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Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:40 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

OMG,OMG,OMG!!!!!!!Were do I begin ok Tsubaki and Naraku had
a baby Kiku and her name is (now) Kaila and she thinks that
Tsubaki is Great Grand Mother. Sessy (I love him) has a
plan, I can't wait till he finds out about the baby (well
the scent of a baby) Poor Kagome she finally told him how
she feels.How will she take this and InuYasha

what will he do now. I love this.....please (I'm on my
knees)update soon!!!!!! I LOVE YA MUCH!!!!!!



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:40 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

OOOOOOOOOO...can we kill her now, can we, can we, can we???

I HATE Kaila, I really do! Love the story tho :P. I just
cant wait to see how she gets hers. Especially when she
finds out about her parents, and how the others will act at
the same news.

I must say, that part had me for a loop there. Never seen
that coming, you sneaky wench, lol.

And poor Koga. Good guy, however dense he was before, and
he still cant catch a break in love.

Great chapter. Excellent story. Update when you can.



Reviewer: Ada   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:39 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

I didn't know you had posted but I'm so glad that you did.

I really enjoyed it and it surprised me a little. I love
how inu get's these little thoughts wothout tealizing it/
Like Kaila/ Kikyo. Or flash backs Of Kagome. I can't wait
till your next update. Love Koga too. hell I love then all.



Reviewer: cyberdemon   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:39 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

couldn't you have at least let Inu and Kag do it before
pulling this crap? That would really create some angst on
Inuyasha's part. What can Kaila gain out of this? the hag
said that it induces pregnancy symptoms. She isn't actually
pregnant. Even if she was and she gave birth, Inuyasha
wouldn't be stupid enough to realize that it looks nothing
like a child of his. Better be fast with the next update
because the waits are killing me!



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:37 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

Ok, now, can u just make her die a horrible painful death?
or if u cant, can Koga and Sessh tell Inuyasha that shes a
BITCH?? Please? ohh, and update soon!! :P

Love, IK Obsession



Reviewer: Bree07   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:37 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

I knew that bitch was dirty, but not this dirty jeez! First
she makes Inu believe he raped her and now having his kid?!
How ever do you come up with these ideas? Please update soon
the chapter was awesome, but the suspence is killing me lol.



Reviewer: Anime Lady PIMP   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:36 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

Ya I've had dis shiznat stuck in my head for like two
haours.I haven't read this in awhile. Please update.

My grandma and your grandma

Sittin' by the fire

My grandma said to your grandma

"I'm gonna set your flag on fire"



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



Look at my king all dressed in red

Iko, Iko, un ay

Betcha five dollars he'll kill ya dead

Jockamo fee na ay'



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



My flag boy and your flag boy

Sittin' by the fire

My flag boy said to your flag boy

"I'm gonna set your flag on fire"



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



Jockamo fee na ay'

Iko!



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



See that guy all dressed in green

Iko, Iko, un ay

He's not a man, he's a lovin' machine

Jockamo fee na ay'



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



Talkin' bout...

Hey now! Hey now!

Iko, Iko, un ay

Jockamo feeno ai na nay'

Jockamo fee na ay'



Reviewer: kajunmom76   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:35 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

Why must you always break my heart??? Just kidding, Awesome
update!! I can't wait to see what Sess has in store for the
"witch". Also, great spin on the Naraku and
Tsubaki "love", never thought of that!



Reviewer: frostyshake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:34 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Hanging by a Moment

God dammit you are going to kill me with so much angst! I am
so hoping whatever it is that Seshomaru is p;anning is going
to work.Damn that bitch Kaila I hope someone exposes her
evilness and soon.



Reviewer: cwillia   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:33 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Grrll, I am so glad I've found you and my favorite fics. I
almost had heart failure when I came back from vacation and
couldn't find you on mm.org. Anywho, you've got me on the
edge of my seat with this story, like a dummy I sometimes
find myself talking to the screen like the characters can
really respond. Keep up the fantastic work you've got a
permanent fan in me your fics are the absolute best and
believe me I read alot of stories to know. Looking forward
to the next chap and hey have your ever considered writing
an actual novel, I believe you can. Later



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:32 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Oh yea...you were right aight. This was a great chapter.  I
still hate Kaila tho. Was great that Kagome went off on her
like she did. Kaila deserved it. Wondered what it was that
Sessh had in mind, the sneaky devil, lol. This should be
good. And maybe Koga can find love after all. Excellent
story. Cant wait till you're able to update again. So just
update when you can.



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:31 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Thank God you updated!!!! I wuz missing this story every
hour of the day. I really wish kagome got away with killing
that bitch, but that wouldn't of been so bright. I wouldn't
of mind giving her any help, tho. That lil part with
Inuyasha when he said bring me baq, wuz so sweet n sad.
He's so desperate to be with his love again. And they are
finally gonna make love!!!! She just has to agree. I wonder
if kaila is gonna catch them, but like I always say; Fuck
her! who gives two kicks if she caught them?? I for sure
wouldn't waiste my kicks on her. I loved this chapter so
much. Kags n Inu showing their love infront of kaila?
Mystic I tell you! I'm curious to see what she's gonna do
to use it as her advantage? I got to wait for n
updation,ne? *sigh*, Always Cliffies, CLiffies, CLIFFIES
with you, huh?!?!?! Who the HELL invented CLIFFIES?!?!?! If
I couldd I seriously would kill them ova n ova for this evil
thing called cliffy. I WANT TO READ MORE N MORE OF THIS!!!!
pwease give me that wish! PWEASE!!!!!! I LOVED IT AS
ALWAYS...Ja ne!!!



Reviewer: bluezinthos   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 6:31 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

yes, kagome grows a pair! and hanyou yasha is struggling to
come out (now how he'll "come" back to himself
could be half the fun) and i swear kaila is a bigger bitch
that kikyou if that's at all possible! i cannot wait for
the next chappie! i kaila gonna walk in on them once
they're done or the next morning????



Reviewer: Bridezilla1015   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Yeah...I hate you for this chapter. It was awesome but of
course you have to leave it with such a fucking cliffie!!!
Kagome got some balls and tried to kill Kaila. Go Kagome!
Go Kagome! I get the feeling that part of Sesshomaru's
"plan" was to get the Tessaiga back to Inuyasha-
it's already changing him. And it looks like maybe Kouga is
gonna make amends to Ayame (after 500 years- he may be in
for a rude awakening or at least some harsh words even if
he is expecting to be bitched out).

Psst! Kagome! Listen to your dream Inuyasha. If you make
sweet, sweet love (down by the fire) to him it will go a
ways in bringing him back. ;-) (And if it doesn't it will
give Kiki a chance to write a lemon for us all to discuss
in the group). Great chapter! Update when you have the
inspiration (which is hopefully soon but we all understand
if it's not we'll just occupy ourselves by dressing Sexxhy
up in superhero costumes).



Reviewer: Savvy Youkai   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:58 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Woohooo! Time for some Miko retrobution! Inu Yasha stopped
her but damn! that was great.. I bet she put the fear of
god into Kaila! Stupid mate stealing skank! The knife
action was enought for you to be forgiven for the evil evil
evil cliffy.. for the love of god we need more Kaila
violence! Hair pulling face bruising.. someone needs to get
the drift that she's a lying money grubbing whore! Hehehe
anyway great chapter Kiki!



Reviewer: Angel_4_life   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:58 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Kiki, you are so my hero!!!  You updated this chapter!  But
damn it!  Why couldn't Kagome have killed Kaila when she
had the chance?!  That was such a burn on Kaila...the nanny
tries to kill her and her fiance won't even call the police.
 Dry...Damn it I want to see some Lovin'!  I think that is
what it would take to break the spell.  I mean, they have
both already confessed their love for each other (well,
Kagome didn't actually say the words but she felt them!)
what more does Midoriko want?!  Picky little miko...sigh.
I hope that Kaila gets taken to the doctor soon so that
Inuyasha can see that she is a LIAR!!!  Girl, you are
creating so many problems for Inuyasha and Kagome that I
wonder if even you know how to solve them!  LOL.  Any idea
of how many more chapters that you are planning to do?
Anyways, update this excellent story soon. Happy Writing!
-Christina



Reviewer: Ada   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:57 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

I loved this chapter and I agree with everyone Kaila must
die or a least have one of those really messed up ending
that makes you say that's what you get for being such a
bitch. I love Inuyasha but he sort of has no balls. He
needs to kick Kaila to the corner and why does he have to
believe eveything she says. I love Inu but he's pissing me
of. I can't wait for your next update. I hope nothing ruins
Kagome and Inuyasha's moment. Great stuff Kiki.



Reviewer: Anime Lady PIMP   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:52 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Im kinda of like cwillia in dis one. Yellin at da screen as
if it waz real knaw'm sayin! I waz all like Kill her lieing
whore  ASS Kagome!GET DAT BITCH! But den I realised it would
be infront of Yashie. So I waz like take her to da other
room and kill her! I waz hesitant with da one night thing
though. I mean I'd be all like not again! Though they both
have da same name so it doesn't matter which one ya call.
Belive ya me I know what Im talk bout on da name bases.Just
call him pet names like boo or baby. I can not think how
many times all said da wrong name to dem.



Reviewer: Caitriona   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

ok.....let me see if I understand.  Kagome knows who
everyone is....Inuyasha doesn't know who Kagome
is......Sess, kagura, miroku, and sango know who Kagome is
and what her relation to Inu is but Inu doesn't know any of
this.



right?



Now how did that happen.  Guess I'll just have to read
more.



Caitriona



Reviewer: Bree07   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

OMG not another cliff hanger!! You can't do this to me! I
have to know what happens. This was such an awesome chapter
but you have to update soon!



Reviewer: kajunmom76   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:29 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Awesome chapter ^_^ I know Kagome has her pride and stuff,
but, boy wouldn't it be nice if she just threw caution to
the wind and gave into her desires?! As for Kaila, she is
just pure evil, but without her, where would you find all
of your many angsty situations? LOL! I love this story(I
actually love'em all), but I reallly love this one! Until
next time!



Reviewer: akdreamer38   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:27 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Oh man!!! Nice cliffy!! 8^)  I will be looking forward to
the next chapter and I really hope she says YES!!!  Awesome
job!! AAA+++ all the way!!



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:26 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

Kiki!! Beautiful chapter. But why the cliff? Do u enjoy
hurting me? lmao. Please update ASAP

Love, IK Obsession



Reviewer: OINKX3   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:25 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: I Lay My Heart Down

*CRIES* I FEEL SO BAD FOR FLUFFY # 2!!! inuuuu~~~ T_T ...
gosh... I hate Kaila! rawrrr~~~ Well, I hope we see some
improvement in inu/kag's relationship!



Reviewer: kathy   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2012 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: The Ghost of You

danm i have been looking for your ficss for a lng time
now.. i practically went on tantrums when i could not find
any of your stories on mm.org!!!!

u wer gone in mm.org

but your awesomr writings skilld never changed..

i hope u can e mail me if any of ur fics are bein
updated...

f*ck uuuuuuuuurrrrr fics are reall great..

especially this one....

love hem xo much...

;p plssssssssss email me!!!!!!!!!!

hope that everthing goes alright for kagome and inu...

luv your ficss.... sware!!!!!

u rock dude!!!



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