[Report This]Date: February 14, 2012 12:17 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
OMG i love this fanfic!!! I read it all in one day cuz it was so good, and it was not to long lol. How do you come up with these ideas? I felt so bad for Inuyasha in this fic I just wanted to hold him and tell him sorry. Sesshomaru was different in this fic, im used to your other works idk something was different about him in this one. Oh well i still love him
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! <3 It means a lot, especially when it comes to this fic. It's sooooo very rough and needs a good editing, so I'm always cringing a bit when people read it because I haven't fixed it up yet. But the fact that you can focus on the story and not the mistakes really makes my day. InuYasha had a really hard time in this story, but I was happy with the way he and Kagome finally came together. It only took a few minutes with each other to know they were meant to be and I enjoyed that. She was a major factor in him being able to assume control of his life, which was the point of the story. :D
Date: February 10, 2012 8:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
So this is the story that your skin *Fatality* is. I went in search to look up on this fic and when I found it went straight to read it. I read to chap. 2 but forgot to review on it. Sorry... Glad I found it, liking it so far. Poor Inuyasha as he was younger and now in the hands of Naraku... Wonder what happen to his mother after Inu got taken away...
In chapt. 2 I wouldn't like to be in Kagome's shoes... but I guess in those times you had to follow what your parents said... or obeyed them...
Again, I don't know why, but everytime there's a new skin that shows a story you've penned or going to start to penning, I have to read it! It attracks me and pulls me in. And please thank whoever does those beautiful art! :) Hope you're doing good and your wrists are not making it hard on you since you're updating.
Till then, huggles and glad that I stumbled on this one. I think I found another fave one!! :D
Date: February 06, 2012 3:54 PM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork
Wow, I can't believe I missed this story! I was just browsing through Absolution and, by a stroke of luck, chanced upon this amazing story and completely devoured it. And here I was thinking I had read all of your stories. xD I really love this story, and this is a great ending. I love Inuyasha's personality in this story; it's very sweet, but not in an overbearing way.
You are a master of words and angst, seriously. I almost put off reading this because I didn't want to finish it, but I couldn't stop. Keep on writing!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! I really appreciate the comments, especially on this story that needs so much editing. >_< I honestly plan to do it someday, but in the meantime, I'm glad it can still be enjoyed the way it is. Again, thank you!!
[Report This]Date: February 02, 2012 1:58 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Bloodsport Comes To Shikon Valley
Wow she first saw him when he was fighting for his life?? Yikes! She saw through it all though! Hmm Rin...why would she recognize him? That makes me wonder a bit. Also I wonder about Miroku...
[Report This]Date: February 01, 2012 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Hidden Meanings
I really like that Naraku has control of the rosary. It does completely control him, so this fits really well. I find it really interesting that even though Kagome is literally a Princess, she still has no freedoms. I found it hilarious that Kikyou was essentially going to have to rape him in order to have him.
[Report This]Date: February 01, 2012 10:33 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Miroku, the Monk
Awww poor Rin, and Ayame too! These poor women that have married such jerks really help the younger generation make better choices in their spouses I hope. I'm excited to see what Miroku is going to contribute too!
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2012 3:00 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Lord of the West
I love it Sess loves his little brother and rescues him!! Squeee!
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2012 2:56 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Enter Princess Kagome of Shikon Valley
Kagome is just full of good intentions here. I hope we see her become less helpless through. Not that her position isn't understandable. I'd feel useless too. Im excited to see her reaction to him!
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2012 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Oooh I don't think I've seen this one before! It is off to a really great start. Poor liitle inu:-(
I can't believe he was sold at only 8! And fighting too!
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2012 2:18 PM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork
Awsome story I loved the whole thinf :D
Date: December 18, 2011 7:29 AM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork
This was a beautiful story :)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Eryn. ^^ Wait until you see the art for it. Hehehe...
[Report This]Date: August 02, 2011 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork
OMG OMG - I REMEMBER THIS FIC!!!
*rolls around in glee*
I FUCKING FUCKING LOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS!!!
Damn, looking baq at ur older fics are so nostalgic!!!
*SQUEE*
Date: July 07, 2011 1:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
I started reading this story when it first appeared on MM and it led me to read all of your other stories, and now i've followed it here, lol. all of your stories are utterly fabulous. but i'm still waiting for you to freakin update!!!!!! lol jk.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Awe, I love this, I really do. Wonder how Sessh will come around now that InuYasha knows the reasons for his treatment of Rin. Should be interesing as to what he says to him. As well when Kagomes parents find out it isnt Lord Sesshomaru she is with now. Hmmm...wonder how they'll take the news, lol. Great chapter Ki. I still love the story. :D
Date: July 07, 2011 1:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
That wuz so cute!!!! To be honest, I actually forgot that this story wuzn't finish. I still don't know how I came around forgetting this fic, I love it so much! I swear if ppl cud marry fics or even the characters I would definatly marry inuyasha in both ways.lol. Can't wait for your next updation!!! hurry update!!! I love ya for using your spare time to actually entertain complete strangers, although I hope I'm not one to you...GREAT JOB kiki!!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
happy, happy, happy....you gave me happy! (procedes to do ridiculous dance in the middle of her cubicle) honest it wasn't just the hentai that made me happy, i swear it! it was that after everything inuyasha went through in this one, his happy ending is getting close. i'm fearing that kagome's parents will come and there be some youkai law that sesshomaru can take kagome way from inu and that's what her father what's or he will want the full demon brother to kill his worthless hanyou brother. although with sesshy's personality in this one that could lead to a really interesting confrontation between a bigoted king and the happiness of his little brother that he finally got back. now sesshy needs his happy to! i know the end of this one has been a long way coming but in now way has your storyline or your writing style dropped off...i'd say the closer to the end you get: the better you get. kudos!!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Your writing has not suffered at all from your previous sickness, insomnia, etc...It is incredible and I adored this chapter :) The lemon was beautiful. Heh, I such a Hentai for my age :P:P I can't wait for the next chapter! There is going to be confrontation! Oh, how I love confrontation! Next to romance and suspense, confrontation is the best and I know that you will surpass all of my expectations like you do time and time again with every single story. Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 07, 2011 1:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
That wuz bootiful!!!The lemon wuz so sweet n innocent. I felt like a greedy hentai! All the lemon story for me!!! But alas, I have no choice but to share.lol Atleast you gave us a lemon, I loved it SO much.*grins like a foolish 4yrs old* I just can't stopping saying it! You did all this during sickness, I'm really glad you took up your time to rest n post instead. You jus inspire me more n more with every chapter to stories you have. You did a tremendous job, Keep it up!! oh...n UPDATE SOON!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Well, I FINALLY got to read the new chapter. And of course, you never disappoint. I know you're ordering the new headstone, lol, but I still love this story. No one writes like you, nor you them. You are your own person and it reflects in your writing. And Im glad you are the way you are, because like the Hanyou, we wouldn't want you any other way. :)
Date: July 07, 2011 1:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Hmmm... you're lucky that kiss didn't go furhter. I would have been very angry. :) I'm sad to see this one coming to an end. I really like this one, but as you can read from my fictions, I get so bored with them. *sigh* At least your endings are coming up roses. You're still the best... James
Date: July 07, 2011 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Hey beautiful!! Absolutely great chapter. I know how badly you want this story finished yet you poured so much into that chapter. That is why you are such a good storyteller. You always give your best and it definately shows. You have MUCH talent. Thanks for the great chappy and I will talk to you later girly! Love Neddi
Date: July 07, 2011 1:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
I love it I hope you can put the last up so .
Date: July 07, 2011 1:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Awesome update KiKi! And Luc, the lemon was really hot! It'll be really sad to see this one put to rest. Thank you for the update and take care of you.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
I know, I know..you already have the plot and headstone, lol...but I still love it. I was wondering when and how Sessh was gonna come around. Great chapter. And, Thank You Luc, that was an excellent lemon you wrote. It always amazes me when a MAN can write one with such heart and feeling.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...
Very good. Whooot great job James!! Very hawt! Put you two in front of a keyboard and readers beware. lol. Very well written. I am sad to see this story come to an end. = ( But I know there will be many stories to come. Love ya, Neddi