Date: May 12, 2011 10:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
I have read a few of your stories now and I have to say that you are a awesome writer I loved this story You Rock
Date: May 12, 2011 10:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! Great fic!!!
Date: May 12, 2011 10:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
OMG i loved it, it was the best fic ever!!!! i felt a tear slip at the end. I love all of your fics. you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!! *Ja ne Jessica*
Date: May 12, 2011 10:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
All I can say is WOW! That story was amazing! You did a realy good job. There were times when I couldn't stop laughing because it was so funny. There were times when I wanted to cry. Thanx for writing such a wonderful story. Lol I loved the part in the cars when they were all calling each other. lol. And I really liked the ending. So if you want to know it I loved it my answer is "Abso-fucking-lutely!" LOL
Date: May 12, 2011 10:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
oh yeah i forgot sequal is needed, it ended and you've got me wanting more ^^ so please make the sequal!!
I loved this fanfic, as I do most your fanfics, it remined me of some movies, not that's a bad thing, but the way you wrote it gave it it's own hell i don't know what to call it lol i just want to say i love this story ^^
Date: May 12, 2011 10:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
Love your thinking and creativity! Keep up the good work! It´s getting really juicy. Can´t wait! Keep writing!
Date: May 12, 2011 10:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
Great story I was really into it. I could basically see the looks on every ones face.
How can you do such mean cold heartless thing. Write I need to know if Fluffy and Rin make it out ok. Everybodys getting hurt. Why do the sexy people always get hurt. Why not just the ugly people. True it wouldn't be much of a story but hey somebody will be happy.
Date: May 12, 2011 10:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
I love this story. I just started reading it and could not stop. Please update soon. It is really kawaii!!!
Awesome Chapter!!! Keep me posted and keep updating!!!!!!!!
Date: May 12, 2011 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
You go InuGrrrl!!!! Looking forward to more! Does anyone else have trouble with the spam filter????
Date: May 12, 2011 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town
This is wonderful ^.^ love it please continue.
I gave you a nine the creativity becuase soemthing similar like this has been done but its good like all the others. In anycase it good please continue I have oen problem it says you have chapter nine but I can review and I have already read some of it can you tell me why I can read number nine now it brings up the every listing for anime fanfics tehre are but not the chapter...please exscuse my typos.
besides some words stickin togther that was frickin awsome! Please do continue.
Im not going to keep repeating myself on how great this is so from now on you ahve my support to knwo this story is gtetting good evern with teh more to come chapters I can tell it'll be great.
Ok I take back not reviewing anymore I must tell you that was one good short chapter! Please more !
I have been waiting for this update I have been dyign with all the stupid fics people are writing some good but not as good as this XD. PLEASE CONTINUE FOR MY SANITY! J/K
Ok you have unpdated trhee times now but for some odd reason Im not recieving anything from mediaminer not that I care anyways I enjoyed teh story please continue its getting good.
You are so evil how many times are you goign to break them up!!!! O.o but the story is still good!
Its good keep it up....I'll let you know this is teh best Inuyasha fic I have read in a long while.....
Date: April 30, 2011 10:42 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning
That was a beautiful story.
Date: November 12, 2010 11:05 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness
this is the funniest...maaannn!!! i can't stop laughing; this is just too real !
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2010 1:21 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine
Sweet chapter :D In this story is inuyasha a half demon that is like in hiding or is it that claws are prhobhitet in scool? D: Is that why he said the incantatnaition or sometung liek that xD
Date: March 06, 2010 2:06 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning
Awwwwwwwww.... Sooo cute!! <3 An amazing end to an amazing story, Grrrl!! Tomorrow I'm gonna start on another one! =)
**ShortieJ**
Author's Response: Welcome to Absolution!! I'm glad you decided to come to the site and ecstatic that you liked my first ever serial fiction! Squee! It needs work (I'd like to think I've grown since this as an author), but it's still near and dear to my heart. (The first always is, ne? :P) I hope you have fun on my site and thank you for taking the time to review all of the chaps. I'm stunned by your awesome -simply stunned! <3
Date: March 06, 2010 1:59 AM
Chapter number: 36
Title: In Your Pack You Trust
Very glad that everything worked out. This was an amazing chapter, Grrrl! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 1:49 AM
Chapter number: 35
Title: The Alpha
NOOOOOOOOO! Screw. Naraku. >.<
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 1:40 AM
Chapter number: 34
Title: Combine your strengths
Dude....Naraku and Kikyou are gonna pay for all this shit....and it's not gonna be a pretty sight.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 1:28 AM
Chapter number: 33
Title: The Betrayed
...*looks confused at the last sentence*... Alright, now the next chapter is needed to understand that... =) Buttt....
NOOO! Ughness. WTF?!?...ugh. Bad Uncle! Baddddd!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 1:19 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: Dance of the Kumo
*eyes are wide* Shittttttt. >.< Next chapter button, now!!
Date: March 06, 2010 12:56 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Loyalties
Oh no! RIN!! >.<
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 12:46 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Wicked Webs
If I were Kouga, I would suddenly get all better and run like the wind... He has coming to him what he deserves, the traitor. No matter how hurt you are, you NEVER betray your friends, family...
Great chapter.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 06, 2010 12:28 AM
Chapter number: 29
Title: True Desires Revealed
And my hatred for Kikyou and Naraku just grows and grows...
I loved that Kagome called him Uncle. That did make me smile.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 05, 2010 3:01 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Naraku Means Hell For a Reason
Everything went from really, really good...to really, really bad. Ugh, why does there have to be something called work that takes away from my reading time? >.< Great chapter, Grrrl!! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 05, 2010 2:51 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Koigokoro
...and magical it was! Yayyyness for lemons!! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 05, 2010 2:34 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Even The Best Laid Plans...
Awwww....it's not too late...people are just deteremined to interfere with what is meant to be! *glares at Kikyou, Naraku, Mayu, Hojo, and Kouga*
**ShortieJ**