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Reviewer: (Fanworks) Cheryl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

This is the most awesome story and I'll be sad to see it end. Will be waiting in the wings for your exciting next chapter, so until then take care and keep up the great work. And James did an outstanding job with Sess and Rin. See ya next time!!!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

That chapter wuz something! Sesshomaru finally gave it n mated! I luv this even more! The lemon part with the 'dominant' rin wuz awesome. I never expected that from her. Things are gonna get hectic once kags dad find out the truth, but for all I care, he cud kill him self. I hate her dad, n I don't even kno him that good, n I don't wanna. I loved it, very ver MUCH!!! hurry update!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Angel_4_life   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

*shakes head in amazement* I am running out of things to say!!! I just ADORE your writing and this story is no exception :D How many different ways are there to say you have such strength, passion and devotion to your writing? Because you do:) Aw! Inuyasha has accepted Shippo as their son! Yea! I'm glad that Rin and Sess and finally together too. Keh, he was mad at her for a stupid reason before. Heh; hentaism. The group is influencing your writing :D That's a good thing right? Ooh, Kagome's parents are coming! CAN YOU SAY DRAMA??? I anxiously await the next chapter. I'll read Crucify ASAP because I know that I am going to be marvelled at how well it is done! Update soon! Happy writing! -Christina



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Leila-chan   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Oh no. the parents. i'd like to think that the worst is over with naraku out of the way and inu back where he belongs, but... the parents! this will be interesting. good work, luc. the lemon was perfection and it fit the way things had been going between the two in a way that a 'regular' lemon would have missed. the domination of rin and the desperation behind it all was just right. unique to their situation and flowed beautifully. haHA, i'm still giddy over sango and miro. can't help it. the lecher has a happy ending. gives me hope. =P



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Rhiannon   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Love it, love it, love it. Did i say i love it? Because i do! Please update soon, i hate waiting, and this is a great story so i really hate waiting.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) ShaylaBlade   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

damn that was a lot of reading but it was well worth it! i cannot even begin tellin u how much i love this story lol



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Fyrloche   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Excellent story. You have done a very good job on this one and I look forward to the next chapter. Take it easy, Fyrloche.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Anime Lady PIMP   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

AWWWW! HAPPY ENDING!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Inuyashaloverr   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Oh, I just had to read again...I left a review you know where, lol...Huggzz Onaa, Great story!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) ShaylaBlade   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!! ^_^



Reviewer: Dare9179   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2011 12:28 AM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork

LOVE IT!!!!!I wanted to cry at certain scences.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you!! Wait until you see the art I'm having made for it. :DDD



Reviewer: localsamurai (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Inuyasha needs to be reunited with Kagome soon. I'm so sad for them. I hate Kikyou and she needs to die slowly and painfully. I'm glad that Kikyou didn't have her way. That would be disgusting and sad. Good chappie keep it up.



Reviewer: localsamurai (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

You've updated so much. Thank you. We're being spoiled. I knew Naraku wasn't out of the picture. I don't want Kikyou to rape Inuyasha. :( That makes me real sad. Kagome better train quick. I want Inu to go full youkai. He's so hott all demoniced up



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I love the update!!!! I just wish that kags and sess could hurry up and kick kikyou and Narakus ass!!! Grrr and that new priestess, the one kikyou is staying with, I hope she doesnt get killed!! I hope she may be able to help inu and kag!!! I hope inu and kag can get together soon!!! Please!! Its killing me!!!lol and...Please UPDATE!!!



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Great chapter, evil cliffy!!! grrr... update soon please!!!! I hope Inu is going to be alright after all this!!! 



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Oh please continue, please, i love your stories, and I am truly sorry if you are having to pay such a price to post your stories. That is the reason I myself do not post, that and I my own thoughts and stories and I can never put them on paper. Lol ny ways, please keep updating, for those of us that love your stories. You truly have a talent, and write them the way you see fit, not the way others want them to turn out, if they want the story to go a certain way, they can write their own. I am also not above this I know I have gotten excited every now and then and have hinted on how the story could go next, that is just an opinion or a suggestion. I have always accepted and enjoyed the authors stories and there judgement. Please update, if not e-mail me the story, I love the story! lol j/k. But seriously if you feel up to it, keep updating.



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

GRRRRRR I hate kikyou!!!! I wish inu could brake those bonds and tear her apart! Please update soon please!! It seemed like forever since you updated last time..*gets on hands and knees* PLEASE



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

OMG how many mikos is he going to kill b/4 kag and sess gets to him?!! How much is kag and sang going to learn? Please udate really really soon!!!!! PLEASE!!!



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Wow this story is very original I havent read a story about Inuyasha with a setting like this ever! I think Sess is definately out of character in this fic but I really like him this way lol ny ways about the last chapter: Awww!!!!! I love what kags just said how sweet!!!! at the end I read those two lines probably like five times! I LOVE the part where Inuyasha was grinning in his sleep,so.... when?! when are they going to be back together though?!! when is kikyou and naraku going to PAY? *evil laugh* I cant wait! please update soon! he he 



Reviewer: Akihana (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Geez, I decide to read this story finally and get a bitch of a cliffy. You suck. Grrrrrrrr. Poor Inuyasha. I also have to say, this is one of the first fics I've seen have Sango choosing between two men. Well, the first fic that did it really well, anyways. She seems kind of clueless to the situation, at least I think so. Anyways, thanks for reviewing me and please update soon. Btw, just kidding about the "you suck."



Reviewer: Akihana (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Good timing, we're dying here....You realize we've had a handful of fluff Inu/Kag hug moments?



Reviewer: Akihana (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

yes, no kidding. Enough waiting for the two of them to be together. Unless we're going to get an ending like Forgive Me Anything...hopefully there will be a low body count...please? Anyways, nice build up chapter, and nice level of angst between Sesshy and Rin. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 



Reviewer: Inusbabe (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Ok this one is going to be different, really waiting for the end of "Breaking The Girl" to come first before you finish this one, but I know it is going to be great too.



Reviewer: Inusbabe (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I was reading this, but got lost... I just keep checking the updates to see if you have finished it so I can read the whole thing 



Reviewer: razorbladesinner (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

You are doing an amazing job with this fic hun. Keep going!



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