amaze me with your talent i loved this chapter its made me cry smile and i dunno wat else at the same time ive never loved a fanfic this much cant wait for the last chapter but i have a question can kagome heal Rin or is it like i dunno permanent damage to her



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

did i even tell u how awesome u are cuz if not ill just let u kno right now ur so damn awesome i lov this chapter if most def kept me on the edge of my seat....looking forward to the nxt chapter  



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omfg u are the best*bows down* omg lol thats all i can say words cannot discribe how good that was i was like biting my nails and crying and smiling all at the same time ure so damn good u kno its just unbelievable how good u are neways plz UPDATE SOON!!!!!!im so damn happy u made my day with that update lol cant wait till nxt time



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omfggggggggggg this was soooooo good i was like biting my nails now i cant wait for an update lol kikyo and naraku are so gonna get their arse kicked cant wait for the next chapter i dont like to be left hanging so HURRY AND UPDATE



Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

i definitely enjoyed this fic i loved how you captured each character the way we wanted them...but omg i cant stand them breaking up nemore but im still like loving every moment they make up and i hope kags kicks kikyo's ass again neways plz update im gonna be going nutts until u do its just that good of a fanfic  



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